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Posted: 17 years ago
love ur ff

plzz cont soooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

uh...why is rohan here...another guy in kripa's life...lol...so manny men are after her... 😆 but she only belongs to angad!! and krish issssss sooo cute and adorable!!!! 😃

lolzzzzz ys true so many guys and only on girl!!!!!!!!😆, yeh he issss a cutie😛 thankyou!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: simply_thebest

love ur ff

plzz cont soooon

awww thankyou!!!😳 glad you like it , will continue tomorow!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys i was supposed to post today but i only have half and i can't post it because the part won't be as good nor make kinda sense ,and i 'm stuck at a scene so the part will def be posted to morow, sorry if it's i post it late tomorow coz i have a fare tomorow at school and then diwali party to attend.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 12

Kripa was walking down the hall when she bumped into Rohan, taking his shoulder for support as his hands went around her waist automatically , R- sorry I didn't see you he said while kripa was still in is arms, krish- papa why are you holding kripa aunty , that's angad uncle's job right uncle he said looking at angad who wasn't to pleased, kripa and Rohan looked at krish who was holding Angad's hand , Rohan let go of kripa and laughed walking towards krish, R- and where have you been mister, Kr- no where, R- oh really Kr- yes he said looking down , R- okay come on let's get you some ice-cream since you been a good boy, Kr- YAY! No wait he said looking down with a guilty face, actually krish has been a bad boy, R- and why is that , K- krish ate chips when papa told krish not to eat chips , R- hmmm I see and what does krish think, should papa give krish ice cream or not, K- krish thinks you should R- okay then ice cream it is K- yay I love you papa he said in rohan's arm and they left, kripa on the other hand just stood there deep in thoughts , thinking about how life would be if she and angad were married deeply in love with rahul in their arms , she came back to reality when she felt something warm on her cheek she looked up to see Angad standing in front of her , caressing her left cheek, kripa frowned and pushed his hand away and was read y to walk away , when angad grabbed her by the waist, A- kripa I know what's going through your mind , and I want to say I wish rahul was alive, K- wait what am I hearing she said sarcastically laughing, K- first of all Angad you weren't the one that saw the face of my child while taking his last breaths it was me , and secondly what happened don't you remember insulting after that one night stand , predictable, now let me go you have no right and I have told you before there is nothing between us and never will be and she pushed away leaving the hallway.

Angad turned to the side and banged his fist on the wall frustrated and soon followed. He came back into the room and walked over to Rohan and josh , but his eyes were looking for kripa when they spotted her sitting with little krish who liked his ice – cream away. Angad's heart melted, it was a perfect picture kripa would make the perfect mum, of course only with his child. R- angad, Angad, A- huh, R- where you lost, A- oh nothing, what were you guys saying and they continued to speak, when Rohan excused himself and walked over to krish and kripa , Angad couldn't help but notice , when josh whispered in his ears J- they make a nice family no he said teasing Angad, while angad just gave him a glare, J- hey what I'm just saying you better win her trust back before it's too late anyway I'll see you later I think that girl's staring at me he said smiling charmingly at a girl in the corner and he walked away , Angad turned around shaking his head when he notice krish sitting by himself, A- where did kripa and Rohan go he asked himself, and walked over to krish, A- hello krish, K- hi uncle, A- krish where did kripa aunty go , but krish was to busy enjoying his ice-cream , Angad looked around looking for the two, when he spotted them on the dance floor , he didn't look it one bit, rohan's hand's around her waist , and Kripa's hand on his shoulder, Angad sighed and sat down beside krish, when all of a sudden krish spoke , K- uncle are you jealous? , A- huh, K- don't worry uncle I'm sure kripa aunty loves you as much as you do, Angad couldn't help but smile, A- do you really think so , K- of course krish is always right, A- oh yeah, Krish nodded, A- has anyone ever told you your cute, K- yes , actually you know what uncle everyone does except for this girl I go to school with, I think she likes me, Angad couldn't help but laugh, A- so ladies man, well I tell you krish, one piece of advice never break a girl's heart okay, Krish just nodded and continued to eat his ice-cream while Angad continued to stare at kripa dreamingly. When he got up , he couldn't take it anymore seeing the person he loved dancing with someone else and not him, he walked up to Rohan and kripa, A- may I cut in, R- of course, se I told you kripa you looked beautiful tonight, kripa redden while Angad tried hard not to clench his fists at his compliments, and Rohan left, kripa was about to walk away when she was stopped by Angad's voice, A- what kripa can't dance with me I thought there was nothing between us if that's true then what's the harm in a simple dance huh he said grinning at her , K- true angad and she placed her hand on his shoulder while he slipped his hands around her waist making her uncomfortable as the swayed slowing to …..

Saathiya - Darling

saathiya saathiya......... (ishq bedardi mujhko pata haiisaki chaahat mein milati saja hai) - 2bekaraari mein mar hi na jaauna samajh ko main kaise samajhaau(dil hai ki maanata nahi haibechaini jaanata nahi haimain karuun kya bata jaraasa ??yaar) - 2saathiya saathiya......... (narm khwaabon ki baahon mein jaagengi aankheingarm yaadon ke saaye mein bitengi raatein) - 2yaad toh aayegi, bekhudi chhayegidard de jaayegi, tanhaayi tadpaayegi(dil hai ki maanata nahi haibechaini jaanata nahi haimain karuun kya bata jaraasa ??yaar) - 2saathiya saathiya......... (saare aalam pe aahon ka chhaayega jaaduapane hi jajbon pe toh hoga na kaabu) - 2jakhm yeh ??jigar ho gaye sau asarna rahegi khabar bechida hoga safar(dil hai ki maanata nahi haibechaini jaanata nahi haimain karuun kya bata jaraasa ??yaar) - 2

saathiya saathiya.........

