ff:bas yeh pal part-3 updated

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Posted: 18 years ago
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this story is about our favourite jodi shiv and gauri.Gauri belongs to a poor class family,after her parents death she is left alone with her cunning her.Shiv is a play,a successful businessman and a orphan.

WHAT HAPPENS WHEN GAURI'S UNCLE ACT AS A PIMP AND SHE IS SOLD TO NONE OTHER THAN OUT DARLING SHIV

plz comment so i can continue my story

ok i'll start my story from there when gauri is sold to shiv but her uncle says that she is just the care-taker of house.

PART-1

Gauri enters the large kapoor mansion,she is welcomed by a servant who takes her to a room.

Servant:sir is waiting for u,there(he points towards a room)

G:ji

as she enters the room,she notices a beautiful bed with silk sheets,paintings,flowers,deep blue curtains with a very attractive window suddenly her gaze turns to a well-built body/brown eyes/black hair as if she has seen a greek god

G(thinking):he must be a savior from god thats why he gave me the job

G(to shiv):ji mein woh yahan

suddenly shiv lifts his eyes and then smiles evilly he starts coming towards gauri which scares her she starts moving back suddenly shiv forcefully catches her arm and says"you'll be a fun" gauri seemed nervous and wanted to pass by but his grisp was too strong and when the next moment she was going to scream she found shiv's lips crushing hers,he held her waist and crushed his body against her chest,he forced his tongue into her mouth as she seemed horrified,suddenly shiv pulled apart and when he saw gauri juicy lips trembling he again had a urge to taste it as gauri was about to escape in no time shiv against crushed her lips with his with double-passion this time

after pulling apart shiv looked inot gauri eyes there were strange and mixed expression which he never saw in any girls eyes 1st it was disgust,shame,grief,and last fear.he said

S:whats ur name??

G(IN TREMBLING VOICE):ga..gauri chatterjee

S;i like it

S:do you know who i am(she nooded negatively)then he said i am shiv kapoor i am your master and now i OWN you

Gauri was shocked,tears formed in her eyes as he said that he stared into her black kohl eyes and said

S:you dont have to do anything you just have to give me pleasure,you have to sleep with whenever i say

Gauri was shocked she started nodding her head negatively to this and started from away from shiv,shiv lost his temper and.....................


PART-2

shiv picked up gauri in his arms and within no time she was thrown on bed,shiv moved back and locked the door behind him,he then started moving towards gauri,gauri was too scared that she started moving back on the bed,shiv then came near the bed and dragged gauri on the bed so as to flattened her,she was begging to let her go,tears were rolling down her cheeks,she pleaded

g:plz leave me i m just 20 and i dont want to loose my virginity

shiv was taken aback by her answer he thought

s(thinking):is she really a virgin?????but soon he brushed his thoughts off and smiled emilly and said:then it will more fun

s:dont worry it wont cause you much of pain,even you may love it

g:plz leave me,what is my mistake,i did nothing wrong to you

s:no you never did,but u are now sold to me

g(IN TREMBLING VOICE):no, i just came here for the JOB of a caretaker

s(by touching her cheeks and scaring her till death):your uncle is a pimp,he solded you to me

gauri was really shocked now,she assumed it as her fate,she couldd not still believe that her very own uncle gave her to a devil,she has almost died,she is like a body which has heart but lacks beat,now she did not protested shiv becoz she knew god is playing dice with her,so gauri did nothing but instead closed her eyes

shiv was astonished that gauri has stopped protested but again devil came over on him and he took off his shirt and then pulled away gauri's dupatta off her shoulder and started kissing her voilently he then unzipped her dress and started kissing her leaving not a single part untouched and then the screen goes blurry 😭

next part: next morning

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok il luv ths story

shiv and gauri are sooo flipping adorable

cnt wait to read it

start soon

ps: will it be in english or hindi?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nihita

luv the first part

it was great

shiv and gauri met

shiv u 😔

he just gobsmacked heršŸ˜†

didnt even the poor gurl a chance to talk

wohoo !!!

ctn wait to read more

tnx for the pm

ctn soon


dammy

Edited by damilola - 18 years ago
nihita thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys i know u all will beat me for making shiv evil but believe me devil will only give way to love
damilola thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

guys i know u all will beat me for making shiv evil but believe me devil will only give way to love

dnt make him evil !!

