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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

it was a "one shot" story but a wonderful one. very well written and the emotions were really well portrayed. i simply loved it!

i agree it was a one moment fanfic but u can write a lengthy version a whole ff taking this as a summary to the story! i would really love to read the longer version too! 😃
just a suggestion didn't mean to offend u 😳

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Laura

@NYC_gurl_17

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

AHH, I loved it!! tat was soo sweet and said soo much in only one part. it was waay different than love in cali, and to be honest {no offence} it was better! it held soo much emotions and the title "An Autumn Wisper" is soo amazing and creative. the title itself holds so much significance. plz write this fic. i'll commemt every day if you do. 😛

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Sabrina

@sabrinaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

^^ yea i agree with you laura, it was a bit better than lic. 😛

jiya imdad --> yea, if i do make a ff out of it, this'll be considered a summary i guess..

thanks guys!! 🤗

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ishiqa

@ix iishiqaa xo

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

OMG sabrina i hate you......YOU'RE AMAZING!!

that was such a beautiful fanfic
it would have took me ages to write that!
can't believe it took you only one day
it was soo cute

i love how you casn write two different ways with LIC' and now this

all i have to say is AMAZING!!!!! 👏

ish♥

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@ishu124

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

that was too good. it was perfect.

i loved it.

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Kristina

@jdsean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Wow!!!! Brilliant I loved it. OH and I totally loved the title of the story. Its very good, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would love for you to write another ff. Bye.

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Lena

@.Lina.

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+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

It was detailed and precise. If you can put emotions in your writing, then trust me your the best writer. Emotion is what makes a writing so beautiful sabrina. And your story An Autumn Whisper, held a lot of emotions, especially Kripa. You could actually feel how Angad's thought's, his touches, his words, haunted her. She wanted to get away so badly. I thought it was great. Trust me, your fans will be many if you keep writing so beautifully. 😉