Lost - (RN) pts 1 - 54 - Page 47

Originally posted by: arwa72

"Hmmm…okay but first let me refuel my system." He didn't give her a chance to leave and crushed her lips with his, plunging deeper and deeper. At first she resisted and didn't reciprocate but soon she surrendered herself to him and let him have his way with her. He moved to her neck and shoulder giving her soft bites whilst she ruffled through his thick hair feeling too intoxicated by his kisses. "I want you Sonia, I want you right now." He resumed kissing her lips again but soon they got apart as sound of feet were heard coming their way. .....uff put a bit of shame in him..too shameless yaar...


"Wait," she took a handkerchief out of her purse, "I think you better wipe your lips otherwise people would get the wrong idea." She almost threw the handkerchief at him with digust and then walked off. .....well done Naina....👏


"You know I always prefer to be on top but in your case, I don't mind you taking the lead." .....ab mujhe is R2 par sach main gussa aarahi hai.....when he is gonna change..?

Okay now post the next part soon...n it should have to be a longgg one...

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

whether it was short but was a excellent part.i love the whole part.and HAPPY HOLY to the great ff writer i.e., u.Because of ur outstanding exploring talent i love to visit this forum.thankuuuuuu soooooo much for this beautiful and marvelous update.miiiiiiiiindblowing

Originally posted by: diya7000

Originally posted by: itsmekanchu

hi arwa hope ur doing fine!!i know i havent replied to ur updates.but i had a reason of not liking this new turn of events in ur fic. of this new r2 and rajveer being dead--i dont like this r2 one bit-- - oh dont take it to ur heart, i mean R2 is rajveer now isnt he.

being frank is in my nature so plssss dont take my comments to ur heart--

if this r2 is actually the real rajveer then i hate him even more---he makes out with sonia n now naina has seen it surely she should be frustrated n more angry with him n not give bhav to him---where r u taking this story arwa??? - hehehe well Rajveer obviously wouldnt be that shameless so he certainly did a blunder but he will change. hmmm to tell u the truth im not really sure where the story is going at the moment as im just going with the flow.

u said ur bringin the real rajveer back---n not this duplicate raj/r2!!atleast "kahno na pyaar hai "main the new hrithik was a good person!
actually i dont like the idea of r2 n naina bieng 2gether!uske liye to sonia jaise vamp hi tikh hai!'naina deserves better n only the real rajveer!!not even huda! - are dil pe mat le yaar 😃 keep patience and he'll cum back pretty soon.

i hope ur not giving us false hopes of bringing rajveer back!!

ur writing style is as usual gr8 n exellent---the crispness of ur writing is like watching a movie---this ability of urs should be cherished---gal u can become an entertaining journalist--- - wow i never thought abt that.

take care
lots of love
kanchu

Originally posted by: varallika

hey ya nice part..really luvd it...but yar u cud hv placed sum othr song thn this jhalak dikhla ja...actually hv sum sort of allergy wid himesh 😆 😉 ...nyways...coming bak to the part,..luv it lik ny thng....so naina saw thm kissing...u no sumtimes r2 cn behave really dumbbbbbbbbb..but chalo koi nahi...hero hai heroine ko mana hi lega..kyou 😛 😛 but lemme tell u one thng i dunno why bt wht ever u try to show r2 diff frm raj..i always feel tht he is raj only....i mean..yar..chuk it..aafter this part also m stick to my previous conception only that he is rajveer..yeh yeh you can kill me 4 being so stubborn but kya kare..its my gut feeling...abhi u dare not keep us waiting for the next part...do update soon