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Posted: 17 years ago
ok the end
its long but i hope u guys really like it
i loved the experience of writing an FF and hope u guys liked reading this one

there is a 14 day leap in which all the shaadi ki tayari is going on
ayaan cannot be contacted but everyone assumes he is on the flight for its his marriage today

kanya and pooja and adita in a room

K:kanya thinking why has she not even given ayaan a thought in the last 14 days why has ranbir been one of the only things on her mind

P:eh kanya kin kayalo mein koye ho...oh humare hoone wali jiju ayaan ke...aur kyun na ho...woh india ka most eligable bachelor hai...style...looks aur romance sab usske paas hai...aur uska kadus chachu bhi

K:di ranbir itna bhi bura nahin baas samaj ne mein kuch waqt laga ta hai-(TZP link-remeber shanta ranbir scene)

P:haan tum toh usseki side logi ab...bhai jo bhi kaho mujhe ranbir bilkul acha nahin lag ta...woh kitna kadus aur batamis hai

K in her mind:ab di main apko kaise bataon ki ranbir kitna acha hai

she has a flash back of her n ranbir good times
he helps her
she falls by the car...he catches her
she falls in the bedroom he catches her
the day they went out as middle class
the movie
the pani puri stall
the convo on the balcony
the kiss

kanya slowly touchs here cheek wen adita buts in to her thoughts

A:kanya kya hua
P:sapne dekh rahi hai suhaag raat ke

at the nanda house there is a phone call

BD:hello

turkish man:hello maam,ayaan nanda ka accident hua hai aur hum unne leh kar apke ghar kuch dehr mein pooch rahe hai

BD:ap kaun bol rahe hai

the phone was cut off

BD tells everyone...everyone is tensed

Ranbir is unable to face this.To himself:
R:maine ayaan ka bura nahin chaha par ye kya hogaya...kanya ka kya hoga...kahin ye mazak nahin aur sachaye hai...toh

in the nanda house everyone begins to think its a joke and decide to go the shaadi ka mandap thinking ayaan will get there...the flight he was coming on was delayed so he wud take a while

when everyone gets there and are asking abt ayaan an ambulance comes along....men take out a strecter and ayaan is on it....they bring him into the middle

Reva:AYAAN!!!kya hua beta...talk to mummy...my son
kanya is in complete shock

K:Ayaan!!!(she starts sobbing)-ye

ayaan indicates her to shush

A:mom....aaj mein baatkar na chata hoon aur app sune gi...meine hamesha apki baat sune....par apne mere pyar ko manzur nahin kiya...meine apka dil dukhaya hai...im sorry

R:koi doc hai yahan

Doc:sorry hum iss case mein kuch nahin kar sakte...ye ek miricle hai ke abhi bhi ye zinda hai....inke paas kuch hi waqt hai...maybe a few hrs

K:ye pa kya keh rahe hai...ayaan ...mein

A:kanya meri baat dhayn se suno...meine zindagi mein pyar ek baar kiya aur hamesha usko khush dekh na chaha...aur...aur tumhara saath chaha par shayad iss zindagi mein tumhara saath he nahin likha tha

Ranbir:ayaan shut up...stop being a baby yaar abhi humee bahot kuch karna hai...abhi mujhe tumhare bachon ko kilana na hai...hum business ko badhana hai

A:sorry chachu...kuch kwab kwab hee reh jate hai...kanya mein janta hoon mein nahin bachun ga...is liye mein ...mein chahta hoon ki yum ranbir chachu se shaddi kar lo...plz

K:ayaan nahin

A:plz kanya na maat karo...meri akiri kwaish hai

after much persuasion she agrees

Rewa:nahin...ye humare parivar ke liye panoti hai...she jinxed...dekha nahin kaise mera beta mujhese chinn liya

A:mom mujhe promise kijiy you will never bother kanya..

she agrees as well

A:BD agle life mein i promise ki mein shaadi jaldi karlunga aur apko bhangra kar ne ka mohka bhi dunga

BD:putra ab muhje kaun kahe ga ki mein kitni sexy lag rahi hoon...

