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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks everyone 😊

[SIZE=7>PART 8:

Angad and Prithvi arrived home and updated Dilip about their trip and the meeting with his old friend, Suryabhan and his daughter.

"Ladki sunder thi kya?" Dilip teased the boys

"Chachaji…sunder bhi aur susheel bhi…..aapkey ghar ke liye bahu material hai….," he winked at Prithvi

"Aisi baat hai….tab tho milna padhega unn logon se….ab hum teen mardon ko sambhalney koyi aa jaayegi…" Dilip was overjoyed

"Chachaji…..yeh tho pata nahin ki wo hamein sambhalegi ya hum ussey sambhalengey…" Angad retorted

Prithvi, who was listening quietly so far, finally spoke up, "Nahin Papa….Angad ki baton mein mat aaiye…..wo bahut achchi hai…aur…" he paused shyly.

Dilip raised his eyebrows and looked at Angad. Angad nodded his head. Dilip and Angad had a good understanding, although they were not related by blood, they could read each other's minds well. Dilip depended on Angad more than he did on Prithvi. Dilip was very happy for his son, he patted Angad's shoulder as if thanking him and left the room.

[SIZE=7>A WEEK LATER:

Suryabhan and Kripa returned from Great Britain. Suryabhan called Dilip Bose on arrival and they set a time to meet each other. Kripa was very excited when she heard that they were going to visit Angad and Prithvi that afternoon.

Dilip was pleased to meet Kripa too. Kripa was dressed in a pink salwaar kameez and looked lovely with her open straight hair, light make up and minimal jewelry. Prithvi came downstairs, when he heard Kripa was there.

"HI Kripa! How was the rest of your trip?"

Kripa smiled, "well….boring…aap log jo nahin the…." Her eyes wandered, "Angad kahan hai?"

Prithvi replied, "Oh…wo tennis khelney club gaya hai….aao mere saath oopar aao, main tumhey photos dikhata hoon….," he grabbed her hand and took her upstairs.

Dilip and Suryabhan caught up with their lives in the meantime. Dilip finally approached the subject of marriage, "Mere bete keh rahey the ki unhey teri beti bahut pasand hai…"

Suryabhan was ecstatic, "Dilip…tumney tho mere mann ki baat keh di…..maine Kripa se bhi baat karr li hai…..mujhey lagta hai ussey bhi dono pasand hain…"

Dilip winked, "Parr Draupdi ka zamana tho gaya ab…..ussey chun naa tho ek hi ko padhega..," they both laughed loudly.

"Dilip…iss maamley mein decision Kripa ka hi hoga….."

"Mujhey tho bas bahu chahiye, chahey Prithvi ki ho ya Angad ki…." Dilip smiled.

PRITHVI's ROOM:

Kripa was impressed with Prithvi's achievements at display, "wow, Prithvi tum apney school ke topper the? Aur gold medal in Engineering school…you are so modest…kabhi bataya nahin…..aur yeh kya…..best singer award in college…..hmm…real all rounder…" she smiled as she looked around.

Prithvi blushed, "Aao Kripa…tumhey photos dikhata hoon…..," he brought his laptop close to her and they both sat down on the bed to check out the photos. Kripa was engrossed in the pictures and did not notice that both Dilip and Suryabhan stood at the door admiring her and Prithvi together. Kripa finally laughed, "Prithvi…tumney meri itni saari photos lee hain….shayad meri poori life mein kisi ney nahin kheenchi hongi….," she looked up and saw the two old men smiling. She got up a little flustered as she did not want them to misunderstand the situation, "Prithvi…Angad kab aayega…..ussey bhi milna chahti thi…?"

"Aao beti…main tumhey club chhod deta hoon….mujhey bhi uss taraf kaam hai…" Dilip offered to drop her at the club

"Thanks uncle…" Kripa was excited

[SIZE=7>AT THE CLUB:[SIZE=7

Dilip dropped Kripa, 'beti andar poonch lena….wahan sab Angad ko jaante hain…mujhey kisi se milna hai…main chalta hoon….Bye!"

