WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 54

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey MSD,,,,,,,,,
when will you post the part???
cant wait yaar,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago
ill be doing it in a few mins. okay.
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Part ninety three

Angad: ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Josh I love you!

Josh: (backing away from Angad) ๐Ÿ˜› whoa! I'm not that kind you know

Angad: No Josh, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I really love you (trying to hug him)

Josh:
Okay that's it. ๐Ÿ˜› ab tera Goa me rehna or bhi khatarnaak hai.

Angad: Are meree baat to sun (puts his arm around Josh's shoulder but he shrugs away from him)

Josh:
Theek hai, as long as you keep your distances (walks away from him and sits on the chair)

Angad:
Tu mera sacha dost hai Josh. ๐Ÿ˜Š Tu ne hamesha mera khayaal rakha hai or hamesha mujhe museebat se bachaya hai. That's why I love you!

Josh: ๐Ÿ˜’ Okay will you stop saying that coz you're freaking me out.

Angad: Josh, ๐Ÿ˜› me mazaak nahi karaha

Josh: Or me bhi nahi karaha. I've no intention of becoming a homo okay ๐Ÿ˜†

Angad: What? ๐Ÿ˜• Yeh kya bakwaas karaha hai? You're talking completely off track.

Josh: Are off track to tu hogaya hai ๐Ÿ˜› Me jaanta tha ke yeh depression tujhe koi na koi nuksaan zaroor pohochayega. I mean ab tu larkiyo ko chore ke ๐Ÿ˜ฒ larko ke peeche...๐Ÿ˜’

Angad: Oh God! Josh tu bhi na. Me jab I love you kehraha tha so I mean't as a friend ๐Ÿ˜› as a brother. Teree wajese maine apni zindagi kee sabse bari bhool ko pehchaana

Josh: Oh I see (bit his tongue ๐Ÿ˜› for being so dumb ๐Ÿคช) I'm sorry, wo bus tu aise aaya ke me kuch or hee soch raha tha

Angad: kya karu, jabse yeh feeling mere dil me shaamil huwee hai ๐Ÿ˜ sabse pyaar hone laga hai mujhe

Josh: Hmmm...to finally ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Mr. Angad Khanna ko pyaar hogaya

Angad: Mujhe kabhi nahi lagta tha ke me kabhi aisa mehsoos karunga, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ per ab jab karta hu so I never want to be deprived of it again. Or yeh sab teree wajese huwa hai Josh.

Josh: ๐Ÿ˜Š maine to sirf tujhe raasta dikhaaya hai Angad, but it was always there within you from the first time you laid your eyes on her. Jaanta hai, ek hisaab se yeh haadsa hona zaroori tha, ๐Ÿ˜” warna tu apne ehsaas ko pehchaan hee nahi paata. Tujhe Kripa ke ehsaaso kee kabhi qadar hee nahi hoti.

Angad: Lekin ๐Ÿ˜” maine jo dard Kripa ko diya hai osko shayad me kabhi bhar nahi paaoonga.

Josh: Dekh (puts hand on shoulder) tu ne jo kiya wo sarasal galat tha or tujhe iskee saza milnee chaheeye or teree saza yeh hai ke tujhe osse maafi maangnee paregee. You've got to win her heart back Angad.

Angad: ๐Ÿ˜” Wo mujhe maaf nahi karegee Josh

Josh: Karegee . Agar oska pyaar sacha hai wo tujhe zaroor maaf karegee. Ha kuch waqt lagega per ek din wo zaroor karegee. Or wo din jaldi aaeh oske liye tujhe mehnat karnee hogi

Angad: Jaanta hu Josh ab me oska vishwaas waapis jeet ke rahoonga. So the first step is to find out what happened that night.

Josh: Kya tujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi?

Angad: nahi ๐Ÿ˜” me sirf yeh jaanta hu ke os performance me, me gaya tha or phir kya huwa, kuch pata nahi. ๐Ÿ˜• aisa kese hosakta hai

Josh: hosakta hai ke kisee ne teree drink me nashe kee goli miladee ho

Angad: aisa kese hosakta hai ๐Ÿ˜’ Josh sab unit ke log the or phir koi aisa kyu karega?

Josh: Kuch to aisa huwa hai. Yeh baat sirf teen log jaante hai. Ek tu, per tujhe kuch yaad nahi. Dusree Kripa jo ke waapis Mumbai chaleegayee or wese bhi wo to kuch nahi kehne waali ๐Ÿ˜” so she's also ruled out. or ab rahee wo teesree, that girl who was with you. Jab tak oska pata nahi chalta we really can't do anything, so we're at a dead end.

Angad: Kuch bhi ho Josh per mujhe pata lagana hee hoga

Josh: Tu fikar mat kar, me hu na tere saat ๐Ÿ˜Š I'll definitely come up with a plan ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Simmone's room

Simmone:
(on the phone) Maana parega. You're certainly a genious.

