Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123
great introduction!!😳Yea another Lakshya & Kt ff!!👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛
Thankooo Riya , hun ! 😃
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Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123
great introduction!!😳Yea another Lakshya & Kt ff!!👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛
Thankooo Riya , hun ! 😃
Originally posted by: desigrl05
continue soon!!!! eargly waiting!! 😳
Thanks Jhannuu for commenting ! 🤗😃
Originally posted by: kt4lakshya
excellent kittu cant wait to read it
-tuba
Thanks Tuba dear ! :)
Originally posted by: **@liy@**
kittu itz amazing!!!!!!! 👏 continue soon!
love,aliya 😳
Boy! Where've you been lately ?! missing you so much !!
Anywhoo.. Thankoo so much !! 🤗😛
amazing intro kittu 👏
plz update soon!
Thankooo Saira !! 😆😛
Originally posted by: sonalkhullar
gr8 intro..even im frm chandigarh....like laksh... 😳 ..continue soon...
Thanks !! yeah !! i am too from there ! 😆
What a co-incidence ! 😃
Thanks for the comment ! :)
Originally posted by: unnati72003
awsome intro....
will be waiting for the first part
Thankooo Unnati Dii !! 🤗😃😳
Originally posted by: TuMhArI_mEhFiL
will b waiting. plz do cont. soon! love the concept! 👏 😃 👏
Aww ... thankoo so much Khusi , dear ! 😳
Originally posted by: **maham**
Lovely intro, kitu!! 👏
Can't wait to read the first part, do update soon! 😃 😳 😃
Thankoooo Mahiii !! 😆
Part One - Lakshya leaves for Mumbai , with 'Anonymous'
Lakshya and Tulsi - Chandigarh !
Lakshya and Tulsi lived in the flat's of ManiMajra !
There in their little home (inside the flat) , the whole block (people of the flat) went to wish Lakshya a good Journey , and best of luck , etc.
Tulsi stood there at the door , with the Sweet Curd , and the 'Aarti Thaali' ...
He was taking forever to come !
Everyone waited and waited at the door , for him to appear for minutes , but , he never came !! ....
Tulsi finally yells "Lakshya!! Kaha ho !! Jaldi aao..Bus choot jayegi..."
There in Lakshya's room , he jumped out of bed , panicking !!
He looked at the clock , and saw 9:00 a.m.
L: ab to mar gaya !! 1 ghante (hour) mein bus aa rahi hai !! daadi daanteingii (she will scold me)....uuffff !!!!!....
He quickly grabbed his clothing , and went for a quick 10 minute shower !!
He then quickly , got ready , as fast as he could !! ....
"Jaldi kar Lakshya !!!!!...." Tulsi yelled again !!
T: yeh ladka bhi naa ... hamesha deri se aata hai...
Just as she says that , Lakshya appeares with a cute look on his face !!
T: aa gaya tu !?! itni derr kyun lagadi ?!
L: daadi ... woh mai...
T: so raha tha (you were sleeping) acha ab chod ... behes nahi karna hai mujhe ... nahi to aur derr ho jayegi !! ...
L: daadi mai nahi jaana chahta ....
T: Chahti to mai bhi nahi hoon ke tu jaye ....
L: toh kyun bhej rahi hai aap mujhe ?!
T: teri maa ka sapna tha !! ab tu inkaar mat karnaa ....
Lakshya stands there , and slightly nods ...
Tulsi does his aarti , and the rituals ....
She then feeds him the Sweet Curd , he touches her feet , she blesses him !! ....
T: Apna dyaan rakhna !! aur jabhi pahunche mujhe fauran phone karna !! aur--
L: sab karloonga daadi ... ab jau ?! ke.......
T: haan haan , jaa !!!
She hands him some 'Prashaad' (known as blessing of god) , hugs him , and wishes him good luck !!
He steps out , starts to walk , he turns around and waves "bye" to Tulsi ... she waves back , smiling happily !! ...
All the people living in the flat , wish him good luck , and shake hands with him , saying "bye" ...
He leaves for the (bus)station !!
Tulsi there stands by a boy , same age as Lakshya , whom was Lakshya's best friend ... 'Abhijeet'
Abhijeet calls Tulsi as his Daadi aswell , as he praises her alot. Lakshya and him grew up together , and are like brothers , instead of best friends ...
A: daadi ...
T: hmm ?!
Abhijet wipes off Tulsi's tears ...
A: Lakshya ko kuch nahi hoga ... mai jaanta hoon , app chinta mat karo..
T: mai jaanti hoon Abhi !! par , ek anjaan seher (city) mein , woh akela , pehli baar gaya hai.. uski fikr to hogi...
A: Daadii.....
T: tu uske saath kyun nahi chala jaata abhi...
A: par mai--
T: tu Lakshya ke liye chale jaa...
Abjijeet hesitates alot ... but he finally agrees for the sake of Lakshya and Tulsi !!
He hurries for the station , and finds Lakshya , he explains what Tulsi had told him ....
L: koi baat nahi !! agar daadi aisa chahti hai toh theek hai !! ...
Soon we see the bus come ....
A: chal !! jaldi se...
Lakshya and Abhi walk to the bus ....
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The bus takes a little stop , so everyone can get out to eat , freshen up , and all !! ...
Lakshya and Abhijeet decide to go !!
They stop at a little 'dhaba' for some food , etc.
It was already dark outside ...
After they have eaten there food ....
Lakshya decides to call Tulsi , and let her know they're fine !
*Phone Call b/w L+T
L: Daadii...
T: Lakshya !! kaisa hai tu ?! Mumbai pahunch gaye ?! Abhi kaisa hai ?!
L: sab theek hai .. nahi , abhi nahi pahunche...
*Voice in background: LAKSHYA!!!!!
T: kaun hai woh ?!
L: abhi hoga ... woh chodiye ... aapne khaana khaaya ?!
T: tune khaaya ?!
L: daadi baat ko taaliye mat !! haan maine khaaya ..
T: maine bhi khaaya ...
*Voice in background: LAKSHYA !!!! LAKSHYA BUS !!!!!!
T: bus ?!
Lakshya turns around and see's Abhi running for the bus , which had already left...
Lakshya's eyes widen .. as he watches the bus leave...
T: kya hua Lakshya ?!
L: Daadi..woh , bus jaane waali hai ... mai baad mein call karta hoon !! ...
T: theek hai .. bye !! ....
*They Hang Up
Lakshya pays for the phone cost , and runs after Abhi !!
They stop at a point , where they stay on the lonely road .. alone !! exausted...
A: ab kya hoga ?! tune daadi ko bataya ?! bus ke baare mein ?!
L: kaisa batata ?! nahi .. maine zindagi mein pehli baar unse jhoot kaha hai !! ... mai yeh kaise keh sakta tha ?! tum hi batao ?! ...
A: tum theek keh rahe ho ... acha ab kya kare ?! aas paas to sirf jungle hi hai ...
L: pata nahi .. jungle mein hi , koi cottage dhoondna padega ...
A: lagta to yehi hai ....
L: acha , chal !! ....
Coming Up Next ::
~ Lakshya and 'Anonymous' meet !!
10 or more comments , and i will continue !! :)
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So , here is part one ! :)
Leave your comments !!
Regards ,
- Kitu ! :D
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