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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

oh my god...i was gonna buy the black one too buh then i decided on the white one...how funny is tht...lol....oh no plzz dont put ne bad circumstances....i want them to be together ASAP....hmm cant wait for the next part....and u r a great writer so ppl have to be dedicated😊😊



Oh my god.....that is such a coincidence...lol.....there are going to be bad circumstances but eventually.....they will just help bring AK closer...😳...dont worry....i am putting in the bad to bring up something good...😆😆😛 Thanks once again for the great compliment...😃..i will continue ASAP..
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Posted: 17 years ago
😃 very nice
cont sooon
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😃 very nice
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Thank you...I will continue soon.....im almost done.!
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Part 10:

Josh, Dhruv and Anjali went in one car while Angad-Aliyah and Kripa went in another one. When they reached the club, the guys gave the car to the doorman who parks the cars. Josh saw a few guys outside the club looking at Kripa, Aliyah and Anjali. Josh looked at Angad but Angad seemed to have noticed the same thing. They told dhruv secretly and the guys suddenly got an idea. Josh went and put his arm around aliyah's waist.

Aliyah: 😲 what the hell.......you...how dare you?

Angad: Allu..just shut up...don't say anything...

Angad slipped his hand on Kripa's waist. Kripa trembled a little at the tickly feeling. Dhruv went and put his arms around Anjali's shoulder as he knew she would never approve him touching her waist under ANY circumstances unless they conveyed their feelings to each other.

Kripa(whispering): um angad...whats going on?😕

Angad(whispering): Kripa there are some b*st*rds passing on bad comments on you girls.🤬

Kripa: oh...😳

The six were walking past the guys. Kripa clung on to Angad's arm with fear. She didn't like any type of violence.

Guy1: are yaar....forget the other two....this one in blue here is good enough for all of us.

Angad got angry at this and took a step towards the guys. Kripa held on to him tighter and shook her head as if saying "leave it". Angad stayed back for her but Kripa failed to stop josh. Josh went and held the guy from his collar.

Guy2: are chod na yaar....kyun itna garam ho raha hai?....waise woh to us chikne ke saath hai...to tera khoon kyun ubal raha hai?....kya chakkar chal raha hai..

Josh(choking guy2): saale.....MERI BEHEN HAI WOH.....😡😡😡

At this point neither Angad or Josh were in control. They had already started bashing up those two guys. Dhruv stood there trying to control the women. Kripa was screaming continuously telling Angad and Josh to stop. While all this was happening, Another guy from the goon's gang got a hold of Anjali. He pulled her a few steps away from Kripa and Aliyah. The guys put his arms around Anjali's neck and pointed his gun on her temple.

Guy3: STOP IT OR ELSE I'll shoot.

Anjali: Josh!!!!! angad!!!! stop.....please....😭😭

Kripa: Angad please....stop😭😭...bhai.........chodo usse.......😭

Aliyah: Bhai....kya kar rahe ho!!

Dhruv couldn't stop himself anymore and went directly and started bashing up guy3. Anjali, Kripa and Aliyah stood there shocked at the guys' anger. When The goons couldn't even move because Angad, josh and Dhruv beat them, The ladies went forward to grab the guys. Even though all three goons were on the verge of death, Angad, Josh or dhruv didnt stop hitting them. This time Kripa succeeded in pulling angad away from the goons. Aliyah and anjali grabbed josh first, and then dhruv. The guys kept their arms around respective women and walked away into the parking lot.

(😉*GOOD GUESS SMILEYFACE and DESSERT_ROSE*😉)

Angad: Lets go....I dont wanna stay here for another moment.😡

Josh: kahi aur chalte hai...jahan pe crowd na ho...

Dhruv: lets go to the beach.

The girls kept quiet as the guys were still fuming with anger. All six drove in their cars to the beach in complete silence. Everyone stepped out of the cars and walked to the waves. The girls were glad that the guys were much calmer than before. They decided it would be best not to bring up the incident again.

Dhruv(whispering): Anjali...you wanna go for a walk?

Anjali nodded and both left silently. Dhruv gave a thumbs up to Angad and Josh behind his back so Anjali couldn't see it. However, the guys' actions didn't escape Kripa's eyes.

Kripa(whispering): angad..is he going to tell her?

Angad(whispering): well...he was planning to tell her at the club...but now that we're here....i guess he will tell her here

Kripa: the club?🤢😳 he was gonna tell her at the club? How unromantic is that??👎🏼

Josh: whats so wrong about the club?😕

Kripa: nothing is wrong about the club..but confessing your love at the club is definitely not a good idea...its so loud in there, such a crowd....when you tell your feelings to someone it should be somewhere romantic...like the beach...you two should be alone...it should be just perfect.😳😳

Aliyah: i tell you these guys kripa.....they dont know anything.🤢

Kripa: dont worry ali....we will give them lessons.😆

Josh: you dont have to sis...because you and angad are already married......and for me....i think aliyah would like to lesson me....right?😉

Aliyah: not in your wildest dreams!!🤢

Josh: aliyah...lets go for a walk......

