The Strange Path AK SEE PG 31!! IMP LINK!! - Page 4

well i cant seem to predict the future no i dont think its because of the names people are not commenting maybe not many people have read it yet as i myself had read it yesterday

i read the ff today it is amazing i right now cant guess anything but as the story progress then i may guess cont soon it a briliant story so far 👏

Originally posted by: armaghan0

well i cant seem to predict the future no i dont think its because of the names people are not commenting maybe not many people have read it yet as i myself had read it yesterday

hey armaghan! thanks a lot for the comment.😃 i think ur right that not many ppl have read it yet. i hope they start reading this fic soon. 😛 keep reading the fic and im just going to post the next part.

Originally posted by: nature099

i read the ff today it is amazing i right now cant guess anything but as the story progress then i may guess cont soon it a briliant story so far 👏

hey nature 099! thanks for liking the ff.😳 i m so glad that ppl are reading it and commenting as well.😃 At this moment, i can just say that keep reading and commenting on ff. i really need them. 😛

The Strange Path

RECAP: He regretted all the things he said to Aarzo as soon as he realized what he had ACTUALLY said by seeing the effect of his harsh words on Aarzo. Panic surrounded him as ran towards them, where Aarzo was lying unconscious on the ground with her head in Ali's hand as he tried to wake her, calling her name constantly.

Chapter: 6

It has been almost 3 hours and Aarzo was still unconscious. All of the family members were sitting around her, with Shiza and Afia still sobbing, worried about their dear cousin, Aarzo. "When will she wake up bhaiyya?", Afia asked Ali for the same question she was asking after every now and then. Ali on the other hand, was handling the entire situation from calling the doctor to consoling the family members. The doctor told them that Aarzo is suffering from some kind of shock and hence isn't able to wake up as the shock has hurt her deeply. Zohaib has locked himself in a room and even cried a bit as he saw what he has done, unintentionally. Bade pa, badi chachi, Afia and Shiza were constantly asking Ali what had actually happened that Aarzo was in a state of shock. But Ali just told them that she was really disturbed of some reason and just fainted. He didn't tell anything about the argument between Zohaib and Aarzo, not even to Shiza and Afia. "Afi, just keep praying for Aaru. I am sure she will be fine.", Ali said consoling his sister. All of them were very disturbed about the sudden incident with Aarzo as she wasn't even responding properly to the medicines she has been injected by the doctor.

Ali was still sitting in the same place, beside her bed as he told every one to go and take some rest. He glanced on his wrist watch to see it was 10'o clock, in the night and still there was no sign of consciousness from Aarzo. He was glancing after every 5 minutes at his watch to count how many hours has Aarzo been unconscious for. "Almost eight hours", he told himself. Here Zohaib was outside from the past two hours, at a park, sitting under the dark sky, on which there were no stars tonight……..just the big white lonely moon. He kept praying for Aarzo's well being. He didn't go to see Aarzo once, after he left her with Ali when she fainted. He wasn't able to as he couldn't even stand infront of any of them. He was ashamed of himself for what he did even if it wasn't deliberate.

"Aaru! Buddy, wake up now! Please!!!!!!!!!!!! Aaru please wake up na, if not for us then for yourself. If you become ill like this than how will you achieve your goals? You know that you have to be very strong to be a Lawyer and face those dangerous people who break the laws. And even stronger to read those big fat books of law", he said caressing her hairs. In front of others, he was pretending to be very strong, but only he knew what was he going through, this whole while. He just felt sodistressed/disturbed/angry/concerned………….all different emotions at once. He looked at her again, noticing that her face was still pale and her hands were still cold, much like frozen. He couldn't stop fuming with anger on Zohaib's deed. And more angry on the fact that he hasn't even come to meet her once after what he have done. He kept on thinking about this and didn't come to know when his eyes closed in for a quick nap, out of the tiredness.

