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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

a silent reader but ur doing a fantastic job.. continue soon 😊 😊

Thx a lot😃 The next Part will be posted l8ter on today

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

just caught up wiv it

OMG...gimme one sec 2 recover 😲 .... dat was unexpected anam

now i really can't wait 4 a-k 2 meet...its gonna be v. interestin 😆 😆

amazing parts 👏 👏

cont soon

Thx a lot Ahlam😃 I will be posting da next part in 1 hour or so

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: deeya123

its a nice story plz continue coz i m reallly waitin for kripa's entry

Thx a lot😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ix iishiqaa xo

i really think you should cont. for the pple who actually bother to comment cuz personally i love this ff and its too bad for those who don't comment

Yeah Ishiqa ur right but its really upsetting when there are less comments, anyways i am posting da next part in 5 mins or so

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 3

The girl was non other than Samairah

Samairah-(Played by Griffy on IF) She is 19 yrs old, she's very beautiful and is a drug addict, she is very arrogant and cares and respects no one except for the gang, she h8s her family, and most of all she h8s the word Love she thinks its total crap, and it ruins everyone, so she doesn't believe in Love and she h8s studying but has to go Uni. Everyone calls her Sam as Samairah is an old fashioned name according to her

The next day we see Josh and Shaz in airport, their flight is in a few hours, all of Malhotra family is there also. "Josh wahaan poanch kar phone karnah tike hai" "Haan Dad phone karoongha aur haan Di woh Bajaj Industries keh saat jo hamaari meeting thi, woh maine postponed kardi hai till I come back, kyunki I am handling that project I hope that's ok" Anjali said "Yeah Josh that's ok no worries".

"Josh Beta Shaz ka kyaal raknah aur Beta Kripa ko wapis zaroor lanah" Josh reassured Ganga "Jee Mom don't worry mein Shaz ka bhi kyaal rakoongha, aur Kripa ko apne saat lekar aongha aap plz chintha maat kijiye" Ganga was happy "Tike hai Beta tum apna bhi kyaal raknah", "jee Mom Josh hugged Ganga.

The flight to London was announced

"Beta ab joa tum logo ki flight announce hogayi hai" Shaz was very excited about going to London, "Bye Dad I am gonna miss u" she hugged Dev, "me too baacha". Shaz hugged Ganga and Anjali "Bye Mom and Di I am gonna miss u all", "we are gonna miss u too Shaz".

Josh and Shaz board the plane to London

Meanwhile we see everyone's downstairs in the Gangs house besides Sujal and Kripa, and as usual Tans and Lucky are arguing Alisha isn't happy "That's enough now" Rob laughs and says "Yeah u guys are arguing like….hindi was da words oh ya pati patni mia biwi, u guys make a gr8 couple u should get hooked and well seal it with marriage".

Tans and Lucky got really angry and Tans says to Rob "shut up Rob I wouldn't marry him even though he was the last guy on earth, if u wanna marry him then so do, but next time get u facts right Rob u understand u idiot", now Lucky also got angry and said "who wants to marry u I h8 u, I wouldn't marry u if u were the last girl on earth, and besides I don't believe in love and marriage, I think it's total crap and rubbish who wants commitment no one u need freedom in life".

Alisha got upset and said to Lucky "u shouldn't say that Lucky love is a beautiful feeling and when u will fall in love u will find out and love doesn't snatch freedom and", before she can complete her sentence Lucky interrupted her and said "Oh plz not the love lecture again Alisha, u don't know but I know love is crap have u ever seen anyone happy when there in love, no its just stupid they show in soaps but its not reality it's just a stupid feeling".

Alisha isn't happy but before she can say anything, Tans interrupt and says " Love is nothing and yeah people say love is everything and all, but really love is nothing its just a feeling it gives u nothing besides tears, and sadness meaning the deeper u fall in luv the deeper shit u get in to" Alisha didn't agree with what Tans was saying "But Tans Love also gives u happiness it makes u happy, u feel u are the most happiest person, u dream about the person u love and the feeling is everlasting, even though u are together or not it's called true love" Tans and Lucky still didn't understand what Alisha was saying, they both were like "WHATEVER!!!!!!!".

Alisha again tried to explain to them but again Tans and Lucky didn't listen, Tans said "I don't believe in Love its crap Alisha im sorry but u chat bare" Lucky spoke and said "Yeah Im wiv her on dat".

Rob spoke and said "Ok guys enough about Love we all have different opinions, Sams coming if she hears us talking about love she will go mad", it was too l8 Sam heard and she was very angry and said "Rob I heard what the hell in this house no one is aloud to talk about love, ur lucky Kripa isn't here otherwise it wouldn't been good for u lot, anyways I h8 the word love too I don't wanna hear it either, and if u cant understand that then u betta learn, b4 u get ur ass kicked".

