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Posted: 17 years ago
angad is blah!! i am disgusted by his behavior!!
stupid angad!! after girls, fame and money!!
the title sure comes out now!!
and aww neev is there!!
and poor aunty!! she had a heart attack cuz she is soo stressed and worried over angad!
and that dumb bum of a loser doesn't even pick up the phone call!! gosh! angad has really changed!!
feelin sad now for both kripa and aunty...i hope aunty gets well soon
and grr angad makes me mad!! as i said before...right now i ain't likin him so much but as usual my mind will change lol

well if u want a nice strict brother who is loving and caring and will reform angad then nishant for sure
but if he is hot and cool and amazing then kavya lol!!
but anyone will doo!

great part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
angad's brother should be kavya and good job hope he sees his aunty soon but the way he turned out was disgusting 😡 🤢
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Posted: 17 years ago
angad is becoming a player 😭 😡 🤢 i think nishant would be good as angad's bro he'll knock some sense into him awesome part cont soon plz!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
angad is really acting like a jerk nw.
he dnt even call back to his aunty.
great part
i think kavya should be his brother.
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Posted: 17 years ago

@ ice_girl- yeh angad is a jerk now pretty much 😡 let's see how kripa reacts and what she does to him ....thanksss😃

@ tommygirl- thanksss ..john wud def. be a good choice😳

@iamsmart- he really should have ...he'll regret it if anything does happen sheetal...no he does love her just doesn't care ...too busy with his own life....thanksss😃....hmm that is true he was in kyph

@jdsean- hey thanksss😛 yeh he doesn't care about her and after all she's done for him! thanks yup need someone to make angad jealous and john wud be perfect 😆

@Kiran_1- yeh he is pretty much a jerk no doubt ...he'll regret it later...awww thanksss😃glad you liked the update ...okay thats three votes for john😛

@armaghan0- thankyou!😃...yeh he has turned into a heartless jerk 😡...let's see what kripa will do further on with him!😉

@*F^a^i^z^a*- Yup now the title is now clearer ...yeh i'm sure no one will like him now ...but will he change when kripa come sback into his life with ...😉...he'll regret ignoring his aunty later and true she's been with him all his life and what does he do...stop caring and too busy lving his life😡.....thanksss😊

@freaky_angel- thanks hun and no problem !!😃 will try and cont. tonight

@A&K_4Evr-S- thanksss hun😃...true guys likethat are pathetic though their charm can be hard to resist sometimes😆...yeh armaan is also a good choice as long as angad can get jealous then its all cool 😆


@angullgrl91- hey thanksss hun!😛...yeh he is worse than a jerk...when will he realize it ...when he sees kripa 😉

@rima791- thanks hun glad the title is clearer now😆.... yes angad's def. disgusting ...that idiot...there's now ord to describe him now😡 actually there is but 😆...thanks they're all good choice except i don't like josh lol...but prem's cute and armaan😳😆...yeh neeve's a cutie😛 let's see how he turns out😆...thanks will cont soon! and glad you liked the update😛

@pah0034- awwww thank you😳...i'm glad you really like the story...i'll try and update as much as i can 😃...lol yeh armaan is hot😆 and a good choice too!

@yourmom- thankss hun! glad u liked the part😃...angad won't go to kripa any time soon but she'll go to him😉... and yeh she def. needs support right now....hahaha oh def. he'll add more than spices to angad's life😆😛

@ desiqt8806- yup i don't like him like this either but for the title's sake i had to make him really bad !! yeh neeve is there 😛 yeh he doesn't even care about his aunty too busy partying ...while kripa needs him as well as his aunty ...what kind of guy is here...jerk! ...lol yeh when he changes back to normal i'm sure everyone will change their opinion 😆...thanks yeh the person has to hot up to his standardss so kavya would be a good choice though nishant is good for a strict brother i don't think he'll fit the role for what i have planned hmmm... thanks!😃

@superstar15- thanksss hun!😃 yeh the way he turned out wasn't very good it weas bad! ...okay that's two votes for kavya then... when will angad see his aunty...no time soon or will he😉 <33

@iqbals4ever- yeh he's a player now😭 yeh nishant will be good for knocking some senses into that idiot who is too busy living his life...thank you!!!😳

@- deeya123- thanks deeya....he's def. a jerk ...let's hope nothing happens to sheetal or else angad will regret it big time and kripa won't forgive him when she finds out how much he has changed !!.. okay three votes for kavya

