LRL FIC: Long Journey of RN(Part17 pg26) 5/05)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#101

interesting update..us Major Bharghav ka kuch tho karna hii hoga..i hope Raj aur Gunny, with the six cadets teach him a good lesson...very well written....👏 please do continue soon..😊

Quote

Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#102

hey really vey nyc plot... & interesting too👏

maine abhi abhi read karna start kiya hai...

baht jald main sare uds par comments kar dungi.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#103

awesome.......👏 👏 👏

pura fic read karne k baad bas yahi ek word aaya mere zuban par. lekin ek baat hai...aap baht chote ud post karte ho...!!! 😊

raj naina se pyar karta hai...lekin confess nahin kar pata ...!!! kyoun ki use daar hai ki voh naina ko kho dega. kam se kam ek baar toh himmat se kaam le. army officer hai...kahega toh apne hi wife se kahega...phir bhi use daar hai...

reetu kabhi nahin sudhregi...!!! yeh nahin toh voh sahi... is rule ko follow kar rahi hai...!!! jab raj nahin fansha toh ghunny k piche pad gayi...!!! us ne bhi sahi kaha hai 'make-up ki dukaan'.....😆

bharghav ko kma ka best devil award dena chahiye...!!! voh raj k dil me ghunny aur naina ko le kar misunderstanding creat karna chahti hai. koi baat nahin...apna hero sachhai janta hai.

lagta hai ghunny aur bhargav k bich koi solid lafda ho chuka hai past me...!!! tab toh aur bhi maza aanewala hai.😛

plz cont soon.😊

& can u add me n ur PM list...???😊

Quote

Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#104

that was so great

i knoe Raj would have loved Naina so much

but plz ye mystry jaldi kholo ki Naina is shaadi se kush kyou nahi hain

plz continue soon

Quote

fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#105

awesome updt......

loved it....

dat MB IS 😡 GRHHH!!!!!!!!

loved raj n gunny convo...also raj taking care of naina.....

amazing updt

Quote

Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Part-15

It was late at night when the cadets and Gunny left. Raj was preparing some of his notes while Naina was watching TV. After sometime, she was thirsty so she wanted some water. She looked at Raj who was busy in his notes so she decided to get water for herself.

Raj was engrossed in his work so he didn't see Naina getting up with the help of crutches and go to the kitchen. Naina got water for herself and then as she was about to come back to the sofa she got imbalanced and she hit the glass which was on the counter-top and it hit the floor and broke. Raj looked up at the noise and he saw Naina standing there holding counter top and there were glass pieces all over the floor.

Raj immediately got up and went there. He saw that Naina was standing there with pain as her ankle was hurting now.

He looked at her with anger and then he scooped her into his arms without saying anything and placed her back on the sofa. Then he went to clean the broken glass. Naina was looking at him all the time. He came back after cleaning the floor and looked at her angrily.

Naina(innocently)- Aise kyon dekh rahe ho? Pyaas lagi thi to pani lene gayi thi.
Raj- Mujhe nahi bol sakti thi. Main yahin pe tha lekin nahi madam ko to sab khud hi karna hai. Ek to pehle se itni chaut aayi hai agar wo glass lag jata to?
Naina- Lekin laga to nahi na aur waise bhi tum busy the aur main disturb nahi karna chahti thi.
Raj- Naina behas mat karo. Maine kaha na tum yahan se nahi hilogi phir kyun gayee. Jo chahiye wo mujhe bolo. Main la dunga.
Naina- Ok baba aage se aisa nahi karoongi.
Raj- Ok ab kuch chahiye kya?
Naina- Nahi mujhe ab sona hai. Bahut neend aa rahi hai. aur tum mujhe andar khud jane doge nahi to mere liye blanket le aao. Aaj main couch pe so jati hoon aur tum room main chale jao.
Raj- Bilkul nahi.

He took her in his arms and went to the bedroom and placed her on the bed and then he went to the closet and took her night suit and hand it to her.