Dilip was right, Kripa did not have a hard time locating Angad. He was busy playing a tennis game with another friend. She looked at him admiringly, "Angad….you look so handsome in this sporty look….," she said to herself. She started daydreaming about Angad when she saw someone snapping fingers in front of her face, "kis ke khwab le rahi ho madam?" She snapped out of her dream and saw her prince charming in front of her. She was tempted to hug him, but resisted, "Oh…HI….I didn't see you coming….."

"Mujhsey milney aayi ho?" he smiled

"Nahin, yahan tennis match dekhney aayi thi…" she said sarcastically
Angad laughed, "aao…wahan table parr baith the hain…"

They found an outdoor table and ordered drinks for themselves

"Tho ab batao….how was the rest of the trip?" Angad asked as he sipped his coke

"It was wonderful…tum jo nahin the tung karney ke liye…" she smiled teasingly

"Hmm…meri company mein kaafi kuch seekh gayi ho…." He smiled back.

Kripa became a little serious, "Angad…dar asal mujhey tumsey zaroori baat karni hai…."

Angad smiled, "mujhsey aur serious baat?….main aaj tak serious nahin huya kisi baat parr….achcha bolo…I am all ears.."

"Angad….Angad," she spoke softly, "Angad…..I think…I think…I love you…..main tumsey pyaar karti hoon" she lowered her eyes shyly.

Angad quickly suppressed his initial happiness, as he heard the golden words from her mouth, "Kripa….are you sure?"

"Angad….as you know main ghuma phira ke baat nahin karti hoon….I am very straight forward…..I know I have never been this sure in my life…" Kripa looked up and said firmly.

Angad put his dark glasses on, stood up and turned his back to the table, "Kripa…..I don't want to hurt your feelings, but mainey tumhary baarey mein kabhi aisa nahin socha…."

Kripa stood up and walked a few steps so that she was face to face with Angad, "tum jhooth bol rahey ho Angad…..tabhi tum mujhsey aankhein nahin milaa paa rahey…."

Angad looked away, "Kripa..you are a good friend, but I am not ready to settle yet….aur waise bhi tum mere type ki nahin ho…."

Kripa's eyes were moist now; she said with a husky voice, "Angad….main tumsey abhi shaadi ki baat nahin karr rahi hoon….i just want to hear from you that you also love me…."

"NO I DON"T LOVE YOU!" he turned his back to her again

"ANGAD! DON'T TURN AWAY LIKE THIS!" she pulled his arm, so that he was forced to turn around and look at her.

"Kripa…you are mistaken….Prithvi loves you, not me…"

"I know Prithvi is crazy about me…issi liye main tumsey baat karney aayi thi…I don't want Prithvi's feelings to get hurt….main jaanti hoon tum ussey theek se samjhaa saktey ho ki we both love each other…..why are you doing this me?…..uss din mandir mein jo huya, wo kya tha?….tumhari aankhon ney mujhsey yahi kaha tha na ki Kripa ab tum meri ho….." her tears were flowing non stop.

"Kripa…tum padhi likhi ho karr aise andh vishwaas wali baat kyon karr rahi ho….that was just an accident…just a coincidence.."

"Angad….tumhey jo sochna hai soch lo…..bas itna yaad rakhna ki ek ladki apna dil kisi mard ke saamney tabhi kholti hai jab wo ussey apna samajhti hai…..main nahin jaanti tum kyon apney dil ki baat nahin sun rahey….ho sakta hai yeh mauka phir dobara kabhi aaye ya naa aaye…GOODBYE!" she clenched her teeth in anger and walked away.

Angad turned around and saw her leave; he took off his dark glasses to wipe his own tears, 'I am sorry Kripa….."

