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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
next part : sweet deception

about the passion, and pain...of dev...his burden of th etruth, shylocks pound of flesh that hangs like asword over his head... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Press Fiasco part 4 : sweet deception

He smiled softly at her," we are not done yet, sweetheart" – No, she came to reality with a start. What could she say. A soft smile touched her lips, her eyes never more soft. He led her back to the 2 chairs that had miraculously appeared as they danced. Her look was filled with awe – What now. He clapped his hands as the curtains went up to show a few people dressed in costumes. He handed a card to her and said – it is a play "Merchant of Venice. To be performed by a very good group also from London." She was stunned. But he was sitting down and she slowly followed.

Tears flowed down her eyes, as heart was ripped apart by the cruelty of human nature – shylocks dry, cold demand for his pound of flesh. The lover's agony at the judgement that hung like a sword over their fate, and finally the judges decision which changed the course of the entire story. Time to time he glanced at her discretely his gaze bleak as a similar fate awaited him and Kaajjal. It was approaching soon. He didn't want to see the watch.

She was crying softly as it ended and stood up to give a standing ovation even as her tears continued to fall.

Finally he turned to her – So that's it. She just went into his arms wordlessly, hugging him tight, her actions saying it all. He slowly returned the hug, a single tear falling from his moist eyes, dark with pain. His throat working hard to keep the tears at bay, closing his eyes tightly unable to hide the turmoil in his heart.

He had booked a room for them to rest till the time for the press conference. She looked at the room and smiled. He thought of everything. He was watching her and she turned with a smile.

But her smile quickly faded as he came towards her, his eyes telling her what he wanted – her pulses began to dance their slow but crazy beat rising in crescendo. His lips were gentle at first, slowly moving over her teasingly. She trembled as her arms slowly went around his neck. Her fingers combing through his hair and he groaned softly. "Kaajjal -…." ….his lips found the base of her throat. His mouth was warm and grew more demanding as she responded with fervour.

He paused just slightly to take his jacket off, then his bowtie followed. She waited her breathing still shallow he took her hand and then suddenly carried, her eyes flew to his and he smiled at her softly. She smiled back, listening to his heart racing just as her own.

He lay her down on the bed, his eyes flickering over her face constantly. He first took out the jewellery one by one. First came out the necklace, and his lips trailed over her neck slowly. Then followed the earrings one by one, his lips nibbling each ear lobe, pleased to see her tremble more, her hands pressing down his neck. His hands shook slightly as he undid the butterfly clasp made of mother of pearls and a pale gold setting. He moved away the beautiful fabric from her and his eyes flickered to hers…she closed her eyes, as she saw the throbbing desire in them raging like a flood.

His lips found the softness of her stomach and she had to bite her lip to stop the electric shock that went thru her as he found spots she didn't know exited in her. She heard another rustle as his shirt came off. She gasped softly as his bare skin touched her. "Devv…." He was the composer again, leading her into another superb ballet, another special swan dance. His breathing was getting equally shallow and raspy, as he found her lips again. His silence composition was once again as powerful as the great composers themselves who once led their magnificent orchestras.

sammy 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
final part on this press - fiasco

the press fiasco itself - the painful departure of dev...and kaju...but sammy wont seprate them for long keep watchin 😃
sammy 😛
hope this longs the depression era...and snaps you guys out of it...if not listen to mozart....romanzo 😳
sammy 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
Beautiful, magical....like some dream...all pure white...virginal as you put it. I still have tears in my eyes..and my heart still hurts with the sweet romance.....

Brilliant Sammy. I will not paste emotions and insult you. As it was a class apart.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Beautiful, magical....like some dream...all pure white...virginal as you put it. I still have tears in my eyes..and my heart still hurts with the sweet romance.....

Brilliant Sammy. I will not paste emotions and insult you. As it was a class apart.....

thanks autumn...this was for you guys,...for your never say die ...attitude for the constant support ...and thw wyas ypu have brought DPs and DK into our hearts....

this is how i see them...so now you see they can never die for me...to me they are will be eternal..

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...............that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaar Sammy where do get such brilliant ideas from haa?? I am sooooooooooooooo mesmerized!!! Haiii... maar daala!!! That was terrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiifiicccccccc!!!!!!!! 👏 Hats off to you!!!! Kya sizzling scene tha!!! Wow! I also luuuuuuved Devu baby's mindblowing surprises!!!!!! Lovely!!! Aur at the end wo DK scene!!!! OOOOhhhh!!! You just blew me up!!!! Fantastic!!!! Continue soon dearie!!! By the way, you are not gonna kill DK are you???? 😭 😭
Anyways that was incredibly breathtakingggg!!!!!! I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuved the way Devu baby's lips were trailing down Kajju's neck!!!! I am sooo speechless. I think I will need to get admitted to some ICU as I am running out of oxygen. Ha... ha... ha... just kidding. Lekin, that was verrrry verrrry well written. I was having a terrific blast while imagining all those lovely scenes. Continue asap. 😃 😛

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey, Sammy by the way, when will you continue your DK Moussourie magic FF??? I am dying to read about the chwwweeeetttt and scintillating Tabela romance!!!! 😳

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: gambi

Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...............that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaar Sammy where do get such brilliant ideas from haa?? I am sooooooooooooooo mesmerized!!! Haiii... maar daala!!! That was terrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiifiicccccccc!!!!!!!! 👏 Hats off to you!!!! Kya sizzling scene tha!!! Wow! I also luuuuuuved Devu baby's mindblowing surprises!!!!!! Lovely!!! Aur at the end wo DK scene!!!! OOOOhhhh!!! You just blew me up!!!! Fantastic!!!! Continue soon dearie!!! By the way, you are not gonna kill DK are you???? 😭 😭
Anyways that was incredibly breathtakingggg!!!!!! I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuved the way Devu baby's lips were trailing down Kajju's neck!!!! I am sooo speechless. I think I will need to get admitted to some ICU as I am running out of oxygen. Ha... ha... ha... just kidding. Lekin, that was verrrry verrrry well written. I was having a terrific blast while imagining all those lovely scenes. Continue asap. 😃 😛

Zareen.

Zareen seems like you think DK are no more in my FF. Well you could go and double check again....😆

Well as for you Sammy keep this up and I surely will fall ill 😆😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Zareen seems like you think DK are no more in my FF. Well you could go and double check again....😆

Well as for you Sammy keep this up and I surely will fall ill 😆😳

awww....autumn....DK are always alive in your FF...if those those sagas...you were doing...are any indication...i am still reading them once again...tears in my eyes...i plan to write along, long reply when i finsihs as it you know my replies can go really lengthy😃😃

autumn dear.😳..you have kept us goin so long - you and kashu, i wnated to do this for you....if i could make you guys even a lil less depressed it will have been worth it dearest, sweetest sister of mine...i mean it😳

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: gambi

Hey, Sammy by the way, when will you continue your DK Moussourie magic FF??? I am dying to read about the chwwweeeetttt and scintillating Tabela romance!!!! 😳

Zareen.

hey zareeen😳...i have posted both links to you😳....mussoorie magic is happening...like i warned save your oxygen, sammy is in a relentlessmood...a wounded tiger...never rests....and now...i am at peace...for more...i will be ending the 2 FFs soon, as the show draws to an end...at least for us all DKians and apu fans..😳..but they wont die i rpomise....a girl guides honour😃

sammy😛

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