Sea of Love...Sujal&Kashish.last pt 3/02

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neha

@neh0307

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

hi....gr8 work yaar....intro was too good...
and the first part was amazin....so KASHISH is the girl jise SUJAL college me pyaar karta tha but they seperated....thats sad....
now lets see wht happens whn two lost lovers meet again....
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FANTASTIC STORY...waitin for next part.....

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sonia

@me2kool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

awesome parttttttttttt 👏 👏 👏 n great introooooo 👏 ...mujhay pehlay hi lagraha tha kay ya sujal ho ga ....par kya kshish sujal ko pehlay say hi janti hai???? 😕 ...newayz cont sooonnnnnn 😊

rajeev rox 👏

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

fab part
but can u write in eng only...
its easy 2 read...
continue soon

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saba

@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

great start 👏 👏 i m sure that your FF will rock 😊 😉

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

very damn goodd... tooo interesting...ahaannn it was seriously so cooll... me already started loving this fic.. it is very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very damn well written... mereko yeh first part padke bohat mazaa aaya.. keep the good work going.. 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛😃

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

nice part but yeh Kashish sujal ko kaise jaanti hai ?aur anjali ka usko kwoh sab kehna?plz cont soon wanna klnow all this 😛

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nikita

@beauty_niki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

what can i say kashish. the first part was rocking dear!!!bohot acha tha 👏 . specially the way sujal and kashish met was awesome 😳 . ohhhhh..... so that person was sujal 😲 .i knew that 😉 .lekin gadi pike chala raha tha was really scary 😭 .i loved the situation when kashish's hands were trembling cause naturally, when the person feels ki yeh koi apna hai toh woh darr jata hai aur uss mein he can't work out properly 😳 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!kashish.continue soon yaar plzzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.talkecare. 😊 😛 😊

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Part-2

Subaah ke paanch baje hai........aur kashish ghar ja rahi hai.........

Kashish: Nurse.......main ghar ja rahi hoon........koi emergancy ho to mere ghar pe phone karna..........aur Dr. Nanda 8 baje report kar degi.

Nurse: Ok doctor.......bye..........

Kashish apne ghar jake sofe pe beth jati hai apni aankhon ko bandh karke.......Kuch purani yaadein ko yaad karte..........

(Flashback);

4 years before.............

Kashish apne third year mein thi jab waha usi university me Sujal apne MBA ko karne aaya tha........Us din bahot hi tez baris ho rahi thi........kashish bahot hi muskeli ke baad college auto me to pahoch gayi.......lekin auto se apne class tak jane me woh kabhi apna chata sambhalti to kabhi apna dupatta to kabhi apni books...........aise me kashish ka dupatta College ke gate me fas gaya........kashish bahot hi koshish kar rahi thi use nikalne ki lekin nikal hi nahin raha tha........jab achanak koi aake kashish ka haath pakadta hai.........kashish mud ke dekhti hai.......to us insan ke aankhon me ek ajeeb sa khichav tha.......uske chehre ki woh muskan....aur jis tarah uska kashish ke hath ko rokna.......kashish ek hi nazar me sirf use dekhti hi reh jati hai..........Waha pe sujal bhi kashish ko dekhta hi jata tha........Kashish ne lal rang ka chudidaar pehnna tha.....hath me choodiyaan......pairo me payal.........woh koi apsara se kam nahin lag rahi thi..........sujal ne dheeree se aake kashish ka duptta nikal ke kashish ke haath me chodke chala gaya.........kashish kuch kahe isse pehle woh insaan kashish ki aankhon se gayab ho gaya........to yeh thi unki pehli mulakat baris me bigti huye.........

Tringg.........tringg.............

kashish apne purani yaadoin me se bahar aati hai......

Kashish: haa nurse kya hua.........

Nurse: Doctor..........woh kal raat accident wala insaan ko hosh aa gaya hai aur woh koi dawai bhi nahin kha raha aur ghar jane ki jid kar raha hai.........

Kashish: dont worry..........main abhi aati hoon.......

Thodi dair baad kashish fresh hoke hospital pahunch jati hai..........anjali use wahi reception ke pass mil jati hai.......

Anjali: good morning Kashish....

Kashish: good morning Anjali.....

Nurse. Dr. SInha jaldi chaliye woh koi baat manne ko taiyaar hi nahin.......

Kashish
(gusse se): patient ko dawa dena........unka khayal rakhna tumhara kaam hai.........agar main yeh sab kaam karungi to mera kaam kaun karega..........
Anjali: Relax kashish........kya baat hai.........

Nurse: Woh kal raat wala patient ghar jane ki zid kar raha hai.........

Anjali: aap logo se maine kitni baar kaha hai ki aisi choti choti baatoin ke liye kashish ko pareshan na kare.......aur abhi woh do ghante pehle hi to ghar gayi thi....

Nurse; I am sorry doctor.....

Anjali: it is ok.......tum jao...........