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yipeei cant wait im gonna go to school now i have exams today lolz but ur ff will make my day after the exams okay? so u better....im joking
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

yipeei cant wait im gonna go to school now i have exams today lolz but ur ff will make my day after the exams okay? so u better....im joking

aww really gud luck with ya exams...hope they went well!!...lol oh is that a threat lol😆...well i hope enjoy the part

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 17

Angad turned her around for the last time as the song came to an end. A- thank you for the dance he said kissing her cheek while she smiled and he walked off to neeve who stood there grinning at angad. N- so how was the dance, A- I don't know about the dance but she sure is was good looking girl he said staring at her cheekily…N- OMG don't tell me … love ate first sight he asked with a smirk…A- nice joke …me and love…never he replied laughing ... A- whatever …how about some drinks…


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Kripa picked up her cell and dialed the number on the piece of paper in front of her. Her heart was beating faster while she felt as if a thousand butterflies were inside her stomach fluttering around. Yes she was calling angad again …for the second time… she had tried calling his brother but his phone was off …she had no other choice to call him again and she hoped he picked up this time. Breathing loudly as she heard…RING…RING…RING ……but no one picked up when she head a beep sound... should she leave a message …no…but … when she just whispered "Angad" onto the phone and hung up…why was she so nervous and scared to talk to him… why couldn't she just do it… No she couldn't…she'd just have to call his brother …..

"kripa"….kripa looked up to see the doctor smiling …K- doctor, how is she now, D- she better now …everything is okay…she's still a little weak but apart from that she is fine, K- thank you so much can I go see her now, D- I would advise you to go home and rest…you've been here from yesterday till now …. 10 pm , I mean I don't want to have to admit you too now would I he said laughing , K- no but can I just say goodbye to her, D- sure but she's asleep so try not to wake her up …good night, K- good night and she walked into the room. Kripa smiled and walked over to her…bending down she softly kissed her forehead and whispered "I'll see you tomorrow" and she left

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Angad finally made his way up the stairs …boy was his head spinning …maybe he shouldn't have had so many shots…fumbling around with the keys until he unlocked the door and walked in …closing the door behind him. Walking past the phone he saw the red light flashing in the darkness… crap where was light now he thought holding his head …whatever he made his way to the blinking light and fumbled around until he picked up the receiver and pressed the flashing button and listened ……there was nothing for the first few seconds when he heard it …. "Angad" …he felt a sweet tingle inside his stomach or maybe that's what he thought he felt or was it the alcohol…whatever it was, why was the voice so… familiar ….maybe it was just fan …probably always leaving messages …yeh that's probably why the voice was familiar …but why did he feel it was someone else …whatever he needed sleep. He put the receiver down and deleted the message ….turning around he tried to make his way to his room …unsuccessful he fell onto the couch and knocked out a couple of minutes later…

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Kripa combed her hair and left for the hospital relived…sheetal aunty was going to be alright after all …picking up her bag and jacket on the way she decided to drop by a boutique …grab a bunch of flowers …visit aunty and then go to the caf and see how things were doing there…she hadn't been ever since the incident.

Kripa grabbed a bunch of yellow and pink roses …they were her favorite… she looked at her watch…oh god she had slept in a little too much it was 1pm already …rushing into a cab she was off to the hospital.

Kripa walked down the hall way smiling at the nurses and finally reached her room…opening the door …she walked in and…frowned as her eyes roamed all around the room …. Surrounded by bunches of yellow and pink roses as well as a group of balloons saying "get well soon" …what was going around here…who could have brought all of these roses and balloons she thought…looking down at her bunch of roses that were nothing compared to what the room looked like right now… walking over she was about to place her roses in a vase when she jumped hearing an "excuse me" from behind her …dropping the roses she turned around to notice…

