Originally posted by: brainychild92
greatt fanfic.. i caught up from page 16! it was fun reading.. felt bad for kripa at times.. but it happens in lve..lol
hey thankyou!! glad you like my fanfic! 😃lol yes it doess
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Originally posted by: brainychild92
greatt fanfic.. i caught up from page 16! it was fun reading.. felt bad for kripa at times.. but it happens in lve..lol
hey thankyou!! glad you like my fanfic! 😃lol yes it doess
gr8 story man luved I jus read whole story jus 22222222222 gd 😃
aww thankyou!!!!!!!!😳 glad u luved itt!!!!!!!😃
heyy... jusr read your f-f !! 👏
its amazing .... i love it !! 😛
plz continue soon !! 😳
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Originally posted by: Shazia_haya
hey awesome part.....do continue soon....I didn't had enough time to comment b4 so that's why I'm late but I had read the part long time back........I'm desperate for the next part.....
hey thankyou!!!!, will do right now!! aww np !! i'll be posting nowww😃
Part 17
Angad continued to watch kripa dance, enjoying herself , when Kanan tapped him on the shoulder, A- huh, Ka- come on lets go and dance, A- uh , Ka- come on before Angad could reply he was already on the dance floor with Kanan, kripa saw him and he saw her , there eyes meeting, kripa rolled her eyes and turned around and continued to dance, Angad just grinned and began to dance. Suddenly the lights went off and there was a commotion on the dance floor, everyone was pushing each other this way that way. Angad tried to make his way out without falling, when suddenly he bumped into someone, P- ahh and grabbed on to Angad's shoulder, while his hands went around the waist. And the lights were back on again. Angad looked down , and smirked it was none other than kripa in his arms. Kripa looked up , though she was all smiled inside she just rolled her eyes and pushed his arms away except they weren't moving. K- what the heck let go you , A- oh come on kripa how about a dance, K- sorry do I know you, no now let me go , A- how I wish I could but you know I just love to annoy you miss kripa. K- why me you don't even know me go and run to your princess over there that's eyeing me, tell her not to worry I won't take you away from her, I'm not interested in you shed said pushing his face and leaving the floor as well as a irate Angad.
Angad walked towards the bar, when kana came up, Ka- did you see the nerve of her, A- Kanan if you don't mind could I just be alone for a little time I need to think he said in the nicest possible way. Though she was disappointed she nodded and walked away to her other so called friends. Angad noticed kripa walking out by herself and grinned following her. Kripa rubbed her arms as the wind blew giving her goose bumps , A- so kripa enjoying yourself. Kripa turned around and sighed, K- now I didn't know you were so desperate and this sad, stop following me. A- please it's a free country I can come outside if I won't who are you to stop me , K- I guess your true but if your going to be outside then I'm going inside she said walking passed him when he grabbed her wrist. Whispering into her ear, A- don't think I know what you're trying to do…. But sweetheart it won't work cause the more you do it the more I will annoy you he said grinning. K- I don't even know what you're talking about she said lying, K- but whatever your thinking go ahead and tell someone that cares cause I don't waste my precious time talking to strangers she walking when she heard a familiar voice behind her. V- kripa, she turned and smile, it was shabd, K- shabd what are you doing here, S- long story, K- oh okay , where is suhani., S- she couldn't make it, K- oh, S- yeh , so how about joining me he said with his hand out waiting for her so they could go in together, Kripa looked and Angad and grinned , K- sure she said linking her arm in his and walked off turning around to look at Angad and then turned back again smiling to herself walking back into the party to enjoy the rest of the night.
The next morning kripa ran onto the field warming up for practice when she noticed a group of girls around Kanan who screaming so excited, Kripa walked up to sanjana, K- what the heck is he problem, why is she so happy, Sa- I don't know but ever since she came she's been so happy bragging about something, wait let me find out hang on and she walked up to Kanan and the other girls to see what the fuss was about. Kripa was busy stretching when she looked up to see sanjana walking back with a very shocked face, right at that moment she didn't feel to well in her stomach. K- what's the matter your face is scaring me, Sa- oh well thanks, K- no your expressions, Sa- okay I have to tell you something but just don't freak out okay, K- okay I won't just tell me you're scaring me. Sa- kripa the reason Kanan is so happy is, K- what the heck she said looking behind sanjana, sanjana turned around and closed her eyes just waiting for kripa to blow up. K- Sanjana why did Angad just kiss Kanan on both of her cheeks, Sa- as I was saying angad asked Kanan out and of course she said yes. Kripa just stood there processing what had just been told to her, K- Oh hell he did , he's just doing thins on purpose what does he think it'll get to me fine, so I'm just a little jealous but definitely not because of that witch, it should be me there not her she thought to herself, Sa- okay kripa say something, K- what so they're going out whatever , if wants to play it this way fine so shall I, Sa- god , K- whatever , actually sanjana I thinks it's time to change the plan she said grinning , looking at angad.
