lk kt ff

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okayy ppl ... dis z my 1st attempt at writing d ff.. plzz comment

part 1

Its Saturday night and Laksh is gettin ready for a party. Suddenly his friend Aman calls up n tells him dat d theme of d party z changed n its a couples party so get a date along wid u..

Laksh z a cute n charmin guy.. every gurl z mad about him in hz college ... Bt he likes kt so he decided 2 ask her.. He goes to Kt's room n knocks d door. Kt opens d door wearin a beautiful white gown..

KT: Kya hai Laksh?? Kuch kaam tha???

Laksh hz never cen kt look so beuatiful n hez dumbfounded.. kt snaps her fingers in frnt of him

Kt: kahan kho gaye??

laksh : Woh kuch nahin.. actually mein ek party mein jaa raha tha toh socha ki agar tum free ho toh tum bhi mere saath chal sakti ho..

kt: ammm woh laksh actually mein bhi kisi party mein jaa rahi thi tohh sry..

laksh: achaa tum kaunsi party mein jaa rahi ho.. woh actually

suddenly her fone rings

kt: hello.. oh Hi aman.. kya.. acha okk

laksh: tum aman ko jaanti ho???

kt: haan .. kyun??

laksh: nahin kyunki actually mein usi ki part mein jaa raha tha toh fir toh hum saath chal sakte hai naa..

kt: yaa.. y nt??😃 js gimme half an hour i need to get ready😆

laksh: uff ho.. tum ladkiyaan bhi kitna time lagati ho.. tayaar hone main.. acha mein apne room mein wait kar raha hoon..

kt: okayy

Scene shifts to the party area

Its a couple party

The song playin wz" my heart will go on " by celine dion

laksh takes kt's hands n dey start dancing...

srry ppl i end here..

its d 1st tyme ive written a ff... n i noe it sucks.. bt plzz temme should i continue or nt.. n yea.. plzz comment!!!!😳

gr8 part aashima93👏 i hope kt makes laksh jealous 😛
plz post part 2 soon!

nice effort!! continue sOOn!! 👏

👏 👏 👏 Don't think that way girl. Everything takes time to develop. As in like, as more as you write you improve along the way with a lot of comments. But your first part was really greatt. Plz do continue soon aashima. 👏

Love the first part!!👏👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛😛

oookayy i'll try n write.. well heres the second part

Part 2

As Soon as dey start dancing, Aman comes to KT and she goes with Aman for dance. Laksh sees this n gets verry upset 😭 😭 . So he goes for the drinks and starts drinking. Although Laksh doesnt drink But he wz soo upset dat he did drink dat day. When Kt came back she saw that Laksh was nt dere.

Then she saw him near the drinks.... she was shocked. as soon as she got near Laksh, he grabbed her by her waist n says:

Lk: bohot maja aaya naa tume mujhe yahan akele jhodke us aman ke sath dance karne mein.
kt: laksh tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho
lk: haan ab toh tume meri baatein bhi nahin pasand hoongi kyunki aman toh aisi baatein nahin karta naa.. acha batao aman kaisi baatein karta hai hum vaisi baatein karenge.
kt: laksh lagta hai tumne bohot drink kar li hai, chalo ghar chalte hai..

She grabs laksh wrist and heads back to the car. She tells the driver to head back for Shantiniketan. During the way laksh falls asleep in Kt's lap n she wz stroking his hair..

kt(to herself): Laksh tum aise mat socha karoo.. mein tumhe kaise batoon ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon..

As they reach home.. She takes laksh to his room.. And makes him lie on his bed.. As kt wz about to leave Laksh grabbed her hand..

laksh: Kt plzz mat jao.. mere paas raho.. mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
kt: haan bolo laksh
laksh: plzzz kt mujhe aise akela choodke mat jaya karo..
kt: huh??
laksh: I LOVE YOU KT
kt: laksh.... n she hugs him....

laksh hugs her back
kt: I LOVE U TOO...

ewwwwwww.. dis 1 sucked like helll 😕
neways do comment.. i think i'll stop here or u guys will strt pukin ol ova.. its horrible!!!!!!! 🤢

u r gr8!!i really like ur fanfic plzzz continue............soon.
n ya ur not bad ok!! ur gr8 👏
-abhi

i lke the parts. plz continue soon. its not bas at all, and for starters, its great!! 👏 👏 😉

gr8 FF!! continue soon hunn!! 👏

plz plz plz plz plz dnt stop!!!!
it was a gr8 part 👏 n like sum1 sed b4 u'll get betta 😉
update soon 😊