TeriUmeedTeraIntezar: Part22 Page80 8/18 NEW!! - Page 41

Zuzu mere zuzu likhte ho ya dekhte ho... Wah ji wah.... Great written.... And also all three couples included is fantastic 👏 👏 👏

Hoie hoie.... Safwan to gaya ab! Mashallah?!!?? Haiiiii kya baat hai Safu... 😉

Gulab!?!? To Armi Ridzi ko bachpan me waise hi bulata tha?! How sweet.... 😳 Waise is Natasha ka Armi ke saath ab kya leva devi... 😡

Atul to cannot be away from Sapna... Like honey from flowers 😆

hey zuzu
WOW dis prt was cho cho sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar jus luved it yaar safwans n malliakas prt was jus so funnnny n cute yaar omg n armi-ridz jus AWESOME 👏
cho cho gudddddddddddddddd 👍🏼
cont super soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn 😃
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome..lovely part..i luved Safwan n Malaika..they r really cute...n the childish Ridz..the way she ran to call Armaan was very cute....Gr8 job..pLzz continue...very eager to knw more abt Natasha.. 😊 😊 😊

Thanks Swetha 😛. Natasha will definatly make her dramatic entry in the next part 😉.

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Hey! 😳 Thanks so much for the PM! 😳 Do PM again once you updatte! 😃

It was an amazing part! 👏

Please continue soon ! 😉

Keep up the GREAT work!! 👍🏼

❤️ Sanya

Thank u Sanya!!

Originally posted by: mar-

grt part its really gud pls continue soon

Thanks mar- 😳

Originally posted by: sakshi.bahree

zuzu darling!!!!!!!!!!
mindblowing part!!!!!
im just loving all of their chemistry!!!!!!
like ur choice of clothes 😉
i like the malika& sawfan track!!!!!!!!
ur fabulous writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gr8 work sweetheart!!!!!!
do continue soon& thanx a ton for pm!
👏
👏 👏

😳😳 Thanks Sakshi!

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwwwwwww
dat was sooooooo cute
da scenery sounded vry romantic 😳
really nce part
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
update soon
👏

Hehe, yes, the scenery was ment to be romantic 😳. Thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: maha_elahi202

wow zuzu tht was too gud
i really like safwan
but yaar ur not showing more of ar 😕 but its ok
the part was like always great plz update soon 👏

Oh I'm so sorry! There will be a lot of AR in the next part 😆. Thanks for reading 😳.

Originally posted by: Stariel

Riddhima falling in the lake was hilarious 😆 The Safwaan and Malaika scenes were awesome as usual. I just love their jodi 😳 . Looking forward to the next update 😊

😆😆 The lake idea popped into my mind all of a sudden... well you see, I had to make Riddhima change her clothes 😆 Aww, thanks, will try to continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: hdpatel

m intsereted in maalika- safwan n armaan-ridz
n those 2 lovey dovey atul-sapna...lol unka ramance n chit chat khanatm hi nahi hogi...hehehe
leiken armaan bahut bura kiya atul-sapna ko kyun alag rakha :( .... poor lovebirds ......aur armaan khub ridz ko espicial guide de raha hai...umm dats not fair wid other inters ......by d way .... i loved dis part ...d way u wrote it....its wonderfull :)
oye tu muje ae bata ki ..Armaan kab sing kare ga 😃 ....aur yeh Dr. Shanshank ne armaan ko apne ghar bulaya tha....uske dad ke bare mein baat karne ke liye...yeh baat umne likhi hai ya nahi.....Agar likha hai to muhje kyun nahi dikhae deta 🤢 🤢 ....m gone crazy 😕
plzz continue sooooooon 😉

Omg!! Hehe, thanks for reminding me... next part... armaan zaroor gayye ga 😳 Armaan ke dad ke baare mein abhi tak to nahi likha hai... likin laterz 😆 No yer not gone crazy 😆😆 Ab bechare armaan ko do do tension hai... pehle apne papa ki, aur phir woh Natasha ki 😆