Aliyah: why would i go on a walk with YOU?

Josh: to give your brother and his wife some privacy?

Aliyah looked at angad and Kripa and nodded. Josh and aliyah went the opposite way from dhruv-anjali. Angad and Kripa were left alone in the silence except for the sound of the waves. Kripa's eyes fell on Angad's hand where one of his knuckles was bleeding. She picked up his hand and looked at him.

Kripa: angad...the cut is deep....come to the car...i have bandages in my purse.

Angad: im fine kripa..

Kripa: angad...how can you be so irresponsible? Stop being childish.... you are going to be a doctor yourself...stop arguing and come to the car.

Kripa dragged angad to the car and bandaged his hand. Both sat on the bonnet(front) of the car. The awkward silence was back. Kripa didn't wanna say anything about the incident as she knew he was still angry. Anger was clearly visible in his eyes. She was about to say something but Angad was faster than her.

Angad: Kripa...wanna take a walk?

Kripa nodded and silently followed angad who was one step ahead of her. Angad felt Kripa going further from him and he turned around to look. he found Kripa taking her heels off. Kripa took them in her hands and started walking towards angad again. Angad smiled and walked beside her. They were quiet again. Kripa paused to see a big line of rocks going into the water. She quickly walked over to them and started walking on them on her tippy toes until she reached the end of the rocks. She sat down and started playing with water. Angad silently watched her and sat besider her. Kripa continued to play with the waves while Angad continued to stare at his lovely wife.

Angad: Kripa...

Kripa: yea?

Angad: You are looking really beautiful today.

Kripa:😳😳 thanks...for the compliment and for what you did for us girls at the club.

Angad: well i..

Kripa: i know you would have done the same if it were any other girl...

Angad: i would have...but not to this extent...

Kripa: you mean you beat them to death just for me?😲

Angad: well yea.....you see...i'll tell you right now....i am very possessive about anyone who is related to me...i can't stand it when someone misbehaves with anyone related to me..

Kripa: so it was me and aliyah....aliyah is your sister..

Angad: she is but they didnt pass a comment on her...they passed a nasty comment on you. I would have killed them if you hadn't stopped me..

Kripa: i saw...you were uncontrolable...(after a few minutes of silence), thanks angad. personally....i dont like violence at all....i was scared down to my wits...not for those jerks but for you.......agar tumhe kuch bhi ho jaata na...to mein apne aap ko zindagi bhar maaf nahi kar paati...😔

Angad: aur agar meine us waqt un logo ko maara nahi hota to mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paata.....I know i might sound like a typical possessive indian husband...but we decided on friendship...i have had many friends who were girls but you are the only one who is so close to my heart.....you made your way to my heart in such a short time....its amazing....

Kripa: i must say the same about you...i didn't really talk to guys because they all wanted to talk to me because of the way i looked...it wasnt friendhip...nor love....it was just plain lust i guess....but you......you are different.....

Angad and Kripa looked at each other and smiled. Kripa turned around to look at the waves but Angad's eyes were glued onto her face. Kripa sensed his gaze on her. It seemed as if his piercing gaze was melting her as seconds passed by. she quietly lowered her hand and picked up a bit of water in her hands. She quickly sprinkled some on Angad's face. Angad jerked his head away while kripa giggled.

Angad: Kripa ki bacchi....

Angad tried to catch Kripa for revenge but Kripa ran around on the rocks while laughing. At last Angad had her cornerd while Kripa stood with Angad in front of her and the end of the rocks behind her.

Angad: ab kaha jaogi bach kar??

Kripa: no angad...please....im sorry.....I wont do it again...promise...

Angad quietly took steps forward but Kripa was too quick for him. She quickly stepped off the rocks and into the water and started running away. Angad went right after her. he was about five steps behind her. At last he caught her, He circled her waist from behind and twirled her in the water. Both started splashing water on each other. Soon they were joined by Josh, and Aliyah. It soon turned into a water fight. At first it was josh-aliyah versus Angad-Kripa, then it became angad-josh versus kripa-aliyah and at last into josh-kripa and aliyah-angad. Dhruv saw them from the shore and yelled.

Dhruv: HEY GUYS!!!!!!!!!COME OUT!!!!! ITS AN EMERGENCY!!!!!!

Everyone hurried out of the water soaking wet.

Angad: whats wrong?

Kripa: what emergency?

Josh: say sumthing dude..

Aliyah: where is Anju?

