My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 29

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow great part!
i hope angad thinks of something quick!
please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 86

Angad is looking to see what he can do to save her

She is trapped inside

He is looking at every move that the guy is doing to
An

Its live on TV!!!

The guy is yelling at her

HE's getting mad... cuz An was asking for something

And he exploded on her

She's all scared!!!!

SHe's in her room

SHe has all these posters of A

He decides to throw them away

SHe is yelling no!!!

A hears a scream and looks back in

Its been 30 mins already

He cant take it anymore

HE decides to go in

BUt they stop him

ANgad yells at them

They say it could be dangerous

He is saying no

A isnt listening at all

Then he tells again to let him go

They let him

He's by the door

HE is peeking through

The guy doesnt see him

He comes inside the house and hides behind the couch

Angad is looking very carefully

He is making sure that the guy doesnt see him

But he isnt looking

Then he comes outside and yells at the people

HE's gone crazy

They are trying to tell him to let go of her

But he is saying no

ANd comes back in

HE is armed So anything can happen!!

So they dont want to do anything

He comes back in

An is crying and crying

SHe is telling him to let go of her!!!

He is yelling no

She get even more scared!!!

ANgad comes closer and closer

The guy thinks someone is there

HE turns around

But Angad goes back down

An doesnt see him either

HE turns backs to An again

Then Angad gets up.....

Comes closer to him

He walks more closer

Trying not to make a sound

Then all of a sudden he grabs the guy

He is shocked!!!!!!!

They both fight

Angad beats him up

But then he fights back

Both of them are fighting and fighting

An is shocked!!!!!!!!

She closes her eyes

She hasnt realized its Angad

Angad and the guy cont to fight

Angad calls the cops!

He yells really loud

They come in

They surround him

He is shocked!!!!!!

They get him

HE is handcuffed

Its on the news and they see him arrested

EVeryone was watching and they are smiling

An is shocked to see Angad!!

Angad sees all his posters around

He smiles

He comes down and kneels

An is crying

She smiles

He hugs her!!!!

She is crying!!!

Angad takes her out

Everyone claps!!!!!!

They are relieved

Angad takes her to Khanna house

HE comes there

They all look

(remember she's in a wheel chair)




The End!

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great !!! 👏 👏 👏
i liked the part how angad risked his own life to save anjali and fighted with the bad guy.
please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
very well gulli...angad is a macho man!!! 😆 😆 😆 ...oops...mean...muscle man!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww i just caught upp.....BEAUTIFULLL!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 87

Everyone looks at her

SHe gets a little scared!!

Angad: Dont worry! They are all nice people!!!

Kripa comes closer to her

KRipa; Hi!!!

An: Hi!!

Kripa: Whats ur name?

An: Anjali!!!

Kripa; Nice name!!

A: Of course it is!!! It starts w/ an A!!!

Kripa: Angad?

Angad: See Kripa.. she's my GF!!

Kripa: Really???

A: Yes!! Right?

An smiles

Kripa: Oh u do have a smile???

She smiles

She gets to know everyone else in the house

An cant believe she's at ANgad's house

Its like a dream!!!

Everyone dreams of it

But she's the lucky gal!

Its all over the news about Angad!!!

Naina comes in....

She meets An

Naina looks at her

She smiles at AN!!!

N asks A where will she stay

An says he doesnt know

Naina sorta likes her

She tells him why doesnt she stay here

A doesnt mind

He asks An

She says she doesnt want to be a burden on them

He can drop her off at her aunts or something

A asks her she doesnt like them

An: ITs not that....

A: then!!! U will stay here!!!

An is happy about that!

They get to know more about her

She's in a wheelchair cuz she got into an accident When she was younger!!

She is able to walk

But too much money for the treatment which she couldnt afford

But she doesnt tell them that!

A and Kripa take her to the doctor

They make her get a check up

Doc says she's okay!!!

An is still in the other room

Doc tells them that he doesnt know why she hasnt gotten her treatment yet

A and Kripa are shocked

THey confront her

She is shocked!!!

They tell her that she will get treated!!!!!

Her treatment begins

SHe stays in the hospital

The fam comes to see her everyday!!

A: How are you GF?

An: FIne!!

Kripa: GF???

A: Of course!!

KRipa: An u came here to take my husband!!

A: Of course!!

Kr: What???

A laughs!!!!!



The ENd
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwww...anjali is ccccccchooooooooowwwwwwwww chweet 😆 😆 .... 😳 😳 ....


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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a nice part!
i also think that anjali is so sweet
i think that naina will adopt her in the future!
please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwww that waz sooo cute continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
excellent parts
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