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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks Babygirl! I promise I will continue tonight.....didnt get a time to write yet.....need concentration to write romantic/dramatic parts! My son interrupts me during the day!

High peak! 😆 U gals are being very naughty today.....😆😳

pallavi

its not our fault u wrote such a sizzling part😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyy...sorry for not commenting before..was a little busy..

omg....woww...the beginning was so terrifying and exciting at the same time....I was sooo worried for kripa thoguh out the whole part...u sure love to scare us dont u 😆...

Everything was so descriptive, the charceters, their thinking, the action, everything was really beautifully written....I could even picturize the flashes angad might have seen when his memory was coming back...u have done a beautiful job as always 👏 ...

Awww....GF saved kripa...that was so cute that kripa was saved by her father

Poor Angad was soo apprehensive...poor thing....

It was really heartouching and really agonizing to see Angad so desperate to bring kripa back...after loosing her 5 years ago and finally when everything was gettiing on the right track there was no way he was going to loose her again...

Aww...GF also got a strange feeling after saving kripa...ofcourse kripa is the most precious thing in his life...after all she is his daughter....Lets see how GF and kripa both find out about their relationship....

I really liked the way how everyone was helping kripa...
It really shows a differant image about the underworld people....In our society we pursue that the underworld people dont have hearts and all they ever can do is take people's life away....but in this particular part is show sthat our assumtion is wrong...

They are human themselves after all...and its not like they chose to enter this field...or wanted to live a lief of crime, death, and bloodshed...Just like Angad fate might have indulged them to live a life like this...

Just like Angad fate might have forced these people to be involved in this crime world...

And It was really nice to see how u portrayed that message through out the ff....

After going through soo much with kripa's condition......it was great to see Angad cheerful and reassured...getting kripa back is the biggest joy of his life....infact kripa is his life...so we can certainly imagine how he might have felt after getting his life back..

I really feel bad for both GF and Angad at this point as well....

I mean GF didnt want to bring angad into this field...he just wanted to save his life...so he had to change his identity to keep him away from any harm...and D gang..He did what eh thought was right at that point.....but how is he going to explain all this to Angad...and plus he even has to face his daughter and her questions once she's aware fo GF being her father...

How will Angad explain to kripa the reason behind him becoming a killer...He didnt chose it...He was just brought here by fate....how will he prove himself innocent and his love for kripa....

Even though kripa will be taken back and hurt once Angad's identity is revealed...specially after going through so much over the past days... I am sure she will understand sooner or later that Angad isnt really to be blamed for all this....

I would really hate to see kripa saying harsh words to Anagd...

I mean I completly understand that she might be angry maybe not at angad but at destiny and how their lives have changed over time...and in order to let out all those emotions of anger, anguish,torture, suffering and hurt that she has gone through out of her system....yelling at Angad might actually help...sharing her pain with one whom she loves the most might actually make her feel light hearted.....

Poor Anagd he is still blaming himself for everyhting that has happened to kripa after he became Zaib 😭 ....but why wouldnt he even though its intentinally.... he has hurt kripa...and deep in his heart he knows that he is the cause of kripa's pain even though he wasnt himself...somewhere or the other he does hold himself responsible....hopefully kripa wil be able to understand his point of view...and they can get back together really soon...

Awww...poor prateek...wonder what he might have been going through without his mom and dad....its not easy for kids at such a young age to live without their mom and dad....and that too among strangers...lets hope kripa gets back to his soen soon...

It was soo cute when Angad was getting all happy to have kripa be called his wife...that was a really cute scene 😆

Awww... angad lovess her soo muchh 😳 ....through time Angad has really proved his love for kripa...even as Zaib he has always tried to prtect her...and not hurt her in any wayy...and now even as Angad...he is doing anything to shield her from any danger coming her way....

After 5 long years of seperating AK has finally united....their bond is sooo strong that I am sure that they wll face any tough times which might fall ahead...lets just hope that AK will soon be ale to new start a new life together along with prateek...and all those dark shadows will be left behind...and AK will finally be able to live the life they have always dreamt of...

Even thoguh there are a few more short storms ahead...but if AK are together I am sure they will fight back and win

Fantabolous part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up for the great work 👏





Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

its not our fault u wrote such a sizzling part😳

😆😆 so shd I not write them anymore? 😉😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Heyy...sorry for not commenting before..was a little busy..

omg....woww...the beginning was so terrifying and exciting at the same time....I was sooo worried for kripa thoguh out the whole part...u sure love to scare us dont u 😆...

Everything was so descriptive, the charceters, their thinking, the action, everything was really beautifully written....I could even picturize the flashes angad might have seen when his memory was coming back...u have done a beautiful job as always 👏 ...

Awww....GF saved kripa...that was so cute that kripa was saved by her father

Poor Angad was soo apprehensive...poor thing....

It was really heartouching and really agonizing to see Angad so desperate to bring kripa back...after loosing her 5 years ago and finally when everything was gettiing on the right track there was no way he was going to loose her again...

Aww...GF also got a strange feeling after saving kripa...ofcourse kripa is the most precious thing in his life...after all she is his daughter....Lets see how GF and kripa both find out about their relationship....

I really liked the way how everyone was helping kripa...
It really shows a differant image about the underworld people....In our society we pursue that the underworld people dont have hearts and all they ever can do is take people's life away....but in this particular part is show sthat our assumtion is wrong...

They are human themselves after all...and its not like they chose to enter this field...or wanted to live a lief of crime, death, and bloodshed...Just like Angad fate might have indulged them to live a life like this...

Just like Angad fate might have forced these people to be involved in this crime world...