Everyone sobs

Kanya holds on to ayaans hand
K:kis ne kiya ye....kya iss mein natasha ka hath tha

ayaan finding it difficult to tlk
Ranbir:kya natasha ka hath tha accident mein

A:yes..woh kanya ko khush...khu..khush nahi..reh ne degi

A:malika dadi

M:yes beta-she is sobbing too

A:sindoor dejiye

malika hands over the sindoor

Ayan gives it to ranbir

R:chachu apki shaadi mein naach na paya kamse kam dekh toh lun...ao kanya...chachu maang bhar dijiye kanya ki

ranbir didnt know how he did as he was told but fact remained he and kanya were married

A:one last thing...mere cupboard mein meri will hai...ek..jyotish..ne mujhe bataya tha ki my life is ending...maan na nahin chatatha par....woh bachan parivar ki jyotish hai so i believed him...aur will banaye...usmein likha hai 50% of everything is kanya's aur baki saab meri behno aur shlok ko milta hai

K:ayaan kyun kiya mere saath aise...kasam kaye thi saath nibhane ke toh kyun chale gaye beech raste

They both recall the past moments and cry

A:kanya chachu tumko mujse jiyaad pyar kar te hai...he loves aur tumhe bahat khush rakhenge

K:ayaan

A:i love u aur akiri saas tak karunga

he was trying to tlk but cudnt n with the passing moment passed away...

Everyone cried and cried

soon after ranbir got natasha caught and as she had already been a wanted criminal she was sentenced life in prisonment but a few months later died in jail

Keep scrolling down for the next leap:

5 years later

Ranbir:ayaan kaha ho....ayaan jaldi karo...breakfast ready hai...come on

K:ayaan kidhar ho tum...come on breakfast ready hai chalo

BD:ayaan putar mere chash mein kahan hai

Reva:Ayaan where are u?

a small pair of feet were running towards them...a boy who strongly resembled his hot father was running in blue shorts and blue top saying:
"if u think im handsome
have a look at my dad" 😆

Ayaan was ranbir and Kanya's 3 year old son

R:oh yes thats like my boy...com on humme breakfast karna hai

K:mummy ji mein teen bache kaise smabhalun gi

Reva:kyun twins ki chances hai

K:Ranbir kya bache se kaam hai

all laugh

this was the happy nanda family who
lived happily ever after!

thats all from me shona
hoped u liked the end

leave comments

shona


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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 😭 poor ayaan died how sad. nice ending good 2 see they kept their kids name ayaan 2 remember him. that was such a sad n sweet ending
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh shona nice ending.

ayaan was so gud na...... but he died here..

wow baby was so cute.... handsu dad ka handsu beta 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks everyone!!!
i had to get rid of ayan to make a ranya ending for u all n that cud only happen if he died otherwise it wud be like sum ekta serial where kanya goes from ranbir to ayaan n back to ranbir!!!
i know the ending seems rushed n unrealist but i had to do that

thanks everyone

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg thanxz shona!! ur ff waz AMAZIN!!
luvvved da endin!!! the lil ayaan shhhooo cute
with da hole handsome thing!! fab job!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
shona the ending was brill.... sad but brill... i really liked the 5 year leap with lil ayaan.... its was a brill ff.... thnx for writing it.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh ayyan died bad luck shone it was sik ff😆 😆
Edited by **Rekha** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
..hey shona..
i loved the ending.
with little ayaan.
that was really.. cute.
can i actually.
make a request..
i really. if u could.
please write an ff with ranbir.. and kanya..
with kids.
that would be really..
cute..
i think..

shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^u know what i will consider that n try to post soon 😳
thax for suggesting 😛
Niroo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

^^u know what i will consider that n try to post soon 😳
thax for suggesting 😛


thanks a lot of considering.. that actually.

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