Raj- Tum change kar lo. Main bahar hoon.
He left the room closing the door behind him. After ten minutes, he knocked and Naina called out to come in so he came in and gave her a pain killer.

She took it and then he came there with balm to apply on her ankle.

Naina- Nahi Raj, mujhe wo nahi lagana. Bahut dard hota hai.
Raj- Agar nahi lagaogi to theek kaise hoga. Now apna pair seedha karo main lagata hoon.
Naina- Nahi Raj please...
Raj- Naina zid mat karo, dekho I promise koi dard nahi hoga main dheere se lagaonga.
Naina- Promise dard nahi hoga na?
Raj(smiled)- Bilkul nahi hoga.

He opened the strapped band and messaged her swollen ankle slowly with balm. She didn't feel a thing and then after messaging the ankle, he strapped again with band.

Raj- Dekha ho gaya na.
Naina- Thanks.
Raj- Ab tum mujhe bhi thanks bologi?
Naina- Acha nahi bolungi.
Raj made her lie down and covered her with blanket.
Raj- Ab so jao. Good night.
Naina- Good night and then she went to sleep as the pain killer made her sleep.

Raj sat there for sometime and when he realized that Naina had gone to sleep he adjusted his blanket and kissed her forehead and then came out of the bedroom.

He sat there for sometime with his notes and material and after sometime, he changed his clothes and checked on Naina once again who was sleeping peacefully and then came out in the living room and went to sleep on the couch.

In the morning:
Raj woke up as usual and checked inside the bedroom to see if Naina was still sleeping and he saw Naina sleeping peacefully and there was a cute smile on her face.

Raj(to himself)- Naina, bas yahi chahta hoon tumhari ye muskan hamesha tumhare chehre par rahe. Uske aage mujhe kuch aur nahi chahiye.

He stood there looking at her for quite some time and then he realized that he had to get ready so he went to the wash room to freshen up. He came back from the washroom and saw that Naina was still sleeping so he decided to cook breakfast for both of them.

Meanwhile, Naina woke up and saw that it was already 8:00 in the morning so she decided to get ready and she was about to get off the bed to go the washroom when she remembered how Raj has scolded her last night so she called out Raj and Raj had come there.

Raj- Good morning Naina.
Naina(cutely)- Good morning. Raj, waise aaj mera pair theek hai. I can walk so if you don't shout at me, than can I get ready by myself?
Raj started laughing at her cuteness and he nodded.
Naina went to washroom to get ready while Raj went outside to make breakfast.

When Naina came outside all ready, she started laughing at the scene in the kitchen.
Raj was wearing apron and he had flour all over apron as he was trying to make aloo paratha for breakfast.

Raj(annoyed)- Tum ko hasi aa rahi hai. Maine socha tumhari pasand ka breakfast banata hoon aur tum ho ki hase ja rahi ho.
Naina(trying to control her laughter)- Acha ab nahi hasoongi. Waise bhi mere pair main bilkul dard nahi hai ab. Tum jao change karo Ye breakfast main kar loongi.
Raj- Are u sure?
Naina- Yes.
Raj- Ok I will go and change.
Naina made breakfast when Raj came outside and then both of them had their breakfast together.

After cleaning up, Raj checked her bandage and changed it. They were just talking when there was a knock on the door. Raj went to open it and found Gunny standing there with annoyed look on the face.

Raj- Aaja, abhi tujhe hi phone karne wala tha main? kahan rah gaya tha?
Gunny- Maine socha subah breakfast karne ke liye mess main chala jaon thodi shaanti mil jayegi lekin wo meri kismat main kahan?
Naina- Kyun kisne teri shaanti bhang kar di?
Gunny- Uncle Tom ke yahan hote hue wo kaam aur koi kar sakta hai?
Naina(smiled)- Ab us mogambo ne kya kiya?
Raj- Mogambo aur Uncle Tom? Ye kaun hai?
Gunny- Are hum Major Bhargav ki baat kar rahe hai.
Naina- Aur cadet Huda ne uska naya naam mogambo rakha hai.
Raj- Hum usko Hitler II bulate the. Major Niar Hitler I aur Major Bhargav Hitler II
Naina- Kya kismat payi hai us takle ne. Kitne naam se navaza jata hai.
Raj- Acha wo chodo, bol usne kiya kya?
Gunny- Mentorship camp ka alan aur wo bhi aaj subah mess main kiya hai us ne.
Raj- To ye to achi baat hui na... Cadets ko jyada sikhane ko milega...
Gunny- Problem mentorship camp nahi hai Raj, problem ye hai ki wo uncle tom aur Hitler I usko handle karenge. Cadets ke saath saath wo hamari bhi band bajayenge apne fizul exercise se....