"uhu.uhu.uhu", someone coughed so hard that Ali's eyes opened quickly to see who it was. But what he saw just now, made his heart jump with joy and it could be seen in his eyes that were sparkling now. It was Aarzo who just coughed. He checked her pulse and called her name a few times, realizing that she is half awake and half unconscious. He quickly got up and ran to the kitchen to get a glass of water. Zohaib, who has just entered the house, saw him running to the kitchen. He thought it was his chance to finally go and see how Aarzo is. Nobody will be there. He swiftly ran to the room she was in, like a lightning. She was still coughing, harder this time. He ran to her and began to rub her hand so that she could calm down. Here Ali came back to the room, running with a glass filled with water. "Get away from her now!" Ali said screaming a little, trying hard to control his temper. "Ali!! Don't interfere in my matters", Zohaib yelled a little in the same tone as Ali. Ali was about to reply to him that he heard Aarzo coughing louder than the last time. It seemed as if she was choking really hard on something. Both Ali and Zohaib ran to her at the same time, and both sat on each of her side. Ali sprinkled some of the water from the glass on her face so she could come into full consciousness. "Aaru, wake up! C'mon! You can fight this. C'mon Aaru, try hard", Ali kept saying this as he was sprinkling the water on her face. Atlast, Aarzo opened her eyes and the first image she saw in front of her was of her dad. She was still coming out of unconsciousness. "Papa… papa………..don't leave me here. PAPA!!!! Take me with you. I don't wanna live here. Papa please please………………I wanna come with you papa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", she began to cry as the image of her dad faded away. She still had her arms stretched towards the direction where she had seen the image, so that her dad could take her with him. "Aarzo…. Aaru wake up!!! No one is there!!! Can you hear me?", Ali asked, trying to calm her down. But all his tries were going waste as she was still looking in that direction, stretching her hands, and not moving an inch from that place. Her body seemed as a statue sitting like that, not moving, but the tears flowing continuously from her eyes proved it wrong. Ali was still trying but no prevail. Now it was just too much for Zohaib. 'She have to wake up from that state. I will make her do so. At any cost.' he told himself.

"Aarzo!!", he yelled her name in anger. "Wake Up! Will you? And who are you looking for huh?", he said in a very cold tone, turning her towards him by holding on to her shoulders. She still didn't budge, remaining in the same position. "What???? Huh? What are you trying to prove? That I am wrong? C'mon now say something. SAY SOMETHING DAMMIT", he shouted so loudly but to their luck, this room was apart from the other rooms, at the core end of the corridors. "Come into your senses. Are you listening to me? COME INTO YOUR SENSES!! DID YOU HEAR IT? COME-TO-YOUR-SENSES!!!!", he said, fuming red with anger as his hold on her shoulders tightened. He squeezed her shoulders very harshly but left it all of a sudden. He couldn't do it anymore and broke down with tears streaming down his face.

"Aarzo! Please, please wake up….", he couldn't continue any further. Ali, who was just shocked out of his wits with Zohaib's behaviour, also began to sob like a kid as he saw him break down. All this still didn't have much of an effect on Aarzo. She stood and walked to the window, opening it. Both Ali and Zohaib thought that she is feeling fine now, out of danger and just gone to the window to be alone. But they weren't thinking the same for long as they saw Aarzo, taking her left leg out of the window to jump as her right one was already out. Ali and Zohaib ran together towards her and stopped her in the nick of time. Both took a hold of her, getting her out of the window.

As soon as she was standing on the floor, she got a tight slap from Zohaib. It was the first time that somebody had slapped her in her whole life……..until now. Suddenly, Zohaib hugged her telling her how scared she made him as he wouldn't be able to forgive himself if something happened to her. He didn't know when… but Aarzo also began to cry with him. He realized it when he heard her hiccups and just thanked God at that moment. Ali, who was standing at a side, also joined in the hug. At last, Aarzo was fully out of unconsciousness. As soon as Aarzo realized who she was hugging, she pushed Zohaib away with her hand and ran out of the room, still crying. Now, Zohaib and Ali were worried sick that she don't attempt something like she did just now and therefore they also went behind her. They went to her room but she wasn't there. Their tension was increasing by each passing second. They almost lost hope when they didn't find her in any of the room. However, when they came across the big hall, they saw the door of the house opened and without wasting a second, they exited from the house, to find her outside.

It has been almost 15 minutes and some seconds since the two were searching for Aarzo. But the girl was nowhere to be found. It was very late in night so they couldn't even call her name loudly. "Aarzo!", Ali shouted as he saw her crossing the road, nearby them, with a truck coming towards her, travelling on the same road.

So, the part ends here. What will happen in the next part? Will they be able to save Aarzo or this time they will be a little late? What more Aarzo has to suffer?

To know what is in store for all these friends/cousins and the games life will be playing with them, keep reading and COMMENTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really exciting and thrilling part loved it great poor arzo i feel really bad for her well i think she may have a minor accident or zohaib would safe her

Originally posted by: armaghan0

really exciting and thrilling part loved it great poor arzo i feel really bad for her well i think she may have a minor accident or zohaib would safe her

thanks for liking the part. well you will get to know what happened to arzo in the next part. so keep waiting/reading/commenting.😳 😛 😉

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

exellent part, loved it 👏

thanks for liking the part. i really worked hard writing this part.😛 keep reading and commenting. 😳 more interesting parts are yet to come. 😉

nice ff....i read all parts in one go
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: joa123

nice ff....i read all parts in one go
plz cont soon

thanks for the comments.😛 👏 keep reading. i m going to continue in a while.😳