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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

lolll... awesome part.. luved da ending where her dad sed shes punctual n er sis says she must have broken all the rules... lollll... it was seriousily really hilarious!!!! n absolutel luve kripa thoughts e.g. Is it just me or is it getting HOT in here?
lollll 😆 😆 😆

thank u soooo much..lol..yep she did break like a dozen rules and winded up with half a dozen tickets..im glad u liked it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part...continue soon

thank u..i will
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mita_mita01

heyyyy...new reader..just caught up with the ff....and must say its

absolutely MINDBLOWWIWNGGG!!..I loveeeee ittt...And I love kripa's character....I like the fact that shes not really a spoiled brat...she cares about her family and friends...but yet her chracter reveals some naughtineess in her....like her mishchiefs in class and evrything really makes her charcater really enjoyable .....She's almost like any other girl we know of today....So that's something that makes the story more interesting to read since we can all some way or the other relate to the character...I personaly can relate to her when she said she wasnt a morning person and the fact that she hates when everyone says good moring...When it actually starts out as a bad morning when I have to wake up for school at 6AM very morning 😡 .....Man kripa is sooo halarious....she's trouble maker for sure....I was like cracking up through out the whole thing...I also like your style of writing...the everything is in kripa's point of view...It makes it more appealing....I like Nishant and Kripa's friendship...Its soo adorable....and the piggy back ridee loll...soo cute i must say....haha and the part when Angad smiled at her for the first time and shes like What a dazzling smile it's like someone light a light bulb right under my nose. 😆 ....man that was funnyyy....Awwww she's dreaming about angad alreadyyy!!...Man is she going to have a hard time staying away from Angad...Considering the fact that he's her partner for the project and that she bumps into him after every hour 😆... I dont think its going to be long before her Operation Avoid Mr. Hottie aka Angad Khanna fails..loll....and the scene between AK in the cafeteria... Angad's face lit up with a mischievous smile and he took the seat next to me. I squirmed in my seat, a little uncomfortable at the close proximity and his grin widened as he realized the reason for my discomfort. He leaned a bit closer his arms brushing against mine. Is it just me or is it getting HOT in here? .... 🤣 Man I feel bad for kripa.....poor thing....Man Angad is WICKED!!...I dont think he's going to leave her alone that easily...consedering the fact that she was the first girl to ignore ANGAD KHANNA.....she'll have to pay for that Angad khanna's style 😉 ......Awww I loved the little family reunion it was sooo

cutee...Oh and really like the tittle Its goes perfectly with the story...I mean Kripa is already head over heals for angad i assume😉...she just doesnt know it yet.....Fabouloussssssssss story.....cant wait for the next part....continue soon....and keep up the great work👏

hey! thank u sooo much..i'm so glad u like my ff so much..i wanted kripas charachter to be one to whom everyone could relate..i didnt want her to be a goody two shoes for a change..and the morning part, i totally put my and about half the populations feelings about waking up early in the morning..lol..yep kripa is kinda sorta falling for angad except she dsnt want to see it..i'm posting a new update soon..thank u for liking it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part. 👏 👏 It seems the more Kripa avoids Angad the more he's always there. 😆 Can't wait for the next part. Continue soon.

lol..exactly!thank u
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yeah

ahahahahahaha

she's trying to avoid him.....

nahinnnnn don't do this!!.... u never ignore a hottie... esp if hes falling for u lmfaooo... jus kidding! .. no im not... lmfaooo

anyways... really funny... and I can totally relate... I'm always late whereever I go.... it's coool though... it's become trademark for me... i guess it's my style LOL!

ooooo and suggestion.... put the page number of the latest part.... so that we can easily reach those parts.... that would be soooooo convenient!

keep it up! lovin the FF! 😳 😃

thank u soo much..yep i'll do the numbering now..thank u...yep getting late is my trademark too..except i mostly get beaten up by my frnds for it..i'll post the next part now
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jiya imdad

kripa is really an original is piece , one cannot find another girl like her 😆 ...... at first she didn't care about angad and now she is drooling over him
the piggy ride was hillarious, pretty embarrassing though but oh well! as if she cares
the first encounter was funny too!
loved ur writing style
continue soon

thank u thank u thank u!!!lol..she realli is one of a kind..she cant help the attraction towards him..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

The next day, I was awoken from my sleep by the insistent licking of my Yorkshire terrier, Snuffles, (totally copied the name from Harry Potter) who was gifted to me on my 18th birthday by Aaliya. Sweet gift right...NOT! Considering the fact that I 'was' terrified of dogs. But what can I say, the little guy grew on me. But sometimes, I simply hate him. Like right now. Why'd he have to go and ruin my sleep? And CRAP! Is that my diary he's running away with?

I got up and chased after him. That's my diary you creep! I yelled after him. Honestly speaking, sometimes I think Aaliya gifted him to me to make my life miserable. I ran after him as he went out the front door. Now who is stupid enough to leave the front door open? As I chased him, I received several amused glares from my neighbors but then again, I was wearing my sleeping suit which happens to be a silk tank top and brief shorts.

