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Posted: 17 years ago
Hmmm...people say Number 13 is unlucky....lets see how unlucky part 13 is😉

Part 13:

*Knock*Knock*

Before Angad could finish what he wanted to say and what Kripa craved to hear, they were disturbed by the loud pounding on the door. Angad sighed and walked to open the door. It was aliyah.

Angad(frowned): Always at the wrong time...as usual....

Aliyah: bhai....kripa....chalo neeche...are sab log yahan hai aur tum dono yahan akele akele....its not fair....everyone if missing you..lets go!

Angad: aliyah...we were talking about something important...can we join you later on?

Aliyah knew exactly what they were talking about, afterall, it was a part of their plan. There was no way aliyah would let them confess now as their feelings could not be called "love" yet. Everyone wanted them to fall in love before they say anything. Aliyah turned a deaf ear to Angad and pulled kripa out of the room dragging her downstairs even after Kripa's protests.

Three weeks of Anjali-Dhruv wedding preparation passed by in no time. Aliyah and Anjali made sure neither Angad or Kripa said anything to each other. Angad and Kripa both tried to bring up the topic again but just as they would start talking about it, someone would come and interupt. It wasn't doing any harm to them because it was just making their feelings even stronger.

THE WEDDING DAY:

Everyone was busy today, especially, as it was the day of the wedding. Angad's family had returned from shirdi. Kripa dressed her self in a semi bridal lehenga given by Naina on the special occasion. Kripa looked like a newly wed bride with all "solah singaar". Angad and Kripa walked down the stairs together and touched dadi's feet.

Dadi: Kripa...beta...ek insaan ka dil kitna lalchi hota hai...phele mein chahti thi ki Angad meri bahu ko iss ghar mein le aye....aur ab jab tum aa gayi ho....to ek aur khwaish jaag uthi hai mere mann mein...

Kripa: woh kya hai dadi?

Dadi: Kripa....beta ab mein chahti hoon ki marne se pehle mein Angad ke bacchon ko dekh kar jau....

Kripa was shocked at dadi's expectation but couldn't stop blushing. She shyly walked away from there.

Dadi: are...sharma gayi bechari...Angad tum.......(dadi saw angad's cheeks turning red as well)...are?....tum bhi?

Angad shyly walked away as well. As the wedding took place. Angad-Kripa, Josh-Aliyah lit the environment on fire with some awsome singing and dancing. First to get the boys excited, girls started with a challenging song. "kacchi kaliyan" from Laaga Chunri Mein Daag.

Naina:
hariyaale banne baba ke dhore mat jaio
haryaale banne baba ke dhore mat jaio, dadi ka laadla
mera banna, dadi ka laadla mera banna

Kripa, Aliyah:
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan

Angad, Josh:
kachchi kaliyaan hum naa todhen, le jaayen poora bageecha
kachchi kaliyaan hum naa todhen, le jaayen poora bageecha
malan teri bagiyaa bhali hai
har kyari mein kaliyaan khilli hain
bhavre hum prem ke pyase
sun lenge teri gaaliyaan...

Kripa, Aliyah:
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan

Angad, Josh:
kaliyon ke galon pe til hai
aur kaano mein baaliyaan
kaliyon ki ankhen nasheeli
par hothon pe gaaliyaan.

Kripa, Aliyah:
bhavre hai yaa bhaise hai ye
gaate sunlo kaise hai ye
apne tabele mein khonte
se inko hai baandhna
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan

yeah yeah yeah yeah

Josh:
*took over the short rap, sorry, couldn't find lyrics*

Kripa:
main hoon naar naveli, mein hoon chail chbeeli
mere paas nahin tum aana
mere chakhshu kataai, jaadu ki pitari
tumhe padhjaayena pachtanaa
hato jaao
hato jaao
mat karo jora jori
humein naa yun bharmao
baiyaan naa marorho saiyaan
choodiyaan na karkaao
inko mrindang tabla sunaye
jo taal chedh, to...

