FF:A brocken heart-Part 4 page 2

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Part One:

The day started out with great replenishing joy as I walked down the street to go to my cousin's party. As I walked inside, there were all sorts of people I had not recognized, besides my cousin. She was standing there casually with her hand in her pocket talking to a few males I had not known of, one male who I did but I wished I hadn't, and a young lady dressed as if this were a ball rather than a simple gathering. She saw me, dressed in my normal dark blue jeans with a beautiful black design on the bottom of them, sneakers, and a nice, presentable, white top. A smile was brought to her simple face as she saw me, and turned her head on her friends to welcome me.

"Hey Aditi, I am glad you finally arrived." She said, in an excited tone, as I stared mysteriously at all of the people there who I didn't know.

"I am as well, nice to know you had to keep it in Chand Palace." I made a cute face, which was a mixture of a childish mockery and a sudden glimpse of anger as I starred at the bar waiter and realized it was the same guy who had teased me three times the other time we had a party here. She had understood with the smirk on her face.

"Oh, I see, well, let me introduce you to my friends here, this is Sheena, my friend, whose one year younger then me, Shelia, my friend Eric, whose in my class, Bill, the one who always asks me "how's life", Nehal, who you already know, and Arpit, whose two years older than me. Every one, this is Aditi, my cousin whose one year younger than me." She finally ended, with a warm smile on her face, hoping some one would say something. I kept a calm look on my face, as I stared at each one of them from one to one and took an unconditionally long time when it came to Arpit. He had black soothing hair that lavished in its own beautiful way; he was wearing a pleasant white shirt and jeans on a thin body just as mine, and brand-name sneakers. I was glad he was not looking at me; he had been starring at this other girl across the room, who looked nothing as a girl who I would ever think he would look at. Although, it was not a stare of kindness, it was in fact a stare of anguish. The rest had said a simple hello to me and had gone back with their conversation with my dear cousin, Hemali.

She had done a goods job trying to introduce Arpit to me as if I didn't already know him. She had told me much about him when I had asked her what your description of your life partner would be. Once we had both given our descriptions, she informed me that he, her friend Arpit who had been two years older than her, matched my description very much. At that moment, as I still remember it, I was baffled, and I had a mixture of feelings at that moment, I was shy, as if he had heard what she just told me, and I was blushing with great affection, yet I couldn't figure out why. He was brought up in many more conversations, and it only made me more anxious to see him, and now that I finally have, I feel so excited and glad, yet a sensation of fear is in me, what if I am not supposed to like him as much as I do? I hadn't realized that only two minutes had passed, and Shelia had to unwillingly say something to break the dreadful silence.

"So, why aren't you with your date, Hemali? Oh, wait, why would you ever have a date? No boy is stupid enough to date you!" She said in a mockery and cruel tone. Shelia had never been nice to Hemali, and Hemali had no intention of being nice to her either, after all, she had always been mean to her. Shelia had stepped closer toward her date, Ivan, who was the reason she accidentally got invited to Hemali's party. Me, Arpit, and Nehal had been starring at Shelia incredulously, and me with a bit of hatred. Ivan decided to speak up for her friend who was unable to say anything.

"Shelia, why don't we move to the other side, I'll get you a drink." He blurted with in confidence.

Hemali and Nehal had quickly left me and Arpit as my dear friend and cousin, Ankeeta, had entered in. I could see Arpit's eye's moving slowly toward me to reach mine, so I quickly moved my eyes away, but I was too late. His face had tainted as he saw the most innocent look ever on my face, he smiled a gracious smile, and I could see the mockery in his perfectly shaped brown eyes. I could tell that his eyes were laughing at e as he saw how I struggled to put on a smile just as he did, and finally I did. I was grateful that he was the one to start the conversation that I would never forget.

"Hello." His voice was so soft and incredible, which made me feel that I am not worthy of such brilliance and beauty. He sounded eager, as if he were trying to get much more out rather than a simple "hello".

"Hello." I was shocked I had replied with out fainting first. His eyes were now searching me; unfortunately, I could not read his expression, although it did look amused. My eagerness to talk to him had scared me, for I was far too eager than I should be to talk to him, to get to know him. He did just as I wished he would, he spoke on further.

"So, you are the essential Aditi that I had randomly said hi to through Hemali, eh?" He said in an amused tone.

"Yes. Why? Do you find that shocking?" I decided it was my turn to ask a question, and my childish tone had amused him with great delight.

"A little, I mean, I had never imagined you to be this beau---I mean, mature, for your age. Hemali had told me you were twelve" I noticed how he took back beautiful, forgetting that we had never seen or met each other before, and he didn't want to ruin my simplicity.

"Thanks, I guess. I have gotten that a lot, I know I don't look or act my age." I showed a bit of annoyance on my face.

"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to upset you, I didn't mean it to offend you in anyway."

My expression gave it all way.

"Oh, no, I didn't take it offensively at all; I was just annoyed by the fact that Hemali kept it here." I said, trying to cover up my true emotion.

"Why is that?" He said in a curious tone.

"Because that bar owner had teased me all three times I had went up there to get some water, I didn't like it." I said it in such a tone that my plan to make him jealous worked! And I got an unexplainable amount of pleasure from it. He starred back at the guy and had the look "I'll get you" on his face. Before he could reply, the girl who he had been starring at came over with her large body.

