WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 56

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey every1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,actually simone is not the culprit ,,,,,some1 is making her to do so,,,,,,,,,,,and she is none other than our writter 😆 😆 ,,,,,,,,,,,so i think that simmone shud not deserve beatings but our gr8 writter,,,,,,,,,,,,, 😉

wat say??

hmm to ab mere peet peeche yeh sab horahaha hai huh 😛

well if im at fault so is all of u who equally read it and anjoy it. i mean someone's gotta be the baddie, everyone cant be a goodir goodie 😆😆

hmmm well i'll ud today coz i've finished writing it now.

if you are taking efforts and writing so sweetly phir hum apni aankhein bandh thodi na karenge,,,,,,,😃😃

hey MSD wen will u cont.
i cant wait,,,,,,,,

sorry but i really havent got the time to sit and write down the next part yet.

hopefully ill do it today. okays 😃

Part ninety four

?3 weeks later?

Angad: Are Simmone sambhaal ke! 😲 Or yeh kya, high heels? Simmone tum bhool gayee, ?tum to pregnant ho na ?

Simmone: ha…wo…wo 😛 actually kya hai ke initial stages me koi problem nahi hoti. And ?you know how much I love these shoes.?

Angad: wo jo bhi ho 😒 Simmone per me nahi chahta ke tumhe koi takleef ho. I really care ?about you

Simmone: I know, ab chalo (in mind) God me phirse bhool gayee,😛 mujhe abse sambhal ?ke rehna hoga. ?

Angad thought: bus aisee choti, choti galati kartee raho 😃 take me tumhe wo baree galati ?karte huwe pakarlu. ?

Mumbai

Kripa is in her room standing at the window and staring out in the night sky. Light breeze ?is blowing her hair whilst warm tears 😭 are running down her cheeks. It has been three ?weeks since she came back and she had transformed into someone else completely ?different. She speaks very little and spends most of her time locked in her room. At night ?she always stands by the window and looks at the moon and crys silently. She still can't ?forget Angad or any of her memories attached with him. His betrayal 🥺 is quite fresh and ?everyday when she looks at herself in the mirror she hates hersef for falling in love with ?such an animal. ?

Saumya enters the room and slowly sneaks up behind her. Then grabs her by the waist.?

Saumya: Aaaah!!!!!!?

She gets startled, 😲 but then quickly hides her face from him and wipes her tears. ?

Saumya: sorry, sorry. 😃 Wo to bus me tujhe chira raha tha. Khair chal jaldi se tayyaar hoja. ?

Kripa: kyu? 😕 Kaha jaarahe hai??

Saumya: hmmm, yeh dekh (shows her cinema tickets) baree mushkil se do tickets milee ?hai Jodha Akbar ke liye. 😊 Tera favourite Hrithik hai isme, ab chal. ?

Kripa: nahi bhaiya, 😔 mera mann nahi ?

Saumya: kya matlab? Are sach me yeh Jodha Akbar kee tickets hee hai. Pichlee baar ke ?jese nahi okay. 😃 Dekh me yeh baree mushkil se laaya hu to ab tujhe aana hee hoga. ?

Kripa: I'm sorry bhaiya per mujhe nahi jaana. Aap chale jaaye na bhabhi ke saat. Me bus ?akele rehna chahtee hu. ?

Saumya thought: yeh kya hogaya hai ise? 😔 Mujhe yaad hai kese hamesha yu mujhse ?jhagra kartee rehtee thee jab bhi me oske liye koi cinema kee ticket nahi laata tha,😛 or ?khaas karke agar wo film Hrithik kee hoto. Pura ghar sar pe utha leti thi or phir mujhe ?kuch bhi karke oske liye ticket laanee partee thi. Per aaj…?

He went to her and turned her towards him. ?

Saumya: kya hogaya hai tujhe Kripa? 😕 Jabse tu Goa se waapis aayee hai tabse kuch badal ?see gayee hai. Naahi kisee se miltee hai or naahi kisee se baat kartee hai. Aisa lagta hai ke ?meree chul bully, baatori Kripa kahi khogayee hai.😔 Wo to kabhi aisee chup chaap or ?udaas nahi rehtee thee? Kya huwa bata mujhe? ?

