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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar

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Us din ghani house se lautne k baad ghazal apne ghar chali gayi thi saying k on sunday they willmeet @ Ghani House but abhi tak khuwaish was not ready to go to that house again so she decided to visit her home & meet her family & will decide something abt this matter so now she was @ her home since a week it was time 4 break fast khuwaish comes to dining table jo k more then a dining table was looking like a Fish markete.

Itna shor sun k us ki bezari aur badh jati hai & she went back to her room.

wapis apne kamre main aaker she was again thinking abt her hostel & was coursing those boys jo un ki hostel main pata nahi kese ghus aaye thay & then add to it the police raid & after that kuch na kuch hota he rehta tha ab wahan ab to hostel acha khasa badnaam ho chuka tha aur ab wahan rehna was like "aa bail mujhe maar"😆 & ghazal ne jo ghar dekha tha wo wahan bhi nahi jana chahti thi.

she still was lost in her thoughts when Khuwaish's mother (Kh'm)

comes there & says..

Kh'm- ghazal ka phone tha.

khuwaish sighes & got up when her mother says..

Kh'm- tum to keh rahe thi k room ka arrangement nahi hua per ghazal to bata rahe thi k kafi kam paison main achhi jagah room mil gaya hai..

khuwaish just listens to her & didnt said anything..

Kh'm- Khuwaish...

she looks @ her mother & knew she cant hide anything from her so she says..

Kh- ami mujhe wo jagah pasand nahi aur ghazal.....usse to her cheez her jagah main adventure nazar aata hai per main aese adventures afford nahi ker sakti.

hearing her khuwaish's mother gets worried.

Kh'm- kya koi pareshani ki baat hai?

she looks @ the worried face of her mother & decides not to tell him abt the prank of those 2 guyz she dont want to tell her mother abt them & unki pareshani aur badhe.

Kh- nahi main koi aur jagah dhoond lugi.

khuwaish ki mother ne jin nazron se usse dekha tha to wo khud he nazren churane lagi Qki wo kitni "Bahadur" hai ye sab he jante thay.

Kh'm- dekho beta tum janti ho maine tumhe kitni mushkilo se ijazat dilwayi hai aagay parhne ki aur ye mera he nahi tumhara bhi armaan tha ek saal to guzar he chuka hai baki ye ek saal bhi guzar jayega is tarha himmat haar k bhethne se kuch nahi hoga aese to meri khuwaish aur tumhari ek saal ki mehnat dono barbad hojayenge. jahan tak ghazal ki baat hai to mujhe us pe bharosa hai wo moody zaroor hai per samajh daar bhi hai.

saying this her mother went out of her room & khuwaish was back to her thoughts she was thinking abt ghazal & her 1st meeting usse yaad tha k ghazal se uski mulaqat uni k pehle din he hue thi us din khuwaish hamesha se zyada nervous thi wo kabhi bhi kisi se bhi asani se dosti nahi karti thi so wo aaj bhi akeli thi itne sare boys & girls dekh ker she was @ the verge to cry jab ghazal usse takra gayi & comparing to her she was quite confident khuwaish ko us ka confidence achha laga tha & ghazal ko pata nahi khuwaish main aesa kya bhaya k un dono ki dosti hogayi & khuwaish k kehne per ghazal ne hostel join ker liya,Ghazal k saath rehte hue ab wo bhi kuch haad tak confident ho chuki thi jis ka saboot us din Ghani house main akele ja ghusna tha.Ghazal k saath rehte hue wo ab kafi had tak confident to ban gayi thi per wo ghazal jesi kabhi nahi ban payi thi sara din uni main bhi wo ghazal k saath us k saye ki tarha rehti thi ghazal se milne se pehle khuwaish ko apne aap se kafi shikayaten thi per ghazal se milne k baad to wo list lambiiiiiiiii hoti ja rahe thi.Ghazal 2 baar us k saath us k ghar bhi aayi thi..khuwaish jis ka un sab se khoon ka rishta tha wo bhi kabhi apne ghar walon se itna ghul mil nahi payi thi jitna sirf 2 he mulaqaton main ghazal ne ker dikhaya tha.Ghazal jaldi he sabse ghul mil jati thi wo Lahore main he rehti thi lekin us k bawajood bhi wo us k saath hostel main reh rahe thi wajah janne ki kabhi khuwaish ne koshish nahi ki thi k ghazal ka taluk ek high society family se tha aur wahan ye batein aam si hoti hain.

