Journey of Hearts(LAST PART IS UP!) - Page 18

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great, plz continue soon, when r they gonna find out bout each other?????
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

that was great, plz continue soon, when r they gonna find out bout each other?????

good question....i have something in mind but i am not going to tell you of course...but i dont know when i am going to put that in....

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

good question....i have something in mind but i am not going to tell you of course...but i dont know when i am going to put that in....

ok dont tell me, but im sure whatever u do, everyone will love it, ure story is mind blowing!!!! u r truly a very talented writer
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

ok dont tell me, but im sure whatever u do, everyone will love it, ure story is mind blowing!!!! u r truly a very talented writer

awwww u r soooo sweet i was thinking about when to put it in and i am thinking of putting it in when all hell breaks loose about the whole mishty-prithvi wedding!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

awwww u r soooo sweet i was thinking about when to put it in and i am thinking of putting it in when all hell breaks loose about the whole mishty-prithvi wedding!!

sounds good to me!!!! anyways plz post the next part soon, i am dying to read the next part!!!!
~shereen
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

sounds good to me!!!! anyways plz post the next part soon, i am dying to read the next part!!!!
~shereen

i decided i wasn't gonna continue today but if you are dying i have no choice but to save you with another part of my fan-fic😆...k anyways i'll start typing the next part and post it soon.....

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

i decided i wasn't gonna continue today but if you are dying i have no choice but to save you with another part of my fan-fic😆...k anyways i'll start typing the next part and post it soon.....

thank u thank u thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cnt wait to read it😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
PART 11

Kripa had her head burried in Angad's chest and angad had his arms around kripa protectivley...they are extremely comfy kripa stirs and wakes up which wakes up Angad too kripa realizes she is on Angad's chest so she jumps and lets out a loud yell too....Angad jerks awake and looks around saying where? who?what?....
K:oh sorry i woke up on your chest so i just acted on furst impulse and screamed....
A:(shows a shocked face) WHAAAT???? kripa i thought i told you not to do anything with me....you promised you wont take advantage of me sleeping mext to you...I wanted to save ding song till i got married....
K:WAIIIT A MINUTE!!! angad i did nothing like that!!!
A:its ok kripa it is completely understandable....i mean a hot sey guy sleeping next to you...and if Angad is sleeping next to you now THAT is hard to resist....i dont blame you it is temptation sooo many girls have to go through it...becuase of me....
K:(laughing)u hot and sexy?!?hahahaha u got to be kidding....
A:(whining tone)KRIPA!!!!
K:you wanna know who is hot and sexy....
A:shoot
K:JOhn Abraham!!!
A:yuckkkk waht kind of taste do you have?!?
K:(whining tone)ANGAD!!!

Angad was about to answer when his cell rang...kripa can hear the other voice too and it is a girl
Caller-c

A:hello
c:hey i miss you
A:awwwww....how sweet i miss you too...
c:liar!! if you did you would have calles by now!!
A:you are the one who told me not to call because you have to study study and study some more...you wont even come to prithvi and mishty's wedding because of your stupid studies....
c:awwwww.....you really want me to come!!
A:yess!!! it will be sooo much fun with you...just like before!!
c:okaay i will try and come...
A:u r the best
c:i know i am
A:(laughs)bye love you lots
c:bye love you 2, 3, 4
A:u will never change you will always remain a kid...
c:that i will...ok gtg now bye!!
A:bye!!

Angad then sees kripa and sees she is preatty mad and then realizes she heard the whole conversation and thinks oh no!! KRipa gets off the bed in a huff with angad trailing behind....
A:kripa look...listen to me...kripa please...
K:(is inside the bathroom and she turn around and slams the door in his face...)
A:*sighs* girls cant live with them and cant live with out them....
K:(angry tone) boys cant live with them....and....nope thats it you just cant live with them....

Angad changes his clothes and goes down to find out how engagment preperations are going on....he sees everything is going great and he was about to go when he sees a girl but you cant see her face....and he runs towards her kripa sees ANgad running towards some girl and tries to see who she is but cant because the girl's back is towards kripa.....Angad reaches the girl and picks her up and gives her a really big hug...
A:you dont know how much i missed you!!!
c:i can imagine!!
A:(laughs) so when you called you were already here??
c:yupP thought i would give you a surprise!!
A:oh it was a surprise but a really good one!!

(and finally you see the girl's face Alliyah angad's cousin sister..when kripa was oung she didn't knoe about Alliyah)

Angad looks up and sees kripa and he takes Alliyah to kripa and the whole time he has his arms around alliyah...
A:kripa i would like you to meet Alliyah she is my cousin sister and she was the one who i was talking to on the phone today morning...
K:(her face changes from angry to embarrased cuz she knows angad will tease her for this)nice to meet you Alliyah...my name is kripa...
Al:hi kripa!! her pager beeps and alliyeah looks at it oh sorry guys looks like i got to go and she gives angad and quick hug and says by kripa...angad watched her go and turns around to tease kripa but she is not there....

sorry if this part was boring romance will come soon!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
i will post the next part tommorow and i apologize again if the 11th part was really crappy it will get better i promise!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwww now I have to wait until tomorrow to read part 12. It was getting so good. Okay if u say so, I'll wait until tomorrow.

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