Kripa thought: kese batao aapko ke mere saath kya huwa hai? 😭 Kese batao ke aapkee ?Kripa hamesha ke liye kho chukee hai or ab waapis chahne per bhi nahi aasakhegee? ?Kese batao? ?

Saumya: Come on Kripa, tune mujhse kabhi kuch nahi chupaaya. Apni choti see choti ?takleef mujhe batayee hai

Kripa: bhaiya wo…actually wo me…😔 mujhe koi takleef nahi hai bhaiya. Wo to bus yuhi ?aaj mama kee bohat yaad aarahee hai. ?

Saumya: yeh lo, 😛 itnee see baat. Are is me kya hai, abhi mama ko phone laga tha hu (dials ?the number and waits) hello? 😃 Ha mama…kesee hai aap? Ha yaha sab theek hai…actually ?mama aap zara apnee laadli se baat karlijye or osse samjhaye ke aise udaas na raha ?kare… 😛 ab yeh aap ossee se hee poochye.?

He hands Kripa the phone

Kripa: hello mama

Kamya: hello beta, how are you? 😃 I've been missing you. ?

Kripa: (after hearing Kamya's voice she can't help it and breaks down) 😭mujhe bhi ?aapkee bohat yaad aarahee hai. Aap waapis kab aarahee hai? ?

Kamya: abhi to kuch kaha nahi jasakta beta. 😔 Per tu itna ro kyu rahee hai? ?

Kripa: bus itne dino baad aapkee aawaaz sunee na isliye. 😭 Mama please jaldi aajaye na. ?

Kamya: don't worry beta. Me or papa jese dekhenge aajaenge. Tu apna khayaal rakhna ?theek hai or no more crying. ?

Kripa: theek hai, chalye me rakhtee hu

After she cuts the phone she turns away from Saumya and begins crying 😭 again. ?

Saumya: Kripa, chalo mere saath

Kripa: kaha le jaaraha hai? 😕?

Saumya: 😊 ab apne bhaiya pe itna to vishwaas karsaktee hai

He grabs her hand and takes her out of the house and then makes her sit in the car. Then ?he drives them off to an isolated mountain. ?

Kripa: bhaiya, hum yaha kyu aaye hai??

Saumya: bahar nikal 😃 phir bata tha hu

Both get out of the car and stand near the edge of the cliff. ?

Saumya: yaad hai bachpan me hum do yaha kese aaya karte the jabhi hame koi cheez ?pareshaan kartee hoti thi. Yaha aake hum wo saara dard, saaree takleef yu chilla ke nikaal ?dete the. To aaj me chahta hu ke tu aisa kare. Jo bhi tere dil me para huwa hai wo baahar ?nikaal de. Just shout away your pain and sorrow. ?

Kripa: bhaiya yeh kya…😒 ?

Saumya: just do it Kripa. 😳 Mujhe yakeen hai ke oske baad tera mann halka hojaehga. 😃 ?

She hesitates in the beginning but then slowly lets out a scream and gets louder and ?louder. Eventually she ends up crying 😭 😭really loudly like a completely broken 💔 person. ?Saumya becomes surprised 😲 and takes her in his arms and tries consoling her. Now he ?knew that there was something more deeper and he had to find out. ?

? Goa

Simmone: Angad chalo na, disco chalte hai 😃?

Angad: come on Simmone, 😒 is haalat me tum waha nahi jaasakti. Waha bohat bheere hogi ?or phir wo atmosphere hamare bacche ke liye accha nahi

Simmone: aisa kuch nahi hota Angad. Wese bhi bohat din hogaye hum aise bahaar nahi ?gaye.?

Angad: Simmone tum bhool gayee, tum to pregnant ho na to phir waha tum kya karogee. ?Naahi tum dance karsakogee or naahi drink karpaaogee. That's why I'm telling you ke ?tumhe aaraam karna hai okay. Is waqt tumhe so jaana chaaheeye. ?

