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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hyperash

heyyyyy js read ur hole ff today....i was sooo engrosssd in it....wow...u rite rrreeeelii wel...keeep it up...n do update sooon
f u dnt mind cud u plzz pm me once u update...thnk uu 😊

Thanks! Will Pm you!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

i jst read ur FF..Its awsum...hav no words...........full of suspence ,romane,thrills n...........lolOMG,wen r u gonna reveal all suspences????????n start a new lyf of AR......plz post soon.............m dyin coz its toooooooooo wonderful..............hats off to u............ 👏

Suspense going to reveal soon!!!!! Thank you very much!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey!!!! Sorry for the delay!!!! Here's next part!!

Part 27:

Next morning, Ridhima got up and went to the kitchen to make a little coffee for herself when she heard.
Armaan: Make that 2 please!
Ridhima: Ok but why are you awake so early?
Armaan: Because you are. (romantically)
Ridhima: Dr.Keerti said she's going to come at 11.
Armaan: And? (coming closer)
Ridhima: and.. (moving behind)
Armaan: And?
Ridhima: Nothing. (escaped)
Armaan: So what are you wearing?
Ridhima: Clothes!
Armaan: Very funny, that I know.
Ridhima: Then why are you asking.

Both sat on the dining table just then Atul and Anjali came down.
Atul: Ridhima please make some coffee for me.
Anjali: Me too Please!
Armaan: From the morning she making coffee. Make it yourself.
Anjali: Chill Armaan, she's not saying anything then why are you?
Armaan: I'm just giving you an advice.
Atul: Advice? Ok.

Soon, Ridhima came out with the remaining coffees. Everyone sat down.
Anjali: Ridhima, Dr. Keerti's coming in an hour so Are you getting ready before or after?
Ridhima: After.
Anjali: So, I'm going to get ready.
Atul: Me too, Armaan you'll get ready afterwards no?
Armaan: Yes.
Atul: I knew it.
Armaan: You said something?
Atul: No, What will I say?

After half an hour, Sapna shouted while Ridhima and Armaan were still relaxing in the hall.
Sapna: Ridhima, See how am I looking?
Ridhima: Beautiful for Amit no? ( last words a little softly )
Sapna: Shut up! Even I know who you'll be getting ready for afterwards.

Ridhima blushed while Armaan saw both of them in a face of confused.
Armaan: What's going on? Sapna you're looking beautiful.
Ridhima: See, Even I told you.
Sapna: Ok, Let me check on Anjali she'll be still doing her make-up.

The three laughed but Anjali presented herself just after that.
Ridhima: Wow Anjali, Atul's going to get mad over you today!
Anjali: Forget it Ridhima, Yesterday he was complimenting me too much.

Just before anyone could interrupt the conversation., Keerti was in the house. Anjali and Sapna began dancing while Keerti blushed. Ridhima also joined them.
Ridhima: Come on, Let's get ready.
Anjali: We 3 girls will get Dr.Keerti ready and Ridhima, you get ready.
Armaan: And I'll also get ready!

Everyone were getting ready but someone was having difficulty wearing the heavy jewellery.
Ridhima: Shit, I'm mad I bought this heavy jewellery. Now I can't wear it.

Armaan who was passing by saw her struggling with her jewellery.
Armaan: Should I?
Ridhima: No, It's...Ok.
Armaan: Scared?
Ridhima: No!
Armaan: Then?...Let me.
Ridhima: Ok, but fast.

Armaan took the necklace and placed it on her neck. She felt awkward with the closeness they were sharing but she knew inside she liked it. He slowly closed the pin and left the necklace which made her look graceful.
Armaan: Done!
Ridhima: Thanks!

Both walked out together while the guests kept pouring in. Someone saw them and quickly came to a side.
Person: How could this happen? I'm not going to leave them!

Taking the mobile, the person spoke.
Person: Get ____ and bring her to _______ I'm going to kill ____

Meanwhile, Sapna and Muskaan went up to take Keerti and everyone were busy serving the guests.
Keerti came down and Shubhankar was happy, finally Keerti would be his. Both sat on the mandap, while the boys kept an eye on the shoes but somehow Ridhima got hold of them. Armaan ran after her, Ridhima just went to her room but before she could close it Armaan came in. He went closer, Ridhima with a wicked smile, kept the shoes towards her back, Armaan held her wrist in which the shoes were.
Ridhima: Armaan, it's hurting.
Armaan: Then say it.
Ridhima: What?
Armaan: You know what I want to hear.
Ridhima: Please Armaan. Everyone would be waiting.
Armaan: Ok, but after this I'm not leaving you!

He left her, she ran while he followed. Till that the ceremonies finished down. The girls got the money. Ridhima went up but did not return. Armaan went up to get her but he didn't find her. He checked everywhere, told the girls and guys but she was no where to be seen. He was tensed now, where could she possibly go?
Keerti and Shubhankar left, everyone sat down in the hall thinking where was Ridhima.
Armaan went to change himself only to find something written on the mirror.


History's repeating, save her or she will again suceed. A father will again loose his daughter and son-in-law. Remember where we died, your heart will tell you where to go.


Armaan closed his eyes and suddenly there they were, He knew where to go.



Guys, You've all guessed. The story's going to finish soon. Hardly any 3-4-5 parts!!!

Edited by kdrs - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

*Reserved

WOW....Am speechless!👏

V.well written part! Da ending was soo kool!...👏

....u make us wait really long 4 ur parts😆....please continue soon!😳

n dis ff is gonna end???! Nooo....i luved it!😭😭

Plz dont end it so soon!😳

*~*Marisha*~*😳

Edited by perfectpiscean - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG! what a cliffhanger!! 👏 please please please continue soon! i cant wait to find out what happens! 😳

Avanti
Edited by forevercharmed - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!
⭐️
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
beautiful part pinky
loved AR romantic part
but its too much suspense u created
plz update soon
eagerly waiting to know where is ridz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey omg yaar realy yaar now slowly slowly its revealng all d suspense yaar wow wht a cliffhanger yaar plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooon yaar cnt be able 2 bear now hmmmmm superb yaar.....
cont soooooooon nd thnks fr d pm
luv yachu
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was such a sweet prt............... jus luvd it........ so d ppl who killed dem wer present der..... hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
plzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was such a sweet prt............... jus luvd it........ so d ppl who killed dem wer present der..... hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
plzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😊 😊 😊

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