'Dhadkan'~P13 IMP UP~ lakshya accident - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: .:::SHONA:::.

wwow lovely and awsome parts.....cont. soon....
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Shona 😳

thank ya so much shona.......(love ur new id name).....keep reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Khushi3e

its brilliant 😊 pls cont soon 😊

thx........keep reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita fan

gr8 part ..cont soon..!!!!!

thx for atlast commenting my bff........keep commenting

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

heres the next part..hope u all will like it

lemme remind all of u that saksham has failed once so he is wid p2 n as i mentioned in my intro....kt is very intelligent thats y shes wid lakshya

kabir: hello??

A: hello papa......??

k: haan anjali beta.....kaisi ho??

A: mein theek hoon papa....actually....mujhe apse permission chahiye thi??

k: kaisi permission??

A: papa mein apni khood ki self-respect banana chahti hoon so i thought that i shuld work in sum other company...rather than our owns....

k: theek hai anjali.....agar tum aisa hi chahti ho so its fine wid me.....but do u noe which company u'll join??

A: wohi mein soch rahi thi papa......can u give me sum idea.....??

k: haan.....mere ek business frnd hain.....Mr. Raj khanna.....u dont u join his company???

A: is taht ok wid u??

k: haan.....toh u'll join it....

A: yes.....thx papa.....bye

k: bye

anjali decides that she'll, the next day, go to the company which her father recommended..............n take up a job...........

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In p2's class:

the teacher gives out the test papers which were quite easy for p2 but not for saksham.....saksham was sitting beside p2

S: tum mujhe plz iska jawab bata do gi....

p2: so sorry.....liken yeh ek test hai aur mujhe nahin lagta ke tumhe cheating kar wana would be right....

S: plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....tumhara naam kya hai...

p2: prerna.....

S: kaisa budhoon (old) naam hai

p2: vtt?????

S: i mean....

p2: but call me p2....

S" okies.....but...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzz help me.............................

he takes her pencil box/pouch

p2: arre.........yeh kya kiya tumne............wapas karo

S: pehle tum meri help karo

p2: acha mein karti hoon.....batao.....kaunsa question hai

S: yeh.........

they exchange their papers......p2 answers that question n exchanges back..............the bell rings n they hand over their papers to the teacher........now was home-time.....p2 came out of her class to search for lakshya but she couldnt find her.........just then

S: thank u so much...............tumhara naam kya tha........haan.........p2..........thx sweety......

p2: ur welcum liken tum apna naam toh batao

S: saksham....................

during their convo...a group of 3-4 girls pass by p2-saksham.....saksham whistles n tries to flirt......

p2: yeh tum kya kar rahe ho......(confused abt saksham's nature)

S: none of ur business....anywayz.......

he bents forwards n kisses her on the cheek

S: thx hunny for helping

n p2 is left all in shock........the men who have ever kissed her where her dad n 2 brothers...............she was stunned..............

S: see ya.....

n she is still in amazement....................

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kunal gets ready n goes to meet his dad in the office............

K (while knocking on the door): can i cum in??

R: sure...........toh.........kaisa tha tumhara match.....

K: good.........aapne mujhe office bolaya tha??????

R: haan........................woh kuch zaroori kaam tha

K: vt?? (while drinkng water)

R: kunal......mein chahta hoon ke tum office join karlo

just then...kunal spits out the water.........

K: vtttttttttttt????????????????

R: kyun?? is there a problem??

K: actually..................

R: no ifs n buts.......kal si hi tum office join karo...........

K: ok dad...............

R: meet u tomorrow in the office..........n be punctual........

K (making an OMG face): yes dad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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lakshya cums to take p2 from her class....he sees that p2 is a lil confused....

L: p2...kya hoa??? itni hairaan kyun ho??

p2: woh........kuch nahin bhaiyya.....

while they were walking to their car.....lakshya tripped over his feet...........bumped into sum1......................that sum1 was our kt n now he was holding kt in his arms......

kt n lakshya together:dubaraa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

then they both laugh...........take up the right position......

L: im so sorry kt.........

kt: no lakshya..it fine............

p2: bhaiyya.....ap theek toh hain???

L: haan.mein tuh theek hoon liken kt theek nahin hai

kt: no no.....im absolutely fine.........

p2: apko kahin lagi toh nahin???

kt: lagne se bachaa jo liye apke bhai ne

p2 coughs.......................

kt: anywayz..thx for saving me.........bye

L: bye

p2: chale bhaiyya..............

L: haan.....chalo................

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next day:

anjali is all set to go to her new job.......she goes to the "khannas" empire n is told to wait as the boss is busy............

on the other hand.......kunal cums to the office.........right on time..............his dad was very happy to see him

R: acha hoa ke tumne is baat ko toh seriously liya......acha.lemme show u our accounts department....

he takes kunal to show various places in his company................

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anjali (thnks to herself): yahaan toh kaafi der (late) ho rahi hai..mein tab tak coffee pei leti hoon......

she heads towards the cafeteria..............buys a coffee n as soon as she turns.........she bumps into kunal n all the coffee is spills on kunal n anjali's clothes.......

A: im so sorry....................(widout seeing who it is)

K: its no............

she turns her face to his n

A: tum???

K: tum?!?!?!?!

-to be cont...........

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hope u all like this part as well.............to noe vts up wid anjali n kunal.....keep reading n stay tuned......

n doooooooooooooooooo reply.........

luv

hoor

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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
👏 👏 👏 loved p2-s and lkt scene 😳
update soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
luvd it!!hw to kunal anjali know eachother.
contunue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
LK scene was sooooooooooo cute 👏
hoor continue soon! 😛
love ur BFF,
aliya 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
thats great loved all the scenes specially the L-KT bit
plz continue soon
Tuba
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
awesome parts sorry for not replying before but love all those parts the most Lakshya & Kt's scene!!👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
The love stories are starting to take a place in your FF.... 👏 👏 Amazing job.... Love all your jodis and your ff part. Plz continue soon, as it's getting really interesting after each part.

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