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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 40

{{They visit Manthan's home..Manthan's parents & Sneha's Parents give consent to their marriage...They returns to Pune and all are back in college...}}

Kt and Sneha were walking through the corridor and they saw their seniors standing there...Eklavya was also among them..When he saw Kt he walked towards them...

E:Miss K..K..Kt...How are you..?
K:(tensed)Fine...
E:Mujhse nahin poonchogi "How are you"?
K:H..How are you...?(fearfully)
E:F..Fine...(laughs seeing her fearful face)Waise tum aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho...
K:Jee..?
E:Ab tum jaa sakti ho..
K:Jee...(and walks swiftly with Sneha)

Eklavya watched Kt go with lots of desire in his eyes...When Kt and Sneha reached their class,Prachi was already sitting there..They went and sat with her...
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Meanwhile in Laksh's class:

Laksh,Manthan and Neev were sitting on their seats..Sania came into the class with their friends...She moved to the front of the class...

Sa:Everyone listen please...Aaj mere birthday hain..And I have organized a party, only for us youngsters in my guest house...I invite each of you to my b'day party...Party shaam ko 5 baje hain...

Everyone clapped and sang "Happy birthday" song...She walked towards Laksh,Neev and Manthan..

L,N and M :Hii Sania...
Sa:Hii guys...I wish to invite Sneha,Prachi aur Kt..
L:Its will be nice Sania..
Sa:I know..I will go and invite them during the break time..
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Kt,Sneha and Prachi reached Sania's guesthouse by 5 o clock and they were standing at the portico waiting for the boys to come..Suddenly Kt noticed Eklavya who was standing at a distance near a car talking to some of his friends..

K:Arre..did you notice that?
S and P:What ??
K:Woh..Eklavya..(and shows them)
S:Ab yeh yahan kya kar raha hain..?

Sania noticed them standing there and came running to them..

Sa:Arre..Tum log yahan khade ho..?Andar aayiye na..
P:Haan..Par Sania..Woh humare senior Eklavya hi hain na..(shows her)
Sa:(smiles)Arre haan..Woh mere bhaiyya hain..
S:Kya..?
Sa:Haan..

It was then that the boys came in Neev's car...They got down and came to them..

K:Sania,yeh lo tumhare b'day gift...
Sa:(takes it)Thank you Kt..(hugs her)

Everyone gave her the gifts and she told them to come inside...
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The cake cutting function took place and everyone was having the cake...Eklavya saw Kt and walked towards her...Kt,Sneha and Prachi were standing there and talking with each other...But then he saw Laksh,Neev and Manthan who went and stood with them..He waited there itself and watched...Laksh put his arm around Kt and was laughing with her...Jealousy burned in Eklavya's eyes...He angrily thought "Yeh Laksh ko toh main nahin chodoonga..Hmm..Usse main baad mein liptoonga...Pehle toh mujhe yeh Kt chahiye..."

Laksh,Neev and Manthan went to talk with some of their classmates..Kt,Sneha and Prachi were standing in a corner..Suddenly the cake Prachi was having ,fell onto her dress from her hand..

P:Sneha,mujhe washroom jaana hain...Please come with me..
S:Ok..Kt tum yahan ruko..
K:Haan..

Eklavya thought that this was his chance...He took a drink from the counter and secretly added some tablet to it..The he called a waiter and asked him to give that drink to Kt...She was standing alone in a corner..The waiter approached her and offered her the drink...She took it and drank from it....Eklavya walked towards her...

E:Hii Kt...
K:Hii...
E:Don't worry..I just came to talk with you...I am your senior only in the college..(smiles cutely)
K:Oh!!(smiles)

Kt was feeling a little dizzy ...Eklavya understood that the drink was working...

E:So then..How is the party..?Are you enjoying..?
K:Err...Eklavya..Mere sirr mein bahut dard ho raha hain...(holds her head)
E:Tum aaraam kar sakti ho...Aao na mere saath..
K:Wait Eklavya..Sneha ya Prachi ko aane do..Unse kehkar jaayenge..
E:Unse main kahoonga...Tum aao..Tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hain...
K:Teek hain...

