KrishnaArjun (Neha&Iqbal) Part 1 pg 1

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KrishnaArjun - Two undercover cops hate working together as a team.

Krishna Virani (Neha Bamb)

Age 20

Krishna is very hardworking girl who tries her best in solving cases on her own but without Arjuns help she is hopeless like a bird.

Arjun Desai (Iqbal Khan)

Age 23

Arjun is also very hardworking cop who hates working with Krishna, but he is hopeless without Krishna's help.

Promo – "Sir

I am not working with this worthless guy"

"Krishna (gives her a weird look); mind your language"

"But Sir" Said by Krishna

"No buts or if………………………I said to work together on this case so no more arguments………..understood"

"Yes Sir (Krishna almost in tears)"

😆Please enjoy my action thriller fan-fic between Neha and Iqbal Khan. If you guys like it than i'll continue or else I won't😭.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds interesting...i am in 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woww neha and iqbal as cops....sounds exciting.....plz continue soon.... 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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well thank you for liking it and I won't disappoint you all, but please forgive me if the first part don't make sense or if it's boring because I wanted to show Krishna's attitude toward her father, so I'll understand if I don't get much repleies back because usually the first part sucks anyway enyoy it.



Part One

It was regular Sunday afternoon when Krishna returned home from work after having a huge argument with her commander that her eyes were still moist from breaking down in-front of her partner Arjun. Krishna never thought that she would have to work with Arjun in this mission as his wife in some village across Gujarat. Krishna argued with her Sir for pass seven hours but he won't even listen to her. Krishna went up to her room and looked at her teddy-bear and hugged it saying "how could … a father give his daughter a mission like this with her worst enemy?" (Krishna closed her eyes and remember her argument with her father ACP Karan Virani. (Karan is a loving father who does not understand his daughter's need.) Soon as Krishna reached office, her father had called everyone into his cabin for a meeting; Krishna wasn't happy about it, because she wanted to be the first one to wish her father for his success that turned out to be disaster for her because during the meeting her Dad said that she and her worthless partner Arjun had to go to some village in Gujarat for six months and live there as husband and wife because the villagers should not get any clue that they are undercover cops. So the only way to enter the village as Mr. and Mrs. Milind Mishra. Soon as everyone leaves from his cabin Krishna stayed behind to talk with her Sir because at work he was her Sir not father. Krishna took deep breathe than said "I am not working with this worthless guy Sir" Karan looked at Krishna who was burning with anger "Krishna (gives her a weird look); mind your language"

"But Sir" Said by Krishna

"No buts or if………………………I said to work together on this case so no more arguments………..understood"

"Yes Sir (Krishna almost in tears)"

After her conversation was done with her Sir she walked out of there with tears running down her cheek and breaks down in-front of the entire employees at her work even Arjun was there looking at her childish act (for him Krishna was a child who is immature in front of him) Karan notice her through his cabin window and walks out of his cabin with anger and asks her "what's going on in his office?"

Krishna looked at him with anger and took out her anger by yelling "YOU ARE NOT MY FATHER BUT ONLY A ACP WHO CAN'T EVEN NOTICE HIS DAUGHTER'S TEARS OR WANTS. (Krishna wiped her tears after getting slap by her father at her work).

Krishna opens her eyes and look at her teddy-bear and said "before Dad returns home I'm leaving his place forever." Krishna starts packing her suitcase throws in all her belongings inside the suitcase than leaves a small note saying Sorry Dad for leaving your place without informing you about it but whatever happened at work really hurt me so badly that I can't live with you anymore so I am going to Mom's place and please don't ever bother coming there.

Bye Dad Krishna left the note on her bed with few tears on it afterward walked out of her room toward her car.

Karan came home from work with disappointed look and calls out for Krishna afterwards walks up to her room and finds a note sitting on her bed. Karan opens the note and reads it with tears afterwards he goes toward his car and drives all the way to Nandini's place. (Nandini is Krishna's mother who doesn't live with them after Tulsi's death. Tulsi was Karan's mother who passed away with cancer.) Karan rang the bell and a small girl opens the door with a smile –Karan asked her if Nandini was home. Nandini came down the stairs looking at Karan who never changed his habit in wearing wrong outfits she hated.

"Nandini, is Krishna here?"

"Karan its better if you don't meet her because she is still upset about what happened at work so please leave right now before she comes here"

"Nandini please let me talk to her once"

"Karan don't even think about talking to her because she is still upset and let her clam down. By tomorrow morning she will be home. Ok"

Karan leaves Nandini's place with disappointed look but he knew his daughter's anger toward him won't clam down easily after he slapped her.

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part, and I love the concept. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part.... really interstin... this is like a mxture of so many different programmes!

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