FF:Dill Mill Gaye - I'm Back!!/Note On Pg 38 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Guys I'm reallyyyyyy sorry I haven't been able to update..you see I've been so busy..we've had so many guests!!!
Ill be updating later today or definately tomorrow!!
Sorrryy Again!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
Hey Guys..Just a quick question..If my FF is getting boring..I can stop it..but I need to know what you lot think..Please reply..I hope its not boring...

Part 9 coming in 30 mins
Edited by dhruvnved 4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no yaar its not boring just update 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay Guys..

Part 9
Armaan walks out of Ridz house and he is very upset..he gets by his car and bangs it on the top...
Armaan:Samajthi kya hai aapney aap ko..
He then calms down a little bit and understands that she has just gone thru alot..
Armaan:Mujhey bhi samajna chahiye..usey kya pata woh kya kehrahi hai..bechari..mujhey uskey saath hona chahiye..gusa nahi karna chahiye..
While he is thinking all this..Ridz is sitting on her terrace floor crying..
Ridz:Kyun nahi bataya tumney mujhey Armaan..tumney kaha tha ke tum mujhse jhoot nahi bolo ge..phir kyun...
She then thinks about something and her expression changes from being upset and she wipes her tears and says..
Ridz:Mujhey kya farq parta hai..tum batao ya na batao..I don't care...

Ridz is now inside her house and is thinking about going to Sanjeevani as her patients are her duty..She is all ready and goes to get her handbag and phone..She then sees that there is a message on the phone....
Ridz to herself:Yeh kab aaya..chalo dekhthi hoon..
She opens the text and it says Armaan..She gets angry but carries on reading the text..
It says:

"I no that u wouldnt answer my calls..so i left a msg for u..u can b angry on me but remember that u have ur mom n dad 2 look after..unka kya kasoor hai..unki bhi koi majboori ho sakti thi..baat karlo unsey..Bye
Armaan"

Ridz thinks to herself that he is right..she decides to go to see Padma before Sanjeevani..

Shashank and Padma are talking about Ridz and Anjali and how everything changed in just a second..

Shashank:Dono ko hamesha ek jaisa pyar kiya hai mainey..lekin sab kuch kaysay badal gaya..ek sachai jaan ke..kithni dooriya aagayi hai..Padma mujhey nahi pata ke Ridz ka kya faisla hoga..lekin woh bohot samajdhar hai..jo bhi faisla leygi sahi hi leygi..
Padma:Aap teekh kehrahey hai..aur woh samajdhar hai isiliye samaj jayegi..ke aap kal bhi..aur aaj bhi uskey papa hai..haan main uski maa hoon..lekin mujhse zaada aao ka haq hai uspey...

Ridz hears all this and a tear drops out of her eye..she goes in and they both turn to see her..
Shashank:Riddhima bachey aap yahaan..he looks happy but hesistant becuase he doesn't know what see is about to say...but she doesn't say anything..she runs to Shashank and gives him a big hug.
Ridz:I'm sorry papa..mujhey maaf kardijiye..
Shashank:Shushh..koi baat nahi..
All three are now crying but happy...Then the doctor enters and says..
Doctor:Shashank..surgery ki sari tayariya ho chuki hai..kuch formalities hai..woh puri karni parengi..
Shashank:Ahh yes..
He looks towards Ridz and says..
Shashank:Main abhi aaya..
he smiles and leaves..Ridz turns towards Padma..She goes and sits next to her..Padma is about to say Im sorry when Ridz says..
Ridz:Nahi mama..main jaanthi hoon ke aapki koi majboori hui hogi..aur waysay bhi..aapney mujhey sahi haatho main diya..sorry bolney ki zaroorat nahi hai..please...
Ridz hugs Padma..and they both cry for a while..but they are tears of happiness..

The Armaan is in Sanjeevani and he sees Anjali..
Anjali:Hey..tumnhey Ridz ko dekha hai..Sumit usey dhoond raha hai..tabiyat kafi kharab hai uski..fever hai..
Armaan:Ermm nahii..
He sees a flashback of him and her house and their conversation..
Armaan to himself:Lagta hai aaj basket nahi aayegi..Sumit ko kuch hogaya tho Dr Keerti nahi chorengi basket ko..main usey dekhta hoon..
Armaan:Acha Anji..mujhey rounds pe jaana hai..byee
Anjali:Bye..

Armaan enters the cancer ward and sees that Atul si with Harsh begging him to have his medicine..He laughs and then looks around for Sumit..he spots that Sumit is on his bed..reading a book..about love..