A guy dressed in jeans and a black tee shirt with a white jacket …his hair was gelled wet it seemed …giving it the spiky wet look…he had nice brown eyes she had to admit and most of all he sure had a killer smile ….gosh she wished he wasn't smiling at her …stop it she thought to herself when he started to move closer to her…stopping three steps away from her… "who are you"….k- umm I'm kripa…. " Oh right …I know who you are…well actually I don't really know know who you are but I've heard of you…you get what I'm saying…okay from the confused look you're giving me I'm guessing you have no idea what I'm trying to say or thinking who the heck is this idiot standing in front of me…well let me introduce myself …the names Armaan Khanna…I'm sure sheetal aunty has mentioned me before …well yeh I'm her nephew …you know Angad right , yeh well his older brother …I don't look older than him right…I know …What can I say ...I'm too good looking to be 25 …oh god I feel old…anyways so you're probably wondering how I came right …so let me tell you…actually I was on a business trip and my cell wasn't working…something was wrong with the roaming …when I came back from the trip I called up aunty except no one picked up so I called the caf and that's when I found out and the next thing I knew i was on the next plane to see her and yeh that's about it…any questions or anything" …. Armaan just looked at her standing still… "Crap I hope I didn't scare her or something …god Armaan you speak too much" he said to himself.

"earth to kripa…did I scare you or something…actually what happens is that sometimes it gets quite hard to stop talking …seriously my friends back in London call me chatterbox rather than Armaan but then again I don't mind … so yeh I just speak too much which probably you've noticed but then hey who doesn't like to speak …god I could do it all day …actually once my friends told me to keep quiet for a day and guess what he asked kripa who stood there looking at his face, Aa- oh come on don't just stare at me as if I'm a ghost …say WHAT…K- oh uh what?...Aa- I only lasted for a couple of seconds he said laughing but stopped when he noticed kripa still standing there confused…Aa- don't you laugh…I thought it was pretty funny but then again people do have different opinions …like once I was laughing at this girl that fell down the stairs inside a theatre and my friend told me to shut up…she said I was mean but hey I couldn't help it …it was a pretty funny scene …you know what I mean actually to tell you the truth I laugh at pretty much everything … Armaan breathed and continued …Aa- so wassup pretty lady …telling me something about yourself…but if you don't want too then I understand but it's would be nice to get to know you …you seem like a very nice person and I'm sure you are oh might I add you really have a cute nose …sorry I couldn't help myself …I tend to examine people really closely …my friends said I should be a police officer … I don't get it and you probably don't care but yeh cute nose actually you're quite cute and you surely do have expressive eyes …they're nice like mine well actually I'm sorry for being frank but mine are better and you know it he said winking , Aa- so you were saying …kripa just murmured a "sssshhh" ..Aa- what? Your sssshhh …sorry I don't get it …is this some kind of new slang for something , kripa shook her had and placed her hand over his mouth…boy was he not lying …he surely was a chatter box. K- I mean sssshhh aunty is resting she might wake up she said taking her hand back…Aa- oh okay I'm sorry ...oh by the way you really have soft hands …they smell nice …what do you use dove body wash or something? I like girls that smell nice…it's a real turn on he said grinning while Kripa just looked at him with a "huh" look… when they heard sheetal aunty murmur.

Armaan ran over to her side taking her hand, she slowly opened her eyes and smiled seeing his face…S- Armaan , A- don't worry aunty I'm here … you'll be fine … the doctors said everything is okay…just a little weak but you will be fine … I'm sorry I couldn't come earlier …now never scare me like this …I want my healthy , sexy aunty back okay …sheetal giggled softly … this was her Armaan , she tuned her head around to see kripa with tears running down her cheek…S- kripa she whispered , K- aunty she cried …Aa- don't cry kripa…she's fine now right aunty who nodded her heard kissing Kripa's cheek …K- I'm sorry I was just scared that I would loose you and …S- don't worry kripa I won't ever leave you … "and neither will I " Armaan added joking … kripa couldn't help smile …Aa- OMG , K- what she asked confused …Aa- no it's just you have a gorgeous smile he said winking …kripa shook her head smiling …what a flirt she thought but then again he did seem nice…someone she could get along with ………


okay so his brother is none other than armaan lol ..he had the most votes 😆 ....hope you like the part and thanks for the comments!! 👏 😃
<33 choco!

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

are you gonna continue right now? 😕 if so do in like 2 mins plz 😛

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my bad you already did😆 thanks👏

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lovely part loved armaan especially😳 😆 he surely is a chatterbox😆 but a cute one😳 😉

gosh angad is friggin jerk😡 🤢i like armaan better😛d

can't wait till kripa meets this new angad and i bet he will be jealous of kripa-armaan relationship by the time her comes back😛

hope you cont soon👏

Edited by rima791 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

are you gonna continue right now? 😕 if so do in like 2 mins plz 😛 lol just did hun😃

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my bad you already did😆 thanks👏 lol np hun!😆 hope u like the part 😃

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