Unnoticed by anyone Eklavya led Kt out of the partyhall towards a long corridor....After walking some distance,she fell on to his shoulders...He put one arm around her shoulder and dragged her along..Then he reached in front of a room which was far away from the hall...He opened the door,dragged her inside and bolted the door from inside...He swept Kt off her feet, carried her towards the bed and laid her on it...He looked at her beautiful face with her eyes completely closed..He thought "You are mine Kt..." and he touched her forehead with his index finger and traced it along her cheek and then her lips...

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END OF PART 40..........HOPE YOU LIKED IT.........
PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS........ THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS...😊

LOVE YOU ALL,
NAINA........ 😉
Edited by hp_2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hope eklavya doesnt do nothing to kt
it was good
loved it
cant w8 for da nxt part
update soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
ahh... its getting more and more interesting... you are a great writer.. PLEASE dont let eklavya succeed in his evil deeds.. get him out of the picture sooooon..

thanks for the pm.. i appreaciate it..
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Posted: 17 years ago
intresting part👏
hate eklavya😡
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 41

{{RECAP:Sania invites everyone to her b'day party..At the party they come to know that Eklavya is her brother...Eklavya adds a tablet to Kt's drink and he leads her towards a bedroom by tricking her..

He swept Kt off her feet, carried her towards the bed and laid her on it...He looked at her beautiful face with her eyes completely closed..He thought "You are mine Kt..." and he touched her forehead with his index finger and traced it along her cheek and then her lips...}}

Eklavya lowered his head towards her face...Suddenly someone knocked the door..."Knock...Knock..Knock.."Eklavya was startled...He didn't know what to do...He suddenly took a blanket and covered Kt's body..The he went and opened the door...
It was Sania..

E:Kya baat hain Sania..?
Sa:(angrily)Aap andar kya kar rahe the bhaiyya..?
E:Main toh bas aaraam kar raha tha..Tabiyat kuch teek nahin tha..
Sa:Oh!!Toh aap Kt ko saath mein kyun leke aaye the..?
E:K..K..Kt..Tum kya bol rahi ho..?
Sa:Jhoot mat boliye mujhse...I saw you carrying her inside...Hatiye aap..

And then she pushed him aside and got inside the room...She looked onto the bed and saw the blanket over a body..She took the blanket and raised it and saw Kt lying unconscious on the bed...She was really shocked to see her like that...

Sa:(angrily)Yeh kya hain bhaiyya..?
E:Errr..Sania..Mujhe nahin pata...
Sa:Mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahin thi bhaiyya...So disgusting..!!

Eklavya showed a "whatever!!" kind of gesture and walked outside the room...Sania stared at him unbelievably..Sania had seen Eklavya adding that tablet in Kt's drink and she had understood everything...Then she had seen him carrying Kt inside that room...

Sania took some water and sprinkled over Kt's face...Slowly Kt came into her senses...She opened her eyes to see Sania sitting in front of her..

K:(tried to get up)Arre Sania...Tum..?
Sa:(makes her lie there)I am really sorry Kt..Mere bhaiyya...
K:Haan..Mere sirr mein bahut dard ho raha tha aur Eklavya ne hi mujhe yahan leke aaya tha...Aaram karne ke liye..Kahan hain woh..?Mujhe thanks kehna hain usse...

Sania understood that Kt didn't know anything about her brother's intentions..So she didn't try to change Kt's opinion..

Sa:Haan..Bhaiyya ne hi toh mujhse kaha tha, tumhare khayaal rakhne ke liye...
K:Oh!!He is so nice...
Sa:Haan..Woh toh hain !(and tries to smile)Ab tum yahan aaram karlo..Aur main bhi tumhare saath baitthi hoon...
K:(sits up)Nahin Sania..Ab main teek hoon...Chalo party mein chalte hain...
Sa:(smiles)Teek hain...

Both of them walked back to the party hall...Kt saw Eklvaya standing in a corner...

K:Sania...Woh raha tumhare bhaiyya..Chalo..(and pulled Sania)
K:Eklavya...Thanks..Mere help karne ke liye..

Eklavya was confused and he looked at Sania..She gestured him that Kt knew nothing and to behave well with Kt..

E:Oh!!Its my pleasure Kt..

Kt smiled and walked back to Laksh...

Eklavya watched her go back...

