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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hii everyone! i am preethi234 and this is my first ff on Raj- Naina. i am a great fan of their jodi.Hope u all like it. It's a romantic lovestory of Raj-naina.please comment about this.


i will continue the ff from rajveer's trial&naina proving him innocent.

Prologue: After 4 years, naina was able to prove raj innocent and he was set free and promoted as Major. naina was a Captain now. pooja & ali and aalekh & neelu were engaged.All of them including Huda & udi are working in KMA now. Now raj was posted back to KMA.


Part1:


Raj couldn't believe his own destiny.He was a Major now. Hislost fame,self-respect,career everything was now returned.And it was all possible bcoz of her.Her strong determination made the impossible possible. He would be thankful to her for ever.
After the ceremony,he went to meet naina. He saw aalekh on the way & enquired about her."wo kaha gayi apun ko nahin pata lekin itna to pata hai ki shyaam tak waapas aajeyigi. aap phikar mat keejiye".
only if aalekh could know how his heart ached to see her. he ached for a glimpse of her&she was nowhere to be seen.
The rest of the afternoon went very quickly.Everybody congratulating him &old friends came to meet him,. But the one person whom his eyes were longing to see did not appear.He was allowed to stay back in his previous quarters.Although he had a seperate house, he preferred to stay there for the sake of protecting the triggers. But inside his heart, he knew that the other reason is to stay near naina.
After settling in his room, he took a short nap & went for a walk in the evening. He was touring all tha places of KMA where he& naina once spent. when he caught the glimpse of 1857 point, it reminded him of moments spend with naina there. she was so serene and was looking like an angel in that white chudidar.Her face was lit by the moonlight and the smile on her lips- for him it was one of the most beautiful sights in world. How much he wished to hold her but controlled with a great effort.
And now he wondered what were her feelings for him? Did she do all this just because he was trapped in trying to prove her brother innocent or was it friendship or----?
He did not dare to complete the thought. May be he was expecting too much. Atleast he would be able to live by just seeing & talking to her. He returned to his room and opened the door. It was dark inside. Suddenly the lights were on followed by loud cheers" Happy Birthday Rajveer sir"and there were all his favourite cadets smiling.

Part 2 :
He was startled. then it came into his memory that today was his birthday. He remembered how Navin had once thrown a surprise birthday party for him.As he was lost in his thoughts, the lights were gone again & somebody placed a cake with candle lit on it before him. In the candle light, he saw the person who hold the cake infront of him. His heart seemed to stop for a moment. It was naina , smiling.He blew the candle & fed the cake to everyone. when it was her turn, as his fingers touched her lips, it was hard for him to not let go control of his mind infront of all of them.
Later the rest of the time was spent everybody enjoying, cracking jokes & telling about their experiences in these years. Although Raj was enjoying with them , his heart wished to be alone with naina for some time. It seemed to be his lucky day. His wish was fulfilled soon.Everyone was leaving one-by-one& she was the last. "Naina. i want to talk to u." she stopped .Her heart was full of nervousness. How much she wished to hold him,she could not do so.she was not able to meet his eyes. All these days he sufferd bcoz of her. He lost everything bcoz of her. she did not desreve him. Her love would only destroy him.She could not bear the thought of losing him again.concealing her emotions, she turned back to face him. For a moment they could not speak anything. there were many emotions hidden in them,so much to tell but words did not come out.Finally he broke the silence" Naina, I am proud of u.I am also very grateful to u. Whatever u did for me and stood for me, it means a lot to me." That words hurt her. what she did was nothing compared to the loss occured to him by her. He was ruined in order to prove her brother innocent.Tears formed in her eyes. All the feelings she had suppressed with a lot of self-control, all the barriers broke down. she hugged him tightly as she broke into sobs.
For a moment, Raj was shocked.He was not able to think of anything.Then slowly he placed his arms around her& tried to comfort her."can u forgive me sir? it was all bcoz of me"
"sssh naina. there is no fault of yours.so, there is no question of forgiving. Now will u please stop crying cadet Naina Ah Singh?
She hugged him more tightly feeling the warmth of his embrace. she felt so happy& safe in his arms. she wanted this moment to last forever.For some time, neither of them moved. Time stopped still. " i am very happy that u r back sir. i missed u so much. i hope u need some rest now. i will leave now . good night sir". she was afraid that if she stayed here for some more time, she would do things that she would regret later.
" just a sec naina. now as we are fellow officers, could u please stop me calling sir? u can't reject my request on my birthday".

