Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
😃 omg..its awesome..u r 2 gu..i mean i dunt even read wait for dd updates anymore...I m like so addicted 2 ur fanfic
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Posted: 19 years ago
i m seriously addicted 2 ur fan-fic more den d show u r a gr8 writer u shud write d story! what do u want 2 be when u grow up. u shud be a story writer for serials
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 15:

THIS ONE IS DEDICATED TO MY HERO!!! CUZ I WAS HAVING A PANIC ATTACK Kumud_Kshitij 😉

Kshtij is shocked to see A and S standing there!!

K looks down

Kumud sees them

Kumud quickly wipes her face

Kumud: Mom? DAd?? Come in

They both come in

K tries to leave but Kumud nods her head no!!!

A: Kshitij beta...

K: Please dont call me beta!!!!!!!!

Both of them are shocked!!!!!!!!

S: Why are you talking like this???

K: Becuz.. i am not ur son am i???? I am an outsider!!! All these years i was thinking that i belonged to this familyt!! But i was wrong!!

S: Please dont say that!!!!

K: Then what do i say?

Both of them are sad!!!!!!!!

S: Please... dont be so mad!!!!!!! I cant live w/o you!! You are my son!! My son!!!!! You are my oldest son!!!

K isnt buying it!!!!!!!!!

Kumud is there looking sadly!!!

K just leaves the room

A and S are mad!!!

Saakshi is crying!!

S: I dont want to lose him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: We wont lose him!!!!!!

Kumud: Everything will be all right!!!!!!!

Thehy both leave!!

Kshitij is on the bed in his room

Kumud: K??

He doesnt look

Kumud: Please look at me!!!

K doesnt

Kumud: Do i look that bad that you wont look at me???

He looks slowly!!

Kumud: Please forgive them..its not their faults..

K: Not their faults??? Not their faults???? They didnt even tell me that i am not thier son!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud: But they never treated you badly or differernt than Nakul did they??? They love you the same way that they love Nakul!!! There is no difference between the two of yoU!!!!!!!!!!

K: Well for me it will!! He is thier blood i am not!!!

Kumud: Please dont say such things!!!!!!!! At least for my sake will you forgive them?

K looks at her!!!

Kumud: Please!!???

K doesnt say anything!!!!

Kumud takes his hand and makes him put it on her stomach!!!!

Kumud: And for ur child!!!! Who isnt in this world yet...

K gets even more sad!!!

After finally convincing him... he agrees!!

Kumud is happy!!!!!

K just hugs her!!!

She consoles him!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud goes back into the kitchen

She sees she hasnt finished her watermelon...

She starts pigging out on it!!!

K: Please Kumud.. have you ever heard of a fork???

Kumud: Please dont disturb me!! I am eating for two!!

K: 2?? The way you look it seems like 3...

Kumud: 3???

K: Yes.. me too!!!

Kumud: Very funny!!!

K laughs!!!!!

Then she takes out all this food!!!!!!

K: Are you sure you are Kumud?

Kumud: Why?

K: I have never seen you eat like this!!!

Kumud: I am hungry!! Cut me some slack!!!!

Kk and Abhay come in

K sees them

Kk and Abhay see Kumud and are like what the heck..??

K justs and so do both of them!!

Kumud sees them both!!

Kumud: Momma?? Papa??

Kk: Kumud.. are you hungry??

Kumud nods her head like a little girl!!!!

Abhay wants to talk to K alone

Abhay: I need to talk to you..

K: Sure... lets go over there!

They leave

Kk is watching her sweet daughter stuff her face!!

Lol!!!

K: What happened Papa?? Everything okay?

Abhay: Yes and no!!

K: What happened?

Abhay: BEta... Aryaman...

K faces drops!!

Abhay notices

Abhay: PLease dont get me wrong........ I have known Aryaman my whole life!!!!! He is like my brother!!!! We go back!! I know they never told you......... but you cant hold it against them!!! Poor Saakshi... the day she saw you she fell in love w/ you!! It was always about you!!! And when Nakul came into this world.. she was even more happier becuz you had gotten a brother!!!

K is still listening

A: I know you arent mad at them..... i can tell that you arent mad at them..... who are you really mad at???

K doesnt say anything!!!!!

A: I will tell you.. you are mad at Dadi!!!!!!!!!!!

K is shocked!!!

A: I know you are! And trust me... we all know how she is!! She never liked you since the day you stepped into that house!!!!! I know the truth hurts!!!

K: But..

A: A and S cant live w/o you!!! You arent thier blood... but you are thier son!! And no one can deny that!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Listen... go back and apologize to them!!!! Becuz Saakshi.. will not live in peace until you do something!!! Poor thing is crying everything telling us how much she misses you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KK comes out

They both leave

K is thinking

He is having flashbacks of him and Saakshi!!!

Anything that happened to him she was always there!!!!

A was there for him too!!!

He thinks long and hard!!!

Kumud: So what have you decided????

Kshitij leaves and goes somewhere

Kumud is wondering where he has gone!!

At Aryaman's house

Saakshi is crying over Kshitij

DAdi is like why are you crying over him for?? He's gone!!

The doorbell rings..

Aryaman opens it.... and sees Kshtij standing there!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Okay the End!!!!!!

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K: I may have accepted the truth.. but i will not stay here!!!!!!! Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looks at Dadi in a mean look!!!! cuz he was talking to her!!!
Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job guli...keep it up....i love ure fanfics!!!!continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Brillant Gulli. 👏 Post next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago

wow i love the way u project both the couple...oh sorry three couples...plz..add some more romance betwn our love bird....its just suggestion.....[ in this tense situation....make them more closer..then even before...]...if i cross the limit then i apoloize....

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Posted: 19 years ago
great job gulli 😛 thanks please update soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww..thanks guli for dedication ur fan-fic episode 2 me..ur so sweet...omg plz continue soon...so excited 2 read next part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was brilliant guli!!! plz continue yaar!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
when r ya gonna continue guli??? i cnt wait any longer

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