A-K & N-P Ghar Ek Mandir - Part One - Pg1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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After yesterday's episode many Neev and Prachi's fan have lost hope that Prachi would return to Neev. So I thought of writing a fan-fic to cheer each and every Neev and Prachi's fan. But I am not that great of writers like other prople in this forum, but I will try my best to cheer up everyone. 😛 Well my fan-fic is called Ghar Ek Mandir staring Iqbal Khan, Neha Bamb, Jay Bhanushali, and Panchi Bora with supporting cast. Including Ejaz Khan, Anita, and many more....

Ghar Ek Mandir

(My fan-fiction is going to be about Neev and Prachi's love and how they fight to be together for lifetime. But there are also few changes character describe will be I made for example one is Prachi's last name isn't Shah, but it is Khanna and nothing changed between her and Ayesha only there is no Milind "yet" (not sure if he will be in it or not) in this fiction. Also the character description will be done in point form because there isn't much to say about them because we all know so much about them.)

Characters of Ghar Ek Mandir

Angad Khanna

Age 27

-Oldest son of Inder and Premlata.

- Does not live in Khanna Mansion after finding out his father kept an extra-martial affair for past 21yrs from everyone even from his mother (who doesn't believe him about her husband having an extra martial affair).

-Finally year of his MBA

-Only three women in his life and they are his mother Premlata than his beloved sister Prachi and one and only girl in his life his wife Kripa Sharma.

Kripa Khanna

Age 25

-One and only daughter of Mr. P.K Sharma (who loves her so much that he accepted Angad as her husband).

-Also completing her MBA in same college as her husband Angad.

-Pretty good friends with Kavya, Anjali, Prachi, and Neev.

Neev Kapoor

Age 22

-An outgoing fun loving businessman, owner of Kapoor Enterprise, knows how to have fun and is always friendly with everyone he meets.

-He has one aim, to get through one day without getting chased around the house by his dearest friend Prachi (for making fun of her although he loves to tease her and spoil her and do everything just to see her smile).

Prachi Khanna

Age 21

-A shy person with sweet and positive attitude toward life.

-Loves to try new things in life without getting in trouble from her father.

-Her one and only hobby is to chase Neev all around the house for teasing her in public places (example… his Kapoor Enterprise, her college, and other places too).

Promo - Kripa went to meet her husband at the beach which he decorated with flowers and champagne. Kripa notice him drinking some wine and when he turn around and he brings his wife to the dinner place where he decorated nicely... while Kripa thinks that he done all this for her birthday he takes out a gift and gives it to her. Kripa was excited to see the gift that Angad had given to her, but she didn't know this gift was for someone else he points his finger toward Prachi. Kripa looks at Angad hugging his sister with tears and says that Angad doesn't remember her birthday.

Ummm... Enjoy the character sketch for know and please to tell me how you guys like it, or else I won't continue it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh soundz interesting my 2 fav couples in itt 😳
cont soon
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Here is a first look at Ghar Ek Mandir's first part.

Part – I

"Good Morning Mumbai!

Main apnki RJ Prachi Khanna as brought you a special show this early morning for a special person today… And this special person is close to my heart, but few days he is upset with me over a stupid fight. So this song is dedicated to Neev Kapoor. Here is a special song from Inteha."

Dhalne lagi hai raat koi baat kijiye
baDhne lagi hai baat koi baat kijiye
hai zindagi kaa saath koi baat kijiye
kaT jaayegi ye raat koi baat kijiye
jaane tanhaai, ham se kyaa kah rahi hai
dil ki gahraai, ham se kyaa kah rahi hai
ek ek pal ke saath koi baat kijie
ban kar rahegi baat koi baat kijiye
koi baat kijiye
koi baa..T kijiye

"Welcome back after hearing this loving song and I hope he forgives his best friend. Anyways forget that topic and move on to our call for the day. And our call of the day is someone special from Simila.

So Mr. Sharma, how may we help you?"

"Ms. Prachi, could you tell us about your friend Neev Kapoor?"

"Ummm… Neev! Neev is my childhood friend who I tease and he also tease me too, but we also share an important relationship and that understands each others pain but for few days we just had a small argument. But I know him very well that he will for give me any more further question Mr. Sharma."

"That's all Ms. Prachi"

"Well it was nice talking to you Mr. Sharma and sorry folks this is the end of our show, but I will be back tomorrow first thing in the morning with hot and spice shit-chat until than Namaskar."

"Prachi, today's show was a super hit."

"Thanks Vicky and please inform Rohit Sir that I won't be in for Friday's show."

"Of course RJ Prachi"

"Hey Amit"

"Hey Kripa"

"Ummm…. Amit have you scene Angad anywhere?"

"Oh man! I forgot to tell you early that Angad is waiting for you at the beach nearby your guys flat"

"Amit, how could you be so forgettable when is comes to message?"

"Sorry Kripa you know I have a bead memory"

"Whatever!"

Kripa went to meet her husband at the beach which he decorated with flowers and champagne.

"Wow" (Said by Kripa)

Kripa notice him drinking some wine and when he turn around and he brings his wife to the dinner place where he decorated nicely... while Kripa thinks that he as done all this for her birthday he takes out a gift and gives it to her.

"Angad, thanks for the gift"

"How do you like it?"

"Ummm… it's so beautiful. Thanks for the gift"

"Sorry honey this gift isn't for you but someone special."

"What?

Who is it for?"

Few minutes ago Kripa was excited to get the gift that Angad had given to her, but she didn't know this gift was for someone else he points his finger toward Prachi. Kripa looks at Angad hugging his sister with tears and says that Angad doesn't remember her birthday.

Without saying a word Kripa was about to leave when whole bunch of people came in screaming surprise.

Enjoy!😛

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowow great pl conti soon dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part....continue soon as you can...

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