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Khuwaish abhi tak koi faisla nahi ker payi thi k usse kya kerna hai?

Aur ajj wo itne dino k baad kuch relax thi kyuki subah se barish horahe thi jo usse bohat pasand thi wo us bheege bheege mausam ko enjoy jer rahe thi aur apne ghar ko dekh rahe thi jahan wo apne 3 bhaiyon aur unki family k sath rehte thay "ABU" ye rishta sirf usne suna tha kyuki jab wo sirf ek saal kit hi to us k abu ki death hogayi thi wo unhe sirf tasveeron ki had tak janti thi use sirf apni ami se lagav tha baki sab se wo zehni taur pe door he thi. Unki family main zyada study kerne ka koi riwaj nahi tha khud khuwaish ko bhi studies mian kuch khas interest nahi tha per usse achhi tarha se yaad tha k uski chachi jo un k ghar k barabar wale ghar main apne husband apne ek bete aadil & ek beti saima k saath rehti thi unhone kise se kaha tha k "main apne aadil k liye parhe likhi dulhan laugi" aur ye baat khuwaish ne sun lithi aur shayad kahin na kahin wo "Dulhan" khuwaish khud banna chahti thi khuwaish ko un ka ghar bohat pasand tha wo un k ghar ka hissa banna chahti thi.

Abhi wo isi bare main soch he rahe thi k samne gate se koi enter hota hai khuwaish ki nazren ane wale pe jami hue thi aur hairat usse tab hue jab wo ander jane ki bajayi us k taraf aane laga.

PERSON- hello…….tum kab aayi?

Kh- kafi din hogaye hain.

She was not able to look @ the person she was looking @ the plants.

P- achha?? Mujhe pata he nahi chala.

Kh- main 2=3 baar aayi thi per aap ghar pe nahi thay.

P= haan wo nayi nayi job hai na to zayada busy rehta hu.

After this dono k beech koi baat nahi hoti when khuwaish looks up @ him & finds him staring @ her & her heart was beating more lauder.when suddenly he asked..

P- uni kesi ja rahe hai?

Kh lowers her gaze & says..

Kh- ji..theek.

P- sach khuwaish mujhe bohat khushi hai k tum masters ker rahe ho main to intizar ker raha hu k kab tum complete karo.

She looks @ him & he was also looking @ her smilingly when his cell rings..

P- ami samajh rahe hain main abhi tak nahi aaya tum bhi chalo khana saath main khate hain.

Usne sar utha k "AADIL" (Rohit Bakshi)ki taraf dekha aur jo faisla wo itne dino se nahi ker pa rahe thi wo aadil k kahe chand jumlo ne kerwadiya wo aadil k saath us k ghar gayi & wapas aaker aapna saman pack kerne lagi.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 NICE PART AND I ALREADY HATE AADIL 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

P

yaar

with Paying guest

We can see that a lady is entering in a room she & she is Mrs Ghani.

Room main enter hote he room ki halat dekh k unka dil chaha k apna sar peet len unhone gusse se "un dono" ko dekha jo bed ki jagah carpet pe soye hue thay aur sare sofa cushions , pillows & sheets zameen pe pade thay cold drinks k tin chocolate k rappers chips k khali packets cds & remote sab zameen pe bikhre hue thay.

Mrs ghani ne pehle A.C off kiya & then fan bhi off ker diya aur khud un k samne sofa pe beth k un dono k uthne ka intizar kerne lagi & as she expected wohe hua both were changing sides & sab se pehle "AMAAN"(chaitanya) ki aankh khuli aur apne samne sofa pe bethi hue Mrs Ghani ko dekha k wo uchal k sedha beth gaya aur apne sath soye hue doosre ladke ka shoulder zor zor se hilane laga jis se us ki neend kharab & apni neend kharab kerne pe usne gusse se amaan ki taraf dekha jis ne aankh k ishare se use sofa ki taraf dekhne ko kaha. Usne jese he samne dekha wo bhi ek dam jhatke se seedha hogaya aur apni "MUMA" ko jo is waqt kuch zyada he gusse main lag rahe thi un ko dekha.

