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Posted: 17 years ago
love AA...and this is the first AA ff ever!!! hope you continue soon!
good work
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01

@Mehak: You think that "mahaan insaan" was SRK?? 😆 😆 Hmm...ho bhi sakta hai 🤔 😆...I think I've heard this dialogue in wayy too many hindi movies, to maine socha ki main bhi thodi bahut filmy ho jaaoon 😎 😆 😆 I mean...more filmy than I already am 😆 😆 Filmy chor yaar..tum log bhi na..Yummy Pizza boy ne kaha tha yaaaaarrr!!waaaaaaaay bck!uske ilawa aur kon mahaan hosakta hai..wese ik aur bandi hai jo apnay apko mahaan samajhti hai "Riddzy Ditzy"!!😕😆😆

I'm really touched to know that you liked this part so much, yaar! 🤗 🤗 Don't worry, Main tere jazbaaton ko samajh sakti hoon yaar! 😆 😆 Muahhhh!

@Tapassya: Thank you so much! Will try to continue soon! 😃

Edited by Sanaya_86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

ANU DIIIIIII!!!! Haiyo rabba!!! Dil garden garden hogayaa! lol. 😆 Aapke har part se mera dil ka garden badta jaa raha hai! 😆 I think my garden is bigger than Atul's now! 😆 Lekin what's this di. Aage peeche tussi lamba jaye part likhde ho. Aj enna chotta jaye part? Ki gal hai Anu Di? Idea shaidea muk gaya si? 😆 Chalo koi gal nahi. Chaithi chaithi continue karna! Aap hi ne kaha tha naa sabar ka phal meetha hota hai. Meri sweet si Anu Di, itne meethe phal honge toh mujhe bohot jald diabetes hojaayengi. Uppar se aap jo itni sweet ho! I'll get cavities yaar! 😆 Anyway, you get these... 👏 👏

Khush???? Ab hume bhi khush karo jaldi continue karke!

love you Anu Di!

Komzie



LOL Komal...glad to know ki aap ki dil ka garden Atul se bhi bada ho gaya hai😆😆🤗Thank you soooooooooooo much, sweetheart!🤗🤗

You're the first person to comment on why the part is so short this time...mujhe laga kisi aur ne notice hi nahin kiya and good for me😆😆...Haanji ji, that's exactly the reason why it's short...ideas muk gaye😆😆....Actually, I did know what I wanted to write after that, but there was too much stuff interconnected with it, and I felt too lazy to write all of that😉😆😆....Will try to continue soon, yaar!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ram*

love AA...and this is the first AA ff ever!!! hope you continue soon!
good work
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Thank you so much! Will try to continue soon!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Anu, i am late i know...but not less in love with your part for that...cant make this long i am sorry jaan....but for whatever its worth...

u know i love the way you write...the way you alternated btw AA and the rest of the gang...you broke the scene and yet maintained the continuity, and in the process enhanced the drama....mashallah!!!!!!!

atul talking about his dad...it brought back that scene to my mind in dmg when they were showing him standing outside the AIDS ward and how he is finally explaining about his dad....what a serial it was, and where has this show come......i cant forget the look on atul's face, the melancholy , the longing, the sense of loss and yet the feeling of loving pride...and the AA convo brought all of htat back....

bonding, bonding, bonding...nothing like a few shared reminiscences, a few secret emotions, a stray confiding moment to forge a bonding...melts the hardest heart, and anjie's heart is not hard by a mile , is it???

and anjie remembers omi too...i used to love omi....i always wondered why juhi fell for htat rahul and not omi...he liked her after all...but back to atul and his anjie....there is something about hte glow of a campfire isnt there....it turns teh mundane into the ethereal.....it reveals the truths of hte heart, tears away the veil that conceals the soul and brings out the deep reflections of hte heart in hte eyes....romance in the air all right...

and oh, anjie sings with him...sings with him...will such a day ever ever arrive in the real dmg...thank u, anu for this wonderful inclusion...the way they sing anjali anjali together is totally rocking...i cnat describe it, but there is an innocence , a shared comfort in it shared by two melancholy souls....oh i loved it...

there is a point where these two are the same , there is a desolation in hte heart of both...one hides it in mirth and the other in iciness...but hte core is the same, and that is why our dear anjie cannot refuse teh hand of friendship...and somehow i feel , for anjie , friendship is not the convenient refuge for evasiveness that her sister has recently reduced it to...

when people laugh together, friendships are forged and hearts are brought together....and look at our atul...he knows how to deal with anjie's anger and turn it to a laugh and he knows how to elicit an acceptance of his hand of friendship out of her...

