Ek Ajnabi - RA / RN ff (Part 9 - Pg 13) - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part - 7

Every new day brings a new hope...a new dimension...a new...outlook to the way we led our life...2 da way...we want 2 spend our life...and 2 da things we want 2 achieve in life...Same was da case wid naina...evryday 4 her was a new hop...evryday she used 2 gt up...thinking...looking 4 a ray of hop...bt still she was in da dark world...wanting 2 come into bringht sunlight...bt yet was unable 2...lets see..wht 2day has in store 4 her...

we see her talking on da phone wid some one..letss hera da remaining conv..

N:i know..jo main sochte hoon..jaisa mein chahti hon..its hard...bt..i knw..only u can help me in this..come on..nuthin is impossible 4 u atleast...

N:i understand..its nt as easy as i may thnk..bt its nt hard 2 either...bhaiya...please..4 my sake..try once..

N:i am sure u can do it...

N:u did a lt 4 me since tht day...i knw u tried..this is one last time am asking u..i promise i wont ask again after this...

N:i knw..u all believe he is no more...he has been declared dead 4 army...bt 4 me he cant be bhaiya...i cannot imagine da mere thought...u may think m talikng foolish bt trust me..my instincts say..he is alive..plz..4 one last time..

N:oh...thank u so much..n yah don tell mom dad..i called u 4 this as u knw..h they hv become ..after raj's incident...

N:yah...even they don lik me gng 2 maya aunty's place..bt h can i live mahi n aunty lik tht..they need me da mst at this time..

N:thnx 4 understanding...i knw..u will ...i cant brake any promise i made 2 raj n i promised him tht i will look after his family...so...

N:will be waitng 4 ur calll...gav me a positive reply soon...

N:bye...love u 2...take car..

n as she put down da phone back on craddle she was sure..she will find His raj ..sooner....

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i knw its shrt...bt i don hav much time..

will try 2 post in another shrt one soon 2...

post comments..on h it was...

till nxt time...tc...

wid luv...

guriya....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
nice part.....oh crap....naina is alive......... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im happy Naina's alive 😊 i like RN pairing way better than RA..anyway, bad idea to hv one 'Raj/Sujal' i wont demean any pair/character like some people 🤢 but
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Posted: 17 years ago
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but think of all jodi fans before u decide on ur final pairing!it shud be a win-win situation and not pacifiers (like some good scenes bw a jodi as a consolation prize) 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

nice part.....oh crap....naina is alive......... 😭

thnx...naina...is truly alive...dear...she cant be dead..as shez major part of da ff...keep reading...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

im happy Naina's alive 😊 i like RN pairing way better than RA..anyway, bad idea to hv one 'Raj/Sujal' i wont demean any pair/character like some people 🤢 but think of all jodi fans before u decide on ur final pairing!it shud be a win-win situation and not pacifiers (like some good scenes bw a jodi as a consolation prize) 😕

she has 2 be alive ...as shez a major part...anyway...don worry...i wont dissapoint any of my single reader...n there would be no such thng as consolation prize...bt i wont n cant assure anyone now...abt pairing...wht it will be n how...so plz...keep reading...n trust me...u wont be dissapointed..rest upon u all 2 decide...i m writing as per track is...so...u have 2 read...parts of RA 2...

thnx 4 likng...will cont soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#97

