ff:The unembellished emotion rn-pt17b p43

swati

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Posted: 17 years ago

#241

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#242

it was amazing!! please keep it going and update soon!! :)

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Usha Rani

@quietrajpri1623

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Posted: 17 years ago

#243

hey Pracchi....it was a marvelous update...RN part was amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing.....very well written dear..thanku sooo much for this outstanding update 👏 ....really great...

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Yasmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#244

wooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i really love your fic the way you write and all is just amazing i also loved i have to admit i was one of your silent readers but this part has made me just comment on it, i really loved it especially the part with pam lol i could just imagine what must have gone through raj bechara 😆 😆 😆 and cuddle awwwww what a cute name, and raj naina convo actually wait naina and mr cuddles convo was cute and when he talked about his dog pepper 😆 anyhoooooo great update 👏 👏

take care 😃
yasmin

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koolarch2001

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Posted: 17 years ago

#245

good one dear.. waiting for the next update.. 😊

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varun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#246

too good
so naina caught raj
poor raj
ab maza ayega

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#247

Awesome!!!Too good!!!Mindblowing!!!!Ok....I am out of words!!!! 😊

I knew it!!Mask ball means trouble ... mystery .... suspense and pretending to be someone else behind the mask!!!!

Raj and Naina convo was too good!!!!How naughty of Raj 😳 😳 !!!!Naina getting possessive about Raj.....she is still the same...tab bhi thi aur aaj bhi hai!!!! 😳

But did he really have a dog or was that also made up story??

Naina's feelings were very well portrayed.....at one side attraction to Raj and on the other side thnking that she is betraying him jab ki dono hi wohi hai!!!!

But Naina bhi kam nahi akhir pehchaan hi gayi......kyun nahi akhir apne pyaar ko kaise na pehchaanti!!! 😳

Prachi...you really are great!!!!But yaar you left it at such a bad point!!!!I am dying of suspense!!!Aage kya hoga!!!!

But yaar ab dono ko mila hi do!!! 😊

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litika

@litika

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Posted: 17 years ago

#248

YAYYYY.....u finally updated and it was beautiful....the emotions, their convo and naina figuring out that it was raj...hahahah superb..well update the next part soon plz.. 😛

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daisy_luvs_ ff

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Posted: 17 years ago

#249

after a long time i m reading this ff again.........
u r toooooo good, darling 👏
the updates are superbbbb and marvellous.........dont u ever doubt ur writing capabilities, coz u r a gr8 writer, and i love this ff.
the way u wrote abt the pangs of jelousy, its just yummmmy!!

plzzzzzzz do update soon, i m dying to read more!!

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#250

it was a gr8 updt ....loved raj n his style

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