Naina- Ye mentorship camp kya hota hai?
Raj- It's one to one experience. Har cadet ko ek teacher assign kiya jayega aur phir har pair ko camping pe jana hota hai wahan tum apne mentor se, uske experience se bahut kuch sheekh sakte ho...
Naina- well that's good for cadets then.
Gunny- Aur haan pehla camp, first year cadets ki batch ka hai jis main tum bhi participate kar rahi ho to tumhe bhi jana hoga.
Raj- Kya? Matlab Naina ko bhi koi mentor assign kiya jayega?
Gunny- Haan aur Uncle tom bada hi kameena hai. Naina ko sabse bura mentor dega wo...
Raj- Main BC se baat karta hoon taaki is camp pe Naina ko na jana pade...
Naina- Nahi Raj, aisa karoge to Major Bhargav jeet jayega aur wo main hone nahi doongi.

Gunny- Lekin Naina tum samjho. MB ki target ho tum. Tumhara harna uske liye zarrori hai wo ye sab musibat paida karne ke liye kar raha hai.
Raj- Aur mentorship camp ka bahana kar ke wo ye faayda utha raha hai.
Naina- To is baar Major Bhargav ko bhi batana hoga ki usne galat insaan se panga liya hai. Aur usne ab koi bhi aisi waisi harkat ki na to use wo Naina dikhayi degi jo usne aaj tak nahi socha. That's a challenge.

Gunny- Gayi bhains pani main... Ab koi fayda nahi Raj, ye nahi manegi aur ab hum dono ko baith kar sirf tamasha dekhna hai.
Raj- Mere dost, mujhe to abhi se Major Bhargav pe daya aa rahi hai ki ye zansi ki rani uska kya haal karegi.

And both of them laughed at Naina's determination as they knew now Naina was back to her oldself and if anybody messes with her,they pay for it very badly.

After sometime, Gunny left from there and the whole weekend passed just like that.

On Monday, all cadets were talking about mentorship camp as they all heard about it during the weekend.

Ali- Ye mentorship camp se hum ko bahut kuch shikhane milega hum logo ko.
Huda(dreamily)- Kaas mujhe mentor ke roop main Dr. Mishra mil jaye. Meri to nikal padegi.
Pooja kicked him hard.
Huda(rubbing his foot)- Kya baat hai punjaban? Mara kyun?
Pooja- Abe Huda, tu apni battery sahi jagah pe chala. Dr. Mishra is your teacher aur tu hai ki...
Aalekh- Rehne de Pooja, ye sudharne wala nahi hai.
Yudi- Guys jo bhi mentor ho, Major Niar ya Major Bhargav na ho bas phir mujhe to koi bhi chalega.
Riya- I agree with yudi.
Naina joined them by that time.
Naina- Kya baatein ho rahi hai guys?
Pooja- Wo mentorship camp ke bare main.
Naina- Don't worry jo bhi hoga acha hi hoga guys...

The whole day passed and everyone kept talking about the camp. In the evening, the orderly posted the list of first batch who was going to the mentorship camp and it was our favorite batch of cadets which also include Naina for time being.

Huda- Oy, us orderly ne list post kar diya hai chalo chal kar dekhte hai.

