Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 11

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Posted: 20 years ago

wow sounds so romentic with reality base....great fiction.....love it...

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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome Guli!! can't believe tey actually moved out!! plz cont soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 12

Kshitij is shocked to see the family but at the same time happy to see them!!

The only person that isnt there is Dadi!!

Kshitij hugs them.....

Kumud is wondering who came....

When she looks she is happy to see them

She cries!!

She hugs all of them as well

Including Kali!!

They notice how big she is

Cuz she is 7 months now

They all sit

They talk

Kumud really wants to go back home with them!!!!!!

She misses them too much!

But she knows how Dadi is...

Then after a while they decide to leave

They wanted to tell them to come back home.. but knowing Kshitij they didnt say anything!!!

Kumud was happy seeing them!!

Later on that night

Kumud is sitting up in bed

She is thinking and thinking

Kshtij comes there and sits next to her

Kumud is lost in her own world

K: What happened??

Kumud: Huh?? Oh nothing!!!

He doesnt say anything

Kumud: Kshitij....

K: Yeah

Kumud: Can we go back home??????

K is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud: I really miss them...

K: i dont want Dadi to hurt you again!!!!!!

Kumud: Please.....

K: what do you think?? I am happy living away from my family!!!!! ??? But not until Dadi doesnt forgive you.. i will not step into that house

Saying that he leaves

Kumud is there sad and crying!!!!!

Kk calls Kumud

Kk: How are you?

Kumud: Momma....... i am fine!!

KK: What happened ur crying?

Kumud: No.. i am fine!

Kk: You will lie to ur mom?

Kumud explains to her how she wants to go back home but K doesnt want to!!

Kk: I understand.... but dont worry everything will be alright!!!! You take care of urself... dont take too much stress...

Kumud: I wont!!!

Kk: Okay i will let you!!

Kumud: Bye Momma!!!

Kumud thinks and goes to sleep!!!

Kshtij comes back...... and sees her sleeping!!

K: (himself) I know you are hurt..... but if anyone doesnt treat you w/ respect.... i will not even stay w/ them for one min!!

Next Morning:

Everyone is at the table.. at Aryaman's house

Dadi is wondering why everyone is so quiet

She doesnt know that they went to see them!!

Dadi: What happened?

A: Nothing!

Dadi: Something is wrong or faces wouldnt be so sad!!

Kali then busts out saying that they went to see Kumud and Kshitij

Dadi is shocked!!!!

K: Yes we went to see them yesterday!! And see if they are alright!!!

Everyone tells her to ask forgiveness to both of them!!

Dadi doesnt say anything!!!

Dadi: Why should I?

They are so mad that they are tired of explaining to her!!

They all leave

Dadi is by herself....

Dadi: I will never ask forgiveness.... and Aryaman you should know why i wont!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Because he's not ur son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's not ur blood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(They adopted him b4 Nakul was even born!!!) (my fan fic...dont get confused w/ the show)

The End!!!!

I will cont later!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great guli jaan, great twist in the story.....plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
nooooooooooo
lol how cud dat b?lol but its betta dan sayin he's ajay maliha's son! 😆
continue but i want sum romantic scenes btwn kumud and kshitij
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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow!!! This is a bujillion times better than Kkusum!!!! You rock Guli!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow gulli..wat a twist!!! but i think in the story..kshitij is not aryaman's son, i think he is ajay's b/c he raped saakshi!!..remember??
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Posted: 20 years ago
omg..its so kewl...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: bollygirl87

wow gulli..wat a twist!!! but i think in the story..kshitij is not aryaman's son, i think he is ajay's b/c he raped saakshi!!..remember??

ya ekta will prolly bring dat up wne she's over da mahi-kkusum crap

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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 13

(He not Ajay Malia's son!! He's adopted lol)

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Dadi is bitter becuz he is not Aryaman's blood!!!

Thats why she is more close to Nakul....

She doesnt like Kumud not cuz she is K's wife but becuz she is Kk's daughter and she hates her!!!!

(She needs to forget the past and move on)

When Dadi said that K is not Aryaman's son Kali and Nakul heard that and they were shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They both go inside the room

Nakul cant believe what he is hearing!

N: He's not my real brother????!!!!!!!

Kali: You didnt know that??

N: No!!!!! They never told me... and they never told Bhaiyya!!! What's he going to say when he finds out!!

Kali: You cant tell him he'll be shattered!!!!!!!!!!

N: But someone has too!!!

Nakul is like whoa!! He's not my brother!!

He sits on the bed and has flashbacks of the their past together!!!!!!!

From the time they were little til now...

And thinking that he was his real brother!!! but he's his adopted brother!

They dont know what to do.. Should they tell Kshitij or not?!!

Aryaman and Saakshi know that but they never treated him differently!!

They treated both brothers the same!!

Kali and Nakul decide to break the silence and go tell him

But they are thinking is it a good idea or not!!

Nakul thinks they should.. becuz he has to know!!

They both go!!!!

K is @ work.... its only Kumud at home

Kumud opens the door and is surprised to see them

SHe invited them in

Kumud: Arre.. whats wrong? You seem tensed!!

They dont say anything

Kumud: What happened?

They stutter while telling her

Kumud: Look i dont understand what you are trying to tell me.. tell me clearly!!!

Nakul: Um... Bhaiyya....

Kumud: Wat happened to Kshitij???

Gets worried right away!!

Nakul: We just found out that Bhaiyya is not really my Bhaiyya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud is shocked!!

Kumud: WHAT???????

Kali: Yes!!! We heard Dadi talking and she said that Kshitij is not.......

Kumud: Do you know wat you guys are saying?

Nakul: Yes... we do!! We tried convincing Dadi to forgive you... but she didnt say anytthing We all left and me and Kali heard saying that!!!

Kumud cant believe what they are saying!!!!!!!

Kumud: Does Kshtij know?

Nakul: No he doesnt!!!!!!!!

Kumud: How is he going to react??

Nakul: We were thinking it'll be better if it came from you!!!

Kumud: ME??

Kumud is like how do i tell him????!!!!

They both decide to get going!!!!!!!!!

They turn around and head towards the door

When they look up they see Kshitij standing there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are shocked to see him!!!

Nakul and Kali look at each other!!

Kumud sees him and she is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



OKay the end!!!

Preview:

N: Bhaiyya???

K puts his hand up!!

K: Bus!! I have heard enough!!!!!!!!!!

He is mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😡 😡 😡
Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago

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