he is tooo cute for evil

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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic ff šŸ‘

i luv it !!

wats shiv gonna do nxt ??

poor gauri !!!

her unkle's a pimp šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

i luv the srory line

ctn soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
poor gauri, shiv is evil but mysterious too.loved it.
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice nice ...plz continue soon!!

bisma
nihita thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-3

NEXT MORNING

as sun hit the room gauri started opening her eyes to discover the familiar surroundings then she realised that she is not at home,she felt a pair of arms around her waist she looked to see the person and automatically tears welled up in her eyes.

she recollected the last night events SHIV TELLING HER THAT SHE HAS BEEN SOLDED BY HER UNCLE/HE OWNS HER/HE FORCES HER ON BED.

gauri suddenly took the sheet and cluntched it to her breast and without giving any second thought she grabbed her clothes and quickly made her way towards bathroom(with the sheet)

gauri pulled away the bedsheet and turned on the shower,she started questioning god
gauri:why it happened to me,i never did anything wrong to anyone then why its me,maa said "everything happens for good"what now what is ur(GOD)wish;but what happened to me will not happen with others i'll make Mr.Shiv Kapoor a human who'll know to love and to be loved,within one month not completely but yes some good changes will be there within you,i'll put everything on stake for changing you,as much i know(as shiv is a well known personality)you never got true love so you dont know the meaning of love and life,but i'll teach you that i promise,you'll come across the colours of life and from today i'll put my plan into

gauri made her her way of the bathroom in yesterdays clothes only,and found shiv sleeping

she made her way downstairs without making any noise..........

in the room

shiv opened his eyes and found no sign of gauri

shiv(thinking):where the hell she is!!!!!may be she ran away early in the morning...nah its not possible i OWN her,she's my property ,but what if she had done something wrong to herself...maybe suicide wait why i am so concerned,may be i should just go and get myself fresh first,then i'll see to her

with that he mde his way towards bathroom

after 15 minutees shiv came from the bathroom was dressed in casual wears ,he quickly made his may downstairs for the breakfast,then he saw something and started shouting

shiv:teddy????teddy?where are you

(teddy is shiv's servant)

in response what shiv received was silence,he again shouted for his name,then he saw a beautiful creature coming out of the kitchen,shiv at once recognised and said

shiv(questioning look):what are you doing in kitchen ,and where's teddy(he then noticed the juice in her hand)and said with confusion"what are you upto and parathas teddy knows i dont like it"

gauri(politely an in a low voice):actually sir.. teddy was not feeling well,so i asked him to take rest for sometime,i said i'll prepare the breakfast but i forgot to ask what you always want for the breakfast and it was then too late he already left the place,so i made parathas(she almost said the last line in a whisper but shiv heard it)

shiv was now staring at her in disbelief she had the opportunity to run away but she never did that,she was taking pain for a stranger who is a servant and fter yesterday's incidence still she is polite,calm and composed(his thought were disturbed when he heard gauri's sweet voice asking something)

shiv(immediately):huh????......what did you say????????

gauri:if you dont like parathas then tell me what you want to have i prepare that si...sir......

shiv:firstly stop calling me sir and with his attitude he said i have a name that too very influential,its shiv and for now toast and butter will do fine.

as gauri left shiv started thinking :is she belong to this world only?today when everybody is being selfish,this girl is actually living for others she is too good for this world.wait what the hell i am thinking i should not think about her and to convince himself he said:OK i own her thats why she's rendering her services...oh!!!!!!!!!ya..... this the only reason nothing else

after sometimes gauri brought shiv breakfast,shiv noticed that while having his breakfast that gauri is not having her breakfast and is busy in doing dusting of the whole house but shiv being ARROGANT shiv never bothered to ask about it and after having breakfast he quitely left for the office


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part nihita

omg !!!!!!!!! she had the chance to run away but she didnt

y !!!!!! i wuld have legged it if i was her

aww shiv is see her being soo nice hope he falls for her soon

great part šŸ‘

absolutely luved it

laterz

dammy

Edited by damilola - 18 years ago

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