All cadets including Naina went to check the list. Some were happy after seeing the list and some were thinking while some were horrified. so the pairs were as below:

Cadet Aalekh - Subedar Suri
Cadet Ali- Dr. Shalini Singhal
Cadet Huda- Dr. Ritu Mishra
Cadet Yudi- Major Niar
Cadet Pooja- Captain Rajveer Shekhawat
Cadet Riya- Subedar Lolita sen
Cadet Naina- Captain Gunraj Randhawa

Yudi was horrified to see his mentor's name. He had never imagined this in his worst nightmare. Pooja was really happy as she had gotten her connection with captain Rajveer as her mentor. Riya was tensed knowing lolita ma'am's tough nature. Huda was ectastic as his dream was coming true. Ali and Aalekh had no problem with their mentors, while Naina was in deep thinking as she knew Major Bhargav and he was planning something. Something was fishy and she just had to be very careful and find out but she was happy as her best friend was her mentor.

Precap: Mentorship camp preparations.. The truth behind Raj and Naina's wedding... Past story between Major Bhargav and Gunny... Shalini's secret... Ritu's suspicions... Major Bhargav's planning...

Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago

Quote

Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#107

RN was cute...!!!!
Naina is so different over here...But I like her like this...!!!
I hope Naina MB ki achi tarah se band bajaye...!!!
Precap seems very interesting...!!!! Can't wait for the next update...!!!!

Edited by Dhara_s - 16 years ago

Quote

Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!!

Everyone is praising Naina for completing the drill!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Riya said Raj ne Naina ko training di hogi which Naina was about to correct and say her bhaiya's name!!!!!

But she stopped herself in time!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aalekh noticed it but kept quiet!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was happy and shocked to see Gunny there but Gunny hadn't spotted her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny was shocked and puzzled when he saw Naina there who was cutely smiling at him!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj ka drill hai yeh toh Huda bhul hi gaya tha aur kisi girl cadet ke saath flirt kar raha tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Huda suddenly realized it and Gunny said they will go together so that Raj does not punish him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne toh Gunny ko kuch nahi bataya and told him to ask his best friend to explain!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Gunny was annoyed and looking at Naina with so many questions in his mind!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

He was wondering why she was living with Raj after so many differences between them!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Lekin agar Naina Raj ke saath reh rahi hai toh ismein usse kya problem hai??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ko toh Raj ke paas hi aana hai after all she is his wife!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina told Gunny everything but did not tell him about Major Bhargav's arrival in KMA because she wanted him to find that out on his own!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne accha kiya jo usne Gunny se kaha ke woh BC se na kahe ke woh dono bahut acche dost hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is making Gunny cook dinner and Gunny is complaining about it to Raj!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆This is too funny!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj is laughing at Gunny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Their teasing each other is very cute!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina now pretended to be angry aur Raj aur Gunny dono jaake usse maafi maangte hai aur usse manate hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina then burst out laughing as un dono ko ullu banana bahut asan hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj aur Gunny ne bhi Naina ko pakda and made her say sorry!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina told Raj ke usne Gunny ko Major Bhargav ke baare mein kuch nahi bataya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She said ke woh dono khud milenge tab unhe mazza aayega!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I am looking forward to Gunny and Major Bhargav coming face to face!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

Quote

manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#109

RN were cute !!

Naina is right .... really kya kismat paayi hai uss takle ne....kitne naamo se navaza jaata hai..😆😆😆

i had guessed somehw that MB will assign Gunny to naina...

That dirty minded fool will surely try to spread rumours abt them and try to create misundrstng betn Her and Raj.... 😡...But wat that idiot doesn't know is Gunny and Naina are already best friends...

All in all superb update...😊

continue soon...

Quote

sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#110

lovely update......
Raj ws scolding naina..sooo cute.... kaash naina jaan jaaye ki raj use kitna pyaar karta hai...
major bhargav... 😡 ...he is upto something...he wants to trap gunny n naina... their relationship... 😒
precap is interesting.... waiting for the next update... 😊 😳

Quote

1 ... 9 10 11 12 13 ... 17

LRL FIC: Long Journey of RN(Part17 pg26) 5/05) - Page 11

Related Topics

Explore Topics