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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!! the actual game has started now. i'm really excited to read the next part. aww.... will he be able to run on time wid kripa and prateek??? awww....i loved josh and kripa's conversation.


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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Di
Amazing partt 👏 Aww Josh is soo cute helpin Kripa 😳 Wow the actual cat and mouse game starts noww 😊 Continue soon
Luv alwayz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww...poor Josh feel so bad for him....at first his love was always one-sided to start with...he never got the love back which he had always wanted....and now...he is ready to loose everything he desires...for the sake of the one who he loves...He's even ready to sacrifice his career..

I am glad that Josh has realized his mistake (the incident between him and kripa the night before) and is now repenting for his misdeed...Hopefully in the near future destiny will have mercy on him...and give him the happiness he deserves...

and no only is he trying to get kripa and Angad back but infact he is even ready to be disloyal to his profession in order to unite the two lovers..

Omg I am soo glad that its finally proved that Zaib is Angad....but at the same time...this can lead to great danger for Zaib and kripa....Now that the D gang is after them.....

On one side Josh is doing everything in order to save Zaib and get AK together...and here Zaib has built hatred for Josh for what Josh had done to kripa...hopefully he will not do anything to Josh...and kripa will make him belive that Josh is on their side...and trying to get them together....lets see what will happen

Aww I really liked the part when Zaib was like:


main yeh bardasht nahin kar sakta ke Kripa meri taraf nafrat ki aankhon se dekhey, mujhey ek mujrim samjhey.

I wouldnt want to see hatred for Zaib in Kripa's eyes as well...I can completly understand what Zaib is going through at this point...Love can make people go to any extent...and maybe even mislead them at times...and make them do things for whih they might have to face consequences for latr on....Such as Josh did with kripa...and now Zaib is doing by hiding the truth...

Oh my god no way....the CBI's saw Zaib change...wowww...I wonder what their reactions were 😆

The scene between Kripa and Josh was soo emotional and heartouching...I am soo glad that atleast they are acting positive towards eachother...and that Josh told kripa everything about Zaib...even though Josh has lost kripa as a wife...he will always have her as a great friend...and prateek will always consider Josh his father along with Angad...so I guess he hasent lost everything...


Aww what will Josh and Prateek do without eachother...I really felt bad for Josh at that point...I mean he shares such a beautiful bond with Prateek and now he has to let him go as well...But I am glad they will ateast meet eachother..

But what about Prateek...will he accept Angad??...He already doesnt trust Angad with his mom (referring to the terrace scene from the previous part)...but I guess with angad's love he will surley accept him sooner or later...Noone can take the Josh's place in his life....but I am sure that Angad will bond a new relation with Prateek...

Oh wow what is Zaib going to do now??....the D gang is after him and knows is where abouts...and he is planning to run with kripa....will he be able to run in time??...Will kripa agree??..Will he be able to get away from the CBI??...and what will Josh do at this point??.....

Omg this is getting soo exciting and thrilling...anything can happen at this point...lets see how Zaib gets out of this one...and how will GF help him??

Fantabolous part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏
Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Josh cant live without Prateek, neither can Prateek live without Josh...😭


Does that mean that you're going to have Josh bumped off? That would be so sad 😔... losing his love, his Sunny and then his life..
BTW, who's going to spill the beans of Zaib's murderous kartoots now to Kripa?
Thanks, Pallavi
Edited by namelesssr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Hey Di
Amazing partt 👏 Aww Josh is soo cute helpin Kripa 😳 Wow the actual cat and mouse game starts noww 😊 Continue soon
Luv alwayz
Madiha<3

Thanks madiha! 😳

Josh has accepted that kripa only belongs to Angad and that Zaib is actually Angad! 😃

Now the game begins! 😉

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Awww...poor Josh feel so bad for him....at first his love was always one-sided to start with...he never got the love back which he had always wanted....and now...he is ready to loose everything he desires...for the sake of the one who he loves...He's even ready to sacrifice his career..

I am glad that Josh has realized his mistake (the incident between him and kripa the night before) and is now repenting for his misdeed...Hopefully in the near future destiny will have mercy on him...and give him the happiness he deserves...

and no only is he trying to get kripa and Angad back but infact he is even ready to be disloyal to his profession in order to unite the two lovers..