Kashish aur Anjali dono Sujal ke kamre me dakhil hote hai........Sujal bed pe betha hua hota hai.......sujal kashish ko dekhta hai

Sujal
(smiles): Kashish SInha............16 june 2003.........subah ke 8 baje.........tez baris me........
Kashish: Mera naam Dr. SInha hai sirf Dr. Sinha.........

Sujal: Lekin mere liye wahi Kashish Sinha........

Kashish: Abhi bhi tumhe apne pe khud se jyada yakeen karte ho Mr. Garewal......

Sujal: tum bhi to nahin badli........

Kashish: nurse bata rahi thi ki tumne dawai lene se aur tum ghar jane ki zid kar rahe ho..........

Sujal: jee ha.......main jo sochta hoon woh main karta hoon.......

Kashish: aapko teen din bad discharge karenge aur yeh final hai........aur agar aap dawai lena nahin chahte to aap injection bhi le sakte hai......

Sujal: maine kaha main aaj hi jaunga matlab main aaj hi........

Kashish
(gusse se): sharab pike gadi chalana tumhari marzi..........accident hua woh bhi tumhari marzi.......lekin tumhara operation kiya maine meri marzi.........tum yahaan kitne din rahoge woh meri marzi.......yeh hospital tumhare kehne pe nahin mere kehne pe chalta hai..........samje......
Sujal: abhi bhi itna hi gussa.........kuch badla nahin........

Kashish: sahi kaha.......kuch nahin badla.......sirf tum badal gaye ho.........

Sujal: na main pehle badal tha aur na aaj main badla hoon.........tab bhi main tumse.......

Kashish
(cuts him in middle): nurse inhe injection de do......aur inki kal raat ki reports mere desk pe honi chahiye.......
Nurse: yes doctor.....

Kashish waha se chali jati hai..........

Anjali; Hi Mera Naam Dr. Anjali Nanda hai aur aap

Sujal: Sujal Garewal.......

Anjali: kashish ko kab se jante hai......kaise jante hai.....

Sujal: Yahi keh sakta hoon ke Kashish ko usse se jyada me janta hoon.......

Anjali: main kuch samji nahin......

Sujal: kashish bhi nahin samji to tum kya samjogi.........khair chodo agar kashish ne tumhe mujse baat karte dekh liya to tumse bhi naraz ho jayegi..........

Anjali
(smiles): Aap se dubara mulakat karni hogi........
Sujal: kabhi bhi.........

Anjali: friends.........

Sujal: friends.....

Anjali: ab main chalti hoon.......muje bahot saara kaam hai lekin lunch pe main tumhe dubara milne aati hoon..........

Thodi dair baad sujal apne bed pe betha newspaper pad raha hai jab koi unke kamre me aata hai.........

person: itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume batane ko zaroori nahin samja.........

lady: agar tumhe kuch ho jata to..........kyun karte ho aisa..........kabhi to dusro ke bare me socha karo.....

Sujal: are aap dono ko kya hua.......main bilkul thik hoon.........Aur abhi main Akshat ko phone karne hi wala tha.......

Akshat: janta hoon........police case hua hoga........is liye na..........

Sujal: Tumhe kaise pata......

Akshat: dekha Charu........ise hamari to koi fikar hi nahin........hum hi hai jo iski itni chinta karte hai......

Charu: sujal tum kyun apna khyal nahin rakhte.........

Sujal: aap dono to sab kuch jante ho phir bhi..........

Charu: Lekin tumhari koi galti nahin......

Akshat: yeh sab chodo yeh batao ki kab ghar ja rahe ho........

Sujal: aaj hi.........

when kashish enters

Kashish: jee nahin.......maine aap ki reports dekhi aur isse pata chalta hai ki aap ko kam se kam paanch din yahaan rukna hoga........

Akshat
(turns around and shocked): kashish tum yahaan.......
Kashish: Haa......Akshat......main Mr. Garewal ki doctor hoon........Filhal aap apne dost ko samjaye.......chalti hoon.....sham ko aake tumhara check up kar dungi.........tab tak aap aaram karenge.......kashish left the room........

Akshat: Sujal yeh kashish yahaan.......

Sujal: Haa wohi kashish..........kitna itefaq hai to ki char saal bad is tarah achanak.........lekin abhi bhi sabkuch waisa hi hai.......

Charu: to Yahi woh wajah hai jiski waje se tum..........

Sujal: Wajeh nahin pyaar hai.........aaj muje dubara yeh moka mila hai.... is baar apne pyaar ko nahin jane dunga.........is baar to yeh pyaar bahot se rukh badlega.........ab to dekhte jao aage aage hota kya hai.......

Everyone laughs................

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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Hana

@HhAaNnAa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

wow kash dear great start loved it tooo tooo gooood continue sooooon 👏

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

wow gr8888888888888888888 FF!!!!!!!!!! i really like the storyline!!!!!! plz continue soon... im dying to know wat happened between SK 4 years back... 😳

hey ur only 1 more post away from becoming a goldie!!!!!!! congo yaar!!!!!!

Edited by Sai-licious - 17 years ago