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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: sanjana shah
hey i was a silent listner through out and i love ur ff its awesome keep it up lol 😆

Coool, another silent reader!! 😳 😆😆 Thanks, Sanjana

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr
hey zainab plz continue soon

Yes madam!! 😆😆😆 I'll post the next part in 10 minutes

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thinkink

@thinkink

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#483

hyyyyy nyc part yar...safwan is jzt so hilariouz! 😆 😆 ..continue soon!!...nd bring up more A-R scenes..gr8 goin! 😊 😊

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#484

Part 16:

She felt his stong arms around her waist. The smell of his cologne drove her mad. He rested his chin on her shoulder.

"What's wrong?" He whispered in her ear. She flinched. He held her tighter, kissing her neck. She melted.

"Armaan... ??" She turned around to face him.

"Sorry, jaanu," He said, cupping her face in his large hands. He wiped the drops of pearl on her rosy cheeks.

Riddhima looked away, blushing. He kissed the fresh tear good bye, the one that had just leaked out of her big beautiful eyes. He caressed her soft cheeks... Then entangled his hand into hers.

"Woh Natasha ki bachi... muhje bohot tang karai hai... pata nai kaha se tapak pari, saali." He said.

"Armaan!"

"Kya?? Tum nai jaante usse. College mein mere peehche peehche ghoomti thi... so annoying, you know, like puppies. I didn't even like her. Muhje badlaam karne ke chakkar mein paari hoti thi..." He went on to tell her stories about how Natasha would bug him all the time, and their first meeting... He ended by saying, "Likin I love you... right? To fikar maat karo, bhaale muhje hamare baachpan ke baare mein kuch yaad na ho, phir bhi mein sirf tuhmara hoon... do you understand?" He placed a long kiss on her cheek, feeling the heat of her cheeks on his lips...

Terrace:

Atul and Sapna were looking down at the Mumbai traffic, hand in hand... He kissed her hand.

"Sapna... tuhme nai lagta ke hum... is rishte ko aagai baarai?"

She smiled, blushing. Atul was a great kid, from a good family. Her parents really wouldn't mind, but there was a problem...

"Atul, ek chohti si problem hai..." she looked tensed.

"Kya??" Atul was getting worried. Kahi kuch serious problem na ho...

"Woh.. Tum Gujrati nai ho na... Toh Mummi Papa ko kuch.. you know, manana hoga... nothing seriouss... bas thodi si tooti phooti Gujrati jhaardo unke saamne... aur khamand dhokla khaate waqt complain maat karna," She laughed. Atul hated khamand dhokla. He called it the yellow sponge... Sapna ran away before Atul could grab her... He followed her.

Locker Room:

"Laaaa... Laaalallaalalalaaaa!!!" Safwan sang.

"Safwan, please, thoda chup ho jau," Malaika begged of him.

"Ok, sure!" He smiled cheekily at her. He had only decided to shut up for her because she laughed at his joke in the cafe. Malaika rolled her eyes at him, and went back to reading her case file.

Atul and Sapna walked in poking and teasing each other...

"Kya baaat hai, lovebirds?? Atul ne propose kiya, kya??" Safwan asked.

"Hahaa, yeh darpok muhje kaha se propose karega... yeh to seedha Mummi Papa ke paas jaana chahta hai," Sapna giggled.

"Uhh..." Before Atul could continue, Riddhima walked in.

"Hi guys!!!" She skipped into the locker room, happily.

"Wah wahh... kya baat hai.. Armaan ne bhi tumse propose kiya??? Shaadi mein invite karoge ke nahi??" Safwan teased.

"Ufff, aise koi baat nahi hai..."

"Toh phir tum itni khush kyun?"

"Aise hi!!"

Dr. Natasha came into the locker room to check on the interns.

"Hey guys!"

"Hi," said Safwan, from behind Malaika, looking at her case file and poking her with his pen.

"Hi." Sapna and Atul didn't look too enthusiastic.

Riddhima didn't even bother to say hi and Malaika was too busy reading her file to notice her or Safwan.

"Kissi ne Dr. Armaan ko dekha??" Dr. Natasha asked, adding extra emphasis to Armaan's name.

"Dr. Natasha! Aap Armaan se kya chahti hai, woh mein achi tara se jaanti hoon, so stay away from him!" Riddhima burst.

"Excuse me, little girl!! How dare you talk to me like that! Disgustingg!"

"You're disgusting! Armaan MERA hai, aur tum to sirf usse phasana chahti hai. Tum chahe kuch bhi karlo, mein tuhme Armaan ke kareeb nahi aane doongi."

"Whatever, tuhmare paas koi saboot nahi hai..." Natasha said.

"Hai, saboot hai. Armaan hai mera saboot... Woh bhi tume achi tara se jaanta hai aur tuhmare jhaal mein aasani se nahi phaasne wala."

"Shut up!" Natasha left, thinking about how Riddhima knew so much about her already...

"Hahaha!!! That's why men use the fist!" Safwan said, fisting his hands, he punched his locker. "OUCH!"

Everyone laughed.

Sorry, sorry, sorryyy, for the short and late and boring update!! I've got to finish up my courses 😆😆😆 Phir chooti!!

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Yamini

@yamnovbloom

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#485

nice one yaar, 😃 👏
update 😛

Kya baat hai Dr. armaan acchi tarike se jaante hain kise manana hai apni jaan ko wow yaar 😳 😳 😳

hmmmmmmmmmmm acchi tarike se mazza chakaya us 🤢 natasha 😡 ko Ridz ne, common Ridz u can do it
aur Safwaan unka to kya kehna.
😉 Atul mast tooti phooti gujrati aur khamand dhokla khanna padega bichara iss pyarr mein kya kya pappad belna padta hai yaar phewwwww...... 😆

teekh hai teekh hai maaf kiya tumhe chotti update ke liye par plssssss next update jaldi karo 👏 👏

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maha

@faiza_elahi202

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#486

lovly part zuzu
abit short but very cute plz continu soon
tht natasha is so annoying 👏

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pragati

@Pragzie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#487

its ohk....u made it up by ur lovely post it was 2 gud
love it...
awesum....
i really really like the ar prt... 😳
gr8 prt..cont soon
👏

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#488

hey what a update..i really enjoyed reading it..keep up the great work...continues soon.thanx for pm..
❤️MONA

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heezy

@heezy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#489

hmmm abh kya hoga 😆 I cant believe Ridz outburst! 'Woh mera hai, sirf mera!' 😆 😆 😆 laghta hai yeh larki bohot filmi hai, kyun zenny? 😉

Abh Natasha ki bachi kya karegi... your probably already planning a bog come back for her na Zenny? 😆 😆 😆 I know, she's going to come running into the locker room any second and scratch Ridz silly, just like they do in films 😆

Safwan has to be my 2nd fav character here (1st being Malaika 😃 ). His just sooooo funny! 😆 😆 😆

Great part Zenny, i'm thinking of getting you to write mine too now, likhoge na? 😉

Lubna 😳