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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: zarna

oh my god wonderful part. awsome job i loved this episode. it was my favorite continue soon.

thanks zarna , will continue soon, be sure to catch my Finalle episode.

Love Aafreen

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nooooooooooooooooo, pls pls pls psl spls psl dont let nething happen 2 them. plsssssssssssssssssss. 😭 😭 😭 awesome part btw, continue soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
FINALLE



Part 18


at this point, Kripa, is in sooooo much shock, and she doesn't realise, whats happening. shes been restraint to go to Angad's Room. everyone was sad,
suddenly the docter comes from his room
everyone gather's around him like children around a clown.
Ang's Doc: well hes been injured really bad and is rib cages have been badly damaged. and many alveoli of his lungs have bursted.

Kripa: what?!?!!?!

Ang's Doc: but don't worry his fire proof jacket saved him from becoming worse.

everyones face turned towards, Kripa with gratitude in their eyes, they were all very thankful to kripa for bringing angad the jacket.

Kripa: can we go see him.
Doctor: yes ofcourse.

Kripa ran towards his room and everyone else followed.
the fist site of Angad, made Kripa fall into tears. and she was unable to see him.

she turned wiped her tears and set her posture straight.
Kripa comming closer to Angad and touching his head: how are you now, sweetie?

ANgAD: hey, g....o aw...ay!!! I , I don...'t want you t..o see me li...ke this!

Kripa: hushhhh!!! don't talk, oh god what has happened to you, Angad don't worry, the doc says your in good condition.

Angad: yeah ,,,, bo...th legs pla....stered and by rib ca..ge damaged its sa....ys it a...lll

Kripa: hahaha, even in such condition, you make sure i laugh. oh Angad, nothing will happen to you, your with me now, and i know we're going to get married.

Nanina: i think angad needs to rest now Kripa, and angad i think you need to stop talking.

Kripa after going out bursted into tears and she couldn't stop blaming GOD for everything.
she prayed day and night she prayed every second.

the next day she came to his room bringing his fav dish from that indian restaurant.

Kripa: hey you look so better now. and you look much better now.

Angad held her chin with his left hand: don't stop those tears for me, were going to be with each other and you have to share with me your sadness and hapiness.

that minut she bursted out outting her arms around him carefully,
Angad: kripa, don't mean to hurt you, but if i might not live, will you promise to take care of yourself.

Krripa in denial: how can you say that ?!?!?!!?!

Angad; i'm not going to top this with sugar to tell you this, my condition is better now, but i can't hope to live, especially if i'm having C. F i might die in 2 das.

Kripa in tears,,,: NO!!!!! please don't tell me that.

Angad: Kripa i have to tell you, that i have never met a girl like you and i know that your best thing that has happened to me,i'm not scared of dying and i'm not afreaid to leave this worl, but what scares me more is to leave you to this world. you have to know that you can never live normally knowing that, you have a tumour, i'm scared, but i know you can face this world. you have to know that if you meet someone else in this world, go ahead with him and take his hand, don't stop with me. i always knew that to deserve you i needed to be more than what i am.

Kripa: Angad, i don't think i can ever give my heart to anyone else other than you and i will walways love you, besides, i don't think yo can loose hope that asily.

Angad: can i get a hug, i just want to be with you right now.

Kripa: ofcourse(kripa in tears)

after Kripa comes from his room, naina calls her from far, and she comes running.
Naina: the doctor has something important to tell us.
oh doctor!! this is Angad's Fiance, Kripa. whatever you have to say you can say to her too,

Doctor: well!! the thing is that Angad has lost his stamina going through CF (cystic fibrosis)his entire life.
i don't thing he can manage to go through so much recovery. i don't think he will be able to survive it.

Kripa's ears went deaf and she went dumb with emotions and she just mumbled and it was like the end of the world, Kripa didn't hear a word after that and she ouldn't imagine that the person she loved the most and cared for the most left her just like that. everything to her seemed so uninteresting, the only thing she wanted was Angad to live, and she just couldn't imagine him slipping away like that. she felt so helpless.

Naina putting her hand on kripa's head, whisch kripa didn't react to: i understand what your going through Kripa,
Kripa didn't answer.

days were passing and now Angad was getting worse, he could speak but it was witout a voice, his breath was now forming his words.

Naina got a pandit, to Angad's last rites for dying.
Anagad didn't seem that unhappy, he told kripa he was going to be in a better place, and told her he would meet her there.

Angad: K...R...I... P...A!!!

everyone was looking for kripa because Angad wanted to meet her. they found kripa and she came
Kripa: yes!!! Angad tell me

Angad: i .. wi..sh i could see.... you ..as..my br....ide.
I'm sorry...

Kripa: no!!! (suddenly it struck her)
she called her mom and told her to bring her wedding dress and told her to bring it as soon as possible.
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Kripa's mom brought the dress in such hurry and Kripa wore it as usual she was looking as beautiful as ever and she just couldn't stop crying.
she went running to Angad's room and she didn't know if he had passed away yet. she was crying so bad on her way, and prayed: o please let him be alive, te see me.

Kripa banged the door and saw that he was on his last breaths, he say her and he smilled and he was soo happy. he tried to say how beautiful she looked and she got that msg even when he couldnt.

Kripa went close to him: "TILL DEATH DO US PART"

ANgad on his last breath: UNTILl PARA...DISE!!
and he passed on, kripa, didn't cry, but was happy he moved on to somwhere he needed not to worry, aout his coughing his C.F and his timie to die. now she knew that she had to wait till her death to meet him.

that day she went to a mountain, and took a red baloon and blew it up and tied it with a yellow ribbon like Angad used to. and let the hot air take it to heaven and she whispered: i love you ANgad, Good Bye, she teared.

far away..... from the mountain, Prithvi Bose, couldn't believe his eyes, he pictured the most beautiful Angel and the most beautiful, maiden he had ever seen.
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THE END
hope you guys enjoyed it, i will be making my other fanfic, FOREVER AND FOR ALWAYS which is the continuation of this story. so look out for that, its comming soon.
hope you guys enjoyed this fan fic.

Love Aafreen




Edited by luviqbal - 20 years ago
rano thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
Oh my god...afreen, you made me cry.You were wonderful. Write another fanfic soon 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
loved it gud job
do start ur new fanfic soon cant wait to read it.
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: rano

Oh my god...afreen, you made me cry.You were wonderful. Write another fanfic soon 👏

thanks alot Rano, it was a great experience writing a fan fic for the first time.

well i will continue the second part of my fanfic in time.

be sure to look for it

Love aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: zarna

loved it gud job
do start ur new fanfic soon cant wait to read it.

thanks alot Zarna, be sure to check out for my next fanfic. i'm glad you like it. thanks alot.

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was wonderful, it was soo sweet,romantic and soo sad at the end, this was an amazing fanfic
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Posted: 20 years ago

the story was beautiful yet the ending was so sad. Tears formed in my eyes as well. That was awesome.

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was soo romantic and also a little sad, great ending 👏 👏 👏
thanx for an awesome story!! 😊

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