Omg I am soo glad that its finally proved that Zaib is Angad....but at the same time...this can lead to great danger for Zaib and kripa....Now that the D gang is after them.....

On one side Josh is doing everything in order to save Zaib and get AK together...and here Zaib has built hatred for Josh for what Josh had done to kripa...hopefully he will not do anything to Josh...and kripa will make him belive that Josh is on their side...and trying to get them together....lets see what will happen

Aww I really liked the part when Zaib was like:


main yeh bardasht nahin kar sakta ke Kripa meri taraf nafrat ki aankhon se dekhey, mujhey ek mujrim samjhey.

I wouldnt want to see hatred for Zaib in Kripa's eyes as well...I can completly understand what Zaib is going through at this point...Love can make people go to any extent...and maybe even mislead them at times...and make them do things for whih they might have to face consequences for latr on....Such as Josh did with kripa...and now Zaib is doing by hiding the truth...

Oh my god no way....the CBI's saw Zaib change...wowww...I wonder what their reactions were 😆

The scene between Kripa and Josh was soo emotional and heartouching...I am soo glad that atleast they are acting positive towards eachother...and that Josh told kripa everything about Zaib...even though Josh has lost kripa as a wife...he will always have her as a great friend...and prateek will always consider Josh his father along with Angad...so I guess he hasent lost everything...


Aww what will Josh and Prateek do without eachother...I really felt bad for Josh at that point...I mean he shares such a beautiful bond with Prateek and now he has to let him go as well...But I am glad they will ateast meet eachother..

But what about Prateek...will he accept Angad??...He already doesnt trust Angad with his mom (referring to the terrace scene from the previous part)...but I guess with angad's love he will surley accept him sooner or later...Noone can take the Josh's place in his life....but I am sure that Angad will bond a new relation with Prateek...

Oh wow what is Zaib going to do now??....the D gang is after him and knows is where abouts...and he is planning to run with kripa....will he be able to run in time??...Will kripa agree??..Will he be able to get away from the CBI??...and what will Josh do at this point??.....

Omg this is getting soo exciting and thrilling...anything can happen at this point...lets see how Zaib gets out of this one...and how will GF help him??

Fantabolous part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏

Thanks mita!😃

I guess Josh has learned the real meaning of love.... sacrifice everything for his beloved's happiness! He knows Kripa's happiness lies with Angad..😭

Zaib is in grave danger from CBI and Mobsters both... can he escape in time?

Zaib is afraid of admitting to Kripa that hes a killer....love makes us do anything, be a liar, fraud....he will have to pay for it later!

Zaib had to pretend he didnt know abt the hidden camera, so he undressed ....CBI ppl got a free show! 😆😉

Prateek and Josh will both be heartbroken if separated! 😭

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: namelesssr


Does that mean that you're going to have Josh bumped off? That would be so sad 😔... losing his love, his Sunny and then his life..
BTW, who's going to spill the beans of Zaib's murderous kartoots now to Kripa?
Thanks, Pallavi

Thanks nameless!

My lips are sealed for now.....u will know in next 2 parts what happens...

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey wen r u gona post???
its friiiidayyyy ... weekendd. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

hey wen r u gona post???
its friiiidayyyy ... weekendd. 😃

Sorry Hun! I can only update once in 2 days....Im too busy nowadays with my kid, and my job!

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 43

Godfather yelled urgently on the phone: ZAIB! GET OUT OF THERE AT ONCE! Tumharey jaan ko khatra hai! Damodar ne 2 aadmiyon ko bheja hai….I think Khera aur Jackie ko. His best men! JUST GET AWAY FROM THERE RIGHT NOW!

Zaib was stunned….his heart pounded with sudden fear and excitement, the acrid taste of impending danger in his mouth. His first instinct was to RUN as Godfather ordered, the next moment he thought about Kripa! How could he leave Kripa behind? NO, if he went, Kripa was going too!

Lekin Sir! Mujhey thoda waqt chahiye….main Kripa aur uskey betey ko saath le jaana chahta hoon!

You don't have time, DAMN IT! Godfather grated out in angry panic : Those guys are already on their way to the Hotel….they will be there in half an hour. You have to get out RIGHT NOW!