Shabd arrives soon and practice starts, angad decided to stay and wait for Kanan being a sweet boyfriend he was. He looked at kripa grinning, while kripa just ignored him and practiced. Suddenly Kanan walked over to kripa, Ka- I guess you must have heard that I'm going out with Angad, K- yes and guess what, good for you she said leaving her , Ka- JEALOUS she screamed catching everyone's attention. Kripa stopped in her track and turned around laughing , K- kana jealous and me of what you or that gorilla standing over there , if you really want me to than sure I'm soo jealous of I think I'm going to cry , sniff sniff she said sarcastically when shabd walked over. S- okay you two stop fighting and practice the finals are coming up soon. Kripa just turned and left practice by herself, while kana just flicked her hair and went up to angad. A- What's her problem, Ka- oh don't worry baby she's just jealous of us , A- true , he said taking her by the waist looking to see if kripa was watching. He grinned when he caught her staring at them. Kripa looked down cursing her self, k- great he saw me shit kripa think, when the next thing she knew she was on the floor pretending to cry, K- ahhh , ahh sanjana ran over to her, sa- KRIPA what's the matter , K- call shabd, Sa- what , K- just call him na, stop asking me so many questions we're not playing questionnaire okay, Sa- fine gosh and she ran over to get shabd, soon every one surrounded kripa, S- what's the matter kripa, K- shabd I think I sprained my ankle I can't move it hurts, S- hmm let me check, K- ahh no it hurts, S- hmm , okay kripa put your arm around my neck , I'll have to check this properly, kripa smiled to herself, K- score, and she placed her arm around his neck. Shabd picked her up in his arms and walked towards the bench; kripa looked up and smirked seeing Angad's face expression. K- ahhh shabd can you take me to the change rooms , I don't think I can play anymore , S- okay but after I'll have a look at your ankle , K- okay . Shabd drooped kripa outside the change rooms .
Ka- angad are you listening to me , A- huh , Ka- Angad, A- uh Kanan wait I'll be back I think I didn't lock the car, Ka- huh?, while angad walked off. S- oh hey angad where you going , A- oh um left my cell in the car, S- oh okay and he walked off. Kripa took her clothes out of her locker dancing around very happy with her outcome when she heard someone coughed behind her. Kripa turned around scared thinking it was shabd, but then smile to herself when she saw angad eyeing her up and down. K- excuse what do you think your doing in a the girls change room can't you read the sign outside. K- oh my god don't tell me you're a girl she said covering her mouth. A- oh shut up, Kripa just rolled her eye and turned around , when angad grabbed her hands. K- yuck don't touch me please I don't want Kanan germs yuck keep yourself away from me she said biting her lips trying hard not to laugh. But angad wasn't laughing instead he tightened his grip and pulled her closer. Kripa's heart did a little flip, her breaths became uneven , they were so close she could feel his breath over her cheeks warming them , turning them pink. When the door opened S- kripa, kripa fell to the floor leaving Angad confused.
S- oh angad you're here, K- yeh shabd can you please ask what he is doing here in the girls change room, Angad looked at kripa angrily who just smiled like a brat. A- uhh sorry I lost my way he said, S- uh okay he said completely confused , S- kripa let's go and check you ankle, K- sure she said pulling her arms out. Shabd picked her up walking pass angad, while kripa on purpose placed her head on his chest, smiling to herself and thinking about what had just happened a few moments ago. Shabd check Kripa's ankle, S- it doesn't seem sprained or anything, K- hmm yeh maybe it's just hurts now I'm sure it'll get better tomorrow. S- well hopefully he said ruffling her hair, while kripa just smiled. S- I mean we can't loose our best player before the finals right?, K- right she said hugging him, K- thanks for checking my ankle , S- no problem now I think it's time for everyone to go home, bye get better and he walked off.