cannot but help notice how she trusts his reassurance about the fruit, about his knowledge of hte jungle and shows interest in his thoughts and memories...almost as if she has been looking , no dying to find someone to laugh with, let down her hair with, step out of her icy shoes and be her own self....maintaining a demeanour must be exhausting and draining and doesnt she seem like a maiden waiting to be freed by her prince charming from her tower of iciness which she herself has locked herself into....

anu, atleast these two will have the sense never to let go of each other once they find each other and never be foolish enough to insult or spurn a true love...i wish i could mail SNT to the creatives of dmg...it could be an eyeopener or even a reminder of what their own work used to be like even a few months ago, before this R craziness took over....

have u noticed somehting in the show anu? sorry it doesnt relate to SNT directly but to AA1. see the way they started out showing Anjali all negative and cold and mean, but sunaina has an innate sunny, friendly , laughing sort of character which seeped into anjie, and it had such a brightening effect that they were forced to change anjie ...and today i find her totally lovable ...much more real and believable than her sis....did u see sunaina hugging and kissing shilpa before holi..i was like,,, this girl is sooooooooo real.......

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey!

@Sona: Your comments are soooo amazing, yaar! 😃 So poetic! And it gave me even more insight into AA1's relationship!

The points that you brought up about Angie and Sunaina's personality mirror what I felt when I first started watching DMG! Exactly! Sunaina's simply too sweet and her sunny, fun-loving personality definitely showed in the strangest of scenes! She can't be mean for too long! 😳 Like Anu said earlier, she made Angie shine in the most illogical situations! You know that I loved that Shilpa-Sunaina scene, too...Angie's a very very real character, and I just love her more and more each day!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg2c

Anu, i am late i know...but not less in love with your part for that...cant make this long i am sorry jaan....but for whatever its worth...Sona yaar...this is not long??😆😆 J/K! Thank you for taking the time out to reply yaar!🤗

u know i love the way you write...the way you alternated btw AA and the rest of the gang...you broke the scene and yet maintained the continuity, and in the process enhanced the drama....mashallah!!!!!!!Thanks yaar.

atul talking about his dad...it brought back that scene to my mind in dmg when they were showing him standing outside the AIDS ward and how he is finally explaining about his dad....what a serial it was, and where has this show come......i cant forget the look on atul's face, the melancholy , the longing, the sense of loss and yet the feeling of loving pride...and the AA convo brought all of htat back....Yes, that scene has always haunted me as well. How I wish we'd get to see something like that in the show again.

bonding, bonding, bonding...nothing like a few shared reminiscences, a few secret emotions, a stray confiding moment to forge a bonding...melts the hardest heart, and anjie's heart is not hard by a mile , is it??? Yes, I adore whatever little bonding that happens b/w them. To re use the song I used earlier..."Kitni narmi se, kitne dheere se"

and anjie remembers omi too...i used to love omi....i always wondered why juhi fell for htat rahul and not omi...he liked her after all...but back to atul and his anjie....there is something about hte glow of a campfire isnt there....it turns teh mundane into the ethereal.....it reveals the truths of hte heart, tears away the veil that conceals the soul and brings out the deep reflections of hte heart in hte eyes....romance in the air all right...I adored Omi as well. And Angie remembering Omi was another one of my random out of the blue ideas...lol...ah well, glad you guys liked it. Yes, the glow of the campfire does have that magically ethereal effect.

and oh, anjie sings with him...sings with him...will such a day ever ever arrive in the real dmg...thank u, anu for this wonderful inclusion...the way they sing anjali anjali together is totally rocking...i cnat describe it, but there is an innocence , a shared comfort in it shared by two melancholy souls....oh i loved it...Thank you so much! Glad you liked that, yaar!

there is a point where these two are the same , there is a desolation in hte heart of both...one hides it in mirth and the other in iciness...but hte core is the same, and that is why our dear anjie cannot refuse teh hand of friendship...and somehow i feel , for anjie , friendship is not the convenient refuge for evasiveness that her sister has recently reduced it to...No comments on the sister, but yes since this is my imagination I'm using here, I don't think Angie would treat friendship the way her sister does.

when people laugh together, friendships are forged and hearts are brought together....and look at our atul...he knows how to deal with anjie's anger and turn it to a laugh and he knows how to elicit an acceptance of his hand of friendship out of her...