For the first time, Zaib rebelled against Godfather: Sir, main Kripa aur bachchey ke baghair kahin nahin jaaoonga! Chahey uskey liye meri jaan kyun naa chali jaye! Aur agar wo dono kaatil hain toh main bhi kuchh kam nahin….I can tackle them, I can kill them!

Godfather drew a deep breath to calm himself: Zaib….Now LISTEN TO ME! Main VAADA karta hoon…Kripa aur uska beta sahi salamat tumharey paas aa jayengey! Unki zimmedari tum MUJHPAR chhod do….Kartik will get them out first thing tomorrow! Lekin abhi, issi waqt, TUMHAREY JAAN KO KHATRA HAI! Yes, You are an assassin lekin tum dono ka saamna akeley kaisey karogey? The odds are heavily against you! Aur CBI bhi tumhey pakad saktey hain ….at any moment! Just leave the Hotel right now, Son….take a cab to the Harbor, we are waiting for you!

NO SIR! I am NOT leaving Hongkong without Kripa!

ZAIB! TUM APNEY ZIDD SE NA SIRF APNI, BALKI KRIPA AUR USS BACHCHEY KE JAAN KO BHI KHATREY MEIN DAAL RAHEY HO!
Mr. B was livid! Zaib was being a total thickheaded a**, he was blind, deaf, hopeless in love. He wasn't thinking clearly.

Zaib, zara socho….agar tum Kripa aur uskey bachchey ko lekar bhaagey toh poori CBI tumharey peechhey hogi…aur agar Damodar ke aadmiyon ne tumhey pakad liya toh wo Kripa aur uss masoom ko bhi zinda nahin chhodengey. You know how the Mob works….NO LOOSE ENDS! Listen to me, I will make sure Kripa and the kid get out of there by tomorrow. Lekin abhi tumhey wahan se nikalna hoga….HURRY! Time is RUNNING OUT!

Finally Godfather's arguments and urgency got through to Zaib's lovestruck head. He realized he couldn't endanger Kripa's and Prateek's lives by taking them with him right away! Right now, he had to make a run for it….Godfather and Kartik would take them out later!

Theek hai, main dus minute mein nikalta hoon….I will see you on the boat!

Zaib took a deep breath, looked at himself in the mirror. He was ready for the evening's performance in his signature leather jacket and jeans, his headband and dark glasses. He was very agitated at the thought of leaving his love behind….but he trusted Godfather's words. He was sure Kartik would get them out before they left Hongkong the next evening!

But he had to have a last glimpse of his lovely Kripa before he left the Hotel. He quickly picked up his Guitar and went out of the green-room to the stage of Mandarin. His eyes looked around anxiously for HIS woman! And there she was!

Dressed in a dark green salwar suit, with jade jewelry to match, she looked very happy and excited. She gave him a big grin when their eyes met. Zaib was amazed to see Josh beside Kripa and Prateek:
What is that Jerk doing here? He dared to molest Kripa!! Why is Kripa having dinner with Josh?

He didn't have much time to reflect on the mysteries of Kripa's conjugal relations as the Restaurant audience cheered wildly for him! He took out his guitar and started playing this song…..his song expressed his present feelings:

(Naqab)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aDhh2CxfaA

[Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga >2

[Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka>2

[Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

[Har ghadi har ghadi yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga >2

[Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka >2


Zaib and Kripa stared at each other, with the dazed look of two lovers lost in another world….a distant paradise they hoped to inhabit someday….Josh observed their eyelock and looked away, hiding his pain of losing the only thing he had ever wanted!

[Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh lejati hai >2
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai
Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
[Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga >2

[Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka>4


As the song ended, Zaib quickly glanced at the clock near the door….it pointed to 9 PM…he had ten minutes to get out of there. He took a last look at Kripa, daringly blew a kiss in her direction and disappeared from the stage.

Ladies and Gentlemen! That was Zaib! He will be back after a short break!…. The manager, Mr. Wu announced on the mic amidst loud applause…

.Kripa smiled in excited anticipation. She thought Zaib would be back shortly for more songs. She was really looking forward to meeting him after the performance to tell him about the proofs, about Josh's cooperation and willingness to help him with the CBI probe. In fact Josh himself wanted to talk to Zaib backstage afterwards!
Kripa turned her attention to Prateek and cleaned some ice-cream that had spilled on his blue shirt.

