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Posted: 17 years ago

#531

Amezing part so so so sorry for late comment I read it when yoou updated it but i dont know how i forget to comment really sooory hope you forgive me....

it was amezing yyaar this riz is really super over protective towards Armaan 😆 i cant wait to see Atul's Gujrati hahahha it will be fun to listen because it is same as My mom speaks hindi 😆

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#532

Part 17:

In Dr.Armaan's Cabin:

"Armaan, mein jaa rai hoon," Riddhima said, popping her head in the door.

"Haan, haan, jau." He replied, not realizing who it was as he was too busy reading some case files.

"Armaaan!"

"Kya haiii?!?!" He looked at the door. "Ohh, sorry, my bad." He made a cute puppy face, apologizing for his mistake.

"Hahaa, sorry maat bolo. Muhje ek huggie do," she said, stretching out her arms. Armaan fell in love with her all over again... He swiped her into his arms, almost lifting her off the ground, hugging her tightly. A knock on the door forced them to break apart.

"Ufff, ab kaun hai??"

"Armaan! Ok Byye." She turned towards the door, when Armaan grabbed her back. "Kya?" She asked...

He placed a kiss on her cheeks and let her go.

Next morning... Weekend:

Armaan had a habit of waking up early, even on weekends. He watched the sun rays shining into his room, filling it with its light. Armaan got off his bed, thinking about yesterday, he tossled his hair and walked to Atul's room, opening the window.

"Chanda mama so gayeee, suraj chachu jage, Dekho pakdo yaaron, ghadi ke kaante bhage....!!!" Armaan sang...

"Chal jaa yaha se, nahi sunna hai muhje tuhmara bakwas gaana, kaisa bakwas gaate ho tum, chi!" Atul threw a pillow at him and stuffed his head under the covers. Armaan pulled the covers off, and dragged Atul off the bed.

"ARGH!! Sone do muhje!!" He fell to the ground and closed his eyes.

"Chaal, utthh! Aseem discharge hora hai hospital se... I'm going to pick him up, nai jaana hai tume? Aur aaj Aseem ka birthday hai... Sapna ko nahi bulauge party mein??"

"Party?? Sapna?!?!" Atul was fully awaken now... "Haan, abhi bolta hoon..." He picked up to phone Sapna, while Armaan left to pick up Aseem.

Armaan's outfit:

Safwans:

Riddhima's:

Sapna's:

Malaika's

"Happy Birthday to you!! Happy Birthday to you dear Aseeeeeeeeeeem!!!" All the doctor di's and bhaiya's and uncles and aunties, and Aseem's little friends gathered around the table. The big boy blew the eight candles on the birthday cake. Everyone clapped for him...

The big peoples job was done... the little kids were opening Aseem's gifts, while Aseem was waitng for Minnie's arrival. She was late. He was so angry at her...

"Psst, Riddhima... let me show you my room," he said, taking hold of her hand.

"Hahahaa, Kya baat hai... itni jaaldi kya hai?" Safwan teased.

"Shut up Safwan, warna kaal se kaam pe maat aana..." Armaan threatened him.

"Nai, nai, sir! Sorry, sir..."

Armaan dragged Riddhima into his room and slammed the door shut, pinning her to the door.

"Armaan, tohra sharam karo... Aseem ki birthday party hai, aur tum yaha..." Riddhima said, trying to push him off.

"Yeh hamara kamra hai..." He said, ignoring her sharmili baatein, he rubbed his cheeks against hers, feeling the softness. "Shaadi ke baad, hum yaha... woh karenge..."

"Shut up, Armaan!" She bit his hand, but he didn't budge. "Armaann, please muhje choroo!! Dukh ra hai!"

"Jhooti... koi dard waard nai hora..." Their noses were touching. Riddhima looked into his gray eyes, then crossed her eyes are him. She put her arms around his neck, pulling him closer.

"Armaaan!!! Kaha ho tum?!?!?!!" His mother budged the door, it wouldn't open. Armaan and Riddhima broke apart. The door flung open.

I know, I know... It's a short part, but I'm getting tired now 😆😆 So I'll update tomorrow, just thought I'd post this, I'm sorry I can't PM everyone now but I will try to tomorrow ...

Please Do Comment!! I think my FF's getting boring, isn't it 😆😆 Sach bolo tum log!! Kahani mein twist aani chahyee... hmm 🤔

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#533

i lov the way u show all the costumes and all...n they are alwaz wondeful!!!

awsom update...n no it aint boring at all...but a twist...hmmm dsnt sound lik a bad idea !!!! 😉

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#534

wondreful part again di...continue soon with ur magic...wonder what will happen now??

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Isha

@lil_isha15

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Posted: 17 years ago

#535

hey i jus read a lil bit of ur fanfic n gettin to finishin but its awesome up till where i have read it first of all love ur title it reminds me of song but ya all ur characters r amazin i loved ur armaan differ but gud n ridz is cute too but ya totally lookin forward to ur fanfic so update soon:D n this part was really gud too

cheers
isha

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Kanu K

@artizia

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#536

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zoo tum bata nahi sakti thi kya ki update kar rahi hoon
yaan fir mujhse naraaz ho 😭

edit : hello mera zoo baby, itna chota part likha,but i guess something is better than nothing .

i loved the way u portrayed courageus armaan 😃

Edited by *Kanu* - 17 years ago

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d3si

@d3si

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Posted: 17 years ago

#537

i loveeeedd the update..waiting for what hppns next..n yo i loved the clothes selection u have..u make the guys loook so damn kool..i'm gonna link those pics to my bf n ask him to dress up like dat..hehe..n i love riddhima's selection of clothes..i wanna raid her wardrobe 😉

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DHRUTI

@planet387

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Posted: 17 years ago

#538

wonder...wats gonna happen nxt 😆 😆 😆
armaan ko bilkool hi sharam nahi aati kya....
ridz ko kya bola usne in his room ki " shaaadi ke bad hum woh karege" chi chi chi.....besharam kahi ka 😆 😆 😆
wonderful part..plz continue 😳 😳

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

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Posted: 17 years ago

#539

great part! 👏 loved the AR cute scene at the end 😳

Avanti

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280866

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Posted: 17 years ago

#540

Loved the update Zainab! 😳 It was a short and cute part! 👏 😃

But its not getting boring at all! 😳 I enjoy read it! 😃 And even if you do bring a twist .. just dont seperate AR 😳 😳

Looking forward to the next update! 😛

Love,

Sanyaa ❤️