cannot but help notice how she trusts his reassurance about the fruit, about his knowledge of hte jungle and shows interest in his thoughts and memories...almost as if she has been looking , no dying to find someone to laugh with, let down her hair with, step out of her icy shoes and be her own self....maintaining a demeanour must be exhausting and draining and doesnt she seem like a maiden waiting to be freed by her prince charming from her tower of iciness which she herself has locked herself into....Wow Sona! Even I didn't think of any of this when I was writing it😆😆...You find insights that even I'm incapable of seeing yaar!👏👏...In my "logical" thought process, she trusted his reassurance about the fruit cuz a) she was hungry😆 and b) she was tired enough to mellow down a bit😉

anu, atleast these two will have the sense never to let go of each other once they find each other and never be foolish enough to insult or spurn a true love...i wish i could mail SNT to the creatives of dmg...it could be an eyeopener or even a reminder of what their own work used to be like even a few months ago, before this R craziness took over....

have u noticed somehting in the show anu? sorry it doesnt relate to SNT directly but to AA1. see the way they started out showing Anjali all negative and cold and mean, but sunaina has an innate sunny, friendly , laughing sort of character which seeped into anjie, and it had such a brightening effect that they were forced to change anjie ...and today i find her totally lovable ...much more real and believable than her sis....did u see sunaina hugging and kissing shilpa before holi..i was like,,, this girl is sooooooooo real.......Yeah, I really liked Sunaina in that scene...but then, I like Sunaina in all her scenes😆😆...She is just too adorable of a person! And when it shines thru in Angie (however inconsistent it may be with the characterization), it is indeed very very endearing.

👏 Thank you for the wonderful comments, Sona🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
I'm going to sing today, Anu! 😛
"Tumne pukara...Aur hum chali aayi..."

😆 I couldn't help it!

So, I'm here...my comp died on me yesterday when I was replying to you in the Oasis about Sanjivani, little Anjali, and the current Dr. Anjali...I'll PM you about it, I guess...

First things first...

I hope you come up with more ideas for chapter 12! SNT is so addictive that I feel sad when I finish reading each update. I just can't wait for the next update, but I know you need a break! 😆 And chapter 11 was a bit too short for me!

That said, it was totally amazing anyway! I especially loved the fond memories of Omi that Atul and Ange shared...

"Fruits!!" 😆 😆 Haha, that was priceless! I can totally imagine the look on Angie's face! And he came up with a good cover-up, actually! What a funny situation!

"I told you, haina?" 😉 Angie took his word for it and actually tried the fruit (something that her "sensible" sister never would have done if Armaan had said the same thing...) The unconscious trust that's emerging gave me warm fuzzy feelings inside!
😊

Back at the camp: the n-o worrying and panicking as usual. Does she ever do anything else? 😕 But at the same time, the concern for her Anjali di was nice! (Angie's not afraid of the dark, is she?)
And Sapna trying to comfort her and herself as well...Such a sweetheart, Sapna! 😳

And back to the shack!

The ice is melting!!! (Literally? 😆 ) Oh, Angie's half-smiles are so cute! Atul is a total goner - he loves her so much already that every little action of hers enchants him...Awww!

He smiled at that, a hint of sadness evident in his eyes. "I wish I could."

She looked at him in confusion, and was about to say something else when he continued, "Papa passed away when I was 17. AIDS. Mom followed a year later. I think she was never able to emerge from the grief of losing him." He said, almost talking to himself.

"I'm so sorry, Atul!" said Anjali, feeling at a loss for words.



Poor Atul! I can feel his grief. Omi must have been such a loving father, it's so sad that something so unfortunate had to happen to him! 😭 And yet Atul still remembers him with a smile on his face, even when he's sad.

Angie's memories of Omi made me smile. Now that I actually know what she was like as a child, it's so much more touching...And man, she was pampered like a princess by everyone! 😆 Shashank-Anjali in the hospital after her operation: balloons, chocolates, dolls, pencil box... 😆 "Aapki ek-do cheezein ho gayi hai?" And on top of that, Omi gave her pastries and sang songs for her! Cho chweeet!

Anjali Anjali Anjali! I went and hunted for the song...It's so cute! But I don't know Tamil, so I couldn't understand what was going on!
I can just see it now: Omi and Anjali singing that song, skipping through the corridors of Sanjivani!

Oh, and AnJali sang!!! YAY! Finally! I guess it's a little preview of what's yet to come... 😉 I'm going to keep hoping that Atul-Anjali actually do sing together on the show someday. That would be a wonderful highlight on the show, no doubt!

Dosti ho gayi! 👏 👏 Hmm, I wonder if Angie's going to put on a facade again when they go back to the camp. Knowing her, she definitely will. She's too used to wearing her icy mask, na?

