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Aiswarya

@Arteclectic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

yaar why no comment u guys didn't like it?????????????? 😭 😭 😭

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Bhuvana

@bhuvana3

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

OMG What speed Ash !!😆 Part III is good too n do post part IV 😛 n dont post in italic font please it makes it difficult to read

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

wow looks like you know exactly what the sagars are planning to come up with good work 👏 ... and the dialogues etc seem so good...

sirf ek point ashu... the guy's name in DV is jayvardhan not jaimal..woh PRC waala villain hai...
and i saw the biggest point of all you finally gave a dialogue to dharam's mom 😆 well done girl 👏

aur tum baar baar roni surat ke saat aise kyun bolti ho ki no one interested no one is reading... everyone will surely read it yaar 😳

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Aiswarya

@Arteclectic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bhuvana3
OMG What speed Ash !!😆 Part III is good too n do post part IV 😛 n dont post in italic font please it makes it difficult to read

heheh sorri for that i will post in bold 😉

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Aiswarya

@Arteclectic

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lashy
wow looks like you know exactly what the sagars are planning to come up with good work 👏 ... and the dialogues etc seem so good...

sirf ek point ashu... the guy's name in DV is jayvardhan not jaimal..woh PRC waala villain hai...
and i saw the biggest point of all you finally gave a dialogue to dharam's mom 😆 well done girl 👏

aur tum baar baar roni surat ke saat aise kyun bolti ho ki no one interested no one is reading... everyone will surely read it yaar 😳

😃thanxzzzzzz for ur comennet sorri i will write it as jayvardhan
ya i found no dialog or bonding is seen in dv serial between his mom so i made itttttttt