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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome FF can't wait for next update.

Love,

Saniya
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awwwwww. cute part. prateek was so funny. hehe. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnk u frndz, 😊 i will update soon but keep writing ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part, aww poor prateek, he got so confused lolz, awesome part, and congratz on completing 150 pages, keep up the good work. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part
the kids r so cute...
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 85

after couple of days,when angad came frm his work,he found kripa playing with diya n prateek in his room.for a moment he forget all his depression which comes after taking a responsiblity of solving a murder mystery.

in the morning,when he got the call frm police head quater ,he had the idea that thr shud b a new investigation but when he went to the place where police found a dead body,angad was shock to see the dead body of a girl in a very objectable condition,n her face n body was totally burned.after some investigation,angad came to knew that....that girl was terribly raped by that rapist n then he burned her, cruely.after seeing of badly abuse n ruined of woman like this ,angad became upset but at the same time he promise himself that he wont leave the murderer ,he said in is heart:"he has to pay the price of this sin"

n now ,when he see his family in happiness n in peace,he forget his depression for a moment but he was still disturb to think abt that murder.kripa felt that angad was looking upset,she said to prateek n diya to go outside n play with gattu kaka.prateek n diya who r too small to understand thr father's(angad)expressions ,happily went outside the room n starts playing with gattu kaka.kripa put her hands on angad's shoulder who was sitting on the couch,she said lovingly:"wat happen?".angad was unable to speak,he just look at kripa .kripa sit right beside him n ask concernly,again:"wats wrong?"this time angad try to convence himself n try to say normally:"nothing..just i got a new case to investigate,thats it".angad doesnt want to share openly abt this murder mystery as he knws that kripa is so much sensitive n she became sad n he doesnt want to make her sad.

kripa look into angad eyes n said:"r u sure,...thr is nothing important".angad slightly noded his head in yes.kripa slightly smile n kiss him on his forehead n said:"u just relax,i will take a cofee for u".she is abt to leave when angad call her name,kripa look him bak when angad passionately hug her,kripa hug him bak but she doesnt understand that y he was so depress n upset.

after a while,when kripa came with a cup of cofee,she found angad reading some medical reports.kripa silently put the cup of cofee on the table,but when she was putting the cup on the table,she saw some envolops n post morterm reports.she rendomly pick up an envolop n open it to see,n when she put her hands inside the envolop,she found a dimond locket.

she ask angad abt that locket,angad said:"i found this locket in the neck of the dead body".kripa said confusingly:"but this dimond locket is quite unique,infact this kind of design n cuts cant made in india,its really precious.....actually i saw this kind of locket in tannu's neck--------".all of sudden kripa realize her own words,she look at angad afraidingly.angad was also stunned.

angad was driving a car in a full speed,kripa was sitting beside him,she keep asking abt where they r going,angad stop the car in front of hospital n walking toward the cooridoor ,angad said:"today we found a dead body n her face was totally burned so nobady can recognise her.n u were said that tannu was absent frm couple of days....so plz try to recognise her face,if u can"angad hesitate to say but his sixth sense was signaling him that she shud b "tannu".kripa feel disgust on angad doubt.she stop in the middle of the cooridoor,she said:"wat u think,angad!it shud b tannu who is dead.".angad said polietly:"kripa!i just want to clear my doubt...thats it".

angad romove a white sheet frm the face of dead body,it hard for kripa to recognise the face,properly but she is shock to see a mole right near her lips,n tannu had a mole near her lips n she was in the same dress in which kripa saw her last time,(a dress which was same as kripa's dress).she afraidingly mumble:"tannu".kripa was loosing her courage when angad took her in his arms for giving her support.he hug her tightly.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aah......i'm sure that vivek had done this........i hate him 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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grt part oh my godit was supposed to happen to kripa but instead happeend to tannu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww wonderful prt ....pooor tannu!!i wonder whoz the person tht killed her???
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
omg murder mystery i hope it doesnt create any misunderstandings betweek AK 😭
my prediction is that vivek asked tannu to help him seperate AK and maybe tannu agreed first....and maybe he either used her and then killed her or she didnt help him so he did that 2 her hmmm 😕

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