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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tere Liye

(For your sake)

A story (fanfic) about 2 characters, Angad aur Kripa.

Here is the first verse of the song for this story:

Tere Liye Hum Hain Jiyeh, Honthon Ko Siye

Tere Liye Hum Hain Jiyeh, Har Aansoo Piye

Dil Mein Magar Jalte Rahe, Chaahat Ke Diye

Tere Liye, Tere Liye

--English translation--

For your sake, I live with my lips sealed.

For your sake, I live, swallowing all my tears.

But in my heart, the lamp of love continues to burn

for your sake, for your sake!

The story

A story of Kripa, she is engaged with a man named Prithvi, she then goes somewhere and meets a person who changes her life, Angad. They both slowly fall in love, after there time they spent together, Angad finds out Kripa is engaged with someone, he is heartbroken.

He tells Kripa, that for his sake, don't tell no-one the time they have spent together, Kripa refuses but after some thinking, she sadly gets married to Prithvi, she doesn't forget Angad. Kripa doesn't see/meet Angad for 2 years...

The story will continue after many comments😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great concept
sounds intresting
cant wait 4 the first part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting šŸ‘


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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love the concept...cant wait for the first part...hurry up and post it... šŸ˜› 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Love the conceptt-- sounds very interesting!! Looking forward to the story! Cont Soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds wicked awesum, nd i LOVE the concept!!! nd the song!!! nd the
title!!! lol... CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful, carry on soon! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the comments everyone!😳

Time to start...

-------------------- Tere Liye --------------------

Kripa was sitting down in her room looking at a thread that a man had wrapped around her wound 2 years ago. She stared at it for a few seconds when Prithvi, her husband came in, she quickly hid the thread behind her and gave a faint smile to Prithvi.

Prithvi came in with 2 cups of tea. Kripa stared at him as he came to sit beside her. Prithvi gave Kripa tea.

K. Thanks

P. Your welcome.

Prithvi just happened to look behind her and saw the thread.

P (thinking). This thread again? Why does Kripa always have this thread with her all the time?

K. Prithivi? Are U thinking something?

P. Nai Nai, lekin Kripa, This thread?

Prithvi picked up the thread slowly. Kripa sighed.

P. Kripa? What is this? Muthlab, why do you always have this with you? Whenever I see you, I always see a thread nearby you?

Kripa was silent, she sipped her tea. She stood up and she took the thread out of Prithvi's hand and marched out of the room.

Prithvi was left stunned.

Kripa was wallking down the stairs crestfallen. All she could think of was her past, the moments she spent with another man. As she was walking down the stairs she stared at the thread. Tears came out of her eyes. She tightly held the thread and sat on the stairs.

K. How do I tell you Prithvi? Mere Aab sai pyar nahi karte hai !!

Please leave your comments for this part😳

The more comments, the more sooner I will start the seocnd part😳

Thanx xx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESUM prt!!! REALLY intriguing!!! but really short too!! next rime can u
PLEASE write a longer prt!!! 😳 & continue soon!!! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

AWESUM prt!!! REALLY intriguing!!! but really short too!! next rime can u
PLEASE write a longer prt!!! 😳 & continue soon!!! šŸ˜›

thanks,😳 i only did a short part because i want to see how many comments i wud get, so i wudnt waste all my effort typing alot😳

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