Dhruv: Nothing is wrong. The emergency is that i lost my heart. Anjali is right here...

Dhruv moved aside and exposed a blushing Anjali. dhruv lifted her hand and showed everyone a ring.

Dhruv: she said yes!!!!!! She loves me!!!!

Kripa and Aliyah screamed in joy and went to hug anjali. Anjali moved back because both Aliyah and Kripa were soaking wet. Dhruv reacted the same way when Angad and Josh approached him for a friendly hug. Dhruv and Anjali linked hands and ran but ended up running in the water while the other four chased them. The water fight began once again. At last Kripa grabbed angad's hands so he cant splash her anymore.

Kripa: ok ok.....stop everyone.....

Aliyah: thank you kripa....your brother here was killing me....he is a beast!!!!!

Josh: maybe.....but im a sweet beast...😛

Anjali: aw come on Kripa...we're having so much fun.

Aliyah: fun? me and Kripa are being splashed here...your boyfriend is not splashing you ok?.....you are quietly standing there holding his hand and laughing at us.

Josh: Aliyah...i can hold your hand and then we can laugh at Angad and Kripa...

Kripa: bhai...me and angad have the most authority hold hands out of all four of you...

Angad: we're married!

Dhruv: then how come we never see you holding hands?

All four laughed while Kripa blushed a deep red at Dhruv's comment. Angad looked at her and smiled at her cute expressions. Everyone walked out of the water and went to their cars. They all stood there wondering what to do because they were all wet, and the cars would get wet if they sat in them.

Dhruv: Anjali...may i have a dance please?

Anjali:😳 here? without music?

Angad: i'll take care of that...😉

Angad went to his car and played "i just wanna spend my life with you" from neal n nikki loudly on his automobile stereo.

Anjali smiled ear to ear and gave her hand to Dhruv. Dhruv pulled her closer and both swayed away with the beats.

Like a dream you can't explain love can chase a beating of your heart
Like the sunshining in the rain love can make your whole world fall apart

All i wanted now
I just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly love is the thing that I can't live without

Angad(held out his hand to Kripa): may I?

Kripa smiled and nodded and placed her hand in Angad's. Both were still wet. Angad pulled her closer holding her waist while she circled her hands around his neck. Both got lost in each other's eyes again. They could feel each other's racing heartbeats along with their warm breaths brushing by them.

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

God I love somehow... I just wanna spend my life with you
You can show me how

Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly love is the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

Josh and Aliyah were bored but still smiled looking at their best friends happy with their life partners.

Josh: aliyah you bored?

Aliyah: damn right i am...you wanna dance?

Josh: it would be my plesure.

Josh and Aliyah soon joined the other two couples and swayed to the music.

What have you done to me?
Is this how its meant to be
Can't control this feeling in my heart
I can see better days glowing inside your eyes
And I know you feel it in your heart

All I wanted now
I just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

Kripa moved closer to angad and rested her head on his shoulder to escape his piercing looks. Angad closed his eyes when he felt her warm breath brushing his neck. Both were equally lost in each other's touch.

Love is a crazy thing
Its like when you wanna sing
And the words are deep inside your soul
When somebody comes along together you sing a song
You just let the music take control

And i wanted now
i just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
turned me inside out
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

**That was today's part guys. Hope you liked it. You guys had some pretty nice guesses for the fight...but I had to put this fight in to show that Angad was very possessive about anyone who is related to him...so yea....well....keep your comments coming! They are really encouraging!..😃**
Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part...!! even i feel like goin to beach wid my friends..but stuck wid books at the moment..i tell u...yr 11 suks🤢..anywayz back to the part...loved it... 👏👏 luks lyk love is in the air...finally dhruv and anjali are together...now v hav to wait for josh n aliyah...and for angad and kripa to confess their feelings...nd i hope thts gonna happen soon...gr8 part once again...cont soon!!!!!
Edited by desert_rose - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yayyyyyyy...........i was rite....c i tole ya...haha...buh this part wass sooo cuteee....especially the water fight...aww angad is soo possessive...i like it...same with josh and dhruv...its good cause it shows how they respect women...nice nice...haha dhruv is soo funnie..he is like its an emergency...soo cute...and josh and aliya fite adorably too...it was cute how aliya asked josh to dance instead of the other way around...lol...i really like tht song its one of my favorites...i jus luv this fanfic...like u said b4 tht the bad thing is gonna bring them closer...sooo am expecting it i guess....buh cant wait now for the enxt part...reallly niceeee...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part
liked it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt part...love the relations....cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.

Finally Dhruv proposed to Anjali. Now I can't wait to see some romantic scenes with AK. Can't wait for more. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooh, you did such a good job, it was soo romantic, i could just imagine it all in my head.. I loved this part!! Great job, i really love your fic.. hope you continue soon!

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