Meanwhile, Zaib slipped back to the green-room and put back his guitar in the case. It was then that he realized that he had the"safe" case…..not the "loaded" one! The guitar-case with the rifle embedded in it was in his room, inside the hidden cubbyhole behind the closet!

OH SH**! He swore and slapped his forehead….he had no idea that tonight he would have to escape suddenly…so he didn't bring down his loaded case. He ran to the lift and went upstairs to his floor.

As he was going to step out of the lift, his instincts kicked in….BAD LUCK! A CBI agent was lurking there in the passage….keeping a watch on Zaib's door..... probably another agent was inside, searching the room while he performed downstairs. There was no way he could get his gun out tonight….before leaving the Hotel forever. Perhaps they had already discovered his rifle by now! DAMN! There goes my precious rifle! Godfather wont be happy about this at all! I slipped this time, BADLY!

Zaib melded back into the lift walls and pressed the button for the 5th Floor, where he got out and took the Service elevator used by Hotel Employees to the Back exit. He slipped out of the Back-door with the safe guitar in his hand and disappeared into the night!

Just at that moment, a cab pulled up to the Hotel entrance! Two well-dressed men got down with briefcases in their hands. Their expensive clothes couldn't mask the hefty frames, tough-guy looks and sharp eagle eyes. They scanned the lobby after entering, then made their way to the Front Desk! They checked into the Hotel, opting for a room on the 10th Floor!

20 minutes had passed, Prateek was done with dessert and looked tired and sleepy, although still playing with video games ! Zaib had still not returned to the stage. Kripa looked eagerly, waiting for him to reappear. Finally, she got worried!

Josh, Angad abhi tak wapas nahin aaya….main dekhkar aati hoon! she got up to go and check his green-room.
Josh held her back: Wait! Thodi der aur theher jaao….shayad fresh ho raha hoga. He will be back!

But Josh had sensed trouble…..Zaib's delay to reappear was suspicious. And he was RIGHT!

He got a call from Nishant the very next moment: We GOT HIM, Josh! We found the weapon in his room. Tum abhi yahan aa jao, tenth floor per….

Josh flinched and glanced quickly at Kripa….he didn't want her to know: Theek hai Nishant, main abhi aata hoon.

He quickly instructed Kripa: Tum Sunny ko lekar room mein wapas jao, main thodi der mein aata hoon"

Lekin Angad? She protested , Angad se baat karni hai mujhey….

Angad se hum baad mein baat karengey! Abhi raat baaki hai…his tone implied no arguments. But Kripa was really apprehensive and suspicious ….she felt something was wrong!

Why would Nishant call Josh so late? Kahin yeh Angad ke baarey mein toh nahin?
But Josh rushed out of the Restaurant before she could ask him anything more.

She HAD to find Angad and talk to him about the danger surrounding him. Holding Prateek's hand, she went to the greenroom in the back and knocked at the door. There was no response. She turned the knob and went in….it was empty!
ANGAD…..AN-GADD! She opened the bathroom door, it was empty as well. Kripa was really worried, upset and anxious now!

Kahin Angad ko kuchh ho toh nahin gaya? Her head reeled at the horrible thought. Fear clamped down on her heart with icy talons. Angad…tum kahan ho? She whispered to herself…..I have to find him….shayad apney room mein hoga!….….picking up Prateek in her arms, she ran to the lift and went up to the tenth floor!

As soon as she stepped out, she saw..….Josh and Nishant were standing outside the room, talking seriously.
She ran to Josh: JOSH! KYA HUA? ANGAD KAHAN HAI? TUM SAB YAHAN KYUN HO? Her throat was dry, her heart pounding in fear that something had happened to Angad!

Josh looked angrily at her: KRIPA! Mainey kaha tha room mein wapas chali jaao…yahan kyun aayi ho?

Mujhey jaanney ka HAQ HAI! Kripa's eyes blazed at him…..BATAO MUJHEY….KYA HUA HAI? Angad kahan hai? Batao mujhey…

Josh looked down apologetically: Im sorry Kripa! Wo bhaag gaya….