Originally posted by: shalika

awesome update.......so safan is falling 4 malika and armaan ko kuch kuch yaad aa raha hai thats great........ please jaldi se update karna and yes thank u 4 the pm

Thaanks, Shalika 😳

Originally posted by: dmg-gurl

luved it great job armaan ko yaad aa raha hai cant wait

cont soon 👏 👏

Thanks! Will cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: hira_786

hey zuzu
hope m nah late to reply.. late to ho, likin after reading your comment, sara ghussa pighal gaya 😆
omg dis part was superbbb.. zuzu ur such a talented gurl.. Aww, fankss 😳
omg u tel ya da truth i luv Safwan n Malaika's track rite now..
aww tht was shoo sweet wen Malaika taught safwan how to do wudu..It was amzing!! Hehee, it was 😆
m in luvvvvvvvvvvvv wid ur FF yar..
everythin is in der ..gud scenes bt da couples n even how religious ther are😳
n da best part is tht u always give us pixx to x how each characters r dressing.Its realli easy to get into ur FF😃.. I imagine each scene as I write thm... down to every detail 😆, I was even thinking bout the grass in the forest... 😆
zuzu plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon You too hiruu!! 😆 Kab se tuhmar intezar kar rai hai 😳
m eagerlii waitin to read da nex part😛

Thnxx alot foe da Pm😳

Lotsssssssssssssssssssa Luv:Hira😛

🤗 Thaanks for the sweeet comment hiru 😳

Originally posted by: yachna

wow zuzu its wonderful yaar
d way u hv describe safwan nd malaika chit chat nd atul nd sapna its awesom yaar
i lvd it unki chit chat to kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti poor kitna darta hai malaika se nd i lvd their track kabhi na kabhi patri rar aa hi jaygi nd wow armaan or ridz ki to baat hi nirali hai ridz bulane gayi thi khud hi gir gayi it ws soooo fnny yaar .....
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna cont soon

😆😆 Thaaaanks for such a sweet comment, yachna 😳

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

hey zuzu thanx for continuing
this part was not romantic but it was ver nice & good 👏 👏 👏
thanx for pm
plz continue soon

Thanks for reading!! Yup... no romance in this part, but there will be in the next part 😳

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey zainab
it was a nice part n is armaan remembering everything slowly or he still doesnt rem anything but overall it was a very nice part but yaar next part mein AR romance toh hona hi chahiye plz yaar thora AR romance daal dena next part mein but for this part 👏

There will be lots of AR in the next part, thanksss, prerna 😳

Originally posted by: *riddhima*

owesome part!!!....
👏
continue soon 😉

Thaanks Ridzi 😳

wow zainab, excellent ff..am gettin addicted to this..pls do continue...can u also pls pm me when u update the nxt part
thanks 😃

hey zuzu...
sorry i am late to comment.. it wouldn't let me log in....
i loved the part it was very nice, i loved how u explained the ripple effect of the water and how ridz fell in while going to armaan was soo cute and funny lol....
i wanna kno more bout dis natasha girl but good to c armaan thinking of ways to stay away/act normal with her....
thx for the pm....
plz cont soon....

Sonia

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Zuzu mere zuzu likhte ho ya dekhte ho... Wah ji wah.... Great written.... And also all three couples included is fantastic 👏 👏 👏 Dikhane ki koshish karti hoon... dikhai deta hai, kya 😆

Hoie hoie.... Safwan to gaya ab! Mashallah?!!?? Haiiiii kya baat hai Safu... 😉 Yehh... he was sayind Mashallah to Malaika 😛

Gulab!?!? To Armi Ridzi ko bachpan me waise hi bulata tha?! How sweet.... 😳 Waise is Natasha ka Armi ke saath ab kya leva devi... 😡 College ke dino ki dushmani ab aake niklegi 😉

Atul to cannot be away from Sapna... Like honey from flowers 😆 Hehee, they're cho cute!

Thanks Maha 😳😳