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Posted: 20 years ago
#81
Great Story Vibu!!!

Keep it up, waiting for the next part..

Luved the title of ur story! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kripa Puts her luggage in the car....and is saying goodbye to everyone!!......

K- MoM....Main Tumse BAhoot Miss Karoge....(crying)

KM- Paagli....U can always come here...and u can call me everyday ok...I lUv u beta

KD- Noo Not Every DAy....think about the phone bill

KM- TuM Bi Na ...

K- Wherez Josh?

KM- In his room...i think..hez upset

K- Main abi Aiye.....

Kripa walks to Joshz Room and opens the door, she finds Josh starin out the window....

K- JOsh...

J- doesnt say anything

K- ..(starts crying)...Josh...Plz..Kuch KAho...

J-Bye Kripa..have FUn

K- Im gonna miss u bhai

J- (walks up to kripa and hugs her) ...I'll miss u 2...he has a tear..

Kripa wipes his tear....dont cry.....i luv u

J- I luv u 2 my stupid sis..

K- Shut Up!!...OK im goin ....Luv u ....I'll call u when i reach there ok

J- Ok Bye

Kripa and her dad sit in the car.....ANd starts driving...

K- How much more time do we have till our flight

kD- about and 1hr or soo why??

K- GO TO REENAZ HOUSE PLZZZ!!

KD- Fine

THEY reach reenaz house...

Kripa and her dad go inside.....Kripa runs into Reena room.....and finds reena lookin at a pic of her and Kripa...with tears in her eyes

K- Stuipid..Idiot...Nerd...Loser

R- wht is it

K- Im gonna miss u...u didnt even call me today

R- sry... Im gonna miss u 2

K- Paagal....and she runs and hugz reena

R- u will call me and tell me everything right?

K- Of course i will....dont worry....I'll tell u everything....ur my best friend...

R- More than that...im ur sister...

K- ok..i have to go now....I'll miss u ...Luv ya

R- Me 2...take care

K- I will

kripa then leaves reenaz room and her dad and reenaz dad are talking ...

K- Ok dad lets go....itz time for our flight

KD-- Ohh ya....Bye..

K- takes one look and reena and waves her hand!

Kripa and her DAd are now at the airport and they start bording thier flight....Kripa is sitting in the windows seat...thinking of her new life in Zambia....Then as the plane takes off she takes one good look at New York!!..

They are about to land in Zambia...when kripaz dad wakes her up....

KD- Kripa Wake up We are About to land...

K- Ohh...ok...

Kripa goes to the bathroom and fixes her hair...

THey land safely in Zambia.....They Get off the PLane....JSt Then Kripa and her dad seez SAmir Uncle waving his hand at them they walk up to him and greet him...

KD- SAmir Yaar...Long time....So howz my Dost

Samir- SM

Sm- Ive been great...we are old now.....

KD- Yes we are.....Hehe.....Ohh and this is Kr-

SM- KRIPAA!!...i noe..im not that old!!...lol....Kripa beta how are u?

K- Im FIne Samir Uncle...Itz been a long time

SM- yess..it has i rember when u and Angad use to PLay toghter..and u 2 woould always steal my stuff....haha

K- Wherez Angad??

SM- where else...this ladka will never change...HEz with his Friends..Probably racing....

K- Thinking of wht angad is like........

SM- Anywayz let goo home aisha aunty must be waiting...

They all leave and reach Home..........

Preview- ANGAD AND KRIPA MEET

Edited by CraZyLiLMe21 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83

guYZ iF u WanT me 2 qUIT i wILL...jST tELL mE!!!

Edited by CraZyLiLMe21 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: CraZyLiLMe21

guYZ iF u WanT me 2 qUIT i wILL...jST tELL mE!!!

NNNOO!! don't quit.

i just read ur fan-fic and i luv it.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#85

Bhabiiiiii...its gr88..plzz continue soon! omg..this is just awesome! n u won't quit!! can't wait for the next part...plzz continue soon!

luv ya,

Fariha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#86
its awsome!!!!!!!!!! DONT EVEN THINK OF QUITING 😡 😡
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Posted: 20 years ago
#87
i just read from part 2 onwards 😳 !!! soory i didn't read them earlier!!! they are really good 👏 👏 !!
continue soon plssssss!!!
Kayla~
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Posted: 20 years ago
#88

Vibzyy..don't u dare to do the disappearing act now!!!u are in chat room//as usual invisible to the other chatters ofcourse!! 😉so u better continue with ur fan fic rite now!!!😆

😊Anamika😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi crazy.....hihihihi...da thing this tht u make me crazy bout ur story...it's really different....i lov it 22222222222222222 much...........2nd thing is tht i lov ur writin style which u makin me interestin n fun 2.....i m enjoyin ur story ...so plzzz continue soon as possible.......lov ya...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#90
DO NOT QUIT!!! cant wait for angad and kripa to meet!!

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