BHAAG GAYA? KYA KEH RAHEY HO TUM? Kripa yelled in shocked disbelief!

Nishant tried to say: Haan Bhabhi….uskey kamrey mein….

Josh interrupted him quickly…he didn't want Kripa to know about the assault rifle discovered in Zaib's room: Uskey kamrey mein nahin hai….hum uskey room ki talashi le rahey hain"

A disbelieving, shocked Kripa pushed past the 2 men….handing over Prateek to Josh. She went inside the room to see for herself what was going on! There were Neeraj and 2 other agents scanning the room with all kinds of gadgets in their hands, taking samples, going through Zaib's closet, his clothes! She was stunned, devastated, furious!

YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI? ZAIB KOI KAATIL NAHIN….AAP SAB USKEY KAMREY KI TALASHI KYUN LE RAHEY HAIN? Kripa was quite hysterical in her rage…. She thought the agents had scared Angad away by searching his room! Perhaps he was in hiding already!

Nishant signalled Josh with his eyes to manage Kripa, Josh swiftly moved forward, took hold of Kripa's shoulder and shepherded her out of the room: Please Kripa, CBI ke jaanch mein rukavat mat dalo….yeh gair-kanooni hai! Unhey apna kaam karney do! Agar Angad bekasoor hai toh wo bhi saabit ho jayega, Im sure! Chalo, ab merey saath upar….thandey dimaag se kaam lo…humarey agents ko investigate karney do"

Kripa was shaking with unshed tears of shock and fury…..Angad was GONE! She couldn't believe that he had left without her and Prateek! Josh placed a gentle arm around her shoulders and took her out of the room….he nodded to Nishant who looked sympathetically at him. Josh went up to his Suite, leading Kripa, carrying Prateek in his arms.

As the lift doors closed, two men in dark suits shifted to a corner, blending into the background. Josh didn't pay much attention to them, more concerned about Kripa!
The two men looked at Kripa and nodded to each other….they had recognized her from the pictures sent to them!

Back in the Suite, Kripa sat in a daze……dread sat in her heart, like a dead-weight! Had she lost Angad again? Will he ever come back for her? What if he left her forever, got lost in the mists of time once again?

There was a buzzing sensation in her head…..what if he never regained his memory…. never returned to her? How will she live with the knowledge that he was somewhere out there, lost, drifting, without any memories of his past or his family?

Prateek was puzzled and upset at the turn of events. He hugged Josh's neck and asked seriously: Papa, Angad kaun hai? Mama ko kya hua? Wo Uncle kahan hai?

Josh patted his back affectionately: Sunny betey, Angad ek dost hai….Mama ka…aur wo kahin bahar gaya hai, isliye Mama upset hai.

Ohh, aap bhi toh baahar jaatey ho, phir Mama kyun upset nahin hoti? He asked with round eyes.

Josh smiled ruefully: Tab Mama ko pata hota hai main kahan jaa raha hoon…ab nahin pata wo Uncle kahan gaye hain….

Bad Uncle! Mama ko batana chahiye tha na? Main hamesha Mama ko batakar khelney jaata hoon!

You are my Good Boy! Josh kissed his cheeks. He was glad that Sunny was behaving normally with him again…and had forgotten the previous night's incidents. The child's terrified, accusing looks had cut deep into his heart!

Chalo, ab jaldi se kapdey badalkar so jaao…Mama ko tang mat karo" Josh changed Prateek's dinner clothes into pajamas, made him brush his teeth and tucked him into bed.

Kripa sat on the couch with a frozen expression on her face….Josh approached her and touched her arm: Kripa, please don't worry! Im sure Angad jahan bhi hai, theek hai…hes safe. Yahan hota toh Nishant usey giraftaar kar leta. Achha hua wo bhaag gaya"

Kripa looked at Josh with wide, tearful eyes: Wo mujhey chhodkar phir se chala gaya….mujhey apney saath kyun nahin le gaya? How could he leave without me?

She started crying softly, Josh gently pressed her shoulder: Kripa, samajhney ki koshish karo….ab wo khatrey mein hai….wo tumhey apney saath kaisey le jaata ? Let him escape and find safety….phir uskey baad zaroor tumhey leney wapas aayega…Im sure of that! He will come back for you! Apney pyar per bharosa rakho…..himmat mat haro….Come on Kripa…main jaanta hoon tum bahut bahadur ho….don't lose heart now!