" alright sir, sorry Raj, goodnight"and she left. The pronounciation of his name from her lips felt wonderful for him. Thinking about the moments, spend with her , he slowly drifted to sleep.


please comment on this guys. If u like it, then i will continue. I promise there will be more romantic scenes from now. please comment on this guys.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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goodd..interesting.. 👏 continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey preeti first of all welcome to the forum hope u have an amazing time here
your ff was really good and i will be hoping and waiting to read ur next part if u dont mind i wuld like to give u an advice i hope u really dont mind as u said u will be adding more romantic scenes i would ask u to refrain them to a litttle dont overdo them as they sometimes spoil the ff it was just wat i tht hope u dont mind........amazing ff 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its very nice.....can u cntinue it on orkut at this community http://www.orkut.com/CommTopics.aspx?cmm=25525722
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oye ...it was all clear that they loved each other when they separated.Phir yeh sab kyun?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great ff

i like reading it

hope u ctn soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 3:
It was morning .after many days, he had a sound sleep. As he opened his eyes, he saw naina infront of him smiling. "good morning Raj". "naina ! how r u here?how did u came into my room? suddenly she disappeared. He rubbed his eyes and understood that it was an illusion. she was so close yet so far from him. would he ever be able to reach her? would he be lucky enough to win her love?he could wait for her. no matter how much time it took.

He freshened up and put on his uniform. it reminded him that he was an major now. He rememberd the horrible life spent in the prison, the humiliation, the hurt everything. Now everything he was now was possible bcoz of her.His life would be perfect only if she wasin it. would he ever be able to live without thinking of her for a moment?
shaking his head, he went to BC'S office & greeted him."i am sorry for the humiliation u have faced all these years.but now we r very happy that u r back to KMA as a major. All the Best for u Major Rajveer"
" thank u very much sir" he replied politely and left the office.
In the lunch time,he went to canteen and his favourite cadets were present there already.
"How u would i go to the ball without a date?"yudi groaned.
"huda ko aisa koyi problem nahin hai. lot of girls r waiting for me. what about u ali? whom u r going with?
"chief! why r u asking? obviously he will go with pooja& aalekh will go with neelu. think about me. do something."
"Then go with dr.shalini. we all know what is there b/w both of u"replied aalekh.udi was about to protest, as soon they saw raj, they stopped arguments& came to him. "By the way, who is ur date sir?"
Rajveer had no idea what they r talking about. "date?"
pooja came forward " aapka signal main clear karta hoon.Tommorow we r celebrating freshers ball for 1st year cadets. so, we r asking who is ur date?"

Just then naina entered. the others left the table giving some privacy to both of them. By now all of them understood what is going on b/w raj& naina.
"Mmm naina . would u be my date for freshers ball?" naina hesitated for a moment. if she was close to him, she couldn't control her heart.Her brain was thinking to make up an excuse but before she could thing about anything,the words came out from her mouth" of course sir"

later in the night, she selected dress after dress keeping them aside. she was worried, excited, nervous at the same time. pooja who was watching her absolutely crazy behaviour finally spoke."don't worry. i did shopping for u also. this is for u and handed her a packet.

naina opened the packet and exclaimed with happiness. " u r selection is damn good. u r the best " &hugged her friend.


pooja grinned & said " tommorow, when u wear this ,our sharukh will go to silent mode by seeing u.i am very happy for both of u naina.naina didn't bother to correct her. she was so excited for tommorow.


At the freshers ball, the first pair to arrive was ali& pooja. then came Aalekh & neelu. Yudi came with Dr. shalini & Huda came with a final year girl.

