FF-RK-the end-a death n leap @ end pg21!! - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
SHONA!!!!! where r u!?!?!??!?! 😆 😆 plezzzzzz yaar update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^^^kar rahi hoon...im doing it now
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Posted: 17 years ago
aaawwww...... thankzzzzzzzz lavvv ya!!!🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok heres next

some people run over to ayaan and try to help him out....luckily for him they are indians and recongnise who he is
one of the men: arre ye toh ayaan nanda hai...chalo isse hostpital le jate hai

they take him to hostpital

on the other hand kanya is watching a movie and crying when ranbir comes in
R:kaunsi movie dekh rahi ho?
K:masti

sond dil de diya hai playing

R:hey ye toh comedy film hai toh rooh kyun rahi ho?

K:dekho na ye kitna pachtah rahehai apni bewi ko dhokha deh kar....ranbir tum inki jaga hote toh tum kya karte

R:mein apni style remix gahta...dil todh diya hai,
jaan teri lunga
zinda tumhe nahin chodenge sanam 😆

K:ranbir!

R:sweetheart tum comedies kyun dekh ti ho...watch love triangles...love triangles are in

K:jaise ki?

R:jaise ki...janemaan mujhese shaadi karogi kyunki humko tumse pyar hai oh mere jeevan saathi(guys its a sentence using film names...can u figure it out)

in an undertone: oh meri to be jeevan sathi 😆

K:kyun inn saab mein kya khas hai

R:ye tha tumhara dusra clue ki meri girlfriend kaun hai...figure it out ke woh kaun hai?

K:oh god ranbir tumhe samajna sirf ayaan ke baas ki baat hai

kanya exists

R:ye he toh ayaan ki gaalti hai ke uska aur mera taste itna similar hai...abb in filmon ki tarah mein tumhe hero banke jeet lunga aur ayaan latakatha reh jayega

on the other hand doctor examine ayaan n say we must call his family immediately

the indian turish men find his cell n try to call Nanda house but it doesnt get through so they leave it for the time being

meanwhile a woman is ahown in the dark
its natasha
she is talking to kanya's photo
N:kanya darling tumhari kismat kya hai...weddind se pehle hi widwa ho gaye....tut tut tut....ab jab your khushiya hi nahin rahi toh tumhara iss world mein kya kaam hai...abb you bhi apne pyare...loving ayaan ke paas chalejao...get lost kanya-(this lady is crazy n so is her english-hindi-lol)

she gives an evil laugh and then burns the photo and flushes it down the toilet

N:you know ye bollywood films bohat teach karte hai...like in jab we mileh i mean met mein kareena ye firing n then flushing ki advise data hai its true saach main accha lag ta hai....i love it


ranbir comes into kanya's room
R:kanya woh...

K:haan tum

R:mein keh raha tha ki ...umm.kya tum picture dekh...dekhne chalo gi...umm...mere...mere saath

K:never

R:kya...kya mein pooch sakta hoon kyun

K:ranbir tum emotional scene mein haasonge aur comedy scene mein kharate maro ge

R:agar mein aisa na behave karun toh

K:waada?

R:waada...

in his mind he says mein tumhe paah kar he rahunga


they both go to cinema to watch Jab we met...this is ranbir's 16th time 😆

while watching JWM while kanya watched quietly handing ranbir tissues wen he cried wen kareena was upset and then she laughed at all the funny scenes and had a blast

after movie finished

K:tum roh kyun rahe theh

R:mujhe se char logonke assun nahin dekhe jate...ek mom ke...ek ?BD ke aur meri kareena ke aur ek meri hoone wali mrs ke

they have a laugh and all and see a pani puri stall so go over


ayaan's condition is getting better but chances of servival are still little

kanya in her room thinking about the clues ranbir had given her

K:janemaan... mujhese shaadi karogi... kyunki... humko tumse pyar hai... oh mere jeevan saathi...inne jodhkar ek sentenv=ce bann ta hai aur usne ye mujhe ko kaha yahne ki indirectly usne mujhese pyar ka izhar kiye...hai bhagwan ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...ye idea mere dimaag mein aya kaise

Precap:there is a 14 day leap n its the wedding day of kanya and ayaan but ayaan cannot be found wen a phone rings that ayaan is in critical state n they are bringing him home...kanya in shaadi ka joda and rannu in sherwani looking as good as ever 😳 Keep scrolling down and read everything n reply plz

hope that filled in for the wait

as always suggestions are welcomed and 2 parts are left of this fanfic as far as i can think so give suggestions for an ending even though i have one planned out

also after my work on this FF is appreciated i want to start another one on KIT
something like the Honeymoon diaries
basically it is based on the events of Ranya's imaginary honeymoon...like a diary

or another idea is

ranbir and kanya meet without no ayaan in the picture at the begginning


thanks for reading

Shona 😳



Rhimjhimsawan thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol!!!!! where do you come with these ideas from? they are so funny...the remix of masti song!! lolol!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great update....

I like ur idea of starting a fan fiction where there is no ayan fromt he beginning

anyway waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
im glad u liked it
i dont know i was having dinner b4 i posted this part n it just came to me so i thought it wud be funny to use
lol im glad u found it funny
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Posted: 17 years ago
shona tat waz bomb...luved the way ranbir told his feelinz 2 kanya but in like secret code lol 😆

i really like ur idea witout aayan
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Posted: 17 years ago
shona tat waz bomb...luved the way ranbir told his feelinz 2 kanya but in like secret code lol 😆

i really like ur idea witout aayan
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u javey
hey ending may be coming soon!

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