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Posted: 18 years ago
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too goodd..very nicely written.. i liked it very much... keep up the good work going... ๐Ÿ‘ me will be waiting for you to post the next part.... ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi3e

๐Ÿ˜Š its great looking forward to next part ๐Ÿ˜Š

thank u so much. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

too goodd..very nicely written.. i liked it very much... keep up the good work going... ๐Ÿ‘ me will be waiting for you to post the next part.... ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thank u so much for commenting. will continue asap๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

continue soon!!! ๐Ÿ˜›

thank u so much.will contiue asap๐Ÿ˜Š

thnank u so much for commenting guys am so sori for not continuong coz i was very busy since i had examz/..dey will get over tomorrow and den i will update both of my ffs tomoorow or the day after. sori once gain to keep u waiting

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Posted: 18 years ago
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waou love ur fandic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aisha1

waou love ur fandic
LOVE EIJAZANITAHHHHHHHHH

thnak u so much..i luv ur ff too. i to luv eijaz anita.ea rock!!ajeev aamna too๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww...i liked it...its sounds cool and a lotta fun...cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

woww...i liked it...its sounds cool and a lotta fun...cont soon

thnak u so much..i promise it will be fun!! sori for the delay my p.c was dwn..am posting the first part right nw๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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troublesandtriumphs


Part 1-"each end has a new beggining"

Sia is crying in her room when pari is supporting her. Rahul and kunal are tsanding tensed thinking of what to do next.
Sia โ€“ I want to make my career and see the biggest obstacle is my own parents.
Pari โ€“ plz sia..dun cry..we will find sum way out
Kunal โ€“ hw did ur parents cum to know ur here.
Sia โ€“ I dunno..they just want me to come back and marry.
Rahul โ€“ hw can they..do this!!
Pari โ€“ we will talk o them
Kunal โ€“ koi fayda nahi..i think sia wen dey dun care about u..why do u care
Pari โ€“ common kunal dey r her parents.
Just then sum1 storms inside the door
They cum
Sia โ€“ mamma..papa
Her mom โ€“ yes beta..we have cum to take u back..tu bina bayae ghar choor di..
Her dad โ€“ hw dare u cum like that.
He takes sia's hand and pulls her out. pari cries and rahul supports her. Rahul buried pari in his chest. Kunal goes to her parents and is pleading them to leave her to live her own life. But when they don't listen he just pulls sia to his side coz of which sia's dad leaves her hand . he is angry to see kunal's reaction.
He slaps kunal. Pari and rahul are shocked and sia is just crying. Pari runs from rahul to sia and hugs her. Rahul also cum ser and supports sia . kunal is just standing emotionless.!! He hadn't ever imagined his life widout his dear friends. Just then sia's father is taking sia again and this time rahul holds her father's hand.
Pari โ€“ uncle..why r u doing this!! She is ur own daughter.
Her dad โ€“ oh so siaโ€ฆmade a good arrangement to not go ha!! Do u even know that hw much I have cried after u went. No beta..i wont let u spoil ur life.
Kunal shouts โ€“ its u who is spoiling her life uncle!!!
Sia โ€“ stop it!! Stop it all of u ..i dun want any of u to fight or bear pain for me.
All are surprised.
Sia โ€“ u want me to cum wid u na..fine..i will!
Rauhl โ€“ Sia??
Sia โ€“ yes rahul..but dun wory I will always be der in all of ur hearts na..
Rahul is shockjed..kunal is like his world hs stopped and pari cant stop crying out bitterly. Sia just hugs pari. Both of them cry.
Sia โ€“ from today pari..u have to bear both of them..
Pari continues crying.
They hug again.
Rahul โ€“ sia..yeh tum galat kar rahi ho.
Sia โ€“ kya fark parta hai..if dis is wat fate has in for me..then ok. Kunal.
Kunal just goes away from der taking out his hand which sia had put in hers.
Sia โ€“ kunal..
Pari โ€“ sia plz..
Rahul โ€“ plz sia..think of it..
Pari goes inside to kunal..
Rahul joins his hands in front of her dad sia cries even more.
Rahul โ€“ plz uncle..let her stay..
Her dad โ€“ dekho beta..at frist I was vey angry to see u ppl supporting her in her wrong. But I respect ur friendship..aur phir am not asking u tppl to break ur friendship..am just asking hr to leave all thsis studies and marry. In r cast girls have to be married by sia's age..if not nwwe den who will marry my daughter..tell me..WILL U MARRY HER?
Rahul and sia are shocked!
Sia โ€“ papa?/
Dher dad โ€“ tell me /..i promise if u promise to marry her .. I will leave her. I know ur family also..i dun have any problemโ€ฆ
Rahul - โ€ฆ
Her dad โ€“ see..u dun have an answer na..coz u wont marry her.and I need to get my daughter married. Beta kehna bahut aasaan hota hai kid is is 21st century and all..but problem mein hote hai we common ppl.
He takes sia and is about to go.
Rahul โ€“ 1 minute uncle.
They turn back.
Rahul โ€“ iโ€ฆiโ€ฆam ready to marry sia!!!!
The words echoed in sia's ears and also in the ears of kunal and pari who just came der .
Rahul โ€“ yes uncle..(he din know kunal and pari wer der) atleast by this she wud be able to fulfill her dream.
Her dad is a little satisfied and feels defeated before the friendship of the four friends, he cudnt say no coz he was the one who put it up. Sia cant sy anything..rahul signals her not to interrupt at all..and her dad is happy for sia that she cud fulfil her dream and also be married. He knew his whol famly and he knew rahul's fanily very well too and knew they wudnt have objection for the marriage. The all four families knew each other very well and wer family friends. He kisses sia's forehead taps rahul's shoulders. He allows sia to stay in London till she finishes her studies and den the two wud be married in India/โ€ฆtheir engagement wud be in London only. Kunl and pari felt shocked..all of a sudden four lives wud change forever!!!
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hope u liked it. sori for ny mistake. or ny prt u din like. do comment..earlier u comment earlier the prt..and dis time i wont be late. and its going to fun ahead i promise![/brown]

Edited by eijaz-anita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
great superb part pls continue soon ๐Ÿ‘

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