…to be continued….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
NOOOO what have u done?
they -well she confessed her feelings so early on. 😳 But why does Angad have to be so selfless?!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
times like this i like selfish people! 😆 😆
awww.. angad sacrificed his love!
prithvi better be grateful and be slefless as well when he finds out!
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww that was sad....
hope everythings better soon..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very suprised, not that Angad sacrificed his love but that Kripa confessed hers so soon! What a girl, what a twist. Can't wait for the next part. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
awwww. that was so sad. i hope ak get 2gether soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part. its good that she confessed her love to him but please let angad also confessed his love to her. please look for another girl for prithvi.

continue soon

mittal 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa is a very straightforward and bold girl in this ff. That is why she went ahead and confessed her love to Angad before it is too late. Angad on the other hand does not express his feelings that easily and is good at concealing his emotions. 😊

[SIZE=7>PART 9:

Kripa went directly to her room after reaching home. She closed the door behind her and sobbed silently. She lay on her bed and buried her head in the pillow. She tried to remember all her moments with Angad…….was she mistaken, that Angad had also fallen for her, they way she had for him?…….her instincts were usually correct…..she had seen the love and passion for her in his eyes….the day they danced together……how protective he was about her in the dance club…….the mandir incident…..NO! HE WAS LYING……but why?……was it because of Prithvi or was there someone else in his life?

As she wiped her tears, she thought, 'mujhey Prithvi sey hi baat karni padhegi….."

[SIZE=7>PRITHVI AND ANGAD'S HOME:

Prithvi saw Angad walking towards his room, "Angad…aaj Kripa aayi thi!"

"Hmm…..Oh really?" Angad did not show much excitement.

"How was the game…did you lose?" Prithvi saw that Angad looked a little low today

"Haan….shayad haar gaya…" Angad said softly in a husky voice, his eyes still moist with tears, he was trying to hide.

"Bahut buri tarah haara hai lagta hai……yaar koyi Wimbledon khelney thode hi gaya tha…." Prithvi was concerned as he noticed the tears in Angad's eyes.

"Achcha….chhod meri baat…yeh bataa…tuney Kripa ko propose kiya ya nahin?"

Prithvi lowered his head, 'Nahin….darr lagta hai….kahin usney mana karr diya tho?"

"Nahin karegi….isski guarantee main leta hoon….aisa karr, aaj raat ussey ek romantic dinner parr lejaa……aur wahin poonch lena…"

"Tu bhi chal na….."

"Nahin mujhey koyi milney aa raha hai…..dinner ke baad Kripa ko ghar ley aana, phir main bhi mil loonga….."

Angad went to his room and dialed a number on his cell, "Hello….Mishti…..haan I need your help now….."

[SIZE=7>KRIPA's ROOM:

As Kripa was pondering on how to approach Prithvi with her dilemma, her cell rang, "Hello…Oh Prithvi?…..Main tumhey phone karney hi waali thi…..kya dinner?….oh……Achcha chalti hoon tumharey saath…wahin baat karr lengey….main 8 baje tayyar rahoongi….Bye…"

Prithvi picked Kripa at 8 in the evening; Suryabhan was pleased with the development, "Jao…beta…have a good time…Angad kahan hai?…jab sey aaye hain, mila nahin"

"Haan….uncle wo aaj busy hai" Prithvi answered. Kripa froze at the mention of Angad's name…..she had not mentioned anything to her father about her earlier meeting with him.

Prithvi took Kripa to one of the trendiest restaurant in town. They had a wonderful dinner. Kripa tried to speak to him about Angad several times, but Prithvi was in an unusually chatty mood that evening. He talked to her about their trip, photography, music, poetry……Kripa never got a chance to say anything. Kripa thought she would speak to him in the car on their way back.

On the way back, Prithvi put on the radio and said, "Kripa….yeh gaana maine tumhare liye chuna hai…..main apni baat zubaan sey nahin keh sakta…iss liye please listen to this song…"

Kripa just nodded and smiled, 'theek hai Prithvi…."

Song-to express Prithvi's feelings:

"jo tum ko ho pasand" from "safar"



Jo Tumko Ho Pasand Wahi Baat Karenge
Tum Din Ko Agar Raat Kaho Raat Kahenge

Dete Na Aap Saath To Mar Jaate Hum Kabhi Ke
Poore Huye Hain Aapse Armaan Zindagi Ke
Hum Zindagi Ko Aap Ki Saugaat Kahenge
Tum Din Ko Agar...

