THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 100

Wow,it was really brilliant. 👏 👏 👏You are an excellent writer.I hope that everything is fine. 😃 Damodar thought that he is very smart,but he did'ny know about GF's plans.GF is very smart.Very unhappy to know that this fiction is ending.But I enjoyed the story very much.Hats off to you.

OMG!!!!mindblowing part.. 8 bodies in the club house? hope angad and GF both r safe.


~Sana~

what happened???? Who died??? 8 bodies... counting on my fingers that makes angad, Gf and kartik also.... NOoooooooooooooooooooooo 😭

I guess the red lights must be significant of somethin....awesome part di

do continue soon 👏

hey great part..continue soon.. 👏

omg palluuuuu
da letter made me cryyyy :(:(
im confused abt sooo many things...wtz with those red flares? how did angad and GF escape?
nd i wozzzz wondering why GF didnt tell angad abt his plan beforeee?? nd how cud angad risk his lfie lyk that...if sumthin happened 2 him wt wud his family do! Prateek alredy lsot his other father!
OMG....last part...im gna cry again...i lvoed this storyy n ur gna end it!:(:(

Originally posted by: tommygirl

great part 👏 👏
continue soon

Thanks tommygirl! Im glad u liked it! 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: armaghan0

loved it amazinf mindblowing great part

Thanks sirza! Glad u loved it! 😃

pallavi

Great part. Hopefully Damodar is dead, and that Angad and GF are safe. Can't wait for more. 👏 😊

luved it di.
u r endin it.
i will miss it

omg Mindblowing part....loved it...full of action!

The short family scene between Angad, GF, and Kripa was kinda sad...both GF and Angad were going to finish of the battle that had been going on for years but couldnt tell kripa about it considering the fact that she was pregnant and if she found out she would get really scared and tensed...which they oviously wouldnt want...or another reason might be that they know that if they told kripa face to face then they wouldnt be abel to see her teared face which might lead them to grow weak...and in order to fulfill their plan this was something they coudlnt afford..

haha...shabbri didnt have the guts to face both GF and Angad 😆

Aww...both GF and Angad's scene was so hearttouching and emotional....but I know both will definatly keep their promise and will return to their family....faith will definalty be on their side this time...as they say bhagwan ke ghar mein dair hai andher nahin....Its been so long...Angad and GF and all the other people in their gang have indured alot over the past years...and finally its time that Damodar and his people get what tehyr deserve...GF is fighting for truth and justice and god will definaly be on his side....

really liked the way you described everything so much in detail...I could just picture evreything in my mind..and that is somethign which really helps as a reader to understand the story better...

loved GF's attitude he seemed do calm yet had this attidute in him...which didnt seem egoistic..on the other hand Dmaodar seemed to have alot of issues...

Another thing which I really liked in this part was the way in which you protrayed the differances in personality between both GF and Damodar....In the beginning you mentioned how Damodar and his men tried to look like business associates with their suits and ties and all...but no matter how hard he tries he can never look as dignified as GF and his gang..Even if Damidar chnaged his clothing style what he can never change is the the inhuman inside him...The way in which Damodar talked to Mr. Aziz in the beginning showed his arrogance and annoyance...but GF's greeting towards Mr. Aziz showed his decency...

Another thing was when GF and Damodar sighned the contract....the way in which Damodar scribbled his signatures portrayed his urgency and impatience to obtain the property as fast as possible...When GF was signing the contract his gracefulness portrayed not only his endurance and confidence...but it had a glint of his wickedness showing that he was in no rush to let go of his enmy that fast...

haha..omg loved GF's style...it was funny how he was calling Damodar with so much "respect" APP bhi chupchap bethiye 😆

Then when Damodar was springing toward GF and accusing him of calling the CBI GF threw him away like doodh mein se maki 😆

oh wow...so GF finally punished Shabbir...he used him until he needed to and now it was time for shabbir to get punished for backstabbing both GF and Angad

GF really is one intellectual man...his plan was just outstanding!!...Calling damodar face to face by using the contrat as a weapon...then cleverly dealing with Damodara nd his men to make them unconcious then bombing the place so the CBI would think that both Gf and Damodar along with their men died...Amazing!!

I think that angad had gone to plan the bomb...I guess that Angad and Karthic had came that night to leave the bomb in a secret hide out or something dont know...
I assume that the other three men were planted by GF..just like GF did with angad when there was a blast at Angad's house five years ago...wiht the fake DNA and all...Maybe he will do soemthign similar this time too...so the CBI would think that the other three guys were Angad, GF, and Karthic...but I wonder where the other three bodies came from if only Damododar and GF along with their men were there?? 😕...well lets wait for the next phase of the plan to be revealed...

Aww...poor kripa...well she had to know but it was good how Angad told her he truth about their wearabouts in the most soothing way..Even though she is still worried and tensed atleast Angad tried to calm her down by telling her to have faith in their love and that he will return to them...

Omg thank God angad gave the signal...but where is the thrid signal?..did something happen to either GF or Karthic..omg I really hope all three of them are safe 😭

Outstanding part as always...really enjoyed reading it...the way you unfolded GF's plan and all the action flickes was just amazing...oh wow..cant belive that the ff is ending...seems as if you just started it recently..even though it was no lesss than a marathon😆 .....cant wait for the next part...is there going to be an epilouge??...continue soon and keep up the great work 👏