And It was really nice to see how u portrayed that message through out the ff....

After going through soo much with kripa's condition......it was great to see Angad cheerful and reassured...getting kripa back is the biggest joy of his life....infact kripa is his life...so we can certainly imagine how he might have felt after getting his life back..

I really feel bad for both GF and Angad at this point as well....

I mean GF didnt want to bring angad into this field...he just wanted to save his life...so he had to change his identity to keep him away from any harm...and D gang..He did what eh thought was right at that point.....but how is he going to explain all this to Angad...and plus he even has to face his daughter and her questions once she's aware fo GF being her father...

How will Angad explain to kripa the reason behind him becoming a killer...He didnt chose it...He was just brought here by fate....how will he prove himself innocent and his love for kripa....

Even though kripa will be taken back and hurt once Angad's identity is revealed...specially after going through so much over the past days... I am sure she will understand sooner or later that Angad isnt really to be blamed for all this....

I would really hate to see kripa saying harsh words to Anagd...

I mean I completly understand that she might be angry maybe not at angad but at destiny and how their lives have changed over time...and in order to let out all those emotions of anger, anguish,torture, suffering and hurt that she has gone through out of her system....yelling at Angad might actually help...sharing her pain with one whom she loves the most might actually make her feel light hearted.....

Poor Anagd he is still blaming himself for everyhting that has happened to kripa after he became Zaib 😭 ....but why wouldnt he even though its intentinally.... he has hurt kripa...and deep in his heart he knows that he is the cause of kripa's pain even though he wasnt himself...somewhere or the other he does hold himself responsible....hopefully kripa wil be able to understand his point of view...and they can get back together really soon...

Awww...poor prateek...wonder what he might have been going through without his mom and dad....its not easy for kids at such a young age to live without their mom and dad....and that too among strangers...lets hope kripa gets back to his soen soon...

It was soo cute when Angad was getting all happy to have kripa be called his wife...that was a really cute scene 😆

Awww... angad lovess her soo muchh 😳 ....through time Angad has really proved his love for kripa...even as Zaib he has always tried to prtect her...and not hurt her in any wayy...and now even as Angad...he is doing anything to shield her from any danger coming her way....

After 5 long years of seperating AK has finally united....their bond is sooo strong that I am sure that they wll face any tough times which might fall ahead...lets just hope that AK will soon be ale to new start a new life together along with prateek...and all those dark shadows will be left behind...and AK will finally be able to live the life they have always dreamt of...

Even thoguh there are a few more short storms ahead...but if AK are together I am sure they will fight back and win

Fantabolous part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up for the great work 👏





Thanks mita! Excellent analysis as usual! 👏👏😃

Yes, some ppl are forced to join a life of crime....for revenge, for justice....later on we will hear GF;'s story and how he became a Don.....most of his group, Mittal, Kartik also have stories behind their joining Underworld.

Some criminals like GF and his gang are fair ppl......not ultra-violent, they dont kill unless they have to.....but other criminals like Damodar and his gang....are hardcore killers, vicious, cruel, ruthless, they take pleasure in killing. Thats the difference I want to show.

Besides, GF and his gang are more sophisticated, almost white-collar gang....whreas D Gang are drug peddlers, arms smugglers, criminals of the worst kind!

Kripa will find out the truth and be shocked to her core....lets see if Angad can win her back with his love.

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my god!!!
Kripa came to know the truth.. Hope she dosent do something out of mind now!!!

awesome part di... love their cute romance 😳

and kripa.. ms Chaplin.. 😆

do continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
really cute amazing and awsome the first half and u just killed the mood of joy at the end well pls no serious misunderstandings becasue technically angads not responsible becasue when he was a murderer he wasnt angad
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz... no more misunderstandings... i wanna see angad-kripa on the run, GF saving them, the evils to be dead, of course with heavy dose of AK romance 😳

GF's iraada is fine. but will kripa accept? i dont know. so there is gonna be a big confrontation between daughter and father, what is son-in-law gonna do in between.. watch or help them reach a decision 😉

missing prateek a lot! when will u bring him...

the romance u showed in this part... i started remembering Z-K romance in Dubai in O Bewafaa... 😍 so passionate... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
First half was so romantic.😳Awesome part 👏 👏 👏.Kripa Ms.Chaplin 😆 😆 😆too naughty.No more misunderstandings.Kripa should understand that angad isn't responsible himself of becoming a killer.But Kripa will not forgive him easily especially for lying when she asked him about his secret identity.What she will do when she comes to know that GF is her real father?
Edited by teri_susan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
this was what i was afraid of!!! 😭 😭
now kripa knows the truth and so does angad
angad accepts whatever happened to him...but will kripa be able to??? this is just terrible!!
they just got together and now this!!!
well i knew it was gonna happen...but now that it did...its too sadd!!!
i hope that kripa understands the circumstances that made angad turn to zaib...it wasn't angad's fault that he turned out to be a killer...watever mr. bajaj told him...he believed in it...but now that angad knows who he is...he knows that what he did was wrong...isn't that enough for kripa? i guess not...i wonder what explanations will make kripa understand or if anything at all...and yesss all this will take some time 😭
but anyways the first part was really romantic and funny...it was good to see kripa back to herself...and angad being all lovey dovey towards kripa like always...but now...happiness comes with sadness...i wonder what will be kripa's decision now...and wat will her reaction be when she learns that mr. bajaj is her father...but i guess thats later on
wonderful part!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!! kripa came to know the truth. di. again cliffhanger😭. will she believe angad if he confronts her after the whole situation?. awesome part.


~Sana~

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