Sa:Bhaiyya...Kt kitni achi hain..Phir bhi aap kyun usse..?
E:Pyar karta hoon main usse..Aur main usse woh Laksh ke saath nahin dekhna chahtha...
Sa:Woh donon ko akela chod deejiye bhaiyya...Ek doosre ke liye bane hain woh donon..Anyways what you did was not right bhaiyya...even if you love her...(and she walks away)

E:(to himself)Tum kuch bhi kaho Sania...Mujhe Kt chahiye...Kisi bhi keemat par...!
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Kt reached near Laksh..

L:Tum kahan thi Kt..?
K:Woh Laksh, mere sirr mein bahut dard ho raha tha aur Eklavya ne mujhe aaraam karne keliye ek kamre mein leke gaye..
L:Kya..??
K:Haan..Aur usne Sania ko bhej diya mere khayaal rakhne ke liye..Kitna acha hain na woh..?
L:Eklavya ne..Unbelievable...

Suddenly the lights went dim and the spotlight was shone on Sania..

Sa:Now its Dance time..Party ho aur dance nahin..!!So friends come to the dance floor and sway with the music...

The song "Hey baby" from the film Heyy babyy was played...Laksh,Kt,Neev,Prachi,Manthan and Sneha moved to the dance floor and began to dance with the others...Everybody was enjoying immensely...Eklavya stared at Kt and Laksh and got really angry and he walked out of the dance floor...
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Next day in college,in the evening:

Laksh,Neev and Manthan were walking along the college grounds...They saw Eklavya and five of his friends walking towards them...They came and surrounded them...Laksh,Neev and Manthan were surprised to see this...

L:Kya baat hain Ekla..

Laksh couldn't complete the sentence and he recieved a hard blow on his face... He fell on to the ground and blood gushed out of his mouth...He looked up and saw Eklavya who was ready to strike again...He tried to get up and Eklavya raised his leg to stamp him...Suddenly Manthan and Neev ran to Eklavya and tried to restrain him, but his friends held both of them and they couldn't get out of their clutches even though they struggled hard..
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END OF PART 41..........HOPE YOU LIKED IT.........THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS... 😊
PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS FOR THIS PART TOO........

LOVE YOU ALL,
NAINA........ 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG hope nothing happens to lakshya😭😭😭
I loved it👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛


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Posted: 17 years ago
i hope laksh is alrite
n also wish kt finds out dat eklavya is not nice person
loved it
awesome
cant w8 for ur nxt update
update soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 42

{{RECAP:Sania rescues Kt from Eklavya..Kt doesn't know that Eklavya was trying to trap her..So she thanks him..Eklavya gets angry seeing Laksh and Kt dancing together..He attacks Laksh, next day in college

Laksh,Neev and Manthan were walking along the college grounds...They saw Eklavya and five of his friends walking towards them...They came and surrounded them...Laksh,Neev and Manthan were surprised to see this...

L:Kya baat hain Ekla..

Laksh couldn't complete the sentence and he recieved a hard blow on his face... He fell on to the ground and blood gushed out of his mouth...He looked up and saw Eklavya ready to strike...He tried to get up and Eklavya raised his leg to stamp him...Suddenly Manthan and Neev ran to Eklavya and tried to restrain him, but his friends held both of them and they couldn't get out of their clutches even though they struggled hard..

}}

E:Agar tune aaj ke baad Kt ki taraf aankh uthaake ke bhi dekha toh...(and stamped hard on Laksh's stomach)

L:Aaah..(and held his stomach)

Kt,Sneha and Prachi were walking along the grounds and they saw a crowd huddled at a distance...Many students were watching the scene and none tried to help Laksh,Neev and Manthan because of fear of Eklavya..They approached the crowd and when Sneha asked one student what the problem was, he replied that Laksh was being beaten by Eklavya..Kt was shocked and so she ran to the scene...Laksh was lying on the floor and Eklavya was again going to stamp him...Kt ran to Laksh and stood in between Eklavya and Laksh...

K:(crying)Kya kar rahe ho tum Eklavya..?Kyun maar rahe ho tum Laksh ko..?

E:Tum mere ho Kt...Aur ab tum saamne se hato Kt..Warna..

K:(angrily)Warna kya kar loge tum..Haan..?