Akshat: Wo to main hu hee. maine kaha tha ke mere saat kaam karogee ๐Ÿ˜ˆ to fiade me rahogee

Simmone: Kya plan banaya tha tumne. ๐Ÿ‘ Ab chaahe to koi prove karhee nahi sakta ke os raat huwa kya tha

Akshat: ha, yeh raaz ko yahi dafan karna hoga. ๐Ÿ˜ก agar tumne yeh baat kisee ko bhi batayee to yaad rakhna ke nuksaan sirf tumhaara hoga

Simmone: ๐Ÿ˜ก tumbhi itne hee gunah gaar ho ke jitnee me hu, to yeh mat sochna ke tum bachjaoge ๐Ÿ˜ก agar me pakree gayee to phir tum bhi...

Akshat: hey, hey, cool baby. Me to sirf mazaak karaha tha. Jaanta hu isiliye to kehraha hu ke os raat ko kya huwa tha yeh hum dono ke ilawa koi nahi jaanta or kisee ko pata chalna bhi nahi chaheeye

Simmone: Don't worry, aisa kuch nahi hoga kyu ke ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ab hum dono ko wo milgaya jo hum chahte the.

Both give an evil grin ๐Ÿ˜ˆ and cut the phone.

Angad and Josh are walking in the lobby when they run into Simmone who is acting to cry.

Angad: (kneeling down towards her)
๐Ÿ˜• kya huwa Simmone?

Simmone: Angad...๐Ÿ˜ญ I'm...I'm pregnant

Angad: ๐Ÿ˜ฒ What?

Simmone: yes, ๐Ÿ˜ญ I just found out this morning.

Angad: yeh sab kese huwa?

Simmone: Maine tumhe bohat rokne kee koshish kee thee lekin tumne meree ek nahi sunee or ab... (she continues with her act ๐Ÿ˜ญ)

Angad:
Yeh kya kehrahee ho? Me... ๐Ÿ˜’ no, I can't

Simmone: Me jaantee hu tum yakeen nahi karoge. ๐Ÿ˜ญ tumhe jo karna tha wo to tumne kardiya or ab meree zindagi to barbaad hogayee na

Angad: Lekin maine tumhaare saat kabhi...

Simmone: Os raat tum apne hosh me hee nahi the to kese yaad hoga ๐Ÿ˜” Ek larka to yeh sab bhool bhi sakta hai lekin ek larki nahi bhool sakti or ab mujhe ๐Ÿ˜ญ os haadse ke saat zindagee bhar rehna parega. Ek larki kabhi aisa jhooth nahi bolegee.

Angad sat down on the floor completely shaken by this ๐Ÿ˜ฒ new set of news. What was he mean't to do now? Everything was shattered. Now he had lost Kripa forever.

Josh however was sensing something fishy about the whole story so he whispered something in Angad's ear.

Angad:
I'm sorry Simmone. Maine tumhaare saath bohat ziatee kee lekin ab me zimedaaree se peeche nahi hatoonga ๐Ÿ˜Š Don't worry, I'll take responsibility for you.

Angad and Josh leave Simmone alone. after they leave she gives a wicked smile ๐Ÿ˜ˆ and wipes her false tears.

Josh:
๐Ÿ˜ฒ yeh kya kiya tune?

Angad: Kya? ๐Ÿ˜› wahi to kiya jo tune kaha

Josh: Maine kaha tha oske saat humdardee dekha, ๐Ÿ˜’ jeevan bhar saath neebhaane ke liye nahi kaha tha ๐Ÿ˜›

Angad: To me bhi kaha karne waala hu. Dekh agar mujhe is baat kee te tak pohochna hai so I'll have to show I really care for her and actually believe her.

Josh: Lekin ๐Ÿ˜” is me kahi kuch aisa mat karna jisse maamla bigar jaaye

Angad: Don't worry Josh, ๐Ÿ˜ณ ab me puree sachai jaan ke rahoonga. Simmone ne khel kee shuruwaat kee hai per ise khatam me karoonga ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

End of part.



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Posted: 17 years ago
ooh, nice part! ๐Ÿ˜Š that first scene from Angad and Josh, adapted from Kal ho na ho? I love how you incorporate different scenes perfectly to your FF! ๐Ÿ‘hopefully Simone ka raaz jaldi khul jaye!
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part but what about kripa hope shes ok josh was hilarious ๐Ÿ˜† minblowing loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ˜ฒ o man.. i hope they catch simmone red handed.. im starting to love this josh.. great part hun.. plzzz continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey MSD,,,,,,,
good part yaar,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the way angad was talking to josh i thought he was drunked๐Ÿ˜†,,,,,,,josh is quite smart,,,,,,,,,,,lagta hai experienced hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ,,,,,,,
itni jaldi sab samajh aa gaya ki simmone was speaking false???
Edited by brite_dawn52 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

ooh, nice part! ๐Ÿ˜Š that first scene from Angad and Josh, adapted from Kal ho na ho? I love how you incorporate different scenes perfectly to your FF! ๐Ÿ‘hopefully Simone ka raaz jaldi khul jaye!

hey thanx

yet another comparison ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i'm always waiting for it though to see if there's anymore.

hmm well bohat jaldi yeh sab hoga.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing part but what about kripa hope shes ok josh was hilarious ๐Ÿ˜† minblowing loved it

thanx for appreciating

hmm don't worry abt her she's fine

yeah josh is ace.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: phool527

๐Ÿ˜ฒ o man.. i hope they catch simmone red handed.. im starting to love this josh.. great part hun.. plzzz continue soon..

thanx

well everything will be sorted out soon

yeah josh is a sweetheart.

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