Kripa, Aliyah:
bhavre to hain matvale, par mann ke kaale hain
bante hain kitne sayne, par akal pe taale hain

Angad, Josh:
kaliyon sunlo baat khari yeh
bhavron se yeh, bagiyaan hari hai
hum jo naa aayen yahaan pe
to muh phir taakna.

Aliyah:
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan

Josh:
he kachchi kaliyaan hum naa todhen, le jaayen poora bageecha

Angad:
malan teri bagiyaa bhali hai
har kyari mein kaliyaan khilli hain
bhavre hum prem ke pyase
sun lenge teri gaaliyaan...

Kripa:
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan
kachchi kaliyaan mat todho, malan degi gaaliyaan

Angad walked out of the crowd to attend his call when his cell phone sent vibrations.

Angad: hello....

Gayatri(almost sobbing): hello beta....Kripa hai?

Angad: haan hai...

Angad handed the phone to Kripa without any questions as gayatri seemed really worried. Kripa took the phone and cheerfully spoke into it. The cheer on her face slowly disappeared and the phone slipped out of her hand. Angad bent and caught it before it hit the floor.

Angad: mamma..kya hua? Kripa kuch bol nahi rahi hai...

Gayatri: beta woh Kripa ke..

The line got disconnected. When angad looked up to question Kripa, He saw she was already running out of the door. He yelled her name and ran after her. He finally caught her near his car.

Angad: Kripa kya hua? Mujhe kuch batao to sahi!

Kripa: Angad....Angad..mujhe sanjivani hospital jaana hai....ABHI....

Angad: achanak? kya hua?

Kripa(burst into tears): MEIN TUMHE SAB KUCH BATATI HOON PEHLE CHALO....

Angad quickly got into his car and started driving fast towards he hospital. Kripa was trying to get a hold of her tears but nothing seemed to work. Angad placed his hand on her shoulder to comfort her eventhough he didn't know what was wrong. Kripa opened the door and ran into the hospital as soon as they reached. Angad had no choice but to run after her. Kripa bumped into a few people while running inside the hospital.

Angad: Kripa.....slow down...you'll hurt yourself..

Kripa ran to the receptionist.

Kripa: Suryaban sharma? which ward?

Receptionist: who are you?

Kripa: JUST TELL ME WHERE HE IS GOD DAMN IT!!!!!!

Receptionist: The ICU ward...

Kripa ran towards to ICU and saw her mother weeping outside. Kripa ran to her mother as quickly as she could followed by angad who was a few steps away who was now accompanied by Josh, Aliyah, Anjali, dhruv, naina, and dilip.

Kripa: mamma...pappa kaha hai?

Gayatri: kripa...beta....unko andar le gaye hai...

Angad: Mamma...kya hua? Mujhe puri baat batayiye...kripa ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya...

Gayatri: beta...hum bas Anjali ki shaadi ke liye nikal ne hi waale the ki unko buri tarah se khaasi(coughing) shuru ho gayi...and after a while he coughed up huge amounts of blood. I didnt know what to do or think...i just rushed him to the hospital.

Kripa was sobbing loudly and was out of control. Gayatri tried to console Kripa but Kripa pushed gayatri's hands away...

Kripa: mujhe pappa se milna hai...abhi milna hai..

Kripa started walking towards the entrace of the room but angad held her back.

Kripa(sobbing): Angad please...jaane do na mujhe......mujhe.....mujhe pappa se milna hai...mujhe unhe dekhna hai......chodo mujhe...jaande do..

Kripa tried desperately to free herself from his grip and visit her father but Angad had a tight grip on her shoulders. He turned her around her hugged her tightly to relieve her of the pain. Kripa cried her heart out like a little baby. Everyone by now was in tears. Angad walked Kripa to a near by bench and sat her down. He sat down beside her still embracing her while she was still crying. He kept one of his hands on her shoulder while he held her other hand with his hand. Kripa clung to him while still in sobs.

Preview: UNEXPECTED DEATH
Make your guesses from the following:
-Angad
-Kripa
-Gayatri
-Suryaban
-Josh


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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my god! angad is definitely gonna confess his feelings to kripa! now i just can't wait to read the next part! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

oh my god! angad is definitely gonna confess his feelings to kripa! now i just can't wait to read the next part! continue soon!