Part - 8

zindagi bhi jaeeb hai jab hum...kuch janey k liye betaab hotein hain...tu..humein kuch bhi sujhati nahee hai...magar jabhum sab kuch bholna chahte hain..aur zindagi k dagar pe..uske batye huey raste pe chalne ko tayar ho jate hain tu humein...dobara woh usi mor pe la k khara kar dete hai...
sujal k saath bhi shayad kuch aisa he hua...jab woh sab kuch yaad karna chahta tha...tu yeh zindagi..eh waqt usey kuch khabar he nahe dete the...magar ab jab k...usey ik naye raah dekhi hai...kisi k saath k khuwahish...un sab baatoon pe tarjeh leney lagi hai tu...woh hua..jo shayad us ne socha he nahee tha..
kehte hain na..k jagah k mahol k..ilake ke..badal janey se...app shayad badal jayein..lekin log..waqt aur halat nahee badalte...abhi tu..sujal aur kashish k darmiyaan dost ka ristha parwaan charhna shuru hua tha...aur abhi tu isey aur panapna tha...dosti ne shayad koi aur makam hasil karna tha k...zamaney ne apni fitrat dekha di..
jis sujal ko...prerna aur anurag itne...pyaar..saman se..uske akelepan k karan..apney ghar laye the..ajj usi sujal ko shayad unhe alwida kehna tha...
ik taraf sujal tha...jise k dil mein tu..abhi naye umeedein jagi thein...jinhein shayad ab k baad bas tootna he tha..
tu dosri taraf kashish...jike chupi..porey ghar ko holaye de rahee thi...ajj se pehel kashish ko kisi ne itna khamosh na dekha hoga..woh kashsih...jis k zuban patar patar chalne pe thakte na thi...do din se..khamoshi ke sehra mein kahein gum thi...
aur kya hona...baat he aisi thi...hua he kuch aisa tha..k sab ne aisa react karna tha..
jaise mainey kaha ...zamana kisi ko jiney kab deta hai...jagahein app chahein jitni badal lein..logon..aur unki fitrat..unke..demagh..mein bhare ..fatoroon ko nahee badal..sakte..
kariban do din pehle...is choti se jagah..jo k ajj bhi yahan k bare buzurg...aur bade logon k faisloon par chalti hai...ney ik faisal liye...jis k karan ajj sujal...phir se...tanha...aur akele...hogaya..
faisla..k ik larka...jis k koi jaan na peechan...jo sab gaoon k liye anjaan hai ko...pehle tu gaoon mien rakhna he...khatre se khali nahee hai..uppar se..agar hum is baat ko chor bhi dein tab bhi uska..us ghar mein rehna..jahan pehle se ik jawan larki mujood hai..na kable qabool hai..
aur gaoon walon k nazar mein...theek nahee...is liye...usey do din ke andar...wahan se jana hoga...
yeh faisla kaam aur...ik bomb zyada ban kar us ghar pe girah.jin k diloon mein aisa kuch tha bhi nahee...anurag prerna..chahe jitne..bhi parhe likhe..aur gaoon mein..mashoor sahe..itni hasiyaat na thi unki k gaoon waloon k faisle ko rad kae in...par ab mushkil yeh thi k sujal ko woh kaha le jaye..kaise us insaan se..jis ko itne maan se laye..bolien k ab tum jao..
dosri taraf kashsih...ka gussa asmaan chu raha tha..us ne soch bhi na tha..k in logon k zehan irtni chotey hongey..aur woh is liye he chup thi k awal tu uski sujal k samney aney k himat he na rahe thi..aur dosra woh kisi par pana gussa nahe nikalna chahte thi..jo k agar woh bahar ati tu nikalta..
jahan yeh teen log...faisle taak pochne k koshish kar rahe the..wahan kisi ne buhat peel faisla kar liya tha...
dinner time..kashsih k siwa sa the...anurag prerna...sujal..chup chap..kha rahe the..k sujal..ne baat shuru k..
S:uncle aunti..mujhe apse ik imp baat karna thi..
A:haan bet bolo..kya kehna hai..??
S:woh uncle mein ne faisla kiya hai k...mein kal subah he yahan se shift ho jaonga...
P:kya..sujal..yeh kya bachpana hai..beta..hum kuch hal nikal lenge..tum bikar tension na lo..hum sab sambhal lenge..aur tum kahan jaoge..han