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P-m what to who?
The story? You don't have to p-m anyone the story, you write on your will. 😃

Great part! Really intresting.. i like her character very much! It's so .. real! 😆

Hope you continue soon! Good luck with it, hun! :)

Great part. Seems interesting . Can't wait for you to continue . Bye. 😃

Luv hw da story is shaping up n gr8 start!!!!!!
Tx PM me wen u upd8!!!!!!!
Thanx,
Chevarra

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo

P-m what to who?
The story? You don't have to p-m anyone the story, you write on your will. 😃

Great part! Really intresting.. i like her character very much! It's so .. real! 😆

Hope you continue soon! Good luck with it, hun! :)

sab

she meant who wants to be PMed wen she updates 😆

@Sabrinaa xo: thanks for liking it 😊 sorry, i thought i had to pm it to someone for it to be in the FFindex list 😆 😆..thanks for thinking of the charcters as real...its probably because they are *gasp* 😆
@jdsean: thanks for liking it 😳
@Chevi: of course i will 😃 ..thanks for liking it 😊
@Dammy: 😆 lols..no i didnt...look at what i said to Sabrinaa 😆

Part two:
"Hey baby! Where were you? I missed you sweetie." She said in a weird voice.
"Britney, you're only my date for today…and anyways, you were the one who left." He said in a firm voice, it seemed as if my presence there was holding him back from speaking in the tone his eyes expressed.
"Oh, I am sorry baby, my ex-boyfriend was here and I just had to speak with him." She said in an unconfident tone, and then suddenly her eyes turned to me, and so did his.
"And who's this?" She looked at me with a slight bit of hatred in her eyes. He quickly looked back at her to explain to her about me.
"This is Hemali's cousin." He said, in a casual tone, and I had a sharp feeling of confidence that some day I would be much more than "Hemali's cousin" for him.
"Oh, I see." She looked so mean towards me; I felt that was my cue to leave. I promptly left with out looking at Arpit once, and he grabbed my hand. His hand was not too cold, or too warm, it was just about perfect and it looked too perfect against my skin. After I had observed it, I looked up at him, and he explained using quite a different texture of voice this time.
"Hey, where are you going?" He said with an amused smile on his face, as he saw me blush. I was shocked when he slowly started to pull me closer to him, while I was hardly breathing. I was right in front of him by the time he was done.
"Hmm?" I had forgotten to answer his question.
"Oh, umm…I…umm…I…I thought I should leave you two alone." I said shyly, too afraid to look at his gorgeous face. But I could tell he was highly amused and at the same time quite a bit surprised.
"Why would you think that?" He asked, slowly lifting his hand reaching for my face, and slowly and very gently touching my chin and moving it towards his face so that our eyes could meet. He apparently wanted me to see his face and was quite eager to see mine as well. He smiled such a beautiful smile, it made me feel as if nothing else existed except for us two. Neither of us dared to glance at Britney.
"Umm…I…I...I thought you guys wanted me to go." I spoke the truth with very little confidence.
"Now why would you think of something so silly like that?" He said, still not letting go of my face. He slowly put his other hand around my waist scooping me in his arms.
I must have been dreaming, but it felt like reality. He smoothly let go as he saw how it made me feel. I was about to scream "no, don't let me go!" but I decided not too. Before I could answer, Hemali and some of her friends came over towards us.
"Hey, what's up cuz?" She asked me with a suspicious smile on her face.
"Um...nothing, come with me." And I disappeared with her.
feel free to leave comments and predictions! 😃

Originally posted by: ~devi~

@Sabrinaa xo: thanks for liking it 😊 sorry, i thought i had to pm it to someone for it to be in the FFindex list 😆 😆..thanks for thinking of the charcters as real...its probably because they are *gasp* 😆
@jdsean: thanks for liking it 😳
@Chevi: of course i will 😃 ..thanks for liking it 😊
@Dammy: 😆 lols..no i didnt...look at what i said to Sabrinaa 😆

Hehe, dammy now it came back to you! 😆 JK

Well, for it to be in the index i think you should just post it in there, i can give you a link of where to post if you want! 😳

OO, they are real, huh? intresting .. 😆 Well i would love to read on! :)

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo

Hehe, dammy now it came back to you! 😆 JK

Well, for it to be in the index i think you should just post it in there, i can give you a link of where to post if you want! 😳

OO, they are real, huh? intresting .. 😆 Well i would love to read on! :)

ahh sickner for me 🤣🤣

kool

got it now

😆

Part three:

"What?" she asked. You could tell she was highly confused.
"Nothing…I just needed to get away from there" I said
"Why?"
I was too embarrassed to tell her the truth. I could just feel Arpit's eyes on me. It made me unconditionally uncomfortable.
"Umm…no reason..." I was blushing, and I knew she could see that I was. She decided to go "big sister" on me, as usual.
She dragged me over to where Arpit and his girl-friend were fighting while the rest of the girls were dulling over him. She just swept me there and left with a grin on her face urging me to go and take a risk. Too bad I was too much of a coward to do so. I kept thinking about the way he swept me towards him. I felt so safe in his arms; I just couldn't stop thinking about it. He didn't pay attention to me, as he was trying to calm down the crowd of girls gathered to get him. I couldn't believe it, but I was kind of jealous for the first time in my twelve-year-old life. I decided to go away from him and his "fans". As I turned my head to the side with a frown on my face, angry at my self for being jealous, he came. He came towards me in the huge crowd and stood in front of me. I didn't dare to look up, just pretending like he was never there, with my hands wrapped around.
He slowly lifted his hands, as I could tell he had a grin on his face. He saw this as funny, which made me furious!
He lifted my chin up to face him, and I still tried to hide my eyes. I couldn't believe this