Chaahenge... Nibhayenge... Sarhayenge Aap Hi Ko
Aankon Mein Dam Hai Jab Tak Dekhenge Aap Hi Ko
Apni Zubaan Se Aapke Jazbaat Kahenge
Tum Din Ko Agar...


Kripa had tears in her eyes as she heard the song. She thought, "Ek Prithvi hai jo mere liye kuch bhi karney ko tayyar hai….aur Angad….ussney kaise berahemi se mera dil tod diya…."

"Kya hua Kripa?….maine kuch galat kaha….I am sorry…." Prithvi got worried when he saw her tears.

"Nahin Prithvi…….kuch nahin…..bas aise hi……"

"Kripa….will you marry me?" Prithvi stopped the car and popped the question

Kripa was not expecting that question so soon, her mind was still blurred with Angad and their conversation from the afternoon at the club. She remained silent.

"Kripa…you don't have to tell me now…..i am willing to wait for your answer," he restarted the car and drove home.

"Prithvi…please don't misunderstand me…..main abhi shaadi ke baare mein kuch baat nahin karna chahti…..please muhjey ghar chhod do…"

"No problem….lekin pehley ghar chalkar kisi sey mil lo…..," Prithvi parked the car in front of his house.

Kripa was puzzled but followed Prithvi inside.

"aao…oopar chaltey hain…" Prithvi led the way upstairs when he did not find Angad downstairs.

He knocked on Angad's door. After a little wait, a sleepy Angad opened the door with his shirt unbuttoned and untucked. Kripa was a little embarrassed to see him like that, and stood behind Prithvi.

"Oh…HI Prithvi….bahut der kardi…." Angad tried to button his shirt as he spoke

"Kaun hai jaanu?…." An unfamiliar female voice followed Angad. She was in her mid-twenties, scantily dressed with her cleavage prominently at display , her hair all ruffled.

"OH…Prithvi, Kripa…yeh hai Mishti meri khaas dost…" Angad put his arm around her and winked at them.

Kripa turned red with anger and humiliation, "Prith….Prithvi…please drop me home…." She turned around and ran downstairs.

Angad looked at her back with a painful expression but then smirked, "lagta hai Prithvi mujhey iss roop mein dekh kar ghabraa gayi…..well she will just have to get used to her colorful brother-in-law," he winked at Prithvi again and closed his door.

Prithvi just shook his head, "yeh Angad bhi naa….pata nahi kab sudhrega….KRIPA!" he followed her downstairs.

Kripa looked at Prithvi as he came down, 'Prithvi…I accept your proposal….I am ready to get married to you….."

Prithvi was ecstatic; he held Kripa's hand and kissed it several times. Kripa just stood there like a statute and gradually withdrew her hand, "Prithvi….please ab chalein?"

As they drove back, Prithvi was in seventh heaven but Kripa was trying her best to swallow her tears, "


[SIZE=7]ANGAD's ROOM:

"Mishti…yeh lo aaj ke 10,000 Rs…..ab jab bhi tumhari zaroorat hogi…main bula loonga….same rate…same job….." Angad said coldly

"OK…baba….apney clients ko main hamesha top class service deti…." Mishti spoke in her tapori accent, "waise…aap bahut achcha client ho…..bahut kam zaroorat hai aapki…….sirf acting karna……mujhey pasand hai….aap sachchi bahut sharif aadmi ho….achcha main chalti…" Mishti picked her bag and left.

Angad stood there frozen, unable to respond to any emotions.

Song in background- "main bewafa" from "pyar, ishq aur mohabbat"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-4347.html

(Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar) - 2

Duniya ke sab aashiqon ki todi hai sab maine rasme - 2
Beche hai sab apne vaade, bechi hai sab apni kasme
Bechi hai sab apni kasme
Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

Yeh pyaar ishq aur mohabbat kya hai yeh ab maine jaana - 2
Vaapas magar kaise aaye guzra hua voh zamaana
Guzra hua voh zamaana
Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar


…to be continued….


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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey good part. its not fair that angad always sacrifies for kripa and prithvi always get it what he wants. please don;t do this. this ff makes me cry already 😭 😭 😭

continue soon

mittal 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Aww that was sad...
Both are heartbroken now...

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