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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

great introduction!!😳Yea another Lakshya & Kt ff!!👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛

Thankooo Riya , hun ! 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: desigrl05

continue soon!!!! eargly waiting!! 😳

Thanks Jhannuu for commenting ! 🤗😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

excellent kittu cant wait to read it

-tuba

Thanks Tuba dear ! :)

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Posted: 18 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: **@liy@**

kittu itz amazing!!!!!!! 👏 continue soon!
love,aliya 😳

Boy! Where've you been lately ?! missing you so much !!
Anywhoo.. Thankoo so much !! 🤗😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: saira_1

amazing intro kittu 👏
plz update soon!

Thankooo Saira !! 😆😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

gr8 intro..even im frm chandigarh....like laksh... 😳 ..continue soon...

Thanks !! yeah !! i am too from there ! 😆
What a co-incidence ! 😃
Thanks for the comment ! :)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: unnati72003

awsome intro....
will be waiting for the first part

Thankooo Unnati Dii !! 🤗😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: TuMhArI_mEhFiL

will b waiting. plz do cont. soon! love the concept! 👏 😃 👏

Aww ... thankoo so much Khusi , dear ! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: **maham**

Lovely intro, kitu!! 👏
Can't wait to read the first part, do update soon! 😃 😳 😃

Thankoooo Mahiii !! 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part One - Lakshya leaves for Mumbai , with 'Anonymous'

Lakshya and Tulsi - Chandigarh !

Lakshya and Tulsi lived in the flat's of ManiMajra !

There in their little home (inside the flat) , the whole block (people of the flat) went to wish Lakshya a good Journey , and best of luck , etc.

Tulsi stood there at the door , with the Sweet Curd , and the 'Aarti Thaali' ...

He was taking forever to come !

Everyone waited and waited at the door , for him to appear for minutes , but , he never came !! ....

Tulsi finally yells "Lakshya!! Kaha ho !! Jaldi aao..Bus choot jayegi..."

There in Lakshya's room , he jumped out of bed , panicking !!

He looked at the clock , and saw 9:00 a.m.

L: ab to mar gaya !! 1 ghante (hour) mein bus aa rahi hai !! daadi daanteingii (she will scold me)....uuffff !!!!!....

He quickly grabbed his clothing , and went for a quick 10 minute shower !!

He then quickly , got ready , as fast as he could !! ....

"Jaldi kar Lakshya !!!!!...." Tulsi yelled again !!

T: yeh ladka bhi naa ... hamesha deri se aata hai...

Just as she says that , Lakshya appeares with a cute look on his face !!

T: aa gaya tu !?! itni derr kyun lagadi ?!

L: daadi ... woh mai...

T: so raha tha (you were sleeping) acha ab chod ... behes nahi karna hai mujhe ... nahi to aur derr ho jayegi !! ...

L: daadi mai nahi jaana chahta ....

T: Chahti to mai bhi nahi hoon ke tu jaye ....

L: toh kyun bhej rahi hai aap mujhe ?!

T: teri maa ka sapna tha !! ab tu inkaar mat karnaa ....

Lakshya stands there , and slightly nods ...

Tulsi does his aarti , and the rituals ....

She then feeds him the Sweet Curd , he touches her feet , she blesses him !! ....

T: Apna dyaan rakhna !! aur jabhi pahunche mujhe fauran phone karna !! aur--

L: sab karloonga daadi ... ab jau ?! ke.......

T: haan haan , jaa !!!

She hands him some 'Prashaad' (known as blessing of god) , hugs him , and wishes him good luck !!

He steps out , starts to walk , he turns around and waves "bye" to Tulsi ... she waves back , smiling happily !! ...

All the people living in the flat , wish him good luck , and shake hands with him , saying "bye" ...

He leaves for the (bus)station !!

Tulsi there stands by a boy , same age as Lakshya , whom was Lakshya's best friend ... 'Abhijeet'

Abhijeet calls Tulsi as his Daadi aswell , as he praises her alot. Lakshya and him grew up together , and are like brothers , instead of best friends ...

A: daadi ...

T: hmm ?!

Abhijet wipes off Tulsi's tears ...

A: Lakshya ko kuch nahi hoga ... mai jaanta hoon , app chinta mat karo..

T: mai jaanti hoon Abhi !! par , ek anjaan seher (city) mein , woh akela , pehli baar gaya hai.. uski fikr to hogi...

A: Daadii.....

T: tu uske saath kyun nahi chala jaata abhi...

A: par mai--

T: tu Lakshya ke liye chale jaa...

Abjijeet hesitates alot ... but he finally agrees for the sake of Lakshya and Tulsi !!

He hurries for the station , and finds Lakshya , he explains what Tulsi had told him ....

L: koi baat nahi !! agar daadi aisa chahti hai toh theek hai !! ...

Soon we see the bus come ....

A: chal !! jaldi se...

Lakshya and Abhi walk to the bus ....

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The bus takes a little stop , so everyone can get out to eat , freshen up , and all !! ...

Lakshya and Abhijeet decide to go !!

They stop at a little 'dhaba' for some food , etc.

It was already dark outside ...

After they have eaten there food ....

Lakshya decides to call Tulsi , and let her know they're fine !

*Phone Call b/w L+T

L: Daadii...

T: Lakshya !! kaisa hai tu ?! Mumbai pahunch gaye ?! Abhi kaisa hai ?!

L: sab theek hai .. nahi , abhi nahi pahunche...

*Voice in background: LAKSHYA!!!!!

T: kaun hai woh ?!

L: abhi hoga ... woh chodiye ... aapne khaana khaaya ?!

T: tune khaaya ?!

L: daadi baat ko taaliye mat !! haan maine khaaya ..

T: maine bhi khaaya ...

*Voice in background: LAKSHYA !!!! LAKSHYA BUS !!!!!!

T: bus ?!

Lakshya turns around and see's Abhi running for the bus , which had already left...

Lakshya's eyes widen .. as he watches the bus leave...

T: kya hua Lakshya ?!

L: Daadi..woh , bus jaane waali hai ... mai baad mein call karta hoon !! ...

T: theek hai .. bye !! ....

*They Hang Up

Lakshya pays for the phone cost , and runs after Abhi !!

They stop at a point , where they stay on the lonely road .. alone !! exausted...

A: ab kya hoga ?! tune daadi ko bataya ?! bus ke baare mein ?!

L: kaisa batata ?! nahi .. maine zindagi mein pehli baar unse jhoot kaha hai !! ... mai yeh kaise keh sakta tha ?! tum hi batao ?! ...

A: tum theek keh rahe ho ... acha ab kya kare ?! aas paas to sirf jungle hi hai ...

L: pata nahi .. jungle mein hi , koi cottage dhoondna padega ...

A: lagta to yehi hai ....

L: acha , chal !! ....

Coming Up Next ::

~ Lakshya and 'Anonymous' meet !!

10 or more comments , and i will continue !! :)

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So , here is part one ! :)

Leave your comments !!

Regards ,

- Kitu ! :D

Edited by .::Kittu::. - 18 years ago

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