Lovely update, Anu!!! 🤗 Love ya, jaanu!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

I'm going to sing today, Anu! 😛
"Tumne pukara...Aur hum chali aayi..."

😆 I couldn't help it! LOL...awww thanks, Borna🤗

So, I'm here...my comp died on me yesterday when I was replying to you in the Oasis about Sanjivani, little Anjali, and the current Dr. Anjali...I'll PM you about it, I guess...

First things first...

I hope you come up with more ideas for chapter 12! SNT is so addictive that I feel sad when I finish reading each update. I just can't wait for the next update, but I know you need a break! 😆 And chapter 11 was a bit too short for me! Yes, chapter 11 was a bit on the short side😆😆....Have a bunch of ideas in general, but don't know when I'll be able to write them down per se...try to usually get something done on Fridays, but don't think I'll be able to do that this week.

That said, it was totally amazing anyway! I especially loved the fond memories of Omi that Atul and Ange shared...

"Fruits!!" 😆 😆 Haha, that was priceless! I can totally imagine the look on Angie's face! And he came up with a good cover-up, actually! What a funny situation! lol, you actually liked it?😆😆...I thought it was kinda lame, but hopefully in a cute way😉😆😆

"I told you, haina?" 😉 Angie took his word for it and actually tried the fruit (something that her "sensible" sister never would have done if Armaan had said the same thing...) The unconscious trust that's emerging gave me warm fuzzy feelings inside! Awwww....it gives me a warm fuzzy feeling as well yaar😳
😊

Back at the camp: the n-o worrying and panicking as usual. Does she ever do anything else? 😕 But at the same time, the concern for her Anjali di was nice! Yeah, not that I'm a huge fan of hers, but I've never really doubted her love and concern for her sister...she does care in her own way. (Angie's not afraid of the dark, is she?) Not in SNT I guess😆....dunno if she is in the show😕
And Sapna trying to comfort her and herself as well...Such a sweetheart, Sapna! 😳 That she is!

And back to the shack!

The ice is melting!!! (Literally? 😆 ) Oh, Angie's half-smiles are so cute! Atul is a total goner - he loves her so much already that every little action of hers enchants him...Awww!



Poor Atul! I can feel his grief. Omi must have been such a loving father, it's so sad that something so unfortunate had to happen to him! 😭 And yet Atul still remembers him with a smile on his face, even when he's sad. Yes it is indeed very sad...but I like the different layer it brings to his character, nahin?

Angie's memories of Omi made me smile. Now that I actually know what she was like as a child, it's so much more touching...And man, she was pampered like a princess by everyone! 😆 Shashank-Anjali in the hospital after her operation: balloons, chocolates, dolls, pencil box... 😆 "Aapki ek-do cheezein ho gayi hai?" And on top of that, Omi gave her pastries and sang songs for her! Cho chweeet! Yep! Angie was totally a spoilt little brat as a kid😆😆...but too adorable for words!

Anjali Anjali Anjali! I went and hunted for the song...It's so cute! But I don't know Tamil, so I couldn't understand what was going on!
I can just see it now: Omi and Anjali singing that song, skipping through the corridors of Sanjivani! LOL...skipping thru the corridors of Sanjeevani??😆😆....I don't know the Tamil version of the song either. I remember this song from my own childhood...watched the dubbed Hindi version of the movie...wonderful movie, btw.

Oh, and AnJali sang!!! YAY! Finally! I guess it's a little preview of what's yet to come... 😉 I'm going to keep hoping that Atul-Anjali actually do sing together on the show someday. That would be a wonderful highlight on the show, no doubt! Yeah, I hope they show something like that too....but I'm losing hope especially cuz they chopped off that scene from the Holi epis when Atul lifts Angie

Dosti ho gayi! 👏 👏 Hmm, I wonder if Angie's going to put on a facade again when they go back to the camp. Knowing her, she definitely will. She's too used to wearing her icy mask, na? Wait and watch what happens, my dear😉😆😆

Lovely update, Anu!!! 🤗 Love ya, jaanu! Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Borna!🤗🤗 Love you too!

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Posted: 17 years ago
oops, sorry.was it too long????? i guess snt does that to me!!!!!!!!!! sorry again....and also if i am reading too much into your writing...i felt that she was beginning to trust becoz in the last part she wasnt showing much faith in his camping abilities, esp since they get lost.......but here again she is trusting him slowly......along with letting her guard down....sorry if i am wromg...neway, for long i have really liked sunaina, soooooooooooooo

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