I JUST conitued..lol.....you dont have to wait for the next part...😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
EKTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! STop doing tht.........he was jus goin to tell her...i think...knowing u watch him tell her something stupid like i am hungry.....lol...really cute part....loved their dance...and they kissed@!!!!!!!...thats one step closer...nice nice...and he was goin to come close to her but the stupid phone call...love how he is soo protective of her...and how he cant stand her angry....really nice part...now do summtin with josh and aliya...u did somethin cute for dhruv anjali and angad kripa...now its their turn...lol...so wen r u writing the next part...better be soon....cant wait...and i will come behind u with a broom if he doesnt say i love u to her...hehe...but no seriously i will!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

EKTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! STop doing tht.........he was jus goin to tell her...i think...knowing u watch him tell her something stupid like i am hungry.....lol...really cute part....loved their dance...and they kissed@!!!!!!!...thats one step closer...nice nice...and he was goin to come close to her but the stupid phone call...love how he is soo protective of her...and how he cant stand her angry....really nice part...now do summtin with josh and aliya...u did somethin cute for dhruv anjali and angad kripa...now its their turn...lol...so wen r u writing the next part...better be soon....cant wait...and i will come behind u with a broom if he doesnt say i love u to her...hehe...but no seriously i will!!!!!!!!!!!



I did that on purpose....you will see why in the next part!!.....hm...."im hungry"..i wonder why i didnt think of that before....yep....they kissed...my fingers were itching to make it a bit more romantic so yea.....he was coming closer again to kiss her again😉 but i had to put in the phone call..hehe.....He cleared it himself that he is very protective and possessive about anyone related to him. I have something cute stored for josh-Aliyah too...dont worry.....And you can get your broom ready sweetie because i already posted the next part....😆😆😆i'll find a spot for me to hide.....hehehehehe...hope you wont hate me for the beginning and the end of Part 13.... Thanks for the wonderful long comment. Loved it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
i definitely didnot expect such a twist in the story. and the preview had me scaring i wonder who is going to die?
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Posted: 17 years ago
EKTAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! NOT AGAIN...i kno the unexpected death is gonna be u if it turns out to be neone else other than kripa's dad........well now tht i tole u its not unexpected.........buh stillll.....uhhhhhhhh.....i actually didnt mind the beginning of the part cause i mean aliya is jus tryin to get them closer...buh the end oh no.......it better not be angad kripa or josh or their mom....jus surya is okay.....sad buh its okay....nobody else......or u can jus make an ekta miracle and keep surya alive too...tht wud be kool...buh no one else pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ........ nd o yah nice part...sort of...until the end...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

i definitely didnot expect such a twist in the story. and the preview had me scaring i wonder who is going to die?



awww........dont worry....you will see who dies in the next few parts........it is unexpected though....the list is pretty scary i guess...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

EKTAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! NOT AGAIN...i kno the unexpected death is gonna be u if it turns out to be neone else other than kripa's dad........well now tht i tole u its not unexpected.........buh stillll.....uhhhhhhhh.....i actually didnt mind the beginning of the part cause i mean aliya is jus tryin to get them closer...buh the end oh no.......it better not be angad kripa or josh or their mom....jus surya is okay.....sad buh its okay....nobody else......or u can jus make an ekta miracle and keep surya alive too...tht wud be kool...buh no one else pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ........ nd o yah nice part...sort of...until the end...



Lol....nice guess...um I was wondering? Can i come out now? or are you still searching me with a broom in your hand? I am glad you didn't mind the beginning....i thought ppl were gonna be upset cuz i didnt let him say his feelings......the unexpected death is a top secret that only I know....you will find out soon......or maybe not....I might not be posting for a while .....i have exams coming up...😭.......I am sorry once again if the end disappointed you.😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jus caught up wid ur ff, read all the parts!!! It is absolutely amazin... but i wonder who is going to die!

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