Sanjana walked over to kripa, Sa- okay so what's all this about, K- whoa can you let a girl breathe , I 'll tell you , it's simple part of the plan she said grabbing her hand and pretending to limp as well as telling her. Sa- hmm I must say kripa you're very smart than what it thought, K- what's that supposed to mean, Sa- that you're smart, K- shut up, Sa- whatever anyway gotta go home have some annoying relatives coming over, K- ah I see, Sa- yes and what's your plans for tonight, K- nothing parents gone away for the weekend, so just me and my stupid bro eijaz all alone. Sa- I see well have fun bye , hugging her she left. Kripa continued to limp, she couldn't take the risk, just as she was going to cross the road, a black car came by swiftly over a huge puddle splashing kripa . K- OI WHAT THE HECK, the car reversed back and the window rolled down. K- great she said to herself when she saw the two faces, yes it was none other than Angad and Kanan. Ka- oh sorry kripa we couldn't see, by the way do you need a lift or are you okay limping all the way home she said laughing looking at angad who was grinning like a monkey , A- come on babe I don't want my seat to get dirty look at her. Kripa clenched her fists , K- sorry to break it to you but Kanan , I wouldn't be caught dead in a car with you, you know just ruin my reputation and Angad hun I'm glad you found your way and Kanan one piece advice keep an eye on your boyfriend here and she walked off.
Kripa poured herself a glass of coke when the door bell rang, e- kripa can you get that, she sighed and walked towards the door. She opened it too her surprise slamming it close again and she walked away with a grin. The door bell continued to ring but kripa ignored it and ate her chips watching tv , eijaz ran down shirtless cursing his little sister and opened the door. E- sorry Angad, A- oh it's no problem and they both walked into the living room to see kripa. E- gosh couldn't you opened the door, he said snatching the chips from her eating some. Kripa just rolled her eyes, got up and headed back into the kitchen. Angad just looked at eijaz who shrug his shoulders, E- hey I'll be back got get my shirt unless you have no problem with it he said laughing, A- shut up but I'm sure sanjana won't mind, E- wtf who told you, A- I have my own sources, eijaz just shook his head and ran upstairs while Angad went into the kitchen to see kripa opening the fridge. Kripa turned around to find Angad in her way , she didn't say anything but waited for him to move. But he just stood there grinning. A- so kripa how's your ankle, she ignored him and moved to the side but he did the same, and it continued for a couple of seconds when kripa screamed loudly. K-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Eijaz ran down as fast as he could pant into the kitchen. E- oh god what happened I nearly had a heart attack. Kripa just shrug her shoulders and pushed angad out of the way and walked up to eijaz, K- you tell your friend next time to move out of my way and she left for the living room again . Eijaz shook his hands in the air while Angad just shook his head. They both followed her. K- will you to stop following me like dogs, wait how could I forget men are dogs, A- excuse me, K- oh I'm sorry I forgot you were a girl again or did you get lost again Angad , A- shut up , K- whatever you immature imbeciles , E- kripa that's not nice, K- who said I was nice to strangers, E- I thought you knew him, K- In his dreams , E- whatever so hows life going Angad, A- pretty good actually dating some girls he said grinning at kripa who kept a straight face, E- ahhh huh and who is the girl, A- oh kripa didn't tell you they were friends, E- were friends? Kripa can you get me a drink please you know I can't mix it properly oh and Angad one to, kripa just ignored the Angad looks and left to get drinks for the two.
A- well anyways enough about me you know your sister sprained her ankle, e- she did, but how did she come home then, K- well bro , you shabd his such a sweet guy seriously , he gave me a lift home she said lying, K- honestly his soo nice and so she said dreamingly , E- whoa looks like someone has a crush on, but I thought it was dating someone, K- well I don't know they haven't been with each other but his so nice she said handing the juice over to angad who snatched it from her angrily. K- what's up you a** and she turned walking upstairs. E- God what was that about , A- you just wait kripa , just wait he said to himself , A- huh , eijaz just shook his head.....
preview~ angad changing while kripa walks in 😉
okay finally i ' done with the part sorry for the lateness, i'll try and update as much a si can coz i won't be from next week and then for three weeks after that !! hope you liked the part !!!
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