Rob spoke and said "Well Sam everyone has different views and opinions I myself don't believe in it and by da way Raj was saying yesterday he loves u and all", Sam got really angry and said "Yeah that bloody idiot proposed me he was like Sam I love u will u marry me, I was like WTF marry u no ways, I told him I don't believe in love and marriage, no ways u know I need my freedom I live my life my way I h8 commitment and responsibilities, it's all crap"

Alisha spoke and said "Sam he was serious about u how could u do that" Sam laughed an said "Well as u know Alisha I am not nice like u and all he was an idiot, (her phone rings) Hello yeah sweetie I will be in Uni in a few mins, and yeah we will go club in da evening yeah ok Veer darling bye" Alisha was very angry with Sam how could she play with peoples hearts, she said to Sam "What is this Sam? Ur again going out with someone don't u have feelings, u just broke someones heart yesterday and u care a damn, and today ur with someone else"

Rob spoke and said "Alisha u know Sam she can't stay with 1 guy and feelings are nothing for her right Sam" Sam spoke happily and said "Absolutely right Rob as u guys know Sam h8s family and has no feeling for anyone, besides my Gang u guys as we are all good friends and Alisha u know me, I am never serious for a guy they are only time pass for me, and u know if one guy goes big deal there are plenty of fish in da sea right, anyways ur too nice Alisha u wont get it I will see u guys in Uni I am going, Lucky I am taking ur car"

Lucky heard this and went mad "WHAT!!! NO WAYS!!!!! Sam I have to go Uni too, don't be sad don't take my baby" Sam said "Well I am sorry I gotto my cars in da garage, and I am getting l8 Veers waiting for me u come with ur Tans ok" Lucky and Tans were confused and what Sam had said. Lucky spoke and said "WHAT!!!! NO!!!! I am not going with her, and what do u mean my Tans" Sam spoke and said "Come on Lucky it's no need to be shy I know u like Tans" Tans got offended and said "Shut up Sam me and lucky are only friends", Lucky also said the same, "Yeah Sam me and Tans are only friends ok and u aint having my baby take Robs car"

Before Sam can ask Rob he spoke and said "Sorry well u can't take mines me and Alisha have no lectures in da morning, so we are going shopping", everyone was shocked to hear this Sam laughed and said "Shopping and u omg Rob what's happening? Kya tum paagal toh nahiye hoge" Rob said to Sam "I am not paagal ok woh toh Sujal Bro took Alishas car, so I am going with her I will sit in da car and she will go shopping" Sam got her handbag and got Luckys car keys and said "Whatever I am off ok Lucky I am taking the car u go with ur Tans bye" "Sam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Lucky said it was too l8 Sam had gone.

Alisha spoke and said "Tans take Lucky with u ok and I don't want a no for a answer" Tans had no choice she had to agree "F9 chaloh Lucky", "Ok f9 Tans can I drive plz" said Lucky, "No I am driving ab chaloh l8ers Alisha and Rob" Lucky spoke and said "ya l8ers"

Lucky and Tans leave and so do Alisha and Rob

PREVIEW- THE GANGS UNI

-JOSH AND SHAZ ARRIVAL

-INTRODUCTION OF KRIPA

Hiya everyone I want atleast 10 comments before I post da next, so to all da silent readers and everyone else plz do comment 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
~reserved!~
omg talented much?
i loved this part!!
kripa's entry still on hold huh? 😆 😆
can't wait
i really love this ff and i'm jealous of your writing skills!
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ix iishiqaa xo

~reserved!~
omg talented much?
i loved this part!!
kripa's entry still on hold huh? 😆 😆
can't wait
i really love this ff and i'm jealous of your writing skills!
cont. soon

Thx a lot Ishiqa 😃 Yep Kripas entry will be in da next part hopefully

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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

i just caught up the whole story finaly, it was rocking cant wait for more! btw what did you do to my Lakshya😡 why is he playing such a bad role and why are you with him😡 not fair poor me😔Dost Hi Dushman Nikla, Kiya Kismat Hai Hamari😭😭continue soon👏

Lova, Laiba

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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
still waitin.
nice part nd i really luved their arguments
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

i just caught up the whole story finaly, it was rocking cant wait for more! btw what did you do to my Lakshya😡 why is he playing such a bad role and why are you with him😡 not fair poor me😔Dost Hi Dushman Nikla, Kiya Kismat Hai Hamari😭😭continue soon👏

Lova, Laiba

lol, laiba your so silly hun, but i loved your comment and dont worry about lakshya......he is fine with me😆😆 and we will continue soon, glad you liked the ff😉

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