Eklavya took hold of her hair and pushed her away..She landed on the ground and her head hit on a stone and started to bleed...Laksh saw this and anger boiled inside him...He mustered all his strength and got up yelling "EKLAVYAAAAAAAA" from the ground.....He charged at him and gave a nice punch on his face....Eklavya fell on the ground...Manthan and Neev were yelling "Come on Laksh!!Hit him!!"......Then Laksh raised his leg and stamped hard on his face and then on his stomach and continued his stamping till his anger went away...Eklavya's friends left Neev and Manthan and came to rescue him..Neev and Manthan ran to Laksh and pulled him off Eklavya...Laksh struggled in their clutches and he still wanted to go for Eklavya...Kt got up and ran to Laksh and tried to console him...Eklavya couldn't even get up and his friends carried him away...

K:Laksh..Chodo na..Tum usse bahut maar chuke ho...

L:(angrily)Nahin Kt...Chodoonga nahin main usko...!

The other students also began to move away....Sneha and Prachi came running to them...

M:Kt tumhe aur Laksh ko abhi hospital leke jaana chahiye..

N:Haan Manthan..Sneha,Prachi,tum log Kt ko sambhaalo..Hum log Laksh ko sambhaalthe hain..

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In the hospital:

Kt had only a minor injury on her forehead..The Doctor stitched up the wound and applied a band aid....But Laksh was badly hurt and so he was admitted in the hospital..The Doctor told that he must be there for atleast two days..Now Laksh was lying on the hospital bed..But he was in his usual cheerful self..Sneha,Kt,Manthan,Neev and Prachi were sitting around him on some chairs...

M:Laksh,It was a good thing that you hit that moron Eklavya nicely...

N:The way he was hitting you!!Sorry yaar..We couldn't stop him...

L:That's because his friends held up you guys...It ok dosth..

S:But Laksh...Woh raakshas tumhe ab nahin chodne wala..I am afraid..

P:Agar woh Laksh ko phir se attack karne ki koshish kare,toh hum police mein uske khilaaf complaint karenge Sneha..

S:Haan..That's a good idea Prachi...

L:Uski koi zaroorat nahin hain Prachi,(looks at Neev and Manthan)Hum log hain na...Aur phir humare class mein bhi bahut saare ladke hain..Usse aur uske friends ko maarne ke liye..(laughs)

Everyone laughed with him except Kt..Laksh noticed that she was silent ever since he was admitted in the hospital..

L:Kya baat hain Kt...?Tum itni udaas kyun ho..?

K:Woh..Kuch bhi toh nahin Laksh..(tries to smile)

S:Guys..I think we should let Laksh and Kt spend some time together..What say..?

N:Well..You are right Sneha...Come on..

They went out of the room allowing Laksh and Kt to be alone..

L:Kaho na Kt..Kya baat hain..?

K:(gets up and sits on Laksh's bed..holds his hands)Laksh...I'm sorry...Mere wajah se tumhe...(and starts to cry)

L:Oh no!!Tum ro kyun rahi ho Kt..?Tumne kya kiya..?

K:Woh Eklavya ko main pasand hoon..Issi liye usne tumhe maara na..?

L:Woh!!(laughs)Jaane do na Kt...Waise..usse toh main chodne waala nahin hoon..Aur haan...Main kabhi us 'Raavan' ko mujhse meri Sita ko cheen ne nahin doonga...Aur agar woh cheenkar le bhi gaya..toh main us se waar karke apni Sita ko waapas le aaoonga...(laughs)

K:(laughs)Tum bhi na...(and kisses on his fore head)

Laksh cupped her face with his hands..And then kissed away her tears from the right eye..then from the left eye...Kt hugged him and and placed her face on his left shoulder....Laksh nuzzled the side of her face and then her neck...Kt moaned "Laksh...stop..." and Laksh continued nuzzling her neck...Kt gave a nice little bite on his left ear...Laksh cried "Oww!!" and Kt giggled lying there itself...As she giggled, her breath tickled his earlobes...

L:Kya hain yeh Sita..?Pehle woh Raavan..Aur ab tum bhi..?

K:(raised her head and looked at him angrily)Haan..?(and raises her hand to hit him)

L:(shields himself with his two hands)Nahiiiiin...!!Kuch nahin kaha maine...

And both of them laughed heartily....

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END OF PART 42..........HOPE YOU LIKED IT.........THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS...😊

PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS FOR THIS PART TOO........

LOVE YOU ALL,

NAINA........😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
very very nice part I love it👏
yeah come on Ram kill Ravan😆
Can't wait for the next part😳😳😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey that was really nice part.... 👏 hate that eklavya.. 😡 😡 ver cute scene at the end 😛

cont. soon 😳

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