Simmone: jabse yeh baat maine tumhe batayee hai, me jaise koi pinjre me qaid hogayee ?hu. Baahar jaana to dhoore, hum to is kamre se ziada bahaar nahi nikalte. ?

Angad: wo isliye kyu ke me tumhara acchi tarhase khayaal rakhna chahta hu. I can't let ?anything happen to you and the baby to isliye me yeh sab precautions le raha hu. ?

Simmone: you're being too over protective. Dum ghoote ta hai mera. ?

She leaves the room in a huff. ?

Angad: yahi to me chahta hu ke tumhaara dum ghoote take tum majboore hojao sacchai ?bole ne ke liye. Are yeh to shuruwaat hai, abhi aage to bohat kuch aane waala hai. ?

He grinned and switched the lights off. ?

Next morning in Mumbai

Saumya: (on the phone) Pari mujhe Kripa kee bohat fikar horahee hai

Pari: aisa kya huwa Saumya? ?

Saumya: wo bohat badal gayee hai jabse Goa se aayee hai. Pata hai ek hee kamre me ?hote huwe bhi aisa lagta hai ke wo hai hee nahi. Oskee uchal kuud dekhne ko taras gaya ?hu main. ?

Pari: aapko to khush hona chaheeye ke ab oska bachpana khatam hogaya. ?

Saumya: nahi Pari, yeh koi or hee baat hai (narrates the night's incident by the ?mountain) koi baat hai jo osse sata rahee hai. Mujhse to wo baat nahi kartee isee liye me ?chahta hu ke tum osse baat karo. Me janata hu ke tumhaare saat wo zaroor baat karegee. ?

Pari: Theek hai, per aap itne pareshaan mat ho. I'm sure she'll be fine. ?

Saumya: I hope so. Khair me osse tumhaare ghar chore ke jaaraha hu, theek hai. ?

Cuts the phone

Pari's bedroom

Pari: hmmm…1,2,3…ha 10 hai

Kripa: yeh kya kehrahee hai aap? ?

Pari: are jab tu gaari gin hee rahee hai to maine socha ke teree madad karloo

Kripa: nahi main… (turns away from the window) aisa kuch nahi karahi thi

Pari: jaantee hu, jaantee hu, aksar shuruwat me aisa hee hota hai. Insaan hamesha osee ke ?khayaalo me khoya huwa rehta hai or ajeebsee cheese karne lagta hai. ?

Kripa: bhabhi aap ghalat samajh rahee hai. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai ?

Pari: to phir mujhe samjhaana (takes her hand and makes her sit on the bed) teree yeh ?aakhe saaf, saaf batarahee hai ke tujhe bohat baree pareshaanee hai. Mujhe tu apna dost ?maantee hai na to phir bata mujhe ke aakhir baat kya hai. ?

Kripa looked at her and then flung into her embrace and began crying. ?

Pari: are kya huwa Kripa? Itna ro kyu rahee hai? (kept rubbing her back to console her)?

Kripa: bhabhi…bhabhi…sab kuch khatam hogaya. Meree zindagee puree bhikhar gayee

Pari: (pulling her out) Yeh kya kehrahee hai tu? Mujhe saaf, saaf, bata

Kripa: jis insaan ke saat maine apnee zindagee ke haseen pal sajaye the, osne mera dil ?tore diya. Mere saare armaano ko kuchal diya or mere saare sapno ko tore diya. ?

Pari: kya? ?

Kripa: ha bhabhi, jis insaan ke saat maine itne haseen sapne dekhe the, osne oskee qadar ?nahi kee. He just played with my emotions for his entertainment. ?
She narrates the whole Goa incident but surprisingly forgets to mention Angad's name ?anywhere and doesn't even realise it. ?

Pari is awestruck with the information and she can't believe that Akshat turned out to be ?so low. ?

Pari: maine kabhi aisa nahi socha tha ke wo aisa niklega. Tune itnee baree baat itne dino ?tak apne under hee rakhee or yuhee gute, gute ke jeetee rahee? Mujhe pehle kyu nahi ?bataya ye sab? ?