Kripa held his hand and nodded: Thanks, Josh! I hope you are correct! Lekin na jaaney merey dil mein ek ajeeb sa darr hai….jaisey bahut bura kuchh honay wala hai….agar Angad ko kuchh ho gaya toh main…..she started sobbing again.

Josh comforted her through half the night while Kripa sat still on the couch, wide awake, sleepless, dreading the night for what the morning may bring. Finally exhausted with her emotions, she went to bed, almost collapsing into deep slumber….Josh lay down beside her, thanking the Heavens that she trusted him enough to share a bed with him again!

Somewhere deep inside his heart, Josh couldn't help being glad that he had a few more days to spend with Kripa and Prateek. His imminent separation from them had been postponed for some time at least! Angad wont return so soon now that they had deadly evidence against him! He had guessed correctly that the rifle was hidden inside Zaib's Guitar-case….it was in his closet, in a hidden compartment behind the wooden panels. Nishant's powerful metal detector had finally discovered its presence! Zaib's crimes have been exposed…..how would he ever return for Kripa and Prateek? He was a wanted man!

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It was late next morning....
Prateek was whining to go to the Mall, Kripa was still in bed….exhausted and dejected! Josh was on the phone with Nishant, discussing the details of the case. Zaib was definitely the assassin they were looking for. The gun and ammunition matched the specs of the one used to kill the victims in Singapore and Rio. Nishant had put an APB alert for Zaib…they had already searched the Hotel from top to bottom. Nishant was waiting for a court order to search Mr. Bajaj's Yacht. The yacht was in international waters and they needed a legal permit to search the boat.

Kanan came in at that moment….Josh was greatly relieved: Thank God, Kanan, tum aa gayi! Please take care of Sunny…Kripa ki tabiyat phir se kharab ho gayi hai…she needs to rest. You do something….can you dress him up and take him to the Mall? I already gave him breakfast.

Sure, Mr. Kapoor! No problem" Kanan smiled artlessly.
Kripa came out suddenly: Josh, main tumharey saath jaana chahti hoon, please mujhey le chalo…

Lekin Kripa….main toh kaam ke liye jaa raha hoon….tum wahan jaakar kya karogi?

Main Angad ka pata lagana chahti hoon…Kripa looked desperate, restless......yahan baithi rahoongi toh main pagal ho jaaoongi….please…mujhey bhi le chalo….I want to look for Angad….

Josh shook his head hopelessly….but he couldn't refuse her pleas: Theek hai, tum bhi chalo….get ready fast!

Kripa showered and dressed in fifteen minutes….Josh and Kripa left for CBI-HQ! Kanan got Prateek ready for the Mall and they went out of the Suite!

Josh and Kripa had just reached the offices of CBI, when he got a frantic phone call on his mobile. It was Neeraj from the Hotel:
SIR! COME BACK AT ONCE! THERES BEEN A KIDNAPPING!

WHAATTT! Josh sprang up….WHAT HAPPENED?

SIR, SOMEBODY KIDNAPPED PRATEEK! UR SON IS MISSING!

WHAT DO YOU MEAN? Josh was pale, shaking!

SOMEBODY HIT KANAN ON HER HEAD AND TOOK OFF WITH PRATEEK, SIR!
AAP JALDI AA JAYIYE….YAHAN LOCAL POLICE BHI AA GAYI HAI!

The phone dropped from Josh's nerveless fingers. Kripa picked it up and yelled: HELLO, HELLO, KYA HUA? Phone cut gaya! JOSH….KYA HUA? BATAAO, JOSH….she shook Josh fiercely, panting with anxiety!

Josh turned to her with horrified shock in his eyes, trembling with dread, his voice shook: Kripa…..humein abhi Hotel wapas jaana hai….abhi….he turned and ran out of the doors, calling a cab, Kripa running to keep up with him!

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Posted by: desidillse

3 years ago

Ink-Stained Pages: Aditi's Writing Index

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

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Posted by: minakrish

8 years ago

One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

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Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

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Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

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