I dashed all the way past my front yard all the way to Samantha's place, (remember she's my neighbor) and stopped in mid step. For standing in front of me, holding Snuffles in one hand and my diary in another was Angad Khanna. And that's not all, he was shirtless too. My Oh My! What a sight. The perfectly sculptured body with those abs and *sigh* those biceps. I would have swooned but dignity and self respect kept me upright. Meanwhile Mr. Cool stood there checking me out. It was then that I realized my scantily clothed state and I blushed. Yes people I am human therefore I do blush…Sometimes.

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moved forward to take my diary and Snuffles from his arms and the mere brush of his arm against mine set me shivering. I never did believe in all the romantic stuff I read in books and magazines but this was very much like that. I mean the stuff you read about an electric current passing through your body, it totally happened…but then again, it could be static. However, I backed away from him and he smirked.

Angad: Hey! He grinned at me, flashing those perfect white teeth. I smiled back a bit hesitantly.

Me: Hi! What are you doing here?

Angad: I'm here for the pool party. I must say, interesting choice of clothes to go out for a jog. He said eyeing my lilac silk tank top and shorts. I blushed again.

Me: Snuffles here, I said pointing to my dog, ran off with my diary. Somehow both of us got here she ended. Angad smiled at me.

Angad: What do you write in the diary that is so important that you came here to get it? He asked flipping the pages and I snatched it from him.

Me: Haven't you heard of PRIVACY?

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ngad: Nope! Now that you are here, do me a favor and stay for the party! It's a big bore and I need some amusement.

Me: Do I look like an entertainment package to you? Oops! Wrong question. His lazy smirk answered my question perfectly. As fate would have it, my jerk of an ex-boyfriend came striding outside with Samantha clinging on his arm (clingy much?)

Samantha: OHH...What do we have her? A gate crasher! Kripa honey, I don't remember inviting you to my party. It's for cool people only.

Me: Yeah I was just dying to be here. I remarked sarcastically.

Samantha: And what on earth are you wearing? I know you want to impress Angad and all but this is the rather too much don't you think? She sneered. Oh how I wanted to slap that beautiful face of hers. Me wearing my sleeping suit to impress Angad. Atleast it covers more skin than her semi transparent bikini. I clenched my fist, stepping forward to hit her.

Angad: Actually Sam, I took the liberty of inviting Kripa here. I hope you don't mind? He questioned, slipping an arm around my shoulder. Oh the look on her face and that of Prithvi's was priceless. I wish I had a camera it was truly a picture perfect moment.

Me: Thanks! I whispered to Angad. He wasn't so bad after all. Well I'm off now. I don't think this party is cool enough for the likes of me anyway. I winked at Angad who winked back and walked away with as much dignity a girl in my position could muster. I spent the rest of my day dreaming about Angad…my knight in shining amour…correction swimming trunks...did I mention he looked HOT!!

I went out with Nishant and Kanan who somehow were aware of all that happened and couldn't stop ragging on me but it was way better than the curious looks I kept getting from people I don't even know. It seems as if everyone was aware about the whole confrontation.

The next day, baba asked me and Aaliya to be at home since we had guest coming over. Apparently he had just met his long lost best friend and baba being the man he is, invited the whole family over with no prior notice. It really messed up my plans cause I had one hell of a party to attend. But then again, I could sneak out later.

I went out to get the groceries for our cook and was going upstairs to change when I bumped into Josh. My God the mere sight of him scared me out of my wits. What was he doing here? Especially when baba was home.

Me: WTH are you doing here? Do you have a death wish or something?

Josh: Kripa chill! I came here to see my baby! You know I can't stay a day without seeing her.

Me: how much of her will you be seeing if baba sees you here? He'll probably kill you then marry her off to someone else.

Josh: That will never happen. Now be a good soon to be sister- in- law and help me sneak out the front door. If I climb down the pipe, I most certainly will get caught.

Me: Fine hurry up. I think the guests are here. I walked down the stairs with Josh hiding behind me. It was actually quite comical but luck for him; we made it all the way to the front door without getting caught. The raised voices coming from the hall indicated that the guest were already here.

Josh: Thanks Kripa! I owe you one.

Me: Yeah you do.

Josh: Have I told you that you are the best? No doubt about that. He winked at me and gave me a friendly hug.
At the very moment, who should come walking through my front door, none other than Angad Khanna? He stood there gaping at me and Josh like I was some alien from another planet and weirdly, Josh bore a similar expression.

Me + Josh + Angad: AT ARE YOU DOING HERE?time out! All this is too confusing.

Me: I live here!

Josh:My girlfriend lives here

Angad: I'm a guest here! Wait WHAT? Kripa is your girlfiend? He asked shocked.

Josh: No bhai, Aaliya is.

Me: BHAI! Did you just say bhai? Oh boy do I need an aspirin

Edited by shiv-gauri4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this ff is turning out to be better and more exciting then i thought it could be!! angad and kripa's interaction is just so hooking i can't get enough of it!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great part ..angad and josh are brothers?...continue soon

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