Angad who notice her uncomfortable whispered , A- what's the matter kripa don't like being in my arms , I mean you had no problem being in rohan's , kripa looked up into his eyes , K- there's no need to be jealous unlike you I'm not some kind of flirt that takes every chance he gets, Angad's grip got tighter and he pulled her closer , whispering, A-please kripa I need to talk you I lo, when he was pushed away by kripa as she walked out angrily , angad followed her outside with out knowing Rohan had seen the two, A- kripa please we need to talk he said grabbing her elbow, K- I said don't touch me god Angad your so disgusting every chance you take trying to touch me, Angad let go of her, A- kripa I'm really so….., when he was interrupted by a voice, v- is everything okay, it was Rohan, Angad looked up at him not in the mood, A- YES and he turned towards kripa , opening his mouth to speak when kripa interrupted, K- yeh Rohan everything is fine I was just actually coming in and she walked over to him grabbing his arm and walked into the house without looking back at angad, whop stood there in envy. Angad was in no mood to party nor stay there and left. He reached home took a shower and fell on his bed, deep into thoughts, remember josh's words and then Rohan and kripa dancing so closely , josh was right he had to something quick.

The next morning angad woke up and was pleased to hear Kripa's voice from downstairs, he quickly got up and showered coming out of the bathroom twenty minutes later wear a pair of jeans and a white shirt. He rubbed his hair with his towel and styled it. He walked down the stairs completely awed, their she stood wearing a nice white cotton dress, her soft straight brown hair coming down past her shoulder , kripa who was busy talking with painter arguing about the paint, felt a pair of eye on her she looked up and saw Angad staring at her dreamingly, until he shook his head and walked down past her , without saying any hi or hello's or worst , flirting. She was glad, the better it was the two avoided each other, or was it? Kripa finished her work early as angad left for the office. She arrived home surprised to see josh getting ready, K- where are you off to?, J-oh me , Rohan and angad are going out for a dinner and finalizing the deal, still have some stuff to take care off it, before kripa could have said something , josh's cell rang , J- hello, what but oh ummm actually I have an idea how about kripa , yeh she won't mind okay bye, K- Josh what were you, J- no I was wondering if you could look after krish while Rohan came with us, K- oh no problem , J- thanks. After half an hour Rohan arrived and dropped krish off and the two left to meet Angad at the restaurant.

Kripa on the other hand made some food for krish who enjoyed it eating happily in front of the tv. K- krish do you want more , Kr- no aunty , K- okay she said ruffling her hand through his soft hair , Kr- aunty can I um have ice-cream please, K- hmmm does papa let you eat ice-cream everyday, Kr- yeh he said lying while kripa looked at him raising her eyebrow, when krish looked down playing with his hands and said softly, Kr- well papa doesn't need to find out, I mean krish can keep a secret and you to right aunty, kripa couldn't help herself smile and kissed his cheek, K- off course and she left to get him ice cream while krish put his hand on his cheek and turned red shyly. Kripa came back a few minutes ago with a bowl of ice-cream, Kr- thanks aunty you know, angad uncle was right you are very nice now wonder uncle loves you so much , kripa couldn't control her cheeks from turning red , and asked hi curiously, K- did uncle say that?, kr- no but you know when you were dancing with papa, he was jealous, but then I told him not to worry because kripa aunty loves you as much as he loves you right aunty you love uncle, kripa looked at him who stared at her innocently, how was she to tell him, she didn't know herself did she still love him?, of course she did how could she forget her first love, before kripa could say something krish let out a scream holding his stomach and began to cry, kripa got startled and asked what was wrong but all he said was, Kr- I want papa, kripa quickly took the phone and called Rohan, who picked up and told kripa that he was on his way with josh, K- okay come quickly. Josh and Rohan got into the car getting drenched by the heavy raindrops, and were on the way when unfortunately got stuck in traffic.

Kripa hung up and walked to put the phone back. She walked back to krish who was still crying , she picked him up and placed him properly on the couch and caressed his head , K- don't worry krish papa will be here okay, but krish just continue to cry, when the door bell rang, Kripa sighed finally they were here she opened the door, K- finally Rohan he's beennnnnnn, when she looked up and saw a fully drenched Angad standing in front of him, A- it's Angad kripa , now are you going to let me in or freeze out here , kripa moved out of the way letting him and closed the door behind him.

Preview- angad and kripa look after krish , and a black out

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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it cant be krishes plan 😆 right hope he gets well soon just loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

loved it cant be krishes plan 😆 right hope he gets well soon just loved it

thanksss glad you liked it!!😳, lolzzz naahhhhh😆le's see what happens next😉 thnxxxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part
aww i liked the way wen kripa kissed krish oh his cheeks and he was red 😆 soo cute


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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part... i totally luved it seriousily i jus luv krish, he id toooo cute, he was blushin when kripa kissed him... how sweet is dat!!!!!!!!!!! cnt wait for the nxt part... i hope krish gets better!
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Posted: 17 years ago
haha. angad and krish against kripa. lol. i bet angad and krish made this plan up.


continue sooon.

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