Kripa: kis zubaan se bataati bhabhi? Apne aapse nazar nahi mila paarahi hu to phir aapka ?saamna kese kartee. Per ab mujhse bardaasht nahi hota, yeh dard mujhse or saha nahi ?jaata. Isse behtar hai ke me marjao?

Pari: (takes her in her arms) khabardaar jo aisee baate kee to. Tujhe sharminda hone kee ?koi zaroorat nahi kyu ke tune koi ghalat kaam nahi kiya. Sharminda to os jaanwar ko ?hona chaaheeye, jisne tere saath aisa… Chi! Mujhe to apnee soch pe ginh aatee hai ke ?maine os insaan ko pehchaane me galati kee

Kripa: meree galati hai bhabhi. Meree galati hai. Maine hee galat insaan se pyaar kiya

Pari: nahi Kripa. Pyaar karna koi galati nahi hoti, wo to bus hojaata hai. Galati to os ?insaan kee hai jisne tere pyaar kee qadar nahi kee. Bus Kripa, ab bohat hogaya. Bohat ro ?liya tune. Ab or nahi. Kis ke liye ro rahee hai tu? Os insaan ke liye jo tujhe yaad tak nahi ?karaha hoha? He doesn't deserve your love Kripa, he doesn't. Ab to me Saumya se keh ?ke osse oske kiye kee saza zaroor dilwaoongee?

Kripa: nahi bhabhi, aap bhaiya se kuch nahi kahengee. Aap to jaantee hai ke kya hoga

Pari: lekin Kripa, Saumya ko yeh baat bataanee hogi

Kripa: me nahi chahtee ke onhe kuch bhi pata chale. Bhabhi wo meree aakho me ek ?aasoo bardaasht nahi karsakte to yeh baat onhe tore degee. Phir aap janntee hai ke wo kya ?karenge. ?

Pari: lekin Kripa…?

Kripa: bhabhi please! Aap ko meree kasam

Pari: theek hai Kripa. Jab tak tu nahi chaahegee tab tak me onhe kuch nahi bataoongee. ?Lekin tujhe bhi mujhse ek vaada karna hoga. Aajse tujhe phirse wo puraanee Kripa ko ?bahaar laana hoga. Tere bhaiya tujhse bohat pyaar karte hai, or teree yeh udaasi onse ?bardaasht nahi hoti. Wo tujhe hamesha muskuraate huwe dekhna chahte hai. Jaantee hu ?ke mushkil hai sab kuch bhulaana, per tujhe koshish karnee hogi. Apne liye nahi to apne ?bhaiya ke liye. Vaada kar mujhse Kripa. ?

Kripa: (puts her hand on Pari's) me vaada kartee hu bhabhi ke abse me nahi ro oongee. ?Ab wo sab me bhool na chahtee hu. Aap mere saat rahengee na bhabhi? ?

Pari: me hamesha tere saat hee hu or hamesha rahoongee. ?

?end of part.

nice part😊 ...Angad irritating Simone, No disco, heels, poor Simone-NOT 😆 That witch totally deserves it!

Ok, scene guessing time! When Kripa was depressed - maybe from Kaho na pyar hei when Amisha Patel is sad when Hrithik dies (or maybe it wasn't a filmy scene, not sure...) When Saumya asks Kripa to shout at the cliff-maybe from Jassi Jaise Koi Nahin when Divya Dutta makes Jassi shout at the beach to help her feel better?

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part.poor kripa

hey thanx deeya

yeah she's a poor soul.

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

aww, poor kripa, what will happene when angad reveals simone and comes to kripa

hey thanx

hmm well she wont fly in his arms and forgive him that easily as what he did with her wasnt under someone's influence.

Hi there! U write really well! Very emotional parts inspired by original KYPH scenes. U had me in tears in several parts. I just read 7-8 parts (last ones)
They were beautifully written with great feeling! 😭
Plz continue soon!

pallavi