S:jahan kismat agaey lijaye..aunti..aur app plz...mujhe mat rokiye...mera jana he theek hoga..mere wajah se app pehle he..app ne aj tak itna kuch tu kiya hai mere..liye..bina kisi swart k..ab thora mujhe karne dein..
P:kuch nahee kiya..hum ne khas...aur tum koi ghair nahee humare liye..samjhe..humare bete jaise he ho...
S:beta jaisa..aur beta app k nazar mein ik hotey hai..aunti...duniya k nahee..plz..mat rokiye mujhe..
P:jaise tumhari marzi..par itna yaad rakhna...ab se mein tumahari kuch nahee ..samjhe..
aur prerna..ghusse mein ..wahan se chale..jati hai...sujal..anurag k taraf madad k nazroon se dekhta..
A:sorry beta par..tumhari aunti ne j kaha..mein bhi wohi kahoon ga...agar yahi tumhara faisla hai..tu...
S:plz uncle aise maat boliye..mujhe tu yeh bhi nahee maloom k merey asli maa baap kon hai..abse us hadse k baad hosh sambhala hai.app ko aunti ko..mom dad k jagah dekha hai...par halat..
A:maa baap mante ho tu...maa baap ko koi beta ise chor k jata hai bhala..
S:main kahan door jane ko keh raha hoon..bas...is ghar mein reh kar aur pareshani nahee dena chahta app sab ko..khas kar kashish ko..jabse..yeh sab hua..usne..kamre se bahir kadam nahee rakha..in sab...aur logon k baatoon k bas ik he haal..k mein..
A:kashish...ko tumse koi prb nahee aur..humein apne bachoon par..tum par yakeen hai..humein logon k parwah nahee beta..woh tu bas...is darr se k tumhe kaise face kare..neeche nahee ati..maat jao..beta..hum kuch..
S:nahee ncle mein soh chuka hoon..
aur yeh keh k sujal...upar k taraf barh jata hai..apney kamre mein jate hui...us ki nazar kashih k door pe ..jo k band hota hai..parti hai..aur janey konsi takkat hoti hai..k woh na chahte huey bhi...darwaza knock kar deta hai..
kuch dair k khamoshi k baad...
S:kashish mein sujal...mujhe sirf 5 min k liye tums buhat zarori baat karni hai..agar tum..
sujal k bolney se pehle he..kashish darwaza khol dete hai..
sujal andar ata...hai..kashish is silently siting on side of bed..as sujal sees..k ab woh..nahee bolegi..he speaks up...
S:woh main sirf tumhein yeh batane aya tha...k ab tumhein...pareshan hone k zarorat nahee...meine decide kar liya hai..kal subah..hote he..mein is ghar se chala jaoon ga..
kashish was still quiet..
S:yahi theek ra he ga..aur waise bhi ..tum sab logon ne itna kiya hai mery lye..so atleast..itna tu mein bhi kar he sakta hoon..aur mein yeh kabhi na chahon ga k meri wajah se..tum sab log ko bateein suni pare yah ko masla..ho..so..bas itna he kehna tha..main chalta hoon..zindagi rahee tu phir mulaqat hogi..gudnite..n bye..
sujal abhi darwaze par he pohnacha hota hai k we hear..kashish's voice..
K:kya tum mujh se shadi karoge..
sujal all of a sudden...turns back..n we see his shocked face...blankly looking ta kashish..as if trying 2 digest wht she said a moment ago..or whthe heard is rite or wrong..
S:kya????
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ok guyz...this is it 4 now...i hop u liked da part...n hp its nt tht short...m soor 4 da delay..do comment n tell me h it was...will be eagerly waiting 4 ur respose..till nxt time..tc..
wid luv...
guriya..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haan........Jaldi karlo shaadi..Isse pehle ki naina ko pata chale ki sujal kaha hain 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sujal ko rakh lo kisi ke liye bhi, Raj(eev) ko le aao Naina ke liye! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow LOVED IT....this is so gr8 she asked him to marry....cant wait for the next part...plz cont soon 👏 👏

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