Updates: pg.16 Part7 (Lakshentry)-KASHISH - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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loll. jess finally yr backk. withh yrr greatt stories. WB 😊 . lmaoo. GREATT character choices. luvv thee sujal/kashish & laksh/kt idea. && cantt forgett jai/bani. excellent! && yess you mustt continuee for mee. i've been waiting so longg for one of your storiess. i noee this is gonaa be a great onee.

suggestions:

you havee too makee kashish and sujals first meet INCREDIBLE! whichh i noee you will. no doubt boutt that 😉

yourss.

ba3ii k. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 very nice...........continue soon!!!!!! 😛

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice Intro plz cont soon n plzzzzzzz update as son as u can don't let us to w8 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *ba3ykush*

loll. jess finally yr backk. withh yrr greatt stories. WB 😊 . lmaoo. GREATT character choices. luvv thee sujal/kashish & laksh/kt idea. && cantt forgett jai/bani. excellent! && yess you mustt continuee for mee. i've been waiting so longg for one of your storiess. i noee this is gonaa be a great onee.

suggestions:

you havee too makee kashish and sujals first meet INCREDIBLE! whichh i noee you will. no doubt boutt that 😉

yourss.

ba3ii k. 😊

aww thnxxx dear 😳, you know there only ok. 😊

& yes i will make their first meeting incredible 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: 143786

Nice Intro plz cont soon n plzzzzzzz update as son as u can don't let us to w8 😕

yes, i wont i myself want to post part 1. 😊, as fast as possible.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#16

Part 1

"NO!, get away from the building", Jai screams.

"My wife is in there, i have to go get her Jai", the man yells back. Though his voice does not carry all the way over the noise, rukus, fire, screams for help.

"Look at the building, its a disaster, i'm sorry she can't be alive", Jai pleads.

"If you want to come you can, i'm going to get her", the man responds and runs towards the building.

"Wait, De.." Jai tries to finish. But his voice gets buried underneath the sound of the bomb. Blasting whatever was left of the building.

"NO!", Jai screams awakening from his bed.

Suddenly the lights turn on. A woman goes and opens the windows. She turns around, her hair is tied into a bun, her face is glowing with morning happiness, along with tension from her husband's sudden awakening. She is wearing a yellow sari, that Jai had gifted her 42 years from now, on this very day. The first day they had met. But that is another story, that seems like only a dream to her.

"Mr.Walia, aap teek tho hoi", Bani walks with hesitation but love. In her hands is a cup of coffee.

"Huh?, hain mai teek hoon", Jai answers, rubbing the sweat off his forehead.

"Phir se, woh boorah sapna", Bani asks handing him the cup of tea.

"HUH? nahin, merai kaphrai baar kadhlao, mujhe office kailee dhair howrhee hai", he says getting up.

"Teek, hai aj jaldhi aajoa", Bani says.

"Kyun?", he asks back.

"Woh, kuch bhi nahin aise", she says with hurt in her voice. Bani can't believe he forgot.

"Teek hai, koshish karongah", Jai says and goes in to the washroom.

"Patha nahin, aise kyun laghtha hai kai aap khabhi es din koi nahin bhool sakthai, tho aaj kyun", bani questiones herself.

*It is short, but just a lil' begginning, i do hope you like it. i will need atleast 5 comments to continue, so i do not waste room here at IF, i really hope you like it since i'm attached to this story some way or another, hope you guys too will enjoy it*

Edited by mz.jess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY AMAZING INTRO OF KHER FAMILY 👏 . I REALLY REALLY LOVED IT. WOWWWWW KASHISH WILL WORK FOR KASHISH MAGZINE OWNED BY SUJAL WALIA AND JAI WALIA 😉 . THAT'S PERFECT I MUST SAY 😳 !!! ANYWAY CONTINUE SOON PLZ........ CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fravashi

HEY AMAZING INTRO OF KHER FAMILY 👏 . I REALLY REALLY LOVED IT. WOWWWWW KASHISH WILL WORK FOR KASHISH MAGZINE OWNED BY SUJAL WALIA AND JAI WALIA 😉 . THAT'S PERFECT I MUST SAY 😳 !!! ANYWAY CONTINUE SOON PLZ........ CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE. 😊 😛 😊

aww, thnx so much, may i know your name, since you seem to be here often 😳

& nice perdiction, liek the way you think 😊!

& part 1 is postted not that much is given away, just a lil begging for our hunk Jai & beautiful bani.

BUT dont worry sujal/Kashish LOVERS. lots is to come as their first meet 😊😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing intro
i really like your choice of charachters there great
the story sounds really intresting
cant wait 2 read the first part

aw, thanks sweetie, i picked teh characters very carefully

sujal/kashish were a must 😳

& no comments 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww jess. phiqar mat kar. maii agee hoon. 😊

seriouslyy when i first started reading this i was like jess... how could you! loll. but thank god it was a dream. loveed the idea of the start oof the ff, on the same day they met.

greatt job jess. PLEASE DO CONTINUE! i cantt waitt anyy longger && plzz do birngg my hunk in faster. eagerr to read about him 😆

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