Rajveer was waiting impatiently infront of naina's room since half-an -hour, but there was no sign of her. God knows how much time she will take.He was about to knock the door when it opened suddenly.
His heart stopped beating for a moment. He was sppechless and just stared at her without blinking his eyes. There she stood most beautiful than ever in an peach coloured saree with silver embroidery done on it with matching bangles. Her hair was in soft waves upto her waist. Her dazzling earrings were kissing her neck. she smiled at him remembering pooja's words. she snapped her fingers infront of him & said" chale"

He came out from the trance & followed her. They were the last couple to enter thehall. As soon as they entered , they were greeted with loud cheers. They looked perfect with each other. They r the most beautiful couple ever seen.
They descended the steps holding each others hands. Raj wanted to hold her hand like this forever.
The party begun & everybody were dancing.He offered an hand to her which she accepted smiling.As they were swaying to the music, her hand on his shoulder , his arond her waist and their fingers entwined , they felt as if they were secluded from the world , listening toeach other's heartbeats, silence speaking lots of volumes. Suddenly they broke out from the trance with the announcement of BC.
Edited by preethi234 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW yaar...love your story..but is naina cadt or a captain like raj supposed to be?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice.. 👏 👏 👏 continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 3:
Everybody turned their attention to the announcement of BC."This is an announcement for all the cadets and faculty members. There is a pleasant surprise for u people.This weekend we want u people to have a little break from the academy routine and as well as to refresh the cadets preparing for their exams, a tour has been organised to the nearby place which is a surprise for u people. Tommorow at sharp 18.00 hours, all the cadets and faculty members must report at the grounds."
Everybody were delighted and were discussing about the tour."well, it's a wonderful idea. i wanted to take a break since a long time. i can't wait for the tour" said naina with a excited expression on her face. "we can have lots of fun . In these type of tours, we gain lot of precious moments spend with our friends".
"And to me, they r with u" mumbled Raj. " did u say something?" asked naina.
"me !nothing" and he spun her so that she was in his arms and contiuned to dance with her. As they were dancing ,looking lost in each others eyes, their friends who were discussing about the tour saw them.

" oh god! they love each other. But when will they admit to each other?i am dying to see them as a couple" said pooja.

"it looks like they r not going to admit soon. we must plan something to unite them" said udi.
"Apun aap logo ke saath hai" said aalekh.
" I think it's their personal matter. we must not interfere in it and" before ali could continue ,pooja protested "why r ur settings always permanent? why don't u catch our signal always? we r going to unite them and that's it".

Ali finally agreed not daring to get pooja angry on him." so, punjabein has wrapped u under her finger even before marriage" joked Huda and Ali was embarassed.
" okay guys . Now think of some plan. We must do something in the tour such that they must confess to each other."
All joined hands with each other and planned something

Raj-naina who were lost in some other world suddenly realised that all the people have left and they were still dancing.
They bid goodbye to each other and left with embarassed faces but smiling secretly.
That night both couldn't sleep each other thinking about each other and their friends also couldn't sleep trying to think the possible ways of executing their plan.
Next morning all of them woke up and started their respective packings and arrangements for the tour as they will be having no time to pack after the academy routine upto evening.
The rest of the day went so soon . In the evening, they boarded the bus. Ali and rajveer sat in the last row and pooja and naina sat in the middle row and their friends were in the beside rows.
After sometime , many people were dozzing off to sleep and pooja thought that it's the best way to execute her first phase. "naina , could u please go and sit in ali's place so nthat he can come here and we can have some talktime.please" she said making a cute face.
" Naina couldn't reject her friend's request " she went to ali and they exchanged their places.
"well done pooja" said udi who was sitting in her backseat. " and u have double benefits . I mean the other bebefit is u can spend time with ali" said huda.
Pooja grinned and turned back to look at raj-naina. But just the lights were off in the bus and she could not see them she turned sighing.
Meanwhile raj was so lost in his own thoughts that he did not see naina sitting beside him. The bus turned suddenly causing naina to lose balance and fall on him.
This made raj to come to his senses.

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