Person - Good morning mumma.

& now we can see a handsome dashing dude looking sleepy all hairs r like mess but yet he is looking so cute & adorable & its none other then her ladki k dil ka "ARMAAN"(Rajeev).

Arman k unhe morning wish kerne per jese un k sabar ka baandh toot gaya wo undono pe baras padi..

Mrs G- Berkhudar ye subah nahi dopahar k 1 baj rahe hain had hoti hai kisi cheez ki sari sari raat jagte rehte ho aur sara din sote ho insano wali koi ek quality nahe dono main ek hafte se room ki safayi nahe hue hasher dekh rahe ho?

Un k aesa kehne pe dono room ko dekhne lage jese unhe pata he nahi k room ki kya halat hai..

Mrs G- bahir wo shabo kabse intizar ker rahe hai k kab derwaza khule to wo safayi ker de tumhari nauker lagi hue hai wo jo itna intizar kare?

Hearing this arman bohat he innocently kehta hai..

Ar- salary leti to hai..

Us k aesa kehne per jin gussili nazron se Mrs ghani ne use dekha tha wo ek dam chup ker gaya.

Mrs G- aur amaan tum… tum kya armaan k room main shift hogaye ho? Apne room main Q nahi sote? Apne saath saath armaan ko bhi bigad diya hai tumne..

Am- ab itne bhi bhole nahi aap k bete mohtaram…. Saat logo ko bigad k bethne walo main se hain.

He looks @ Armaan ko bohat he masoom si shakal bana k betha tha.

Mrs G- khair yahan main kuch aur baat kerne ayi hu… maine out house rent pe de diya hai..

Both armaan & amaan were abt to say something when Mrs ghani unhe kuch bhi bolne nahi diya & she says..

Mrs G- pehli meri poori baat suno…. Haan to maine out house rent pe de diya hai aura b yahan koi batameezi nahi hogi qki wo dono larkiyan hain unhe majboori thi…. Main janti hu tum log shararat se baaz nahi aao ge lekin shararat aur batameezi main farak tumhe pata hoga.wo larkiyan hamare ghar main rahengi isiliye hamari bhi izat hongi.

Apni baat poori kerne k baad unhone ne dono k cheron ko dekha amaan ka chehra bata raha tha k use ye baat bilkul pasand nahi aayi jab ki armaan k chehre se us ki feelings ka andaza laga mushkil tha.

Mrs Ghani uth k jane lagi but she turns & asks..

Mrs G- wo raat tony aaya tha kahan gaya?

Am- wo chale gaye..

Amaan ki awaz main unki narazgi thi.

After that Mrs ghani left the room & armaan went to washroom & when he came out he sees that amaan is sitting on the sofa with phula hue face.

Ar- tumhe kya hua?

Am- aap ko nahe pata??? Aapne muma ko roka q nahe?

Armaan was combing his hairs & was looking @ amaan through the mirror & with a grin on his face he says..

Ar- rok to sakta tha agar wo "Larkiyan" na hoti to……. Aur phir tum khud socho agar larkiyan khoobsurat hue to……..

He turns around & both were smiling.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 NICE PART AND I ALREADY HATE AADIL 😆 😆 😆

Thank u Vandana jiiiiiiiiii😊4 liking.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx jyothi😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
If u guyz doesnt like the FF plz tell me so that i wont waste my time on this one & write more my previous FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

If u guyz doesnt like the FF plz tell me so that i wont waste my time on this one & write more my previous FF

No yaar...I like this ff a lot.....its not a time waste pls😡....I jus love it😛....cont soon okkay😃

Luv,

Akanksha😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey a really cool part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

hehehehehe.........lol.......too cute...!!

Thanx 4 thinking that it was "cute"😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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