Armaan:Hey Sumit..
Sumit:Hi Doctor Armaan..
Armaan:Tum Riddhima ko dhoond rahey they?
Sumit:Haan..aap jaanthey hai kahaan hai woh..
Armaan:Ermm Nahi..kyun kya baat hai..tabiyat tho teekh hai tumhari..aao main check karta hoon..
(guys im not usre what they do when they check if a person has fever..sorry)
Armaan takes off his steathoschope and checks his heartbeat..He then checks his pulse by looking at his watch and holding Sumits wrist..Then he puts his hand on Sumits head and says..
Armaan:Thora sa bukhaar hai..uthar jaye ga..Aram karo..
Sumit:Aram kaysay karo..woh jo nahi aayei..
Sumit realises that Armaan heard and is like oopz..
A confused Armaan asks..
Armaan:Kaun nahi aayi..
Sumit thinks that there is no point hiding it..and says..
Sumit:Pata nahi Dr Armaan..aaj kal ajeeb lagta hai..unkey baal jab samney aatey hai..tho jab woh hata thi hai..aur jab woh aapna dupatta teekh karti hai..jab meray se baat karti hai..jab mera haath pakar thi hai...tho..
Armaan smiles and then notices Sumit is getting a bit carried away..
Armaan:Bas bas..aab naam bata do..
Sumit:Sorry..
Says Sumit a bit embarrassed..he then says..
Sumit:Riddhima..Dr Riddhima..
Armaan looks at Sumit in shock and looks a bit angry but most of all he is really shocked..he didn;t like it at all..the fact that he said Ridz name..Sumit goes back into his world and Armaan walks off thinking..

Armaan is walking down the corridor and Ridz i entering Sanjeevani..she sees him and he sees her..
Ridz to herself:mujhey Armaan ko sorry kedena chahiye..uski ghalati nahi thi..thi lekin koi sorry kehney se chota bara tho nahi hota na..
She walks up to him and he just turns around and walks the other way..
She follows him and keeps calling him..
Ridz:Armaan mujhey tumsey baat karni hai..suno tho..Armaan!
He is so angry that he doesn't even want to look at her right now...She then holds his hand and takes him into that door with the stairs..she shuts the door behind her and says..
Ridz:main kab se tumhey bularahi hoon..awaz nahi aati..
Armaan angrily:Mujhey kyun bulrahi hoon..aapney Sumit ko bulao..
Rdz gets confused and doesn't know what he is talking about..He chooses to ignore it and replies..
Ridz:mujhey tumsey baat karni hai...
Armaan:Sumit se jake karo..
Ridz:Yeh Sumit kahan se aaya..
Armaan:Aapney ghar se..
Ridz:Kya!
Armaan:what!
Ridz:Tum pagal ho..
Armaan:Tumhara Sumit bhi..
Ridz:Mera Sumit?!..Yeh kya baqwas karahey hoon..Sumit ko kya beech main la rahey ho..
Armaan:Kyun uskey kilaf kuch kaha..tho acha nahi laga..
Ridz:ARMAAN!
Armaan:kya hai..
Ridz:Erghhh...
Ridz walks off but suddenly slips and falls back..Armaan quicky holds her and puts his hands on her waist to stop her..they both have an eye lock..and then Armaan has a quick flashback of Sumits words..He gets angry and says..
Armaan:Tum Sumit pe bhi aisey hi ghirthi ho?..sarcastically..
Ridz now gets angry and gets up and says..
Ridz:Tumhara dimag kharab hogaya hai..pagal ho chukey ho..yur disgusting!

She walks out leaving an upset but really angry Armaan..

Okay Guys I have to go..Hope you like it..! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
that was great plez continue and don't make arman upset with ridz nymore its sad i ll cry if arman cries so plezzzz and plez somehow move summit from their way plezzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks..Keep reading..I won't keep Armaan upset for long!!Thori si jealousy tho honi chahiye...
Please Continue reading sarazahid! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
This Pert was awesome.i just loved it.do continue soo.wat the hellis armaan doing woh yeh soch bhi kaise sakta hai Ridz aur Summit 🤢 🤢
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
itz really intrestin
plzz continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ridz n sumit! 🤢 i fin armaan has gone totally mad!!!!!!! 🤢 bt still cnt w8 fo da nxt part!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 contd soon plz i will be w8in.......... 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Thanks Guys!!
Ridz and Sumit will never end up together..Sorry if some of you didn't like it..But I need Armaan to be jealous..to realise that this is true love..not just infatuation or attraction..both of them aren't sure yet right...

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